讲好中国故事 热点01 -中考英语高分作文（浙江专用版）

备战2023年中考英语高分作文热点01讲好中国好故事一、材料作文1．为鼓励更多中学生学好英语，用英语讲好中国故事，你校正在举办以“LearnEnglish,TellChina’sStories”为题的英语征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿。提示：（1）WhydowetellChina’sstories?（2）Whatcanwedototellthestorieswell?注意：（1）短文须包括提示内容；（2）不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；（3）词数80个左右。LearnEnglish,TellChina’sStories___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】LearnEnglish,TellChina’sStoriesWiththerapiddevelopmentofChina,moreandmoreforeignersarelikelytoknowmuchaboutChina.SoitismeaningfulforustotellChina’sstorieswell.Firstofall,weshouldpaymoreattentiontoourEnglishstudysincewehavetotellChina’sstoriesinEnglish.Moreimportantly,tellinggoodChina’sstoriescanmakeChineseculturespreadfaster.Wearesupposedtoreadbooksasmuchaspossible.Lastbutnotleast,goodChina’sstoriescanstrengthentherelationshipbetweenChinaandothercountriesintheworld.We’dbetterstudyforeignculturesaswell.TolearnEnglishwellisespeciallyimportantforus.WewilltryourbesttotellChina’sstorieswellinEnglishtomakeChinaknownbytheworld.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：人称为第一人称，注意语法正确性。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图，介绍为什么我们要讲中国的故事；第二步，为了讲好中国故事，我们能做的事情；第三步，书写结语，呼吁大家努力学好英语。[亮点词汇]①Moreimportantly更重要的是②Lastbutnotleast最后但同样重要的是[高分句型]①WiththerapiddevelopmentofChina,moreandmoreforeignersarelikelytoknowmuchaboutChina.（with短语作伴随状语）②Firstofall,weshouldpaymoreattentiontoourEnglishstudysincewehavetotellChina’sstoriesinEnglish.（since引导原因状语从句）2．中国的茶是世界上最受欢迎的饮品之一，假如你叫李华，你的学校正在举行用英语讲好中国故事的比赛，请围绕茶的历史、种类、加工、饮茶、益处等方面，根据下面的思维导图，以“ChineseTeaCulture”为题，写一篇英语短文。要求：1.语言表达准确，短文连贯、通顺；2.短文应包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥，不要逐字翻译；3.词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。ChineseTeaCultureGoodmorning!Ladiesandgentleman.MynameisLiHua.Iamhappytosharemytopicwithyouhere.Chineseteaisoneofthemostpopulardrinksintheworld._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________CometoenjoyChineseteaculture.Maybe,youwilllikeit.【参考范文】ChineseTeaCultureGoodmorning!Ladiesandgentleman.MynameisLiHua.Iamhappytosharemytopicwithyouhere.Chineseteaisoneofthemostpopulardrinksintheworld.Chinesepeoplehavelikeddrinkingteasinceancienttimes.Teahasahistoryofover4000yearssincetheChinesebegantogrowanddrinktea.TherearemanykindsofteainChina,suchasgreentea,blacktea,oolongteaandsoon.LongjingTeaisfamousallovertheworld.Peopleuseteapotsorteacupstodrinktea.Theyaremadeofceramics.Drinkingteaisgoodforhealth.It’ssaidthatgreenteacanpreventcancer.Whenyouaretired,acupofteacanhelpyourelax.CometoenjoyChineseteaculture.Maybe,youwilllikeit.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇说明文；②时态：本文采用“一般现在时”；③提示：要求包含所有提示内容，并适当发挥。[写作步骤]第一步，具体阐述茶的历史、种类、加工等；第二步，阐述喝茶的好处；第三步，表达希望。[亮点词汇]①manykindsoftea很多种茶②andsoon等等③allovertheworld全世界[高分句型]①Drinkingteaisgoodforhealth.（动名词作主语）②It’ssaidthatgreenteacanpreventcancer.（主语从句）③Whenyouaretired,acupofteacanhelpyourelax.（when引导时间状语从句）3．