Unit2HealthylifestyleWriting健康生活建议信课件高中英语人教版选择性

HealthylifestylePeriod5(WritingaletterofADVICE)1.TolearnsomeusefulSENTENCESTRUCTURES2.ToREVIEWhowtowritealetter3.ToraisetheirawarenessofhealthylifestyleLearningaimsLeadinWhatadvicecanwegivetoLucy?Lucyisaseniorschoolstudent.Butrecentlyshefoundherselfeasilygettingsleepyandstressedout.Ifyouareherpenpal,thencanyougivehersomesuggestions?HealthylifestylementalhealthphysicalhealthMaintainhealthybodyweightEatabalancedandhealthydietExercisemoderatelyandregularlyHaveenoughsleepbeincontrolofyourownlifebeabletodealwithstressesfeelgoodaboutyourselfbepassionate

What’sthemeaningofbeinghealthy?Howtowritealetterofadvice?Let’slearnPara.1Para.2Para.3greetingandpurposegivingsuggestions(3pieces)hopesandgratitudeAletterofadvice1.Iamdelightedtohearfromyouanditismygreatpleasuretogiveyousomeadviceon...2.Knowingthatyouhavesomedifficultyin...Iamwritingtoofferyousomepracticalsuggestionsasfollows.3.Sinceyouaskedmeforsomeadviceon...inyourlastletternowIamwritingtosharewithyoumyideas.Pre-writingHowtobeginaletterofadvice?1.Frommyperspective,youmayaswell...2.Idobelieveitiswiseofyou/agreatideato...3.Irecommendthatyoushoulddo...4.IfIwereyou,Iwould(not)...5.Itwouldbeofbenefitif...6.Thebestwaytodo...istodo...Howtogiveadvicepolitely?1.Ihopemyproposalscanbeofhelp/use/benefittoyou.2.Iwouldappreciateitifyoufindmysuggestionspractical.3.Iwouldbemorethanpleasedtosee...4.Istronglysuggestyoufollowmyadviceandyouaresurelytomakeit.4.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Howtoendaletterofadvice?1.表示时间顺序的衔接性词语atthebeginning/endof,intheend,afterwards,sincethen,meanwhile,afterthat,immediately,fromthenon,allofasudden,atpresent,afterawhile,atthesametime,inthepast,tobegin/startwith2.表示递进关系的衔接性词语what'smore/moreover,furthermore,besides,inaddition,tomakethingsworse,themostimportantofall,worstofall,especially,inparticular3.表示并列和转折关系的衔接性词语however,while,otherwise,onthecontrary,despite,inspiteof,afterall,nevertheless,aswellas,neither...nor...,notonly...butalso...,either...or...,not..but...Howtoconnectsentencestogether?4.表示条件和让步关系的过渡性词语as(so)longas,unless,incase(of),onconditionthat,evenif/though,as5.表示因果关系的衔接性词语because(of),nowthat,thanksto...dueto...,asaresult/consequence(of),therefore/thus,since6.表示列举事实或观点过渡的词语suchas,forexample/instance,take...forexample,thatistosay,asfollows,inotherwords,ontheonehand...ontheotherhand...,for的onething...foranother...,personally,inmyopinion/view,asfarasI'mconcerned,asforme7.表示总结的过渡性词语inshort,inbrief,inaword,tosumup,allinall,onthewhole,ingeneral/generallyspeaking,inconclusion建议信模板DearXX，

Hearingthatyouhavetroubledoing...,Ifeelextremelyanxious.NowIamwritingtoofferyousomeadviceon....

Herearemysuggestions.

Firstandforemost,itiswiseofyouto...(建议一)Besides,youmayaswell...(建议二)Lastbutnotleast,Iwouldrecommendthatyoushould...(建议三).

Idohopeyouwillfollowmysuggestions.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Sincerelyyours,XX【写作要求】假定你是李华,得知你的英国笔友Cindy经常不吃早餐,因而胃病发作住院治疗。请根据下面的写作提示,用英语给她写一封邮件。内容包括:1.陈述不吃早饭的危害;2.劝她培养健康的生活方式。注意:1.词数80左右;2.请在相应位置作答。Practice【审题谋篇】

体裁建议信人称第一、二人称时态一般现在时话题健康的生活方式框架引入话题:就健康的生活方式提出建议介绍细节:不吃早餐的危害表达希望:……【遣词造句】1.词汇①担心的

②有用的

③精力充沛的

④对……有害

⑤由……引起

⑥锻炼

⑦不吃早餐

worrieduseful

energeticbeharmfultoresultfromtakeexerciseskipbreakfast2.句式(1)要点翻译①得知你在住院,我很担心。(beworriedtodo)I____________________________________youareinhospital.

②你不吃早餐而引起了胃疼。Youhaveastomachache___________________________yourskippingbreakfast.(which引导的定语从句)

③你没有按时吃早餐的习惯,这对你的健康有害。(harmful)Youdon’thavethehabitofhavingbreakfastontime,and________________________________yourhealth.

amworriedtoknow

whichresultsfromitisharmfulto④每天进行足够的体育锻炼将帮助你保持精力充沛和免于疾病的困扰。(动词-ing形式作主语)____________________________________everydaywillhelpyoustayenergeticandfreefromdisease.

(2)句式升级⑤把句①和②升级为含有原因状语从句和动词-ing形式作状语的句子TakingenoughphysicalexerciseIamworriedtoknowyou’reinhospitalbecauseyouhaveastomachacheresultingfromyourskippingbreakfast.⑥把句③升级为含有非限制性定语从句的复合句⑦用Itiswise...和非限制性定语从句升级句④Youdon’thavethehabitofhavingbreakfastontime,whichisharmfultoyourhealth.Itiswisetotakeenoughphysicalexerciseeveryday,whichwillhelpyoustayenergeticandfreefromdisease.【妙笔成篇】

DearCindy,I’mworriedtoknowyou’reinhospitalbecauseyouhaveastomachacheresultingfromyourskippingbreakfast.I’dliketoofferyousomeadvice.Asweallknow,it’simportanttohaveagoodbreakfastthatconsistsofgrain,fruitandvegetables.However,youdon’thavethehabitofhavingbreakfastontime,whichisharmfultoyourhealth.Ithinkyoushoulddevelopahealthywayoflifefromnowon.It’swisetotakeenoughphysicalexerciseeveryday,whichwillhelpyoustayenergeticandfreefromdisease.Ihopeyouwillfindmyadviceuseful.Yours,LiHua针对训练假设你是李华,你的美国朋友Mike就读的学校要举办一年一度的“中华文化节”,他来信向你征求活动意见,请你写封回信,内容包括:1.写作目的;2.活动建议;3.表示祝愿。注意:1.词数80左右;2.请在相应位置作答。DearMike,Sodelightedtolearnthatyourscho