Unit4AdversityandCourageReadingforWriting课件高中英语人教版选择性

LearnaboutoptimismandperseveranceUnit4UsingLanguageTheRewardforPerseverance

1Pre-readingWatchthedocumentary(纪录片）andpredictwhatthe22crewmemberswouldsuffer

onElephantIsland.Imagine

whatthecrewmemberswouldsufferonElephantIsland.extremeweathercoldlonelinesshelplessnesshungerandthirstillness......2Nowlet'sreadthememoirtoseewhatwouldhappentothem.TheRewardForPerseverancePara.1______

Para.2______

Para.3______

Para.4______

Para.5______

Para.6______

a.Foodwasaproblembecauseofnofruitorvegetablesontheisland.b.Theytriedtheirbesttostayalive.c.Theintroductiontowhatmightmakehimill.d.WhattheauthorthoughtofafterShackletonleft.e.Whenrescued,theyfeltjoyfulandrelieved.f.Itwastheirdisciplineandteamspiritthatmadethemgothroughthefourmonths.2.What’sthemainideaofthepassage?A.TheyfelthopelesswhentheywereonElephantIsland.B.TheylivedahappylifewhentheywereonElephantIsland.C.TheyhadenoughfoodwhentheywereonElephantIsland.D.TheysufferedalotonElephantIslandbutatlasttheywererescued.

Task1Skimthepassageandmatchthemainideasdbacfe√Structure&MainIdeaResult

Difficulties&SolutionsFastReadingBackgroundReadthememoirbelowandfinishthefollowingtasks.Matchthekeywordwitheachparagraph.Para1Para2Para3Para4Para5Para6FoodproblemBackgroundandfearsWaterproblemPersonalhealthBeingrescuedOptimisticTask2Studythestructureofthestory.WewereleftonElephantIslandThehardlifeonElephantIslandWewerefinallyrescued(Para.6)Our_________and_______inShackletonpaidoff.(Para.1)Shackletonlefttofindhelp,____________usontheisland.(Para.2)Managedtoget___________andmake____.(Para.3)Boring______-onlyseacreatures.(Para.4)Keptinsidetoavoidcatching____.(Para.5)Keptoptimistictodealwith_____.↓↓freshwaterfirecoldfearsleavingfoodoptimismfaithNowlet'sreadeachparaofthepassagetoknowmoredetailedinformation，andthenanswerquestions

THEREWARDFORPERSEVERANCEWewatchedasShackletonandtheboatsailedawayfrom

ElephantIsland.Itwaseasytoimaginethedangeraheadof

them.Wouldtheyeverreturntofindus?Whatmighthappentothem?Whatiftheyweredelayed?Wefeltsoaloneanddesperate.Butitwasnotforlong.Therewasnothinglikeagooddinnerandsomemusicto

cheerusup.锲而不舍的回报我们看着沙克尔顿和小船驶离象岛。不难想象他们要面临的危险。他们会回来找到我们吗?他们会发生什么事呢?如果他们被耽搁了，那怎么办?我们感到如此孤独和绝望。不过，这种情绪并没有持续长久。没有什么比一顿丰盛的晚餐和一点音乐更能让我们振作起来了。ifitwerenotfor是对现在和将来情况的虚拟，意思为“若不是，若不是因为”。结构是：ifitwerenotfor+名词/句子/名词性短语,主语+would/should等+do...ifitwerenotfor可以换用为butfor或without。Ifitweren’tforseaanimals,wewouldallstarve.从句主句与现在事实相反过去式(were)情态动词+do(would/could/should/might)与过去事实相反haddone情态动词+havedone(would/could/should/might)与将来事实相反过去式(were)；wereto+动词原形；should+动词原形情态动词+do(would/could/should/might)Para2

Lifefellintoaregularpattern.Stayingalive

tookallourtimeandenergy.Forexample,weneededwater,andElephantIslandhadnone.Wefoundthatwecouldmelticefromtheoceananddrinkthewaterfromit.Buthowcouldwemakefire?TherewerenotreesgrowingonAntarcticaandnooil,sotheonlyfuelwecouldusewasanimalfat.Thisgaveoff

oily,blacksmoke,butitstayedburning

eveninstrongwinds.

