2024届高考英语复习2024年高一3月青桐鸣联考读后续写-别问我鱼在哪 讲义素材

续写题目：别问我鱼在哪（自我成长主题-诚实和责任）【下面除提供续写题目外、还提供（一）方便教师读题的情节梗概（二）检测学生是否读懂的「预设情节填空」，（三）在讲范文前引导学生思考续写方向的「问题及答案」，（四）续写思路概述，（五）TCEE独家范文】Jaydenwasheadingtotheplacehe’dcallhomeforthenextweek:CampMassomet.BeingawayfromhomeforthefirsttimewashardforJayden.Ontopofthat,JaydenwasaskedtojointhesamepatrolwithakidtheycalledBigQuinn,whoalwaysseemedtobeunhappy,especiallyinthemorning.Jaydentriedhardtoavoidupsettinghim.Onthefourthnight,someoftheolderguyscamebackfromthelake,laughingexcitedly.BigQuinnwasatthecenterofthepack,holdingsomethingabovehishead.Itwasafish,thebiggestJaydenhadeverseen.BigQuinnwassmilingfromeartoear,andJaydenrealizeditwasthefirsttimehe’dseenhimwearasmile.KidsinJayden’spatrolwasexcitedtotasteBigQuinn’sfish.Eveningcame.Jaydenbegantosetoutthepapercupsaroundthetable.Jaydendidn’tfeellikewalkingallthewayaroundthetabletosetoutthelastfewcups.Sohespreadouthisbodyacrossthetabletoputthecupsinplace.Butwhenhepulledhisarmback,heoverturnedtheplateholdingBigQuinn’sfish,whichwascutintothinpiecesandcoveredinfoil,knockingitoffthetable.Jaydenwatchedinfearasitfellontothedustyground.Frightened,withoutasecondthought,hekickedthefishunderthetableandcovereditupwithdirt.ThenJaydensettheplatebackonthetable,thefoilstillintheshapeofafishthatwasn’tthere.ThenBigQuinncameandpickeduptheplate.Henoticedsomethingunusual.Heopenedthefoil.“HEYY!”heshouted.“Where’smyFISH?”Hewasn’tsmilinganymore.Afterdinner,itrainedhard.Everythingonthegroundwaswashedawayintheheavyrain.Jayden’seyeswenttotheareaunderhispatrol’spicnictable.Thefishwasgone.BigQuinnwoundneverknowwhathedid.Para1:Jaydencouldn’tfallasleepthatnight.Para2:Jaydendecidedtomakethingsrightbeforeleavingthecamp.前文情节梗概Jayden前往名为CampMassomet的营地，准备度过接下来的一周。第一次离家让他感到不适，更糟糕的是，他还被迫与总是显得不悦的BigQuinn同组。Jayden努力避免激怒他。在第四天晚上，BigQuinn捕到了一条Jayden从未见过的大鱼，这让他难得地露出了笑容，也让同组的孩子们都期待着品尝这条鱼。然而，当Jayden在摆放纸杯时不慎打翻了装有鱼片的盘子，他惊恐之下将鱼踢到桌子下并用泥土掩盖。虽然Jayden将盘子恢复原状，但BigQuinn很快发现了异常，并愤怒地发现鱼不见了。晚饭后，一场大雨将地面的一切冲刷干净，Jayden看到桌子下的鱼也不见了，这让他松了一口气，因为BigQuinn永远不会知道他做了什么。预设情节填空Jayden,acamperatCampMassomet,struggledwithhomesicknessandabad-temperedpatrolmate,BigQuinn.Onthefourthnight,BigQuinncaughtahugefish,muchtoeveryone'sexcitement.However,Jaydenaccidentallyknockedovertheplateholdingthefishwhilesettingthetable,panicked,andhidtheevidence.BigQuinn'sangeratfindingthefishmissingwasshort-livedasaheavyrainwashedawayalltraces,leavingJaydenrelievedbutguilty.（红色部分可挖空让学生填写）（三）续写思路引导Para1:Jaydencouldn’tfallasleepthatnight.Para2:Jaydendecidedtomakethingsrightbeforeleavingthecamp.衔接：Q:Whycouldn’tJaydenfallasleep?A:BecausehewasdeeplytroubledbywhathadhappenedwithBigQuinn’sfish.Hefeltamixofguiltandscare.衔接：Q:WhatdidJaydendecidetodotomakethingsright?A:JaydendecidedtoconfesstoBigQuinnwhathadhappenedtothefish.过渡：£动作£心理£语言£感情过渡：£动作£心理£语言£感情衔接：Q:WhydidJaydendecidetomakethingsrighteventually?A:Becauseheknewhehadtofacetheconsequencesofhisactionsandhewasoverwhelmedbyguilt.衔接：Q:WhatlessondidJaydenlearnfromthisexperience?A:Helearnedavaluablelessoninhonestyandresponsibility.（四）续写思路概述Para1:Jaydencouldn’tfallasleepthatnight.Para2:Jaydendecidedtomakethingsrightbeforeleavingthecamp.衔接：R动作£心理£语言£感情(1)Jayden无法入睡的表现和原因。衔接：R动作£心理£语言£感情(1)Jayden道歉，。过渡：£动作R心理£语言R感情(2)Jayden脑海中一直浮现事情细节。(3)Jayden知道错了，但是害怕Quinn。过渡：£动作£心理R语言R感情(2)Quinn接受道歉，而且没生气，反而夸赞他。(3)Jayden如释重负。衔接：£动作£心理£语言R感情(4)Jayden的内疚战胜了害怕。衔接：£动作R心理£语言£感情(4)Jayden学到重要一课，完成蜕变。

（五）TCEE独家范文Para1:Jaydencouldn’tfallasleepthatnight.Hetossedandturnedrestlessly,thesheetstanglingaroundhislegsashismindrefusedtosettle.Guiltweighedheavyonhisconscience,andheknewhehadbetrayedhisownprinciples.TheimageofBigQuinn’sshockedfacewhenhediscoveredthemissingfishplayedonrepeatinJayden’smind./HismindreplayedtheincidentwithBigQuinn’sfishagainandagain.Heknewhehadtofaceuptohismistake,butthethoughtofBigQuinn’ssternexpressionfilledhimwithdread.However,hisguiltprovedstrongerthanhisfear,andhewasdeterminedtodowhateverittooktorighthiswrong.他不安地翻来覆去，床单缠在他的腿上，因为他的心不肯安定下来。内疚沉重地压在他的良心上，他知道自己背叛了自己的原则。大奎因发现丢失的鱼时震惊的表情在杰登的脑海中反复出现。/他的脑海里一遍又一遍地回放着大奎因的鱼的事件。他知道他必须勇敢地面对自己的错误，但一想到比格·奎因严厉的表情，他就充满了恐惧。然而，他的罪恶感比他的恐惧更强烈，他决心不惜一切代价纠正自己的错误。Para2:Jaydendecidedtomakethingsrightbeforeleavingthecamp.Thenextmorning,hegatheredhiscourageandapproachedBigQuinn.Jaydentookadeepbreathandconfessedeverything,hisvoicetremblingslightlywithnervesandremorse.Tohissurprise,insteadofanger,BigQuinn’sexpressionsoftened.“Itwasanaccident,”BigQuinnsaid.“Andyou’rebraveenoughtoadmitit.”Jaydenfeltaweightliftoffhisshoulders,withawaveofreliefwashingoverhim.Hehadlearnedavaluablelessoninbraveryandresponsibility.Andashepackeduphi