读后续写 紧急迫降 讲义-2024届高三英语一轮复习

读后续写：紧急迫降一-续写分析+参考范文+语料积累

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文.

TaylorHashwantedtobeacareerpilot.Shehadjuststartedbuildinguphoursofflighttime

whendisasterstruck.AssheguidedtheDiamondStarplaneofftherunwayatOaklandCounty

Internationalairport,onherthird-everindependentflight,thefronttyre（轮胎）ofherplanefell

off.

Taylorwasunawareatthatpointthatshehadjustlostcruciallandingequipment."Ididn't

feelanythingonthetakeoffroll（起飞滑跑），nshesaid.

ExperiencedpilotChrisYates,though,sawsomethingonthetakeoffrolland

immediatelytookaction.HeknewthatTaylorwouldhavetomakeadifficultemergencylanding.

Heradioedthecontroltowerandsaid,"TheDiamondStarthatjusttookofflostitsnose（头部）

wheeltyreontherunway.M

Butthecontroltoweroperatorsdidn*tknowwhattodo.They'dneverseensuchathing

happenbefore.YatesaskedthemtoputhimthroughtoTaylorsohecouldhelpher.

WhenTaylorlearnedwhathadhappened,shewasinpanic.Withonly57totalflighthours

underherbelt,shedidn'tknowwhatheroptionswereandcouldonlyimaginehowthiswasgoing

toend.

"Ididn*tknowwhattodointhatmoment,"saidTaylorlater."I'mjustpanickingandfiguring

outhowFmgoingtolandthisplanesafely.11

ButYatesknewwhattodo.HeknewthatthemostimportantthingwouldbetokeepTaylor

calmsothatshecouldfollowhisinstructionseffectively.

Yatesstartedbyreassuring（使安心）Taylorthateverythingwasgoingtoturnoutjustfine："

Taylor,thisisChrisYates.Mydaughter'snameisTaylor,andItaughthertofly!We'regonna

bejustfine.Justtakeyourtime."Hetoldherthatshecouldcirclethefielduntilshewasreadyto

land."Whenyoutouchdown,Ijustwantthatstick（操纵杆）allthewayback.You'regonnahold

thatstickbacklikeyoudon'twantthatnosetotouch,"hecoachedher.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答.

Paragraph1:Despitefeelingscaredandunsure,TaylortrustedYatesandfollowedhis

instructions.

Paragraph2:TaylorwentuptoYatesaftershesteppedoutoftheplanesafely.

续写分析：

本文是一篇记叙文，通过讲述泰勒・哈希在飞行中遇到的困难和经验丰富的飞行员克里斯•耶

茨如何帮助她应对这一情况的故事。通过描述泰勒和克里斯之间的对比和交流来传递一种

信任和情感，并通过直接引语和人物心理描写来使读者更好地理解和感受故事中的情景和

角色。

第一段写作要点：Taylor如何在Yates的指导下操作飞机，完成降落。以及伴随的心理活

动变化。

第二段写作要点：Taylor对Yates的由衷感谢和从这件突发事件中的感悟。

以下是官方范文和提供的写作语料，丰富学生的写作表达。

范文

Despitefeelingscaredandunsure,TaylortrustedYatesandfallowedhisinstructions.

Aftercirclingtheairportafewtimes,shegotreadytomaketheemergencylanding.WithYates

talkingtoheralltheway,asenseofcalmwashedoverher.4tYou*redoinggreat/heencouraged,

"Keepthatstickallthewayback.1*Taylorcouldseetherunwaycomingupquickly.Theplane

toucheddown,thenosehittingtheground.Taylorfelttheplaneshakingandbouncinguntilit

cametoacompletestop.Shemadeit!(77words)

TaylorwentuptoYatesaftershesteppedoutoftheplanesafely.Withtearsofgratitude

inhereyes,shehuggedhimtightlyandthankedhimforhisguidanceduringthecrisis/cHadyou

not

seenthewheelfalloff,“UtteredTaylor,"itshardtothinkaboutwhatcouldhavehappened.n

Yatespraisedherthatshehaddoneagreatjobinlandingtheplanesafelywithsuchlimitedflight

experience.Throughmistyeyes,Taylorcouldseethepathtohercareerasapilotbecomeclearer

thanever.(77words)

语料积累

这些语料是关于Taylor的心理活动，如何做，结果的不同描写。

ShelistenedtoYates'svoiceovertheradio,findingcomfortinhisfamiliarityandconfidence.

她听着耶茨的声音从收音机传出，感到熟悉和充满信心，这给了她安慰。

Sheheldthestickbackasinstructed,keepingthenoseoftheplaneupasshepreparedforthe

landing.

