山西省高考考前适应性测试试题讲评课件

英语试题讲评2024年山西省高考考前适应性测试一、语法填空部分讲评试题分析主题语境：人与自然---自然科学研究成果语篇类型：说明文语篇内容：人类从自然界获取灵感进行设计。选择性必修第三册Unit5Learningfromnature Animalsandplantscanteachhumansalotaboutdesignandengineering.Asaresult,manyengineers,scientists,anddesignersspendtimestudyingthem.Whentheyhaveaproblem,natureoftenhastheanswer.Thisscience

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(call)biomimetics.Biomeans“livingthings”andmimeticsmeans“copying”.Itinvolves57(draw)inspirationfromnature'sdesignsandprocesses58(solve)humanproblemsorimprovetechnology. Forexample,engineersinCanadaarestudyingwhaleflippers(鳍)becausetheymovesoeffectivelythroughwater.Theengincersbelievetheshapecanimprovethemovementofwindturbines(涡轮机).Similarly,engincersatMercedesBenzinGermanyareusingtheshapeoftheboxfish59oneoftheirnewcarsbecauseitmakesthecar60(fast)andmorefuelefficient. Velcro(粘扣)is61

(probable)themostfamousexampleofbiomimetics.MostpeoplehavesomeVelcroon62

itemofclothing.ItwasinventedbytheSwissengineerGeorgedeMestralin1948.Hewaswalkinginthecountryside.63

hepulledaburr(毛刺)offhistrousers.Henoticedhowwelltheburrstucktohisclothessohestudieditsdesign.TheresultwasVelcro,whichbecamean64_____

(afford)alternativetothetraditionalzipper. Inconclusion,biomimeticsnotonlyhashelpedtodesignourworldbutpromisesmanymore 65

(possibility).Unfortunately,theymighttakealongtimetodevelop.Thisisn'treallysurprising:ittooknaturemillionsofyearstodesignitsanimalsandplants.

topic：biomimeticsexamplesthemostfamousexampleConclusion

Animalsandplantscanteachhumansalotaboutdesignandengineering.Asaresult,manyengineers,scientists,anddesignersspendtimestudyingthem.Whentheyhaveaproblem,natureoftenhastheanswer.Thisscience56_____

(call)biomimetics.Biomeans“livingthings”andmimeticsmeans“copying”.Itinvolves57_____

(draw)inspirationfromnature'sdesignsandprocesses58(solve)humanproblemsorimprovetechnology.iscalled谓语动词：时态与语态;主谓一致drawing非谓语动词：involvedoing

sth包含/需要做某事非谓语动词：目的状语tosolve

Forexample,engineersinCanadaarestudyingwhaleflippers(鳍)becausetheymovesoeffectivelythroughwater.Theengineersbelievetheshapecanimprovethemovementofwindturbines(涡轮机).Similarly,engineersatMercedesBenzinGermanyareusingtheshapeoftheboxfish59oneoftheirnewcarsbecauseitmakesthecar60(fast)andmorefuelefficient.in介词：in在......里faster形容词比较级for？use...for...（常做被动“把.....用于......”）

Velcro(粘扣)is61

(probable)themostfamousexampleofbiomimetics.MostpeoplehavesomeVelcroon62

itemofclothing.ItwasinventedbytheSwissengineerGeorgedeMestralin1948.Hewaswalkinginthecountryside63

hepulledaburr(毛刺)offhistrousers.Henoticedhowwelltheburrstucktohisclothessohestudieditsdesign.TheresultwasVelcro,whichbecamean64_____

(afford)alternativetothetraditionalzipper.probably副词：作状语，修饰动词“is”an冠词：anitemof（clothing）

一件（衣服）连词：was/weredoing...when正在做......这时（突然）...when形容词：词性转换

n.choiceaffordable-able，-ible能够......的；可......的后缀词义examples后缀词义examples-able，-ible能够.....的；可......的vis(see)ible可视的recognizable可认出的；可认可的-ly-al/-ical有......性质的deadly致命的functional功能的；实用的econom(y)ical节约的；经济实惠的-ful充满.....的eventful充满大事的；多变故的fruitful丰硕的-ishstylish时髦的bookish书呆子气的-ateconsiderate考虑周到的passionate热情的-like像......的lifelike逼真的childlike孩子般的-y充满.....的;有.....倾向的foggy有雾的worthy值得的-ary/-ory与......有关的imagin(e)ary想象的contradictory对立的-less没有......的priceless无价的wireless无线的-ic......的heroic英雄的alcoholic（含）酒精的-iveadaptive适应的addictive让人上瘾的-some令人.......的awesome令人敬畏的bothersome令人讨厌的有.....倾向的；-ous具有.....特性的mountainous多山的poisonous有毒的形容词后缀

