11 感恩 中考英语满分作文赏析

11感恩NO.1（2022·湖北湖北·中考真题）在你的成长历程中，有许多值得感恩的人，如父母，老师，同学……他们或帮助过你，或影响到你，你最想感恩谁？请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文。要点提示：1.他/她有什么特点（外貌，性格……）？2.他/她对你影响最深的一件事是什么？3.你想怎样感谢他/她？写作要求：1.词数90左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）；2.根据要点提示，可以适当发挥；3.文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。参考词汇：begratefulto对……心存感激；haveaninfluenceon对……有影响；careabout关心；unforgettable难以忘怀的ThePersonIWanttoExpressMyThanksInmylife,manypeoplehelpedandinfluencedmealot.ThepersonIwanttoexpressmythanksmostis..._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【满分作文赏析】ThePersonIWanttoExpressMyThanksInmylife,manypeoplehelpedandinfluencedmealot.ThepersonIwanttoexpressmythanksmostismyEnglishteacherMr.Lee.Heistallandthin.Hehasshortblackhairandwearsglasses.Heisalwaysfriendlyandpatientwithus.WhenIwasinGrade8,myEnglishwasverypoor.Oneday,heaskedmetotakepartinanEnglishspeechcontest.Hesaid,“Yourpronunciationisreallygood.Tryyourbest.Ibelieveinyou”.WiththehelpofMr.Lee,Igotthefirstprize.MyEnglishimprovedalot.Mr.Leehasagreatinfluenceonme,Iamgratefultohim.Iwillworkhardtobecomebetter.Ithinkthat’sthebestgiftformydearteacher.【解析】1.题干解读：本文主要以“ThePersonIWanttoExpressMyThanks”为题并结合题干中的问题进行写作，介绍你最想感谢的人，可适当增加细节。2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，人称以第二人称和第三人称为主。第一段介绍自己想感谢的人的特点；第二段讲述他对你影响最深的一件事；第三段讲述你会如何感谢他。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。NO.2（2022·湖南湘潭·中考真题）亲爱的同学，恭喜你即将毕业。在过去的三年初中学习中，你的老师教导、关心、帮助过你。请你选择一位老师，表达你对他（她）的感激之情。内容包括：1.你对这位老师的印象；2.你感谢他（她）的原因；3.你对他（她）的祝福。注意：1.词数在80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；2.可适当举例或拓展；3.文中不能出现可能透露真实身份的任何信息（如校名，师生名字等）。It’stimeformetosaygoodbyetomyjuniorschoollife.I’mheretosaythanksto_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【满分作文赏析】It’stimeformetosaygoodbyetomyjuniorschoollife.I’mheretosaythankstomyEnglishteacherMr.Zhang.Sheisverykindandpatient.ShehashelpedmealotinmystudiessinceIcametothisschool.WhenIwasintrouble,sheusedtoencouragemeandgivemesomegoodadvice.AtonetimeIfailedtopassanEnglishtestandIwasverysadaboutit.Shecameandcheeredmeup.ShetoldmesomegoodwaystoimprovemyEnglish.Withherhelp,IhavemadegreatprogressinEnglish.I’msothankfultoherforherkindhelpthatIwillworkharderandtrytodobetterinthefuture.Ihopeshewillbecomebetterandbetter.【解析】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，本文开头已经给出，选择一位你想要感谢的老师，表达感激之情，根据提示要点进行写作，可以适当发挥。2.写作指导：本文主要用第一人称和第三人称来描述，时态以一般过去和一般现在时为主。本文可以采用一段式写作，要求描述对老师的印象，感谢的原因以及对老师的祝福。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。NO.3（2022·江苏无锡·中考真题）生命中总有一些值得我们感恩的人。最近，无锡教育电视台将举办题为“ThePersonIWanttoThank”的英语演讲比赛。假如你想感谢身边某位对你有影响的人(父/母亲、老师、朋友……)，请根据以下流程图写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛。注意事项：1.演讲稿须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；2.流程图中括号部分为非限定性内容，仅供参考；3.词数在100个左右，演讲稿的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；4.演讲稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息；5.演讲稿必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【满分作文赏析】ThePersonIWanttoThankInmyjuniorschoollife,manypeoplehavehelpedme.Ithankthemverymuch.ButthepersonIwanttothankmostismyEnglishteacherMissLee.MissLeeisbeautifulwithlonghair.Andsheiskind.Shehelpsmealot.SheoftenhelpsmewithmyEnglish.WhenIamintrouble,shealwaysencouragesmetofacemydifficultiesandgivesmegoodadvice.IstillrememberthatonceIfailedinanimportantEnglishexamandwasupset.ShecheeredmeupandtoldmesomegoodwaystoimprovemyEnglish.Withherhelp,ImadegreatprogressinEnglishandbecameinterestedinit.I’mverythankfulforall