生活陷入了一个固定的模式。求生耗费了我们所有的时间和精力。例如，我们需要水，而象岛没有。我们发现可以把海上的冰融化成水，然后饮用。可是我们怎么生火呢?南极没有树木，也没有石油，我们可以使用的唯一燃料就是动物脂肪。这种燃料会产生油腻的黑烟，但它在强风中仍能保持燃烧。Lifefellintoaregularpattern.Stayingalivetookallourtimeandenergy.Forexample,weneededwater,andElephantIslandhadnone.Wefoundthatwecouldmelticefromtheoceananddrinkthewaterfromit.Buthowcouldwemakefire?TherewerenotreesgrowingonAntarcticaandnooil,sotheonlyfuelwecouldusewasanimalfat.Thisgaveoffoily,blacksmoke,butitstayedburningeveninstrongwinds.动名词作主语宾语从句后置定语定语从句Para3Foodwasalsoaproblem,aswedidnotfindanyvegetablesorfruitontheisland.Oneofourgroupmembers,LionelGreenstreet,notedinhisdiaryabouthowboredhewaswith

themeals:"Thefoodnowis

prettywell

allmeatofseacreatures.Ifitweren’tforseaanimals,wewouldallstarve.Asachef.itwasmydutytocook,soItriedtovarythemeals

in

whateverwayIcould.Butitwasdifficult.食物也是个问题，因为在岛上我们找不到任何蔬菜或水果。我们的一位团队成员，莱昂内尔·格林斯特里特，在日记中写下了他对三餐的厌烦程度:“现在的食物几乎全是海洋生物。”要不是有海洋生物，我们都得挨饿。作为一名厨师，我的职责是烹饪食物，于是我想方设法变换三餐的花样。但是，这实在太难了。同位语宾语从句2.varyin

在…方面不同；在某方面不同；在某一方面不同

variousadj.各种各样varietyn.种类3.prettywell/much=allbut=almostOnedoglooksprettymuchlikeanothertome.

1.be

boredwithsb对……厌倦4.Ifitweren’tforseaanimals,wewouldallstarve.虚拟条件句，与现在事实相反的假设。其构成：if+主语+were/did，主语+would/could/might/should+doPara4Wehadtobecarefulnottogooutsidetoooften,as

thechangingtemperaturescouldmakeusill.Itwasalmostasdangeroustobecometoohotfromwearingtoomanyclothesastobecometoocoldfromwearingtoofew.Thesweatcouldfreezeveryquickly.Manyofusalsobecameillfromtheblacksmokeoftheanimalfatweburntforourfires.Itdamagedoureyesandburntourlungs.我们十分小心，避免过于频繁地外出，因为气温变化会使人生病。衣服穿得太多造成过热与衣服穿得太少造成过冷几乎是一样危险的。汗水会迅速结冰。我们燃烧动物脂肪取火，冒出的黑烟使我们很多人都得病了。这种黑烟损害我们的眼睛，而且伤害我们的肺部。be+adj.+todoadj.宾补定语从句damagev./n.损害，毁坏；dodamageto对……有损害causedamageto引起……损害状语从句译“因为”Para5

Thetwenty-twoofuslivedlikethisinthecoldforfourmonths.Ourdisciplineandteamspiritkeptusoptimisticandhelpedusdealwith

ourfearsinapositiveandsuccessfulway.Wealsocelebratedourbirthdays,festivals,andeventhetimeswhenwecaughtaseaanimal.ThiswasanepisodeinmylifethatIwouldneverforget.我们22个人就这样在冰天雪地里度过了四个月。纪律和团队精神使我们保持乐观，帮助我们积极、成功地应对恐惧感。生日、节日甚至捕获海洋动物之时，我们都会庆祝一番。这是我生命中永远不会忘却的一段经历。介词“像”in……

a

way以……的方法定语从句定语从句Whenwewerefinallyrescued,wefeltsuchreliefandjoythatmanyofuscouldnothideourtears.Wewere

atlastfreetogohometowarmbeds,goodfoodandthecareofourfamilyandfriends.Ouroptimismand

faithinShackletonhadhelpeduspersevereinstayingalive.Andhepaidusbackbyhiscommitmenttosaveusfromaslowbutpainfuldeath.Para6

