读后续写友谊类之Sally难忘的生日写作任务单-高考英语作文复习专项

读后续写原题目呈现：阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Sally'sbirthdaywasapproaching,buttheexcitementthatusuallyfilledherheartwasreplacedwithdisappointmentandstress.Turningelevenwasabigdeal,andshehadalwayscelebratedherbirthdaywithagrandpartysurroundedbyherfriends.However,thisyearwasdifferent.Theburdenofexcessivehomeworkandherparents’strugglingbusinessweighedheavilyonher,forcingSallytomakethedifficultdecisionofnothavingabirthdayparty,eventhoughitwasaneventsheenjoyeddearlyeveryyear.Oneday,duringthebreak,herbestfriend,Jane,withacuriouslookinhereyes,approached.“Areyougoingtohaveabirthdaypartythisyear?"Janeasked,sensingSally'ssadness.'No,"Sallysighedandrepliedsadly.“There'sjusttoomuchgoingonandmyparentsaregoingthroughfinancialdifficulties.”Sallysmiledweakly,tryingtoconcealherimmensedisappointmentandstress,butJanesawthroughherpretense(假装)easily.Janenoddedthoughtfullyanddidnotsayanything.Afterthebreak,Sallysawhertalkingtooneoftheirclassmates,Sarah,secretively.Curious,Sallywentovertothem,butassoonasJanesawher,shequicklywalkedaway.SallywasstartledbyJane'sstrangeactionsandturnedtowardsSarah.“Whatdidshesay?”Sallyasked.However,Sarahsimplyshruggedandwalkedaway,leavingSallystandingthere,feelingleftoutandanxious.“Whatishappening?”Sallywonderedanxiously.“Aretheykeepingsomethingfromme?”AsSally'sbirthdaydrewnearer,Janewasoftenfoundchattingsoftlywithherotherclassmates.WheneverSallywentovertothem,theywouldjustwalkawayortellherthattheyweretalkingaboutasecretwhichSallywasnotallowedtoknow,“Janehasneverkeptsecretsfrommebefore,”Sallythought.Herheartsank.Evenherotherfriendsweredistancingthemselvesfromher!Sheswungbetweenconfusionandsadnesswitheachpassingmoment,desperatelytryingtofigureoutwhatwashappening.Whywereherfriendsdistancingthemselvesfromher?Andwhatweretheyhiding?P1：OnthedayofSally'sbirthday,shewenttoschoolandfoundherclassroom

intotaldarkness.P2：TearssprangfromSally'seyesandherfacebrokeintoaradiant(喜气洋洋的)smile.【情节分析】Sally的11岁生日马上就要到了，她自己非常激动并且也十分期待。然而，繁重的学业，加上父母亲的财政危机，等原因，她不得不做出一个艰难的决定——今年不过生日。她感到十分悲伤。但是，她的好朋友Jane察觉了此事，于是和班上同学精心为Sally准备了一场生日聚会，在生日这天，给Sally一个惊喜。【思路点拨】文章有特定的场景——生日。第一段段首句也出现了环境描写herclassroomintotaldarkness，这和前文Sally悲伤的心情是一致的。因此，我们不妨还是从环境描写中光线的角度切入，第一段写Sally在出现“光”（教室灯光或者蜡烛的光）前后的心理变化，以及光亮起之后教室内的场景描写（同学们精心布置的聚会场景）。第二段段首句描写了Sally的激动情绪，眼含泪水，但是脸上绽放笑意。可以重点描写Sally的激动和感动的心情，明白了前文所讲的同学们“疏离”她的原因——准备生日惊喜。同时也明白了友谊的珍贵，正如培根所说：“Moreoftenthannot,closefriendshipwillhelpsmoothoutthesometimesrockyroadthatweareallmeanttotravel.”（新译林版教材必修一Unit3Extendedreading）。【参考范文】OnthedayofSally'sbirthday,shewenttoschoolandfoundherclassroomintotaldarkness.Theatmospherewaschargedwithmysteriousstillnessandsuspense.Asshecautiouslysteppedintothechaoticandconfusingdarkness,thefeelingofdepressioncoursedthroughher.Suddenly,thelights

were

flickedon

and

achorusof

“Surprise!”

eruptedintheroom.She

wasoverwhelmedbythesightof

colorfulballoonsandstreamersandahomemadebirthdaycake,

andherdesk

waspiledwith

giftsofallshapesandsizes.Herbestfriend,Jane,leadingallherclassmates,

heldahomemadebirthday

withacardattached

toitstransparentpackagingbox

andexcitedlyinvited

herto

makeawish.Theloveand

effortputintoeverydetail

ofthepartyfilledherwithwarmth.TearssprangfromSally'seyesandherfacebrokeintoaradiantsmile.Shemovedforwardand

picked

upthecarefullypreparedcardthatwasfilledwithcolorfulpaintingsandheartfeltmessages.Eachwordsheread

sentawaveofhappiness,

dispellingtheshadowsof

doubtandanxietythathadcloudedherheart.Alivewith

happinessandgratitude,sheembracedJaneandherclassmates,feelingblessedtohavesuchwonderfulfriendsbyherside.Shecouldn'tbelieve

thelengthsherfriendsandclassmateshadgoneto

makeherbirthdayspecialandunforgettable,which

servedasareminderofwhat

Bacononcesaid,

“Friendshipwillhelpsmoothoutthesometimesrockyroadthatweareallmeanttotravel”.默写版：OnthedayofSally'sbirthday,shewenttoschoolandfoundherclassroomintotaldarkness.___________________________________气氛充满了神秘的寂静和悬念.Asshecautiouslysteppedintothechaoticandconfusingdarkness,thefeelingofdepressioncoursedthroughher.___________________________________突然，灯亮了，房间里响起了“惊喜！”的合唱.She

wasoverwhelmedbythesightof

colorfulballoonsandstreamersandahomemadebirthdaycake,

andherdesk

waspiledwith

giftsofallshapesandsizes.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________她最好的朋友，简，带领她的所有同学，举行了一个自制的生日，卡片附在透明的包装盒上，并兴奋地邀请她许愿.Theloveand

effortputintoeverydetail

ofthepartyfilledherwithwarmth.TearssprangfromSally'seyesandherfacebrokeintoaradiantsmile.Shemovedforwardand

picked

upthecarefullypreparedcardthatwasfilledwithcolorfulpaintingsandheartfeltmessages.__________________________________________________________她读到的每一个字都散发着幸福的气息，驱散了笼罩在她心头的怀疑和焦虑的阴影.Alivewith

happinessandgratitude,sheembracedJaneandherclassmates,___________________________________________________________________有这么好的朋友在她身边，我感到很幸运.Shecouldn'tbelieve

thelengthsherfriendsandclassmateshadgoneto

makeherbirthdayspecialandunforgettable,which

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________