Unit+2+Travelling+Around+Reading+for+Writing 高中英语人教版（2019）必修第一册

Unit2TravelingaroundReadingforwriting1Learnabouttravelingathomeandabroad.Phrases:lookforwardto32Words:request；view；sight；statue；BC；tomb；unearth；comment；theEiffelTower；Neuschwanstein；Castle；Iceland；Disneyland；Peru；theAndesLearningobjectivesWorkingroups.Discussthequestions.Whatweshouldpayattentiontowhenwetravelathomeandatabroad?Lead-in1.ReadRichard’semail,tohisfriendandthebrochurethathefound.Doyouthinkhisplansoundsinteresting?Why?

Yes,itsoundsquiteinteresting.TheTerracottaArmyisanationaltreasureandoneofthelargestandmostimportantarchaeologicalfindsintheworld.AtravelplantoXi’anDearXiaoLi,MytimehereinChinaisgoingwell.Ilovemynewschoolandclassmates.OvertheOctoberholiday,myparentsandIareplanningtogotoXi’antoseetheTerracottaArmy.I’veheardthatitisanamazingsight,andIcan’twaittogo.Tome,thestoryoftheTerracottaArmyisalmostunbelievable.It’samazingthattherearemorethan8,000statues,andnooneinmoderntimesknewaboutthemuntilthe1970s.We’realsoplanningtovisitseveralotherplacesinXi’an.MydadandIarebothlookingforwardtogoingtotheShaanxiHistoryMuseum,becausemydadloveshistoryandIhaveheardthatthismuseumisknownasa“Chinesetreasurehouse”!We’realsogoingtotheXi’anCityWallandafewotherfamoussights.We’retakingthetrain,leavingthedaybeforetheOctoberholidaybeginsWe’rearrivingat9:30a.m.andwillstartsightseeingrightaway,soIhopewesleepwellonthetrain!Iguessthat’sallfornow!I’llwriteagainsoonandsendphotos!Doyouhaveanyplansforthecomingholiday?Hopetohearfromyousoon.Yourfriend,RichardEachstatuehasdifferentface,leadingresearcherstobelieve（thateachoneiscopyofrealsoldier）.现在分词短语作结果状语，that引导的宾语从句每座雕像都有一个不同的面孔，这使得研究人员相信每座雕像都是一个真实士兵的复制品。Eachstatuehasadifferentface,leadingresearcherstobelievethateachoneisacopyofarealsoldier.(doing表自然而然的结果；而用onlytodo来表示出乎意料的结果)仿写：这家医院最近得到一批新的医疗设备，这使得更多的病人能够得到治疗。Thehospitalhasrecentlyobtainednewmedicalequipment,___________________________________________.allowingmorepatientstobetreated拓展：

我到了商店，却发现钱全落在家里了.Iarrivedattheshop,_________________Ihadleftallmymoneyathome.onlytofind考点提炼：

现在分词(短语)作结果状语现在分词(短语)作结果状语的用法：(1)语法含义：表示自然而然的结果或意料之中的结果，现在分词前有时可加thus以示强调。(2)时态特征：现在分词表示的动作发生在谓语动词所表示的动作之后。(3)逻辑主语：句子的主语或现在分词前的整个句子。当现在分词的逻辑主语为前面的整个句子时，其作用相当于一个非限制性定语从句。(4)位置：一般位于句末，且常用逗号与前面的句子成分隔开。(5)扩展性：一般可转化为sothat引导的结果状语从句。Anumberofnewmachineswereintroduced,thusresultinginanincreaseinproduction.由于引进了许多新机器，产量得到了提高。

