2024届高三英语二轮复习读后续写：被误会拿走同学的300美元 讲义素材

邵阳市2024届高三第2次联考读后续写题目：Itwasabeautifulsunnymorninginearlysummer,whentheworldseemedfullofsunlightandnewgreenleaves.Iwasinagoodmoodasmyparentshadjustgivenme$300formydailyexpensesduringtheweekthattheywouldbeawayinMexicotovisitmymother’ssickgrandfather.Iwasextremelyoverjoyed,thinkinghardaboutthethingsIcoulddowiththemoney.IfIsurvivedonbreadandbutterthewholeweek,Iwouldhaveanunexpectedsumof$200tobuythelatestKobeBryantbasketballshoes!Whataterrificidea!Asusual,thephysicaleducationclasswasthrilling.Ifeltmostateaseonthebasketballcourt.Afterplayingseveralhotlycontestedgames,IcouldhardycatchmybreathasIheadedbacktowardstheclassroom,sweatyandexhausted.WhenIentered,IfoundmyclassmatesgatheredaroundSteven’sdeskashesearchedthroughhisbooksandsomeotherpersonalitemsanxiously.Stevenhadalwaysbeenpopular.Notonlywasheintelligentandwell-mannered,buthealsocamefromawell-offfamily.Andhesharedeverythinghehadwithus.这是初夏一个阳光明媚的早晨，世界似乎充满了阳光和新的绿叶。我的心情很好，因为我的父母刚刚给了我300美元，作为我一周的日常开支，他们将去墨西哥看望我母亲生病的祖父。我欣喜若狂，苦思冥想着用这笔钱能做些什么。如果我能维持一周的生计，我会有一笔意外的200美元来买最新的科比篮球鞋！多么棒的主意！和往常一样，体育课很精彩。我在篮球场上感到很自在。在打了几场激烈的比赛后，当我汗流浃背、疲惫不堪地朝教室走去时，我终于可以喘口气了。当我进去的时候，我发现我的同学们聚集在史蒂文的桌子旁，他焦急地翻阅着他的书和其他一些个人物品。史蒂文一直很受欢迎。他不仅聪明有礼，而且还来来往往。Rightaway,IlearnedStevenhadlostthemoneyhewoulddonatetoachildren’swelfareinstitutethatafternoon.ThenIinformedMissJones,theclassteacher.Sherushedoverimmediatelyandorganizedasearcharoundtheclassroom.Westoodbyourdesksandemptiedthecontentsofourschoolbagsontothedeskforinspection.我马上就知道史蒂文那天下午把捐给儿童福利机构的钱弄丢了。然后我通知了班主任琼斯小姐。她立即冲过去，在教室周围组织了一次搜查。我们站在桌子旁，把书包里的东西倒在桌子上检查。Itwasmyturn.AsMissJonestookoutthe$300frommywallet,theclassfellintoashock.Ididn’tknowtheamountlostwasexactly$300untilthen.Ikeptprovingmyinnocence,butinvain.MissJonesconfiscated(没收)the$300anddecidedIwasgettingkickedoutoftheschool.Istayedhomealonethewholeweek,livingonlyonbread.Ifeltwronged,angry,andlossofself-respect.轮到我了。当琼斯小姐从我钱包里掏出300美元时，全班同学都惊呆了。直到那时，我才知道损失的金额是300美元。我不断地证明自己是清白的，但徒劳无功。琼斯小姐被没收(没收)300美元，我决定被学校开除。我一个人在家呆了整整一个星期，只靠吃面包为生。我感到委屈、愤怒和丧失自尊。Finally,myparentsreturnedhomeandtalkedwithme.

MissJoneshadjustacceptedmyparents’

advicewhenStevencame.

前文大意：父母给了我300美元作为一周的生活费。我上完体育课走进教室发现Steven同学把他当天下午要捐给儿童福利机构的钱弄丢了，Jones老师在班里进行搜查，当从我那里搜出300美元时把它没收了。我被赶出学校，一个人在家熬了一个星期，感到委屈、愤怒、失去了自尊。

答题难点：从学生答题情况看，很多学生在第一段续写中没有提到“我父母的具体建议”，所以跟第二段的首句就没衔接起来。

我的下水作文：Finally,myparentsreturnedhomeandtalkedwithme.

I

suddenlyburstintotears.

Puzzled,theyaskedmewhathadhappened.Withmyeyesswimmingwithtears,Itoldthemaboutthe

injustice

Ihadsufferedatschoolafewdaysearlier.Theykeptcomfortingme.Thenextmorning,theytookmetoMissJones’

officeandtoldherthattheyhadindeedgivenme$300formydailyexpenses

beforeleavingforMexico.

TheyadvisedhertoaskSteventolookagain,addingthatitmusthavebeenamisunderstanding.

(82words)MissJoneshadjustacceptedmyparents’

advicewhenStevencame.

Hesaidhehadfoundthemissing$300,whichhehadleftonhisbed.So

embarrassed

was

hethat

his

face

wentbrick-red.

Stevensincerelyapologizedtome,andbeggedformyforgiveness.Wehuggedeachothertightly,abigsmilespreadingacrossmyface.Afterthefirst-periodbellrang,MissJonesannouncedtotheclassthatIhadbeenwronged.Shemadeapublicapologytome,andcanceledthepunishmentdecisionaboutme.

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参考译文：最后，我的父母回到家和我交谈。我突然放声大哭起来。他们感到不解，便问我已经发生了什么。我两眼噙满泪水，告诉他们几天前我在学校所遭受的委屈。他们不断地安慰我。第二天早晨，他们把我带到了MissJones的办公室，告诉她他们去墨西哥前的确给了我300美元作为我的日常开销。他们建议她让Steven再找找，并补充说，这一定是一场误会。MissJones刚接受了我父母的建议，Steven就来了。他说他找到丢失的300美元了，原来他把钱落在他的床上了。他尴尬极了，脸涨得紫红紫红的。Steven真诚地向我道歉，并请求我的原谅。我们紧紧拥抱在一起，我的脸上绽开了灿烂笑容。第一节课铃响后，MissJones向全班宣布我是被冤枉的。她向我作出了公开道歉，并取消了对我的处罚决定。

官方范文：Finally,myparentsreturnedhomeandtalkedwithme.

Theypatientlylistenedtomysideof

thestory,theirunderstandingandsupporthelpingtoboostmyhurtfeelingsandself-esteem.Itold

thewholestoryofwhathappened,includingtheexpensivemisunderstanding,andthereliefof

sharingmytoughexperiencewasclearintheroom.Itwasduringthisemotionalconversationthat

IheardaboutSteven’sadmission,whichwouldchangethesituation.

(63words)MissJoneshadjustacceptedmyparents’advicewhenStevencame.

Hegenuinelylooked

sorry,withahintofregretinhiseyes.Toeveryone’srelief,heconfessedthathehadfoundthe

lostmoneyinhisbackpack.TheimmensereliefandjoyIfeltwerehardtoputintowords,

showinghowmisunderstandingsandhastyjudgmentscanleadtoseriousproblems.Steven’ssincere

apologyandourcollectiveunderstandingbroughtuscloserasclassmates,restoringthewarmthof

ourfriendship.

(69words)[132words]注：范文第一段与第二段首句似乎没有衔接好。默写版：Finally,myparentsreturnedhomeandtalkedwithme.

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________他们耐心地倾听我的故事，他们的理解和支持有助于增强我受伤的感觉和自尊.Itold

thewholestoryofwhathappened,includingtheexpensivemisunderstanding,andthereliefof

sharingmytoughexperiencewasclearintheroom.______________________________________________________