她按照指示将操纵杆向后拉，保持飞机的机头上升，为着陆做准备。

Shekepthereyesonthehorizon,focusingonmaintainingasteadydescent.

她专注地盯着地平线，努力保持平稳下降。

Yatescontinuedtoguideher,givingherencouragementandremindinghertotrusthertraining.

耶茨继续指导她，鼓励她，并提醒她要相信自己的训练。

Finally,themomentcameforTaylortotouchdown.WithYates'sguidance,shesmoothlylanded

theplane,keepingthenoseupuntiltheverylastmoment.最后，泰勒迎来了着陆的时刻。在耶

茨的引导下，她平稳地降落了飞机，直到最后一刻才放下机头。

Asshetaxiedofftherunway,Taylor'shandswereshakingandherheartwasstillracing.当她驶

离跑道时，泰勒的手还在颤抖，心跳仍然加速。

Shecouldn'tbelieveshehadjustgonethroughsuchaterrifyingexperience,butshealsocouldn't

denythesenseofaccomplishmentshefelt.

她难以相信自己刚刚经历了如此可怕的经历，但她也无法否认自己的成就感。

Taylorlearnedavaluablelessonthatdayabouttheimportanceofremainingcalminemergency

situations.那天，泰勒从这次紧急情况中学到了一个宝贵的教训，那就是在紧急情况下保持

冷静的重要性。

Shealsogainedanewfoundrespectfortheguidanceandsupportofexperiencedpilotslike

Yates.

她也对耶茨这样有经验的飞行员的指导和支持产生了新的敬意。

Fromthatdayforward,shewasdeterminedtocontinuepursuingherdreamofbecomingacareer

pilot,knowingthatshehadtheabilitytohandlewhateverchallengescameherway.

从那天起，她决心继续追求成为职业飞行员的梦想，知道自己有能力应对任何挑战。

Intheend,thelossofthefronttirehadbeenaterrifyingsetbackfbrTaylor,butithadalsobeena

definingmomentinherjourneyasapilot.

最后，泰勒失去前轮的事故对她来说是一个可怕的挫折，但它也是她作为飞行员旅程中的

一个决定性时刻。

Shehadfacedherfearsandcomeoutstrongerontheotherside,provingtoherselfandothersthat

shehadwhatittooktoovercomeanyobstacleinherpath.

她面对了自己的恐惧，并在困境中更加坚强地站了起来，向自己和他人证明，她具备克服

任何困难的能力。

Fromthatdayforward,Taylorapproachedhertrainingandfutureflightswitharenewedsenseof

purposeandconfidence.

从那一天起，泰勒以更新的目标和信心对待她的训练和未来的飞行。

Shefacedeachchallengehead-on,knowingthatshehadtheskillsandsupportnecessaryto

handlewhatevercameherway.

她迎接每一个挑战，知道她有必要的技能和支持来应对任何困难。

Shecontinuedtolearnandgrowasapilot,pushingherselftobecomethebestshecouldbe.

她不断学习和成长，努力成为最好的飞行员。

Taylor'sexperiencealsoservedasareminderoftherisksandresponsibilitiesthatcamewith

beingapilot.

泰勒的经历也提醒她作为飞行员所面临的风险和责任。

Taylorneverforgotthelessonsshehadlearnedfromthatfatefullanding.

泰勒从那次决定性的着陆中学到的教训永远不会忘记。

Sheknewthatlifeasapilotwouldalwaysbefilledwithunexpectedchallengesandmomentsof

uncertainty,butshealsoknewthatshehadtheskillsandmindsettohandleanythingthatcame

herway.

她知道作为飞行员的生活将永远充满意外的挑战和不确定的时刻，但她也知道她有必要的

技能和心态来应对任何困难。

迁移创新

根据TaylorwentuptoYatesaftershesteppedoutoftheplanesafely提示，写一个对话。

Taylor:Thankyousomuch,Mr.Yates!Ican'tbelieveIactuallydidit!

Yates:Youdidamazing,Taylor!Iknewyouhaditinyou.Howdoyoufeelnow?

Taylor:Ifeelexhilaratedandrelievedatthesametime.Itwasdefinitelyachallenge,butyour

guidanceandreassurancemadeallthedifference.

Yates:I'mgladIcouldbethereforyou.Flyingcanbedaunting,especiallywhenifsyourfirst

soloflight.Butyouhandleditwithgraceandcomposure.

Taylor:Icouldn'thavedoneitwithoutyou,Mr.Yates.Yourwordsofencouragementkeptme

focusedandcalmthroughoutthewholeexperience.

Yates:Well,Taylor,thisisjustthebeginning.You'veprovenyourselftoday,andIhavenodoubt

thatyou'llcontinuetoexcelinyourflyingjourney.Remember,everyflightisalearning

opportunity.

Taylor:Absolutel