Inconclusion,biomimeticsnotonlyhashelpedtodesignourworldbutpromisesmanymore65___________(possibility).Unfortunately,theymighttakealongtimetodevelop.Thisisn'treallysurprising:ittooknaturemillionsofyearstodesignitsanimalsandplants.possibilities名词复数：以y结尾的名词变化规则考点设置：有提示词（7个）无提示词（3个）n.v.adj/adv.prep.conj.art.pron.num.133111复数1谓2非谓比较级adj.→adv.并列连词when第二部分阅读理解-A篇主题语境：人与社会语篇类型：应用文语篇内容：Fareshare国家慈善机构致力于减少食品浪费，将剩余食物分给需要帮助的人，同时捐款者可能有资格货的税金退款。考查题型：细节理解题（21、22）

推理判断题（23）

第二部分阅读–A篇人与社会主题语境：人与社会-社会服务-慈善服务语篇类型：应用文语篇内容：Fareshare致力于减少食品浪费，

将剩余食物分给需要帮助的人，

同时捐款者可以获得部分税金退

款。考查题型：细节理解题（21、22）

推理判断题（23）

人与社会21.WhatistheprimaryfocusofFareShare?A.Providinggiftsforfamilies.B.Redistributingsurplusfood.C.Organizingfestivalevents.D.Offeringtaxrecoveryservices.细节理解题giftmoney在国外的慈善捐赠中，“giftmoney”并不是一个特定的术语，因为慈善捐赠通常涉及更广泛的概念，包括现金捐赠、物品捐赠、时间捐赠等。当提到“giftmoney”时，它通常指的是以现金形式进行的慈善捐赠,这是慈善捐赠中最直接和最简单的方式之一。捐赠者可以直接将现金捐给慈善组织，这些组织通常将这些资金用于支持他们的项目和计划，帮助那些需要帮助的人群。

2AFareShareisanationalcharityworkingtogetthatfoodtopeoplewhoarestruggling—butweneedyourhelp.Agiftof£90couldprovidethreemealsadaytoafamilyoffourforawholemonth.Plus,youmaybeentitledtorecover25poftaxonevery£1yougiveasgiftmoney.22.WhatadditionalbenefitwillFareSharedonorsreceive?A.Theywillreceiveataxrefund.B.Theywillhelprunthelocalcharities.C.Theywillberecognizedasorganizers.D.Theywillreceivefreemealsforthemselves.beentitledto(do)sthtogivesomeonetheofficialrighttodoorhavesomething使享有权利，使有资格»

Full–timeemployeesareentitledtoreceivehealthinsurance.全职雇员都有资格享受健康保险。

recoverv.togetbackanamountofmoneythatyouhavespentorlost重新获得，收回»

Legalactionisbeingtakentorecoverthemoney.

正在采取法律措施来收回那笔钱。

细节理解题推理判断题文章出处文章内容标志信息第二部分阅读理解-B篇主题语境：人与自然-人与动物-弹钢琴疗愈大象

语篇类型：记叙文语篇内容：音乐家为被救助的大象弹奏钢琴，疗愈

曾经被人类奴役的大象，安抚它们的心

灵，通过音乐再次让大象感受到世界的

美好。考查题型：细节理解题（24）

推理判断题（25、26）

主旨大意题（27）

PlaythepianoforrescuedElephants1Inthe1970s,anewsupermarketsellingLPsarrivedinmyhometownandIbegandevotingmypocketmoneytoacquiringrecords.IswiftlydevelopedanaffectionforBeethoven’sMoonlightSonata,harboringdreamsofperformingthatmusicmyself.Despitetheabsenceofapianoathome,therewasoneatmygrandmother’scarehome,whereIlearnedtoplayBeethovenbyear,withpigeonscooingandfarmersworkinginthefields.Itwastrulymagical.24.Whatmotivatedtheauthor’searlyaffectionformusic?A.ExposuretoBeethoven’smusic.B.EmploymentatElephantsWorld.C.AttendanceattheRoyalAcademyofArts.D.Pianoteachingathisgrandma’scarehome.细节理解题exposev.→exposuren.tomakeitpossibleforsomeonetoexperiencenewideas,waysoflifeetc使接触；使体验exposesbtosth»

Somechildrenareneverexposedtoclassicalmusic.