最终获救时，我们如释重负、喜不自禁，我们许多人都难掩泪水。我们终于可以回家了，回归温暖的被窝、(享受)可口的食物以及家人朋友的关爱。我们的乐观和对沙克尔顿的信任让我们顽强地活了下来，而他则用他的承诺回报了我们——把我们从缓慢而痛苦的死亡线上拯救回来。可以自由做……如此……以至于对…….信任such...that...如此……以至于……ThisbookiswritteninsucheasyEnglishthatbeginnerscanunderstandit.这本书是用浅易的英语写的，所以初学者可以读懂。（1）such...that...可用于以下三个句型：such+a（n）+adj.+可数名词单数+that...;such+adj.+可数名词复数+that...;such+adj.+不可数名词+that...

ThisissuchausefuldictionarythatI’mthinkingofbuyingit.这本词典很有用，我正打算买它。在so/such...that...结构中，当so/such...置于句首时，要用部分倒装结构。Suchwastheforceoftheeruptionthatthewholetownwascoveredwithash.火山爆发的威力大得使整个城镇都被火山灰烬覆盖。ProblemstheyfacedmadefireDrinkingwaterfoodproblembecameillThingsthathelpeddiscipline,teamspirit,andcelebrationofbirthdays,...meltedicefromtheoceannottogooutsidevariedthemealsofseaanimalstheonlyfuelwasanimalfatReault:TheywerefinallyrescuedsolutionCompletethechart.&bytriedtomaketheirfirstlandcrossingofAntartica

gotstuckintheiceleftElephantIslandforhelpabandonedtheshipandcampedontheicestayedontheislandRevisionSectionⅣ

Writing——写一篇故事评论首段：简介故事中段：引用原文情节，分析人物性格尾段：自己的印象和感受明确体裁话题确定时态人称

布局文章架构

列出核心要点

介绍和评价作品中的人物角色书评类论文一般过去时为主；第三人称Shackleton无私无畏，有极强的责任感，意志力和亲和力。

增分佳句首段：介绍要评论的故事1．IhavereadanicestoryandI'dliketoshareitwithyou.我读了一个很好的故事，

想把它和你分享一下。2．Letmeintroduceaninterestingnovel.我来介绍一部有趣的小说。中段：介绍这个故事的主要内容、主要人物等1．Thestoryismainlyaboutabraveyoungman.这个故事是关于一个勇敢的年轻人的。2．Itisthepoorgirl'slovethatcuresthebad-temperedperson.是那个贫穷女孩的爱治愈了这个坏脾气的人。3．Thecharactersinthisstoryaresoconsideratethatmostreaderslikethem.这个故事里的人物是那么善解人意，

大多数读者都喜欢他们。4．TheplotsofthestoryaresoattractivethatIcan'ttakemyeyesoffit.这个故事的情节那么吸引人，

我真的移不开眼了。5．Infaceofdanger,theybehavesobravelythattheymovethereadersdeeply.面对困难，

他们表现得如此勇敢，

以至深深地感动了读者。尾段：表达自己对这个故事的感受和评价1．ThisisaninspiringstoryandIhavelearnedalotfromit.这是一个非常鼓舞人心的故事，

我从中学到了很多。2．Iwasdeeplyinspiredbythebraveyoungmaninthisstory.我被这个故事里勇敢的年轻人深深地激励着。3．Fromthisstory,wehavelearnedthatonlybyworkinghardcanapersonsucceed.从这个故事中，

