技巧10 如何使用语气-高一英语读后续写基础技巧与整体演练

高一英语读后续写基础技巧与整体演练技巧10如何使用语气类具有现实思维和虚拟思维的认知能力，这些认知能力通过语言表达式反映出来，而时和体是反映思维的语言形式之一。换言之，时和体的多义性是表达现实思维和虚拟思维的需要，而思维在现实和虚拟之间的转换又是凸显不同主观性的需要。例如，叙事作品中用现在时描述假想的、虚幻的事件，思维发生在想象的空间，与思维时间发生分离，动词失去时态功能，即任何读者在任意时间阅读，阅读时间和作品中的事件时间没有任何关系。这里现在时的虚拟性优势在于，可以使任何读者在任意时间阅读时都可以产生“身临其境”的效果。虚拟语气是英语中常用的表达方式，以其表达的委婉性和语用功能的丰富性在交际活动中发挥了非常重要的作用。恰当地使用它，可以起到较好的修辞效果。无论语法著作还是英语教学都应将其语用功能放在重要的位置，英语学习者在学习时也必须重视其语用功能的学习和掌握。现代社会人们追求自我，越来越重视个人隐私和权利，也会尊重别人的隐私和权利。虚拟语气是通过语法手段来表达出对别人的尊敬或尽量使自己的语气委婉、客气的效果。人们使用虚拟语气，多数情况是因为表达者的语用目的，而不是简单表达一个相反的事实。说话者一般都是借助这个“虚拟情况”委婉表达一个言外之意，达到一个特定的交流目的，在很大程度上避免出现尴尬处境。例如：IfIhadenoughmoney,Iwouldhelpyou.(如果我有足够的钱，我就会帮助你。)这句话的真正含义是Iwillnothelpyou.通过使用If条件句，help的行为便成了一种假设的虚拟行为。听话者从该条件可以自己推断出这样的结论：我可能不帮你。说话者采取的这种积极态度，尽管隐含了一种拒绝帮助的意义，但听话者在心理上更容易接受。由此我们可以看出，虚拟语气能够表达其他任何语气所无法取代的丰富的感情色彩。在英语教学中，教师不能只给学生讲解和罗列哪些句型需要使用虚拟语气，而应该结合不同的语法表达形式分析其语用特点。特别是在阅读与写作中，英语学习者在学习过程中除了要很好地理解和掌握他的语法形式以外，更要了解它丰富灵活的语用功能。只有这样，才能体会虚拟语气所隐含的感情，也才能使用虚拟语气表达自己丰富多彩的内心世界。虚拟语气的形式多种多样，在写作特别是读后续写所提供的语境中，虚拟语气能够表达其他任何语气所无法取代的丰富的感情色彩，学生可以根据人物不同的心理需求，在不同的语境中恰当地运用虚拟语气可以更好地表达出不同的感情色彩，发挥其缩小心理文化差异的语用功能。心理文化差异的大小直接决定交流双方对语言的理解意愿和交流方式，学习虚拟语气不仅要掌握其基本的语法形式，还要理解其强大的语用功能。因此，在读后续写学习中，学生要注意分析、体会虚拟语气所隐含的情感内容，才能巧妙地运用虚拟语气表达故事中人物丰富多彩的内心世界，从而能够较好地缩小交际双方的心理文化差异，推动作者、语篇与学生等互动交际活动得以有效开展。在读后续写的心理描写中，恰当运用虚拟语气，可以委婉地表达主人公的某种情感，使人物形象更生动，增强文章的可读性。（一）“ifsb...,sb...”表达纠结的心情例如：2021河北张家口第一次质检题IfIshouldn’tgobackontime,thekingwouldkillmyfriend.IfIhadn’tfallenfromthehorseandgothurt,Iwouldhavegottothedestinationontime.要是我不准时回去，国王会杀了我的朋友。如果我没有从马上摔下来并受了伤，我也早就按时到达目的地了。【分析】主人公向国王承诺准时回去，若违背诺言，国王会杀死主人公的朋友。但因为主人公从马上摔下来，受伤了，这一路就耽搁了时间。这时就需要虚拟语气来做出非真实的假设了，表达了主人公矛盾的情感纠结。以上两个虚拟条件句，前者表示与将来情况相反的假设，后者表示与过去情况相反的假设。（二）“Without/Butfor...”表示感激之情例如：2021广州七校联考题Without/Butformom’sencouragement,Iwouldn’thavebe-comeasuccessfulnarratorinthecompetition.如果没有妈妈的鼓励，在比赛中我不可能成为一个成功的讲解员。【分析】经过学校的故事大赛，我意识到什么角色都有其优点和重要性。后来，我一直继续做好讲解员的角色，层层突破，在地区小有名气。这时用虚拟语气来表达对妈妈的感激之情。（三）“Ifonly...”表示强列的愿望例如：2021届浙江慈溪中学模拟题IfonlyIhadbeenthe3rdrunnerwhohadgottothefinishline.要是我是第3位到达终点线的跑步者该多好啊！【分析】我摔倒后继续往前跑，到达终点线，发现自己与第三名擦肩而过，不能获得我心仪的奖品。这时用虚拟语气来表达与过去事实相反的情况，强调愿望。（四）固定句型表示后悔或遗憾1.可用Howsbwishedthat...had(not)donesth例如：2021山东泰安期中试题HowTimmywishedthathehadn’tbeensorudetohiscoach.Timmy多么希望之前没有那么粗鲁的对待教练啊！【分析】Timmy一直是球队的主力，不愿把球传给别人。他不仅不听教练的劝导，而且由于态度恶劣，被取消参加区里比赛的资格。他同妈妈交流后，意识到以前自己的错误。这时就需要虚拟语气来表达他后悔的情感。2.可用sb.+谓语,wishingthat...例如：2021广州七校联考题Iwasrootedonthegroundduetobeingfrightened,wishingthatIhadrefusedmymother’sadviceyesterday.我由于恐惧愣在那里，真希望我昨天拒绝妈妈的建议。【分析】我一直不接受自己做故事的讲解员这个角色，但在妈妈的劝导下，我还是参加了学校的故事大赛。中途出现了情感的纠结，后悔参加了比赛。这时需要用虚拟语气来表达后悔。（五）“asif...”表达形象生动例如：2020年浙江模拟题Theglassesdroppedintotheriver,asifthewaterhadswallowedthem.眼镜掉到河里，好像水已经吞噬了它。【分析】主人公兄弟俩跟爸爸在深林里的一条河边走着，突然爸爸摔了一跤，眼镜掉到河里，兄弟俩赶紧去找，但由于河水汹涌，找不到。这时就需要用虚拟语气来描述河中水流的凶猛。此句型也是比喻的写作手法。1．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。