Unit12写作能力提升课件人教版英语七年级下册

UNIT12Whatdidyoudolastweekend？UNIT12写作能力提升练

请根据下面表格提示,写一篇不少于60词的英语短文,向大家介绍一下Jim上周末的活动,可适当发挥。上午下午周六去书店买书在公园打网球周日在家做作业去看电影

［谋篇布局］理清文章要素,构建文章结构。

［遣词造句］就结构图中的要点和词语写出句子。1.吉姆上周末过得忙碌但有趣。Jimhada

busy

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but

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interesting

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weekend.2.星期六上午他去书店买了一些有关科学的书。OnSaturdaymorning,he

went

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to

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the

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bookstore

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andhe

bought

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some

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books

⁠aboutsciencethere.busy

but

interesting

went

to

the

bookstore

bought

some

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3.下午他和朋友们在公园里打网球。Intheafternoon,he

played

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tennis

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with

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his

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friends

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inthepark.4.周日上午他在家做作业。OnSundaymorning,he

did

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his

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homework

⁠athome.played

tennis

with

his

friends

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did

his

homework

5.下午他和妹妹一起去看电影,电影很有趣。Intheafternoon,he

went

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to

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the

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movies

⁠withhissister.Themovie

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funny/interesting

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［巧妙衔接］本文记录周末活动时,按照时间顺序展开,如onSaturdaymorning,intheafternoon,onSundaymorning。这是使上下文连贯的一种方式。Jimhadabusybutinterestingweekend.OnSaturdaymorning,hewenttothebookstoreandheboughtsomebooksaboutsciencethere.Intheafternoon,theweatherwassunny.Heplayedtenniswithhisfriendsinthepark.OnSundaymorning,hedidhishomeworkathome.Hewenttothemovieswithhissisterintheafternoon.Hethoughtthemoviewasveryfunny.Whatabusyweekend！ButJimfeltreallyhappy.Jim’sweekend［连句成篇］

根据图画内容及所给提示,以“Peter’sSunday”为题写一篇短文,介绍Peter上周日的活动。60词左右,可适当发挥。提示：

图1和图2是上午的活动；图3和图4是下午的活动；图5和图6是晚上的活动。Peter’sSunday

ItwasSundayyesterday.Peterwasbusy.Hegotupveryearly.Afterbreakfast,hecleanedhisroomandthenhewenttothelibrary.Intheafternoon,hevisitedhisaunt.Thenheplayedsoccerwithhisfriends.Intheevening,hedidhishomework.Afterthat,hewatchedTV.Ataboutteno’clock,hewenttobed.

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ItwasSundayyesterday.Peterwasbusy.Hegotupveryearly.Afterbreakfast,hecleanedhisroomandthenhewenttothelibrary.Intheafternoon,hevisitedhisaunt.Thenheplayedsoccerwithhisfriends.Intheevening,hedidhishomework.Afterthat,hewatchedTV.Ataboutteno’clock,hewenttobed.

⁠一、话题分析本单元话题为“上周末活动”,围绕这一话题,教材提供了常用的表示活动的单词、短语和句型。文体上为记叙文,写作时通常以一般过去时态为主,并合理使用表示过去时间的时间状语如inthemorning,yesterday,lastweek等。二、素材积累(一)“关于活动”类作文的常用词汇:lake//beach//farm//mountain//village//camp//visit//move//shout//swim//flyakite//putupatent//runaway//stayuplate//jumpupanddown//wakeup//gofishing//goboating//playbadminton//playtheguitar//studyforatest//takephotos//yesterday//lastweek//twoweeksago//tired//scared//relaxed//getasurprise//haveagood//great//wonderfultime//enjoyoneself//havefun(二)“关于活动”类作文的常用句型:开头句1.Ihadabusybutinterestingweekend.2.OnSaturday,wehadaschooltriptotheGreatWall.中间句1.Itrainedlastnight,somybrotherdidn’tplayfootball.2.Shewenttothefarmandfedsomesheep.3.Hevisitedhisgrandparentsandhaddinnerwiththemyesterday.4.Ididn’tdomyhomeworklastSaturdaymorning.Iwenttothebeach.结尾句1.Thisismyrelaxingweekend.2.Ihadabusyweekend,becauseIhadalotofthingstodo.3.ItwasagreatweekendandIhadsomuchfun.4.Wehadagoodtime.三、写作任务请根据提示词,以“MyLastWeekend”为题,写一篇60词左右的英语短文,介绍一下你的周末活动。提示词：sunny,gotothelibrary,studymathandscience,visitmyfriend,playbadminton,cleanmyroom,busybuthappy【写作方法及写作模板】总述具体活动抒发感受Ihadabusyweekendlastweek.OnSaturdaymorning,I...Intheafternoon,I...onSundaymorning.Andintheafternoon,I...Whatabusybuthappyweekenditwas!“三步一时态法”讲述故事【高分作文】MyLastWeekend________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihadabusyweekendlastweek.Itwassunnyandalittlewindylastweekend.OnSaturdaymorning,Iwenttothelibraryandstudiedmathandsciencethere.Intheafternoon,Ivisitedmyfriendandplayedbadmintonwithhim.IdidmyhomeworkathomeonSundaymorning.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________