高考英语作文复习专项读后续写语料库讲义

英语读后续写语料库一、表示喜悦的：Nothingwouldpleasememore.没什么使我更开心了。Awideexcitementtookholdofher.她的激动之情溢于言表。smilefromeartoeareyessparklingbeoverthemoon二、表示愤怒的：Shecouldfeeltheangergrowingbubblingupinsideher.她感觉到愤怒在发酵。表达愤怒的动词：shout/scream/howl三、表示悲伤、绝望的：Arippleofsadnesswelledupinsidehim.他内心涌起一阵阵悲伤Hisheartsankwhenheheardthebadnews.听到这个坏消息，他心里一沉。Uponhearingthebadnews,shefeltseizedbyaburstofsadnessandcouldn’thelpcryingbitterly.一听到这个消息，悲伤席卷而来，她哭地不能自己。withtearsinhereyes,满含热泪四、恐惧Aburstofhorrorheldmetotallyinitspower,andIwasunabletomoveaninch.bescaredtodeath吓地要死handstrembling双手在颤抖五、紧张Myheartbegantoraceandmymindwentblank.我心跳加速，大脑一片空白。Icouldfeelthebutterfliesinmystomach.六、惊讶Mouthopenwide,Myjawdroppedtotheground.七、感动Hereyesmistedoverassheimmersedherselfintheirgoodmemories.当她沉浸在他们之间的美好回忆时，双眼蒙上了一层水雾。八、羞愧Soashamedwasshethatshecouldfeelthebloodrushtoherface.她是如此羞愧以至于脸如充血般发烫。blush/flushv.脸红补充：读后续写语料库——语言描写一、表示生气的：Glaringatmewithhisfrighteningeyes,heyelled:“You’resuchanidiot!”他用吓人的眼睛瞪着我，喊道：“你真是个白痴！”二、表示悲伤的：1.“Whydidtheyhavetokillthedog?”whisperedJaneindespair,withhereyesfulloftears.“他们为什么要杀狗？”简绝望地低声说，眼里充满了泪水。2.“Ididn’tmeanto.”Shemurmuredinalowvoice,clenchingherfists,asifshewasabouttoburstintotears.“我不是故意的。”她低声喃，攥紧拳头，仿佛马上要崩溃大哭。这里用到了“inalowvoice”，即“小声地说道”或者“用一种...声音”，基本结构是：ina/an+形容词+voice如：inahigh/low/sweet/loud/soft/weakvoice用一个高/低/甜/响亮/软/弱的声音三、表示愉悦的：1.“That’shilarious.”Henrymented,chuckling.“真滑稽。”亨利轻声笑着评价道。2.Alargemiddleagedladypattedmeontheback,grinnedandsaid:“Nicetoseeyouagain.”一位身材高大的中年女士拍了拍我的后背，咧嘴笑了笑说：“很高兴再次见到你。”四、表示忧虑的：1.Onthefirstdayofmyseniorhigh,IstoodbythedoorwithbutterfliesinmystomachandIvoicedmybiggestconcerntomymother:“HowwillImakefriends?”上高中的第一天，我站在门口心里七上八下，向母亲表达了我最大的担忧：“我如何交朋友？”2.“I’msorry.”shesaidwithasigh.“对不起。”她叹了口气说。五、表示不耐烦的：1.“Iwouldliketogowithyou,”sherespondedinatoneofimpatience,“butIhaven’tfinishedmyhomework.”“我想和你一起去，”她不耐烦地回应，“但我还没有完成作业。”这里用到了inatoneof+名词的搭配如：inatoneofsurprise用一种惊讶的语气inatoneofcuriosity用一种好奇的语气2.“Yes,Ithinkso.”hesaidreluctantly,andwavedgoodbye.“是的，我想是的。”他不情愿地说，然后挥手告别。六、表示尴尬的：“Idon’tthinkI’mrightforthepart.”Irepliedwithembarrassment.“我认为我不适合这个角色。”我尴尬地回答。这里用到了“withembarrassment”，即“（伴随着）难堪”，基本结构是：with+情感名词。如withexcitement（伴随着）激动。补充：读后续写语料库——动作描写一．头部动作1．Hehung/dropped/lowered/bent/bowedhisheadin shame.他羞愧地低下了头。2．Hescratchedhishead,notunderstandingaword.他挠了挠头，一个字也听不懂。二．脸部动作3．Abrightsmileappearedonhisface.他的脸上露出了灿烂的笑容。4.Hisfacesuddenlygrewserious.他的表情突然严肃起来。5．Jack'sfaceflushed/burnedwithembarrassment.杰克窘得满脸通红。三．下巴6．Hisjawdroppedinamazement.