假如你是李欣，你校正在开展“用英语讲述你最喜欢的中国（电影、歌曲、发明……等）”为主题的视频展评活动，请根据以下提示撰写视频文稿。1.介绍你最喜欢的……的种类、名称等基本信息；2.说明你喜欢……的原因及你在欣赏（使用等）时的感受；3.对你视频观众提出倡导及建议。注意：1.文稿须全面反映提示信息；2.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；3.词数80～100，开头已给出，且不计入总词数。Hello,everyone.I’mLiXin._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Hello,everyone.I’mLiXin.MyfavouritesongisLookupatthestarswhichissungbyZhangJie,oneofthemostpopularsingersinChina.It’sapopsongthatisfullofpositiveenergy.Ilikethissongbestfortworeasons.First,thesongsoundsverylivelythatitcanmakemehappy.Second,thelyricsofthesongareinspiring.It’spossibleforeveryonetomeetdifficultyinlife.Wheneverthathappens,Iwilllistentothatsong.Itcheersmeupandencouragesmetomoveon.Finally,Ihopeyouwillenjoythisvideoandgivemorevaluablecommentsonit.That’sall.Thanksforwatching.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作提示题目已经给出，要围绕写作提示进行写作，并可以适当发挥。[写作步骤]第一步，承接文章开头，并开篇点题，指出自己最喜欢的中国电影、歌曲、发明等的基本信息；第二步，说明喜欢它的原因及自己的感受；第三步，最后进行总结，并对视频观众提出建议和倡导。[亮点词汇]①befullof充满②cheersb.up使某人振作起来③encouragesb.todosth.鼓励某人做某事④moveon继续前进[高分句型]①It’sapopsongthatisfullofpositiveenergy.（that引导的定语从句）②Wheneverthathappens,Iwilllistentothatsong.（whenever引导的时间状语从句）4．假如你是李华，将参加你校“用英语讲好成都故事”的演讲比赛。请写一篇英语演讲稿，从以下几方面讲好成都故事。注意:1.需全面反映图文信息；2.文中不能出现真实姓名及校名；3.词数：100左右。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】：ChengduisacityinsouthwestChina.ItisthecapitalofSichuanProvince.Inthepast,peoplelivedahardlife,livinginsmalldarkhousesandtherewerenarrowroads.Butnow,ithasdevelopedintoamoderncity.Therearetallbuildingseverywhere.Theroadsarewide,andthereareallkindsofvehiclesonthestreets.Almosteveryfamilyhascars,andpeople’slivingstandardshaveimprovedalot.Inthepast,peoplecouldonlytravelonfootorbybike,butnowpeopleusuallydriveortakethesubway.ThemostfamousfoodinSichuanishotpot,whichisalsomyfavoritefood.Itishot,andpeoplealloverthecountrylikeitverymuch.Especiallythemandarinduckpotislovedbyallpeople,includingchildrenandtheelderly.SichuanoperaisalsoaspecialfeatureofSichuan.ItbeganintheTangDynasty.Ithasahistoryofabout1200years.IfyouwanttoknowmoreaboutSichuanOpera,pleasewatchtheperformanceintheGrandTheaternextWednesday,withfacechangingandfirebreathing.It’sveryinteresting.Ihopeyoucanwatchit.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括成都的过去及现在的发展，川菜以及川剧的一些情况。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍成都的地理位置；第二步，具体介绍成都过去的情况以及现在的情况，以及川菜和川剧的情况；第三步，最后介绍川剧的演出，希望人们去观看。[亮点词汇]①onfoot步行②alloverthecountry全国③developinto发展成为[高分句型]①ThemostfamousfoodinSichuanishotpot,whichisalsomyfavoritefood.（which引导的定语从句）②IfyouwanttoknowmoreaboutSichuanOpera,pleasewatchtheperformanceintheGrandTheaternextWednesday.（if引导的条件状语从句）二、书信作文5．西安博物院(Xi’anMuseum)在招募志愿者。假如你是光明中学的李华，请根据以下提示写一封自荐信。1．热爱西安历史和文化；2．能用英语讲好中国故事；3．性格外向，喜欢与人沟通；4．爱好广泛，乐于挑战自我；5．你希望从中收获……要求：1．参考提示内容，可适当发挥；2．语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；3．文章中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；4．词数：不少于70词。(开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。