→exposuretoclassicalmusic

有些孩子从来没有接触到古典音乐。

harborv.tokeepbadthoughts,fears,orhopesinyourmindforalongtime怀有，心存（不好的想法、恐惧或希望）

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Heharboreddreamsofopeninganonlineshop.

他想上网开店蓄念已久。Shebegantoharboreddoubtsoverthewisdomoftheirjourney.

她开始对她们的旅行是否明智产生了怀疑。2EnteringtheRoyalAcademyofArtsat16markedthebeginningofmyartisticjourney.Inmy30s,Itookanothersignificantstepinlife—marriage.MywifeworkedatElephantsWorld,areservededicatedtothecareofrescueddomesticelephants.Theseelephantshaveworkedforhumansalltheirlifeandmanyareblindordisabledfrombeingtreatedbadly,soIwantedtomaketheefforttocarrysomethingheavymyself.Formy50thbirthday,mywifesuccessfullypersuadedthemanagertoallowustobringapianointothereserve,bringingmusictotheelephants’lives.细节推断题4Icontinuetoplayfortheseelephantsthatrunfreelyinthereserve,despitetheconstantpotentialdanger.Surprisingly,it’sthemoodymaleelephantswhoshowthemostfascinationwiththemusic.Ifirmlybelieveithasacalmingeffect.Theseelephants’breathingactuallyslowsdownwhenIplay,whichtellsmetheyarerelaxedandhappy.I’veevenwitnessedelephantsseeminglydancingtoBeethoven’stunes.Withtheirexceptionalhearingandtheabilitytosensevibrations(震动)throughtheirfeet,Iamconvincedthatelephantsgraspthelanguageofhumanexpression.Thisservesasapowerfulillustrationthatmusicservesasauniversallanguage,connectingusall.26.Whatroledidmusicplayinthelivesoftheelephantsinthereserve?A.Emotionalrecovery.B.Physicalexercise.C.Financialsupport.D.Artisticexpression.推理判断题moody:annoyedorunhappy情绪不好的，郁郁寡欢的

1Inthe1970s,anewsupermarketsellingLPsarrivedinmyhometownandIbegandevotingmypocketmoneytoacquiringrecords.IswiftlydevelopedanaffectionforBeethoven’sMoonlightSonata,harboringdreamsofperformingthatmusicmyself.Despitetheabsenceofapianoathome,therewasoneatmygrandmother’scarehome,whereIlearnedtoplayBeethovenbyear,withpigeonscooingandfarmersworkinginthefields.Itwastrulymagical.2EnteringtheRoyalAcademyofArtsat16markedthebeginningofmyartisticjourney.Inmy30s,Itookanothersignificantstepinlife—marriage.MywifeworkedatElephantsWorld,areservededicatedtothecareofrescueddomesticelephants.Theseelephantshaveworkedforhumansalltheirlifeandmanyareblindordisabledfrombeingtreatedbadly,soIwantedtomaketheefforttocarrysomethingheavymyself.Formy50thbirthday,mywifesuccessfullypersuadedthemanagertoallowustobringapianointothereserve,bringingmusictotheelephants’lives.3Initially,whenIstartedplaying,itwashardtohearthepianoabovethesoundsofnatureandtheelephantschewinggrass.However,everythingchangedwhenablindelephantceasedeatingandtunedintomyplaying.Itstruckmethatthiselephant,trappedinaworldofdarkness,hadaprofoundloveformusic.Fromthatmomenton,therewasnolongeranyconcernaboutdisturbingtheirpeace.Weoccasionallyfilmtheseperformances,andnow,weproudlyhavenearly700,000YouTubesubscribers.4Icontinuetoplayfortheseelephantsthatrunfreelyinthereserve,despitetheconstantpotentialdanger.Surprisingly,it’sthemoodymaleelephantswhoshowthemostfascinationwiththemusic.Ifirmlybelieveithasacalmingeffect.Theseelephants’breathingactuallyslowsdownwhenIplay,whichtellsmetheyarerelaxedandhappy.I’veevenwitnessedelephantsseeminglydancingtoBeethoven’stunes.Withtheirexceptionalhearingandtheabilitytosensevibrations(震动)throughtheirfeet,Iamconvincedthatelephantsgraspthelanguageofhumanexpression.Thisservesasapowerfulillustrationthatmusicservesasauniversallanguage,connectingusall.27.Whichofthefollowingcanbeasuitabletitleforthetext?A.SavetheMistreatedElephantsB.MaleElephants:MoodyandMusicalC.PlaythePianoforRescuedElephantsD.Elephants:AnimalsofSharpHearing主旨大意题playthepianobringmusictotheelephants’liveshaveacalmingeffectonelephantsareservededicatedtothecareofrescueddomesticelephantsmusicconnectsusallandelephants定位主题句提炼关键词扩