ItwasadarknightinTexaswhenLukeArmstrongdroveintotown.Hehadalotofthingsonhismind,andhewasdrivingslowly,thinkingofsolutionstohisproblems.HehadasickdaughternamedAnne,andhewasworriedshewouldgiveintoherillnessbeforehecouldgatherenoughmoneytopayforthesurgery(外科手术).Suddenly,henoticedaflashysportscarparkedbythesideoftheroad.Itlookedlikeithadabrokentire,butLukecouldn’tbetoosure.Hepasseditwithoutgivingitasecondthoughtandcontinueddowntheroad.Hewassolostinthoughtthathealmostmissedtheprone(俯卧的)figureofahumanlyingjustbythesideoftheroad.“Whatisit?”hesaidtohimselfandhistruckstoppedbesidethefigure.Itwasawoman,andshewasweak.Lukeimmediatelyknewhehadtohelpherassoonaspossible.Henoticedherexpensiveoutfitasheliftedher.“PerhapssheownsthefancycarIsawafewminutesago,”Lukesaidtohimselfashemovedhertohistruckandturnedontheheater.Henoticedthatsheseemedtobehavingtroublebreathing,sohecalled911andreportedhisexactlocationaswellasthepredicament(困境)hefoundthewomanin.Soontheambulancecame,andthewomanwascarriedaway.Aftercheckingonhisdaughterthenextday,Lukedecidedtoseehowthewomanherescuedwasfeeling.Hehadbeentoldshewasgettingtreatedinthesamehospital.Itturnedoutthatshewasnolongerindanger.Shewasverygratefulforhiskindness.Afterlearningabouthisdaughter,sheexpressedgreatsympathy(同情).注意：1.续写词数应为150左右。2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。AweekpassedwithLuketryinghisbesttoworksomethingoutforhischild.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Whomightbekindenoughtopayforthesurgery?___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Itwasthe9thofJanuary,adayIwillrememberforalongtime.ItwasanormalSundaymorningaround8:30am,rightontimeforSammy’smorningwalk.Ididn’twalkbecauseofmylameness,soIrodeinmypowerwheelchair.Wegotoutthedoorandmadeourwaytowardapropertynearmyapartmentcomplex.Wegottothegateandoutofthecomplex,andwewentleftontotheextrawidesidewalk.Itwasaboutamile’swalkoneway,passingafirehouseontherightsideoftheroad,beforeweturnedaroundandstartedback.Alongthepathwetookwasalargeplateoverthesidewalk.Ipassedoveritthefirsttimewithoutanyproblems.Mywheelchaircouldreachupto8milesperhour,butwewentalittlesloweronourwalks,around2milesperhour,

soSammycouldkeepup.Evenso,thisspeedwasprettyfastfora15-year-olddog.Asweturnedaroundandmadeourwayback,Iwentoverthesidewalkplateagainexceptthatthistimeitwasmovedwithoutmerealizingit,puttingmywheelchairinthegrassontheembankment(路堤).ThenextthingIknew,mywheelchairstartedtotipover,throwingmeoutofthechairandrollingdowntheembankmentintothemuddywaterbelow.Myrightlegwashurt,andIwasunabletopullmyselfupright.Iwastooweaktogathermystrengthtocallforhelp.ThemuddywaterwascoldandIfeltithardtobreathewithmybodyfoldedandtwistedinastrangeposition.Meanwhile,Sammywassittinguponthesidewalkwithhisleash(牵狗皮带)caughtunderthetippedoverwheelchair.Iheardhimbarkinglouderthaneverheard.HeknewIwashurtandwasindanger.Bythewaymywheelchairtippedover,apasserbyonthestreetwouldnotbeabletoseeitfromtheroad.Allanyonecouldseewasadogbarkingonthesidewalkalmostnightacrossthestreetfromthefirehouse.