他惊讶得张口结舌。四．嘴巴7.Hecoveredhismouthtohidehisyawn.他捂住嘴偷偷打了个哈欠。8．MymouthstartedwateringwhenIsmelledthefood.闻到食物的香味，我开始流口水了。9．Hismouthwidenedtoasmile.他咧开嘴笑了。五．脚部动作10．Istoodrootedtotheground,mymindgoingblank.11．我站在那里一动不动，大脑一片空白。12．Shecrossedherlegsandrestedherchinononefist, asiflostindeepthought.她盘着腿，一个拳头支着下巴，仿佛陷入了沉思。13．Shejumpedtoherfeetwhensheheardthenews.当她听到这个消息时，她跳了起来。六．手部动作14．Speechless,shesmiledradiantlyandgatheredherson intoherarms.说不出话来，她灿烂地笑着，把儿子抱在怀里。15．Thewholeclassburstoutclappingandcheering./The wholeclasswasfilledwiththunderousapplause.全班爆发出掌声和欢呼声。/全班爆发出雷鸣般的掌声。16．Shetookthechild'shandandhelpedhimclimbthe steps.她拉住孩子的手，帮助他爬上台阶。补充：读后续写语料库——环境描写一、描述天气的形容词stormy有暴风雨的 freezing极冷的 hot炎热的 rainy下雨的cloudy多云的，阴天的 snowy下雪的 windy风大的 foggy雾气茫茫的misty多雾的 frosty严寒的 damp潮湿的 wet湿的humid潮湿的 awful可怕的 sweltering闷热的 clear晴朗的changeable多变的 wild荒无人烟的 moderate温和的 calm风平浪静的二、描述天气的名词fog雾 snow雪 drizzle毛毛雨 lightrain小雨shower阵雨 storm暴风雨 downpour倾盆大雨 blizzard暴风雪snowstorm暴风雪 thunder雷 typhoon台风 tornado龙卷风hurricane飓风 三、描写自然环境的短语snowedcappedmountains积雪覆盖的山峰 widevalley宽广的峡谷steepmountains陡峭的山峰 grandvalley大峡谷runningstream流淌的小溪 shallowcreek浅浅的溪水spectacularsunrise壮观的日出 deepbluesky深南的天空palemoonlight淡淡的月光 warmsunshine温暖的阳光freshair新鲜的空气 thefragrantflowers芬芳的花朵thefragileflowers柔弱的花朵 thegreengrass绿油油的草地thedark,rainingevening漆黑的雨夜 thehowlingofthewolf狼嚎theperfumeofflowers花儿的芳香 thebarkingofthedogs犬吠thecrowingofcocks公鸡的啼叫 aherdofcows/cattle一群牛aflockofsheep/pigeons/geese/seagulls一群 四、关于“风”、“水”、“天”的句式Wind(blow/click/howl（风）怒号/wail呼啸/roar（风或海的）呼啸)1.Agustofwindblewandpartedthedroppingbranchesoftheweepingwillowlikeacurtain.一阵风吹来，把垂柳垂下的枝条像帘子一样拉开了。2.Thewind,softbutcold,clickedthroughtreebranchesandstirredthebushesthatsprinkledtheslope.柔和而寒冷的风吹过树枝，吹动了点缀在山坡上的灌木丛。3.Acoolbreezewaftedthroughmyhair. 一阵凉风吹过我的头发。4.Acoldbreezeblewthroughthequietpark.一阵冷风吹过安静的公园。5.Thewindwasperfectforkiteflying,blowingjusthardenoughtogivesomelift.这风非常适合放风筝，吹得刚好能让风筝飞起来。Water(flow/travel/move/meander/enter/tumble)1.Atonepoint,thefaintsoundofwaterwastumblingthroughthevalley.在某个地方，潺潺的水声在山谷中翻滚。2.Acreektwinesthevastgreenfieldlikethebluesatinribbon.一条小溪像蓝缎带一样缠绕着广阔的绿色田野。3.Therivermakesbendsormeandersthroughlowvalleystotheplainwherericegrows.这条河弯弯曲曲地流过低洼的山谷，到达水稻生长的平原。Sky(stand/appear/turn)1.Blueskystoodtallandfar,andthesunwaslikeabrandingironsearingthebackofmyneck.天空一碧如洗，烈日如烙铁般炙烤着我的后颈。2.By3o’clock,therainhadstoppedandskywascurdledgrayburdenedwithlumpsofclouds.下午三点，雨停了，天空灰蒙蒙的，乌云密布。3.Thesunwasbeginningtoset,glitteringredthroughthecracksbetweentheramshacklebuildings.