高考英语书面表达申请信省公开课金奖全国赛课一等奖微课获奖课件

ApplicationLetter1/18求职信你是李华，从小区布告栏上看到某企业招聘一名兼职健身教练启示。你依据启示写应聘信说明你简历，并请经理考虑给予回复。词数：120词左右关键点：applyforthepositionofapart-timefitnessinstructor表明写信目标及对这一职位了解。你申请原因及优势。你期望2/18书面表示解题步骤：1、审，即：审定体裁、题材、人称、时态、结构等；2、编，即：编写关键点，按次序列出；3、写，即：连词成句，连句成文；4、查，即：查内容，查格式，查语法，查书写等。3/18如何审题？1、审定体裁、题材；2、审定人称；3、审定时态；4、审定关键点；5、审定结构。4/181、审定体裁、题材：2、审定人称：3、审定时态：4、审定关键点：5、审定结构：审题提醒:①书信、求职②第一和第二人称③现在时④原因，优势，期望⑤可分为三或四段5/18

SampleAnswer

DearSir,MynameisLiHua.Ireadwithinterestyouradvertisementwhichappearedonthenoticeboardinourcommunityandwouldliketotakeupthechallenge

asapart-timefitnessinstructorinyourcompany.Iamsopleasedtoknowthatyourcompanyislookingforapersontoprovideyourstaffwithprofessionalfitnesstrainingduringweekends.IameagertoapplyforthispositionnotonlybecauseIneedtoearnsomeextramoneytocovermylivingexpensesbutalsobecauseIamcurrentlylivingsoclosetoyourcompany.6/18

IthinkIamqualifiedforthisposition.Tobeginwith,IhavebeenaswimmingandYogainstructorinaclubformorethanfiveyears,andthereforehaverichexperienceandprofessionalcompetence.Besides,Iamnotworkingonweekends,soIcaneasilyfitintoyourtimetable,whichalsomeansIamabletostartworkingatanytimeasyouwish.Ihopethatafterreviewingmyresumeyouwillkindlygivemeaninterview.Ilookforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yourssincerely,LiHua.

7/18StructureofthepassagePara1:Para2:Para3:Para4:introductionandpurposereasonsofapplyingforthejobadvantagesexpectationIntroductionMainbodyClosing｛8/18返回Howtoenrichyoursentences9/18Iamveryinterestedinyouradvertisementfor……Iamwritingtoapplyfor……Iwishtoapplyforthepositionof……Iamwritingtoexpressmyinterestin……Iamveryinterestedinthepossibilitiesofworkingwithyourclubasateacherassistant.IntroductionIreadwithinterestyouradvertisement……andwouldliketotakeupthechallenge

as……Toshowyourpurpose10/18MainbodyHowtoshowyouradvantagesability,goodqualities,experience,personality,motivation,etc.IbelieveIhavethequalificationsandexperiencefortheposition.IthinkIamcompetenttomeetyourrequirements.Withgoodacademicperformanceandsufficientpracticalexperience,IfeelIamtherightpersonyouarelookingfor.11/18

1.Ihaveagoodcommandof……很好地掌握了

2.Ihaveanintimateknowledgeof……非常熟悉

3.Iamaverydiligentstudentwithanicecharacter

andIamusedtoworkingaspartofateam.

4.Ihavetwoyears’experienceas……

5.Ihavemorethan…yearsofpracticalexperience.

6.Iobtainedpracticaltraininginallaspectsof……

7.Iamoutgoingandopen-minded,whichmakes

me...

8.Iamhighlycompetentandself-motivatedtowork

in……

9.Ihavereceivedquiteanumberofhonours.

12/18Closing1.Ishouldbegladtohaveapersonalinterview.2.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.3.Iwillappreciateitifyougivemeaninterview.4.IshouldbegratefulifIcangetthisopportunity.5.Iwonderifitispossibleforyouto……6.Thankyouforconsideringmyapplication.Iamlookingforwardtomeetingyouinthenearfuture.Toshowyourhope13/18

假设你是晨光中学高中生李华。你校拟选一些优异学生，利用暑期到晨曦希望小学为学生辅导英语。你希望参加此活动。依据以下提醒，用英语给校评选组写一封申请信：●对此活动认识(如对本人、学生及社会益处)●个人优势（如性格、独立生活能力、语言能力等）●你计划（如怎样进行辅导等）注意：1.

词数不少于100词；

2.可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；

3.信开头和结尾已经给出，不计入词数。参考词汇：晨曦希望小学:ChenxiHopeSchool高考真题链接年天津卷14/18DearSirorMadam,IamLihuafromClassOne,SeniorTwo.

YoursSincerely,LiHua15/181、审定体裁、题材：2、审定人称：3、审定时态：4、审定关键点：5、审定结构：审题提醒:①书信、申请②第一和第二人称③现在时，未来时④认识，优势，计划⑤可分为三或四段16/18DearSir/Madam,

I’mlihuafromclassone,seniortwo.IamwringtoapplyfortheopportunitytohelpthestudentsinchenxinHopeSchoolwiththeirEnglish.ThustheycanimprovetheirEnglishduringthesummervacation.Meanwhile,Icanlearnhowtogetalongwellwiththestudentsandbenefitthewholeschool.

Iamkind,easy-goingandalwaysreadytohelpothers.Iwashclothesandmakebedsbymyselftodevelopindependence.EnglishismyfavoritesubjectandIhavewonseveralprizesinEnglishcontests.SoIthinkthatIamqualifiedfortheposition.

Iplantocommunicatewithstudentsfirsttoknowwhat