注意：1．续写词数应为150左右;2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。IcouldtellSammywastryingtohelpme._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Threefiremencametomydog’saidfinally._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Aswepulledoutofthegarage,mymindwentblankwhenIsawthegunpointingagainstthecarwindow.Thiscan’tbehappeningtome.ThenIfeltthegun,cold,againstmyhead,andIheardmyfriendJeremysaying,“Whatdoyouwant?Takemywallet.”butatthetimeIthoughtofnothing.Irememberbeingalittleannoyedwhenthegunmanpulledmefromthecarbythehair.Irememberthewalktothehouse---Jeremy,me,thetwomenwithtwoguns.Irememberthefearandangerinthegunmen’svoicesbecauseJeremywasbeingslow,andIrememberwonderingwhyhewasbeingslow.IdidnotrealizethatJeremyhadthrownthekeysintothebush.ButIrememberthatsoundofthegunhittingJeremy’sheadandthefeelingasthemanwhohadholdofmyhairreleasedme.AndIrememberthesplitsecondwhenIrealizedhewaslookingatJeremy,andIrememberwonderinghowfarIcouldrunbeforehepulledthetrigger.ButIwasalreadyrunning,anduponreachingthecaracrossthestreet,Ididn’tcrouch(蹲伏)behinditbutscreamedinstead.Irememberthinkingtherewassomethingridiculousandillogicalaboutscreaming“Help!Help!”ateighto’clockonaTuesdayeveninginDecemberandchangingmyplea(恳求)tothemorespecific“Help!Letmein.Pleaseletmein!”Butthehouseswerecold,closed,unfriendly,andIranonuntilIheardJeremy’sscreamsbehindmeannouncingthatourattackershadrunaway.TheneighborswhohadnotopenedtheirdoorstouscameoutwithbaseballbatsandhelpedJeremyfindhisglassesandkeys.Inagrouptheywereverybrave.Wewaitedforthepolicetocomeuntilsomeonesaidtosomeoneelsethatthenoodlesweregettingcold,andIsaidpolitely,“Pleasegoandeat.We’reOK.”Iwashappytoseethemgo.Theyhadbeentalkingofstrictersentencesforcriminals,ofbringingbackthedeathpenalty(处罚)andhowthePresidentisgoingtocleanupthecountry.Iwasthinkingtheycouldbesayingallofthisovermydeadbody,andIstillfeelthatstiffersentenceswouldn’tchangeathing.InarushalltheangerIshouldhavefeltformyattackerswasdirectedagainstthesecontentedpeoplestandinginfrontoftheirwarm,comfortablehomestalkingaboutallthegunstheyweregoingtobuy.WhatgoodwouldgunshavebeentoJeremyandme?Peopleallovertheneighborhoodhadcalledtoreportourscreams,andthepoliceturnedoutinforcetwentyminuteslater.Theywereill-temperedaboutwhatwas,tothem,muchtroubleaboutnothing.Afterall,Jeremywashardlyhurt,andwewerehopelesswhenitcametodescribingthegunmen.“Typical,”saidonepolicemanwhenwecouldn’tevenagreeonhowtallthemenwere.Bothofuswereabletodescribethegunsinhorrifyingdetail,butthetwopolicemenwhostayedtomakethereportdidn’tthinkthatwouldbeofmuchhelp.Thepolicemenwerematter-of-factaboutthewholething.Thethinonesaid,“Thatwasastupidthingtodo,throwingawaythekeys.Whenamanhasagunagainstyourhead,youdowhatyou’retold.”Jeremylookedproperlyembarrassed.