太阳开始落山，红色的光芒透过摇摇欲坠的建筑物之间的缝隙。4.Theskywaspalewithlightblue.Soonastreakofpinkdawnbrokeoverthehorizon,expandinggraduallyandbeingbrighterandbrighter.天空是淡蓝色的。不久，天边出现了一道粉红色的曙光，逐渐扩大，越来越亮。5.Themoonwatchedfromtheskybehindthecloudsandthestarsblinkedtheireyesinfatigue.月亮藏在云里，星星略带倦意地眨着眼睛。6.Likeadimlamp,themoonshonefromaboveandthestarstwinkledtheireyeswithcuriosity.月亮像一盏昏暗的灯从天上照着，星星好奇地眨着眼睛。五、其它自然场景的句式1.夜幕降临。Darknessfalls.2.天气寒冷。Thedayisbitterlycold.3.天空蔚蓝，阳光明媚。Theskyisblueandthesunisshining.4.大雨倾盆而下。It’spouringreallyhard.5.皓月当空。Themoonisshiningbrightlyinthesky.6.天空繁星密布。Theskyisdottedwithstars.7.云散开了，太阳出来了。Thecloudspartedandsunshone.8.山丘沐浴在阳光下。Thehillsarebathedinthesunlight.9.风势渐大，天空开始阴云密布。Thewindisgettingupanditisbeingcloudy.10.一阵风穿过树林，沙沙作响。Agustofwindrustledthroughthetrees.Thewindiswhisperinginthetrees.11.浓雾笼罩着整个大地。Thethickfogblanketedthefield.12.月亮在天空好似一盏夜灯，闪烁的星星好奇地眨着眼。Likealamp,themoonshinesfromaboveandstarstwinkletheireyeswithcuriosity.13.夜里一点声音都没有，只有萤火虫还醒着，小心翼翼地在夜里织着一幅画。There’snotasinglesoundatnight.Onlytheglowwormsarestillawake,carefullyweavingapictureinthenightsky.14.一缕阳光照进我的房间里，像一束亮闪闪的金线，不仅照亮了房间，也照亮了我的心田。Arayofsunlightshoneintomyroom,likeabunchofglitteringgoldthread,notonlylitupmyroom,butalsoilluminatedmyheart.15.不远处有条小溪，在绿油油的两岸间潺潺流动。Abrookwasnotfaraway,rushingandsparklingbetweenthegreenbanks.16.在不远处的山丘上，他能看到烟从他房子的烟囱里袅袅升向天空。Onanearbyhill,hecouldseesmokewavingslowlyskywardsfromthechimneyofhishouse.17.晴空万里，火热的太阳晒得我后背发烫。Blueskiesstandtallandfar,andthesunislikeabrandingironsearingmyback.18.水是深蓝色的，阳光在明镜般的水面闪闪发光。Thewaterisdeepblueandsunlightglittersonitslookingglassclearsurface.19.在仲夏的烈日下，一切有生命的东西似乎都已用尽了它们的能量。Undertheburningsunofmidsummer,allthelivingthingsseemtohavewornouttheirenergy.20.阳光下河面波光粼粼。Theriverglittersinthesunlight.六．非真实自然环境的修辞手法1.凯莉关掉灯，小船在水中飘着，就像黑夜里闪烁的星星。Kellyturnedoffthelight,littleboatsflowingonthewater,likedotsofstarblinkinginthedarkness.2.金色的阳光在她的白发上舞动，约翰尼的笑声飘荡在空中。GoldensunlightdancedinherwhitehairandJohnnie’slaughterfloatedintheair.3.安静的房子顿时仿佛充满了蝴蝶，翩翩舞动起来。Thequiethousesuddenlyseemedtobefullofbutterflies,dancingup.4.她的头发像是一条流淌在她肩上的金色河流。Herhairwasaflowinggoldenriverstreamingdownhershoulders.5.我沉浸在悲伤的海洋中。I’mdrowninginaseaofgrief.6.开满樱花的乡村，看起来有如粉红雪铺满地。Thecountry,coveredwithcherrytreeflowers,looksasthoughitiscoveredwithpinksnow.7.雷声在远处怒吼着。Thethunderclappedangrilyinthedistance.8.这里是如此的平静安宁，棕褐色的岩石，深绿色的松树，和傍晚太阳的颜色混合在一起，创造出一片神奇的风景，看起来像是专门为我们准备的一条铺在地上美丽的编织毯。Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwovenblanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.9.