DearSirorMadam,Thankyoufortakingyourtimetoreadmyletter.MayIhavethehonortoworkasavolunteeratXi’anMuseum?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourstruly,LiHua【参考范文】DearSirorMadam,Thankyoufortakingyourtimetoreadmyletter.MayIhavethehonortoworkasavolunteeratXi’anMuseum?MynameisLiHua.IamstudyingintheGuangmingMiddleSchoolnow.IlovethecultureandhistorywhichXi’anhasverymuch.IamanoutgoinggirlandIliketocommunicatewithpeople.Ihavemanyhobbieslikethepaino,dance,chess,evenbasketball.Iespeciallyliketochallengemyself.IcantellChinesestorieswellinEnglish.Ihopetolearnmoreaboutourcountryandhometownbyjoiningyou.Ihopetomakemorefriends,too.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourstruly,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为书信作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“收获”一项，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出希望加入对方举办的志愿活动；第二步，具体进行自我介绍；第三步，书写结语，表达期待收到答复。[亮点词汇]①liketodosth.喜欢做某事②verymuch非常③challengeoneself挑战自我④tellstories讲故事[高分句型]①IlovethecultureandhistorywhichXi’anhasverymuch.(which引导的定语从句)②Ihopetomakemorefriends,(动词不定式作宾语)三、讲稿6．假如你是李华，你所在的学校将举行一次英语演讲比赛。请你结合以下思维导图，以“Iamproudofourcountry”为题写一篇演讲稿，简要阐述中国这些年在环境、传播中国文化以及太空工业等方面的发展与变化，并谈谈你的感受。词数90左右。注意事项：(1)必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；(2)意思清楚，表达通畅，行文连贯，书写规范；(3)请勿在文中使用真实的姓名，校名和地名。IamproudofourcountryHi,everyone.It’smygreathonortogiveaspeechhere._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall.Thanksforlistening.【参考范文】IamproudofourcountryHi,everyone.It’smygreathonortogiveaspeechhere.Obviously,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinChinatheseyears.Forexample,theenvironmenthaschangedforthebettersincethegovernmenttooksomeusefulmeasures.Clearriversandblueskyreturntoourlife.Atthesametime,Chineseculturespreadsquicklyaroundtheworld,whichmakesmoreforeignersinterestedinit.What’smore,Chinahasmadegreatprogressinitsspaceindustry.Manyspaceshipshavebeensuccessfullylaunched,makingChina’sspacedreamareality.I’mproudofourcountryandIhopeI’llbetheprideofourcountryinthefuture.That’sall.Thanksforlistening.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，要求以“Iamproudofourcountry”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明自己很高兴可以做演讲；第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“环境、文化、航天工业等”几个方面重点介绍；第三步，表达自己的感受；第四步，书写结语。[亮点词汇]①takeplace发生②Forexample例如③Atthesametime同时[高分句型]①Atthesametime,Chineseculturespreadsquicklyaroundtheworld,whichmakesmoreforeignersinterestedinit.（which引导的定语从句）②I’mproudofourcountryandIhopeI’llbetheprideofourcountryinthefuture.（and连接的并列句和省略that的宾语从句）7．2022年是“中国梦”提出十周年。作为21世纪的青少年，我们应该如何践行自己的“中国梦”。假定你校将在本周开展以“ForOurDreams”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下提示用英文写一篇演讲稿。要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，80词左右；2.文章必须包含所给提示，可适当发挥；3.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。参考词汇：wearmasks，saveenergyForOurDreamsHello,everyone!It’sagreathonortogiveaspeechhere.Whatshouldwedotoachieveourdreams?