Thestatuesfillonlyonepartoftheemperor'shugetomb,whichstillhasnotbeencompletelyunearthed.句式剖析：Thestatuesfillonlyonepartoftheemperor'shugetomb,whichstillhasnotbeencompletelyunearthed.这些雕像只占秦始皇陵的一部分，这座陵墓现在尚未完全出土。which引导非限制性定语从句，修饰先行词theemperor'shugetomb主句2.Studytheorganisationandlanguagefeatures.Summarisetheemailinthetable.ParagraphMainideaDetail1mainpurposeforthetrip2otherplansforthetrip3transport4finalthoughtsgotoXi’antoseetheTerracottaArmygototheShaanxiIlistoryMuseum,theXi’anCityWall,andafewotherfamoussightstakethetrain,leavethedaybeforetheOctoberholidaybeginsandarriveat9:30a.m.writeagainsoonandsendphotos.旅游计划是一种常见的应用文写作。旅游可分为观光游、文化游、美食游及探险游等不同类型，因此旅游计划也要根据不同的旅游目的进行设计。常规的旅游计划需要明确以下几个方面的问题:TravelplanWhenwillyouleavefor？Whereisyourthedestination?Howwillyougetthere?Whatwillyoudothere?Howlongwillyouthere?Isthereaclearpurposeforthetrip?写法指导为了提升旅行计划的层级，还需注意以下几个方面的问题:1.每段是否有明确清晰的主题;2.用一般现在时代替一般将来时:3.用更高级的形容词词汇。例如:表达“好”时，不要总用“nice”,我们还可以用“smart,clean,excellent,exciting,beautiful,wonderful,clever,famous,grand”等表达更具有指向性的同汇:4.用更高级的动词词汇。比如:我们可以用“seemstand,liegetstay,remain,look.sound,become.keep,grow”等代替"be";5.所有“专有名词”要大写:6.文章最后要有适当的总结性语言。写法指导[常用句式]placeofinterest名胜古迹touristattractions旅游景点historicsites历史遗迹Must-seeattractions必看景点goonaholiday/takeavacation去度假checkin登记人住checkout结账退房enjoythesceneryofnature欣赏自然美景gosightseeing观光feellikedoingsth.想要做某事写法指导[常用句式]mean/intend/plantodosth.打算/计划做某事decide/bedeterminedtodosth.决定做某事lookforwardtodoingsth,盼望做某事long/hope/wish/wanttodosth,渴望/希望/想做某事wishsb.apleasantjourney祝某人旅途愉快Whenwearetiredfromwork,whynotstopandgoouttoenjoy…当我们因工作而感到疲惫时，为什么不走出.....AsfarasI'mconcerned,thetripisverymeaningful.据我所知，该旅行十分有意义。Ontheonehand,wecan...Ontheotherhand,itwillhelpus…一方面，我们可以..另.方面.它可以帮助我们...Theplacewherewe'll...is…我们.....地方超....写法指导packup整理，把……打包aroundthecorner即将来临takeabus/train乘公共汽车/火车goonatour/sightseeing旅行/观光bookaticket订票makearrangementsfor…为……安排inadvance/aheadoftime提前broadenone’sview/horizons开阔眼界takeadvantageof/makeuseof利用asfollows如下setoff/out动身，出发leaveforaplace动身去某地enjoythescenery欣赏风景写作常用词汇

格式准确、要点齐全、结构完整、层次清晰。尤其是关联词语的运用要恰到好处，使整个语篇结构紧凑。叙述具体、语言得当，逻辑通顺，要具有很强的感染力。高级词汇

精彩短语和关联词

增分句型

词句品鉴delightedchoiceenjoysurelydeeply

I'mdelightedInmyopinionthefirstchoiceforyouBesidesthis,helpyouunderstandChineseculturemoredeeply.showyouaroundotherplacesofinterest.LookingforwardtoI'mdelightedtoreceiveyourletter,askingforhelptotravelinBeijing.Inmyopinion,theGreatWallisthefirstchoiceforyou,whichisoneoftheSevenWondersoftheWorld.Imagineyouaremakingplansfortheholiday.Chooseoneofthesituationsbelowandrole-playaphonecall.withapartner.

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traveldates

preferredtime

one-wayorreturn

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firstclass

businessclass

economyclass•Otherinformation

name

methodofpayment

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checkin/checkout

breakfastInternet•Kindofroom

2singlebeds

doublebed

kingbed•Specialrequests

aview

anon-smokingroom

aquietroom

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numberofpeople•Specialrequests

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【参考范文】DearMike,I'mdelightedtoreceiveyourletter,askingf