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Thenthefatpolicemancameupandthethinonewenttolookaroundtheoutsideofthehouse.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________AllthatsleeplessnightIreplayedthemomentthoseblackglovescameuptothecarwindow.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。AsIwalkedalongthesidewalkinfrontofSurplusUnlimited,acarthatwasabouttochangemylifehadjustturnedontoRoute82fromtheCVSparkinglot.Ilookedupandnoticedtheelderlycoupleinthecarheadingtowardme.Asthecarrolledpast,thedriversuddenlycollapsedagainstthesteeringwheel(方向盘)rightinfrontofmyeyes.Hiswifestaredblanklyoutofthepassengersidewindow.Shewasunawarethathercarwasnowrolling—withoutaconsciousdriver—downthecenterofabusyroad.Ibegantojogalongsidethemovingcar.Mymindassessedthesituation.Somebodyneededtostopthatcar!Ireachedforward,buttherewasnothingtograb.Ipoundedonherwindow.Shelookedconfused.“Rolldownthewindow!”Iyelled,gesturingwildly.Withthewindowdown,Iwasabletograbthedoorframe.Ipulledhardagainsttheforceofthemovingvehicle.Onthefarsideofthecar,thetrafficstreamedbyintheoppositedirection.Carspassedoneafteranother.Nobodysloweddown.Nobodyseemedtonotice.Thankfully,thedriver’sfootmusthaveslippedoffthegaspedal(踏板)whenhelostconsciousness.Ikeptpulling,andthecarbegantoslow.Justthen,awomanappearedfrombehindme.Sheranalongsidethedriversidedoor.Sheopenedthedoorandasthecarwasslowing,shemanagedtoshiftitoutof“Drive”.Ajoyful“Wedidit!”feelingsweptoverme.Butthecarwasnowstoppedinthecenterlane(车道)withtrafficstillmovinginbothdirectionsaroundusandweneedtohelpthisman.Quickly!Thewomancalled911whileIcheckedhisvitalsigns.Hewasnotbreathing.Hehadnopulse.Hehadaboutfiveminutesuntilhewasdead.CPRwasneededintotime.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Thoughtsstartedrunningthroughmymind.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inaninstant,themanfromtheblackSUVwasstandingbesidemeandsaid,“Iamadoctor.”________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事，Once,whenIwasateenager,myfatherandIwerestandinginlinetobuyticketsforthecircus(马戏团).Finally,therewasonlyonefamilybetweenusandtheticketcounter.Thisfamilymadeabigimpressiononme.Therewereeightchildren,allprobablyundertheageof12.Youcouldtelltheydidn’thavealotofmoney.Theirclotheswerenotexpensive,buttheywereclean.Thechildrenwerewell-behaved,allofthemstandinginline,two-by-twobehindtheirparents,holdinghands.Theywereexcitedlyjabberingabouttheclowns,elephants,andotheractstheywouldseethatnight.Onecouldsensetheyhadneverbeentothecircusbefore.Itpromisedtobeahighlightoftheiryounglives.Thefatherandmotherwereattheheadofthepack,standingproudascouldbe.Themotherwasholdingherhusband’shand,lookingupathimasiftosay,”You’remyknight(骑士)inshiningarmor(盔甲).”Hewassmiling,lookingbackatherasiftoreply,“Yougotthatright.”Theticketladyaskedthefatherhowmanyticketshewanted.Heproudlyresponded.