“读后续写”生命的守护者逆行的火焰蓝讲义-高三英语二轮复习

第二节(满分25分)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文ThesceneoffirefightersinHulunbuir,InnerMongoliabeingfrozeninto“icemen”bravingthefiercesnowstormtorescuepeoplemovedmanytotears.OnMarch12,QiYuehua,headoftheBaerhuRoadStationoftheNewBaerhu'ZuoqiFireandRescueBrigadeinHulunbuir,saidinaninterviewthattheteammembersworkedcontinuouslyfornearlyfivehourstwodaysago,saving.8peopletrappedin3cars.Theoftemperatureatthetimewasaroundminus30degreesCelsius,sotherewaslaterascenefirefightersbeingfrozenintoicemen".“At12:46onMarch10,wereceivedacallforhelp,sayingthatavehiclewastrappedinthesnow35kilometersawayinthedirectionof'NationalHighway332.Adriverwastrappedinthecarwaitingforrescue,"saidQiYuehua.“Bynoon,afiercesnowstormhadformed,anditwasblowingstronglyand:thetemperaturewasverylow.Obviously,itwasdangeroustodriveout,buteveryonemustimmediatelygotothescene.”Thetworescuevehicleswith12firefighterssetoutat12:50.Thevisibilitywaslessthan5metersthatday,andthesnowyroadwasslippery,makingdrivingverydifficult.Itwashardtotellwhichwayitwastotherescuesite,andtherescueteamcouldonlymoveslowlybasedonpreviousdrivingexperience.Consequently,ittookmorethananhourthatdaytodriveforajourneythatusuallytakesonlytenminutes.At14:18,therescueteameventuallyarrivedatthesceneandfoundthelocationofthetrappeddriver:.Duetotheheavywindandsnow,thedoorofthevehiclecouldnotbepletelyclosed.Thedriverhidinthecar,tremblingviolentlywithcold.Thefirefightersfoundthattwoother.vehicleswithsevenpeoplewerealsotrappedthere.Theywereinvolvedinatrafficaccidentduetoslipperyroadsandpoorvisibility.注意:1续写词数应为150左右2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Para.1Withoutanydelay,thefirefightersstartedtheirrescueeffort.Para.2Whenaskedifitwastoohardandtooriskytobefirefighters,Qismiled.文本内容：

本文描述了一次在暴风雪中进行的紧急救援行动。主要事件包括接到求助、决定进行救援、艰难行进到达现场以及发现被困的司机和其他车辆乘客。文本通过具体的时间点和详细的天气、路况描述，展现了救援过程的紧迫性和困难性。结构分析：引入部分：开头部分（...while

bravingthefiercesnowstormtorescuepeoplemovedmanytotears.

At12:46onMarch10,wereceivedacallforhelp...）：具有新闻报道导语特征，简明扼要地介绍事件的来龙去脉及最终结果并简要介绍了接到求助的时间和地点，以及被困车辆和司机的情况。救援准备与出发：描述了救援队伍准备出发的情况（"Bynoon,afiercesnowstormhadformed..."）。强调了天气恶劣和能见度低下的困难（"Thevisibilitywaslessthan5metersthatday..."）。叙述了救援车辆和消防员的出发时间（"Thetworescuevehicleswith12firefighterssetoutat12:50."）。行进过程中的困难：描述了救援车辆在暴风雪中艰难行进的情景（"Itwashardtotellwhichwayitwastotherescuesite..."）。强调了路况滑和能见度低的挑战，以及救援队伍不得不慢速前进的事实。到达现场与救援行动：描述了救援队伍到达现场的时间（"At14:18,therescueteameventuallyarrivedatthescene..."）。叙述了发现被困司机和其他车辆乘客的经过，以及他们所处的困境（"Thedriverhidinthecar,tremblingviolentlywithcold."）。整体上，文本结构清晰，通过时间顺序和详细的描述，让读者能够身临其境地感受救援行动的紧张与艰难。同时，通过对比恶劣的天气和艰难的救援条件，凸显了救援人员的勇敢和无私。接下来，我们可以按照以下思路续写两段内容：第一段续写思路：描述救援人员如何迅速而有效地展开救援行动。他们首先确保被困人员的安全，然后采取措施保护他们免受严寒的侵袭。同时，他们与指挥中心保持联系，报告救援进展和现场情况。第二段续写思路：通过消防员Qi的对话，表达他们的工作态度和职业精神。Qi在被问到作为消防员是否觉得太艰难和太危险时，他微笑着表达了对工作的热爱和责任感。他强调，保护人民生命财产安全是他们的使命，无论面对多大的困难和风险，他们都会毫不犹豫地冲上前线。下水文：Paragraph1:

Withoutanydelay,thefirefightersstartedtheirrescueeffort.

Despitethe

freezingtemperaturesandblindingsnow,theymovedquicklyandefficiently.

(用环境描写来衬托消防队员们面对困难时的勇敢无畏）Theyfirst

providedblanketsandhotdrinks

tothetrappedindividualstohelpthemwarmup.（救人首先以人为本）

Then,

using

theirprofessionaltoolsandequipment,they

cleared

thesnowaroundthevehiclesand

opened

thedoors.（用动作链具体陈述救援动作过程）

Therescueteammembers

municatedclosely

witheachother,ensuringthattheiractionswere

coordinatedandeffective.（救援队员彼此间的合作表明他们训练有素，为下一段回答问题的续写内容做铺垫）

Despitethechallengingconditions,the“icemen",

firefightersshowedremarkableresilienceanddetermination,successfullyfreeingthetrappedindividualsonebyoneat5:06.

（用icemen与第一段中的icemen形成照应,at5：06与上文at12;46、at

14:18形成照应，符合描述事件时使用的时间顺序）Untilthendidthey

realize

theybecame

"icemen"

andlaughedwitheachother.Thescenewasphotographedbyareporterandwentviral.

(为Paragragh2首句做铺垫)Paragraph2:

Whenaskedifitwastoohardandtooriskytobefirefighters,Qismiled.

"It'sourjob,andweare

trainedforsuchsituations,"he

saidcalmly.（such

situations与calmly表明Qi的谦虚，此句提及的平时训练与续写第一段提及的队员的救援能力形成逻辑上的照应）

"Ofcourse,therearetimeswhenitcanbedangerous,butwearealwaysreadytofaceanychallenge.

（阐明事实上的危险，突出他们的能力和职责）Weknowthat

everyminutecounts

whenitestosavinglives,sowedoourbesttorespondquicklyandeffectivelyregardless

ofplicatedandchangeableriskysituation."

（用everyminutecounts谚语来陈述事实，突出Qi答语的专业和情感的真挚）Qi'swordsreflectedthededicationandcourageoffirefighters,whoarealwaysreadytorisktheirownsafetytoprotectandsaveothers.（用评价语言结尾，与文本首段形成新闻体裁语言上的照应）参考范文：Withoutanydelay,thefirefightersstartedtheirrescueeffort.“Wefirstdugupthesnowwithshovels,andthenpushedthevehiclesoutofthesnowwithmanpower,"QiYuehuarecalled,“Thethickestsnowaccumulationwasnearlyonemeter.Thewindwasparticularlystrongthatdayandthesnowhittingourfacesfeltlikeneedles."At17:12,thetrappedpeopleandvehiclesweresuccessfullymovedtoasafeplace,andatotalof8peopleincarsburiedinthesnowwereeventuallyrescued.Someofthefirefightershadbeenfrozeninto“icemen"bythen.Whenaskedifitwastoohardandtooriskytobefirefighters,Qismiled.“Iamveryhappyandsatisfiedthatwepletedthetaskandtherescuedpeopleweresafeandsound,"hesaid.“Ourfirefightersareallyoungmen