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Thenextmorning,HeissawoketoamessagefromRadioXeny._____________________________________________________________________________________...Dayami’seyeswerewideopenwithwonder.

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Accordingtothefirstgivensentenceandthesecondgivensentence,whatplotshouldyoudesign?Q1:Whatwasthecontentofthemessage?Q2:Afterhearingthemessage,howwouldhefeelandwhatwouldhedo?Q3:WherewouldHeissandDayamimeet?

Thenextmorning,HeissawoketoamessagefromRadioXeny._____________________________________________________________________________________...Dayami’seyeswerewideopenwithwonder.

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anaffected,smug,oroffensivelyfamiliarwayorlaughwithpleasureatsomeone

else's

unhappinessormisfortune)。可用作动词或名词。snicker“坏笑”、“窃笑”、“暗笑”，常含有不敬之意（laughquietlyina

disrespectful

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