沿着小路走着，我们感到非常惬意，阳光照耀着大地，威风轻轻地吹佛，美丽的花儿对我们微笑，鸟儿在树上唱着甜美的歌。Walkingalongtheroad,wefeltquitepleasedwiththesunshiningbrightlyandthebreezeblowinggentlyaswellasbeautifulflowerssmilingatus,andlittlebirdssingingtheirsweetsongsinthetrees.七．真实自然环境的描写1.我们正担心着该怎么办，太阳在天空照耀着，把地面晒得发热。Wewereworryingaboutwhatcouldbedone,whenthesunblazedfromthesky,addingheattotheground.2.微风拂过我的头发，伴着远处微弱的声音。Mildbreezeflowedthroughmyhairtogetherwithfaintsoundsfaraway.3.越多地平线，一辆车开过来，车里坐着一个男人。Overthehorizoncameacarwithamaninside.4.我正说着，水面溅起了浪花。AsIspoke,therewasasplashinthewater.5.天色渐暗，我们不知道自己身处何处，也不知道如何返回农场。Itwasgettingdarkandwehadnoideawherewewereorhowweweregoingtogetbacktothefarm.6.但是天越来越黑，增加了我们找路的难度。Butitwasgettingdarkeranddarker,thusmakingitincreasinglydifficultforustomakeouttheroad.补充：读后续写语料库——精彩结尾一、哲理性结尾佳句欣赏：Lifeisfullofdilemmasandconflicts,butweshouldsmileandnevergiveup.Itisnevertoolatetolearn.活到老，学到老。Constantdroppingwearsthestone.滴水穿石。4.Determinationandoptimismarewhatittakestoconqueryourfearandacplishyourgoal.决心和乐观是征服你的恐惧和实现你的目标所需要的。5.Fromsmallbeginningsegreatthings.伟大始于渺小。6.Rosegiven,fragranceinhand!赠人玫瑰，手有余香。7.Weshouldenjoyeverymomentandneverescapechallenges.我们应该享受每一刻，永远不要逃避挑战。二、以景结情结尾佳句1.Intheheavysnow,passionandloveburntastheyhuggedandsmiled.2.Nomatterhowcoldthewinterwas,allthattheycouldfeelnowwasthesurpassingwarmth.3.Beingsurprisedandoverjoyedagreatdeal,Janeheldhimtightlyandtoldhimhowmuchshelovedhim.Atthemoment,themountainwasfilledwithlove.4.Thewindmurmuredinthetreesandthesunlightfloodedinthroughthewindow,warmingthewholeroom,asifthefreezingicewasallmelted.三、自然性结尾式佳句欣赏1.Satisfied,Emmaatethecake,notonlybecauseofthesurprise,butalsoforthepridebubblingfromthebottomofherheart.2.Heartbeating(racing/pounding)wildly,Emmarushedtohermumandhuggedhertightly.3.Withtearsdroppingfromhiseyes,herantohismum’swarmhug,smiledandsaidgently,“Mum,thankyou.”4.Withmytremblinghands,Iopenedtheenvelope,insidewhichIfoundsevendollarsandanote.Onthenotetherewerethewords,“It’sforyourhonesty.”5.Hauntedbyastrongsenseofhorror,IheardMomscreaming,“Iforgotthetent!”常见谚语1.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者事竟成。2.Nothingisimpossibletoawillingheart.世上无难事，只怕有心人。3.Pridegoesbeforeandshameesafter.骄傲使人落后。4.Honestyisthebestpolicy.诚实是上策。5.Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves.自助者天助。6.Striketheironwhileitishot.趁热打铁。7.Everyoneisbornequal.人人生来平等。8.Bloodisthickerthanwater.血浓于水。9.Everyadvantagehasitsdisadvantage.有利必有弊。10.Seeingisbelieving.眼见为实。11.F