我们学到的是：一个人只有努力工作才能成功。请根据下面的提示写一篇短评。1.欧内斯特·沙克尔顿和他的船员们一起登上了名字为“坚忍”号的大船。途中“坚忍”号被冰山困住了，大家弃船后逃到了大象岛。沙克尔顿驾船去寻求帮助。最后，尽管困难重重船员们还是活了下来。2.在这个故事里面船员之间真诚的关心和爱以及他们在困难面前的忍耐力和毅力也使我深受鼓舞。3.从这个故事中我学到一个教训：无论遇到任何困难，都不要放弃！第一步布局谋篇_________________________________________________________________________第二步遣词造句[核心词汇]1.探险；远征2.全体工作人员3.答应做某事4.上船5.不幸的是6.沉没；下沉expeditioncrewmakeacommitmenttodosth.goaboardtheshipunfortunatelysink____________________________________________________________________________________7.放弃8.决定做某事9.向某人寻求帮助10.陷入恐慌11.忍耐力；耐久力12.毅力13.放弃abandonresolvetodosth.turntosb.forhelpgetintoapanicenduranceperseverancegiveup1.欧内斯特·沙克尔顿和他的船员们登上了名字为“坚忍”号的大船。(aboard；Endurance)ErnestShackletonandhiscrew

theship____________

.2.不幸的是，途中“坚忍”号被冰块困住，沉进了大洋中。(unfortunately；be/becomestuckin)

[连词成句]wentaboardwhosenamewasEnduranceUnfortunately，onthewayEndurancebecamestuckintheiceandsankintotheocean.3.在放弃那艘船后，他们逃到了大象岛上。(abandon；escape)Aftertheyhadabandonedtheship，___________________________

.4.沙克尔顿承诺救他们，因此他决定去寻求他人的帮助。(commitment；resolve)Shackletonmadeacommitmenttosavethem，__________________

.theyescapedtoElephantIslandsoheresolvedtoturntoothersforhelp5.尽管他们陷入了恐慌，也有许多困难，全体人员设法活了下来。(panic)

，thecrewmanagedtosurvive.6.从这个鼓舞人心的故事中我学到一个重要的教训。(lesson)__________________________________________________________7.将来万一我们遇到困难，我们绝不放弃。(giveup)

，wewouldnevergiveup.AlthoughtheygotintoapanicandthereweremanydifficultiesIhavelearnedanimportantlessonfromtheinspiringstory.Ifweweretomeetwithdifficulties第三步句式升级1.用非谓语动词改写句1。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ErnestShackletonandhiscrewwentaboardtheshipnamedEndurance.2.用非谓语动词改写句2。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Unfortunately，onthewayEndurancebecamestuckintheice，sinkingintotheocean.3.用非谓语动词改写句3。__________________________________________________________Havingabandonedtheship，theyescapedtoElephantIsland.第四步组句成篇用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇英语短文。AssessmentChecklistItemYesorNo1.Wastheessaywritenintherighttense,personandformat?2.Doesithaveareasonablestructureandlayout？Openingparagraph----statethemainpointsandcorequestionsofthepassage.Bodyparagraphs----carryoutnarrationordiscussionaroundthethemeConcludingparagraph----summarizethewholetext2.Doestheessaycontainthemainpointsinthestory?3.Doesthewritergivehis/herownopinions?4.Isthewritingwell-organisedandcoherent?5.Doesthewriterendtheessayinanaturalway?WritingSkillsSampleWriting

Thisstoryisaboutthe1914-1916expeditionbyEarnestShackletontomake

thefirstlandcrossingofAntarctica.

ErnestShackletonandhiscrewwentaboardtheshipnamedEndurance.

As

theyapproachedAntarctica,

unfortunately,

theirshipgotstuckintheice,sinking

intothesea.

Having

abandonedtheship,

theyescapedtoElephantIsland.

Shackletonleftthemtofindhelp,andthecrewhadtostruggletosurviveintheextremeweatherandcold.

The

dangerousenvironmentandlimitedsupplies

addedtothe

mentalchallenge,sotheyhadtomaintainapositivestateofmind.TheyhadfaithinShackleton

becausetheyknewhewouldnotabandonthem.

Iwasdeeplymovedbytheconcernandlovebetween

themandI’malsoinspiredby

their