“Pleaseletmebuyeightchildren’sticketsandtwoadultticketssoIcantakemyfamilytothecircus.”Theticketladyquotedtheprice.Theman’swifeletgoofhishand,herheaddropped,andhislipbegantoshake.Thefatherleanedalittlecloserandasked,“Howmuchdidyousay?”Theticketladyagainquotedtheprice.Themandidn’thaveenoughmoney.Howwashesupposedtoturnandtellhiseightchildrenthathedidn’thaveenoughmoneytotakethemtothecircus?Actuallywewerenotwealthyinanysense.SoIunderstandhowthekidswouldfeel.Ifeelsorryforthem.注意：1.所续写的短文词数应为80词左右;2.段落开头句已经为你写好，不计入总词数。Seeingwhatwasgoingon,mydadputhishandinhispocket,pulledouta$20billanddroppeditontheground._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考答案1．【参考范文】AweekpassedwithLuketryinghisbesttoworksomethingoutforhischild.Hehadtakenonapart-timejobinhopesthatthingswouldhelpout,butheknewitwouldbeseveralmonthsbeforehissavingscouldcoverthesurgery.Hewastryingtofindmoresolutionswhenhereceivedacallfromanunknownnumber.Itwastheheadphysicianofaveryexpensivehospital,andhehadgreatnews.“I’mcallingtoarrangeasuitabledateforyourdaughter’ssurgery.Someonehasgenerouslyofferedtopayforitscost,”themansaid.Whomightbekindenoughtopayforthesurgery?Lukethoughttohimself,wanderingoutsideoftheoperatingroom.Fortunately,thesurgerywassuccessful.Lukewasveryhappybutalsoveryconfusedashedidnotknowwhotothank.Heaskedhisfriendsandrelativesiftheyhaddonatedthemoney,butinvain.Whenhewenttopickuphisdaughterforherjourneyhome,hecaughtsightofabeautifulwomansmilinggracefullyathim,andhegotitinaflash.Itwasher,thewomanherescuedonthehighway.(169w)【写作解析】本文以人物为线索展开，描述了主人公卢克在开车途中，救助了一个倒在路边的女人的故事。1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“一个星期过去了，卢克尽最大努力为他的孩子想办法。”可知，第一段可描述卢克为自己女儿想办法所作的努力。有第二段首句内容“谁会这么好心为手术买单呢？”可知，第二段可描述卢克知道有人为女儿付了手术费后的心理想法。2.续写线索：想办法——赚钱——有人付手术费——动手术——查手术费来源3.词汇激活行为类试图找到解决办法：trytofindsolutions/attempttofindsolutions接到电话：receivedacall/getaphonecall支付费用：payforthecost/affordthecost情绪类幸运地：fortunately/luckily困惑的：confused/perplexed【典型句式】【高分句型1】Hehadtakenonapart-timejobinhopesthatthingswouldhelpout,butheknewitwouldbeseveralmonthsbeforehissavingscouldcoverthesurgery.(运用了that引导的同位语从句、but连接的并列句和before引导的时间状语从句)【高分句型2】Heaskedhisfriendsandrelativesiftheyhaddonatedthemoney,butinvain.(运用了if引导的宾语从句)2．【参考范文】IcouldtellSammywastryingtohelpme.SeeingIcouldn’tmoveandwhatabadsituationIwasin,SammycouldsenseIwashurtseriouslyandbadlyinneedofhelp.Sammycouldn’truntoothersforhelpbecausehisleashwastiedunderthewheelchair.Whathecoulddowastobarktoaskforhelp.Therefore,hebarkedviolently,hopingtoletothersnoticehim.Luckily,itworked.Thefiremanheardthesoundandcameovertohelp.Threefiremencametomydog’saidfinally.Afteruntyingthedog’sleash,Sammyquicklyrantometome.BecauseofSammy,thefiremannoticedme,andtheycalledtheemergency.Iwastakenintohospitalimmediately.Afteraweekinthehospital,Iwasgoodenoughtoleave.Iappreciatedmydogstoomuch.Itwasmydogthatsavedmylife.