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’splayapartinrealizingourdreams.Thankyouforlistening!【参考范文】：ForOurDreamsHello,everyone!It’sagreathonortogiveaspeechhere.Whatshouldwedotoachieveourdreams?First,weneedtobehealthy.Stayawayfromillnessbywearingmasksandwashinghandsoften.Second,happinessisimportantforus.Soifwehaveproblems,talkmorewithourfriendsandparentsaboutthem.Third,it’snecessaryforustoworkhard.Remembertodohomeworkintimeandreviewwhatwe’velearnedafterclass.Lastbutnotleast,wearesupposedtoberesponsible.It’sourdutytosaveenergyanddoeverythingwecantoprotecttheenvironment.Let’splayapartinrealizingourdreams.Thankyouforlistening!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：要求以“ForOurDreams”为主题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图，引出我们应该做什么来实现我们的梦想这一主题；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“健康、幸福、努力和有责任感”几个方面重点介绍；第三步，书写结语。[亮点词汇]①stayawayfrom远离②intime及时③besupposedto应该④playapartin在……中起作用[高分句型]①Soifwehaveproblems,talkmorewithourfriendsandparentsaboutthem.（if引导的条件状语从句）②Remembertodohomeworkintimeandreviewwhatwe’velearnedafterclass.（祈使句和what引导的宾语从句）8．2022年是“中国梦”提出十周年。作为21世纪的青少年，我们应该如何践行自己的“中国梦”。假定你校将在本周开展以“ForOurDreams”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下提示用英文写一篇演讲稿。要求：l.语句通顺，意思连贯，80词左右；2.文章必须包含所给提示，可适当发挥；3.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。ForOurDreamsHello,everyone!It’sagreathonortogiveaspeechhere.Toachieveourdreams,wemustdeveloptheabilityaboutself-protectionandself-management.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’stryourbesttomakeourdreamscometrue.Thankyouforlistening!【参考范文】Hello,everyone!It’sagreathonortogiveaspeechhere.Toachieveourdreams,wemustdeveloptheabilitytooutself-protectionandself-management.Self-protectionisanimportantabilityforus.Weshouldlearntoprotectourselvesfromdanger.Remembertostayawayfromillness.Forexample,weneedtowearmaskswhengoingout.Washinghandsoftenisalsonecessary.Besides,howtoreducelearningpressureisimportant,too.Sowehadbettertalkmorewithourfriendsandparentsaboutwhatwethinkandhowwefeel.Ontheotherhand,weshouldlearntomanageourtimeandbehaviors.Makegooduseoftime.Don’tloseourselvesincomputergamesandspendmoretimestudyingorexercising.Trytobehavewell.Don’tspitinpublicorthrowlitterhereandthere.Let’stryourbesttomakeourdreamscometrue.Thankyouforlistening!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：考生应注意图表中的提示要点就是写作的基本方向，不要遗漏要点。[写作步骤]第一步，点明主题：为实现我们的梦想，我们必须培养自我保护和自我管理的能力；第二步，在培养自我保护能力方面提出合理建议；第三步，在培养自我管理能力方面提出合理建议。第四部，书写结语。[亮点词汇]①stayawayfrom远离②forexample例如③ontheotherhand另一方面④besides此外⑤inpublic在公共场合⑥hadbetterdosth.最好做某事[高分句型]①Washinghandsoftenisalsonecessary.经常洗手也是必要的。(动名词短语作主语)②Don’tloseourselvesincomputergamesandspendmoretimestudyingorexercising.不要沉迷于电脑游戏，多花点时间学习或锻炼。(否定祈使句)9．近日，习近平主席在给中国单板滑雪运动员苏翊鸣同学的回信中提到“新时代是追梦者的时代，也是广大青少年成就梦想的时代。希望你们心系祖国，志存高远，脚踏实地，在奋斗中创造精彩人生，为祖国和人民贡献青春和力量。”我校正以“DreamBig,WorkHard”（志存高远，脚踏实地）为主题举办英语演讲比赛。假如你是李华，请你写一篇英语演讲稿参加比赛。要求：1.80—120字，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。2.文中不能出现自己的姓