【写作解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者坐轮椅和自己的狗出去散步，在回来的途中突发事故，作者的轮椅翻倒并滚下了路堤，掉进了下面的泥水里。1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“我能看出来萨米是想帮我”可知，第一段可描写萨米想尽办法寻求帮助。②由第二段首句内容“三个消防员终于来救我的狗了”可知，第二段可描写自己和狗被救的过程。2.续写线索：狗叫——寻求帮助——被消防人员发现——被救——感悟3.词汇激活行为类①一起走路：walktogether/accompanyhim/keephimcompany②寻求帮助：askforhelp/cryforhelp③注意：notice/spot情绪类①感谢：appreciate/showinghisappreciation/showhisgratitude/begrateful②担忧：barkviolently/beworriedabout【典型句式】[高分句型1]Whathecoulddowastobarktoaskforhelp.(运用了由连接词what引导的主语从句)[高分句型2]Sammycouldn’truntoothersforhelpbecausehisleashwastiedunderthewheelchair.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句)3.【参考范文】Thenthefatpolicemancameupandthethinonewenttolookaroundtheoutsideofthehouse.“Thatwasthebestthingyoucouldhavedone,throwingawaythekeys,”hesaid.“Ifyouhadgoneintothehousewiththem…”Hisvoicebecameweaker.“Theywouldhavehurther”—hetwistedhisheadtowardme—“andkilledyouboth.”Jeremylookedhappier.“Look,”saidthefatpolicemankindly,“there’snorightorwronginthesituation.There’sjustluck.”AllthatsleeplessnightIreplayedthemomentthoseblackglovescameuptothecarwindow.Howlongdidthewholethinglast?Threeminutes,five,eight?NomatterhowmanyhoursofmylifeImayspendrelivingit,Iknowthereisnowaytoprepareforthenexttime—nointelligentresponsetoagun.Thefatcopwasright.There’sonlyluck.ThenexttimeImightendupdead.AndI’msuretherewillbeanexttime.Gunsmakesomepeoplefeelsafeandsomepeoplefeelstrong,butthey’refoolingthemselves.【写作解析】这是一篇记叙文。文章记录了作者和Jeremy被持枪罪犯袭击的过程，同时也记录了邻居们和警察在这次袭击后的反应。作者因此感叹安全只是幻觉，不管是铁索还是枪支都不会带来安全。枪支使一些人感觉安全，而且有些人感觉强大，但是他们只是欺骗自己。1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“然后那个胖警察走了过来，那个瘦警察到房子外面四处看了看”可知，第一段可描写警察和他们之间关于这次事件的对话的场景。②由第二段首句内容“那个不眠之夜，我回想起那双黑手套临近车窗前的那一刻。”可知，第二段可描写作者回忆的一些细节，掺杂着一些感悟。2.续写线索：警察到现场查案——对话——回忆起被袭击的细节——感悟3.词汇激活行为类①扔掉：throwaway/tossout②.进入：gointo/comeinto/enter③.伤害：hurt/wound情绪类①.看起来更高兴：lookedhappier/lookedmorepleased②.友善地：kindly/neighborly【典型句式】[高分句型1].NomatterhowmanyhoursofmylifeImayspendrelivingit,Iknowthereisnowaytoprepareforthenexttime—nointelligentresponsetoagun.（运用了Nomatterhow引导的让步状语从句）[高分句型2].AndI’msuretherewillbeanexttime.（运用了宾语从句）4

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Thoughtsstartedrunningthroughmymind.IneededtostartCPR.ButIcouldn’tdoCPRonapersonwhowassittinginacar.DidIrememberhowtodoCPR?Therewasnowayforustwowomentoliftthisguyandcarryhimthroughthistraffictothesideoftheroad.Bythetimeanambulancearrived,hewouldbedead.Justthen,overmyshoulder,InoticedablackSUVhadpulledupbehindus.Inaninstant,