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阅读理解-C篇主题语境：人与自然语篇类型：科普说明文语篇内容：讲述了在农业实践中，农民将磁铁放入牛的胃里，防止“硬件病”发生。考查题型：细节理解（2）

推理判断（2）细节理解题28.Whyaremagnetsfedtocows?A.Tochangefeedinghabits. B.Topreventhardwaredisease.C.Toimprovethemilkquality. D.Toenhancedigestivesystem.细节理解题

Whileweaimtoavoidanyappearanceofbaselesstheories,itisnoteworthytoobservethelongstandingpracticeofputtingmagnets(磁铁)incows,aphenomenonthathasbeencarefullyunfoldingforyears.Whyarefarmersputtingmagnetsincows?

Knownascowmagnets,thedevicesarereplacedinsidecattletodealwith“hardwaredisease”.HardwareDiseaseoccursafterananimaleatsametallicobjectthatthenmakesaholeinthewallofthereticulum,thesecondstomachroominruminantanimals(反刍动物).Thisissuearisesfromthenaturaleatingbehaviorsoftheseruminants,similartoapersonatanunlimitedfoodevent—quicklyandeagerlylargebiteswithoutsufficientchewing.Thisfastpacedfeedingapproachmakesthemtendtounintentionallyconsumemetalpiecesintheirfood,includingbrokenfarmmachineryparts,nailsandwiresusedinfencing,forinstance.29.Whatisthemaincauseofhardwarediseaseinruminantanimals?A.Eatingwithoutchewing. B.Takingmagnetsbymistake.C.Sufficientchewinghardfood.D.Swallowingmetalsaccidentally.30.Whatistheauthor’spurposeinwritingthepassage?A.Todescribethehistoricalpracticeofputtingmagnetsincows.B.Todenytheadoptionofcowmagnetstoenhancecattlehealth.C.Todiscusstheinfluenceofamildmagneticfieldonmilkquality.D.Toexplainthereasonforusingmagnetstopreventhardwaredisease.推理判断题31.Whatmightbealogicalcontinuationofthepassage?A.Exploringmorepotentialbenefitsofcowmagnets.B.Investigatingthebroaderapplicationsofmagnets.C.Discussingthealternativemethodsofcaringforcows.D.Evaluatingthelong-termeffectsofmagnetsonanimals.推理判断题阅读理解-D篇主题语境：人与社会语篇类型：说明文语篇内容：格拉斯哥大学研究人员结合人工智能和量子技术，成功研发激光相机，用于远程检测心跳。考查题型：细节理解（2）

段落主旨（1）

词义猜测（1）32.Whatcanthelasercamerabeusedfor?A.Improvingtheusageofstethoscope.B.Measuringbloodpressureremotely.C.Recordingimagesofthehumanthroat.D.Detectingaperson’sheartbeatfromadistance.细节理解题

GlasgowUniversityresearchershavecreatedalaser(激光)camerausingAIandquantumtechnologiestoremotelydetectaperson’sheartbeat,potentiallychanginghealthmonitoring.ProfessorFaccioimaginesvariousapplications,suchassettingupthistechnologyinshoppingmallsorfixinglaserheartmonitorsinhomes.Thesemonitorscouldbepartofanextensivesystemtrackingdifferenthealthaspects,suchasbloodpressureandslightchangesinmovement,indicatingearlysignsofconditionslikeAlzheimer’s.段落主旨题

ThesystemdevelopedbyFaccioandhisteaminvolveshigh-speedcameraswhichcanrecordimagesatspeedsof2,000framespersecond.Alaserbeamisshoneontotheskinofaperson’sthroatandthereflectionsareusedtomeasureexactlyhowmuchtheirskinisrisingandfallingastheirmainartery(动脉)expandsandcontractsasbloodisforcedthroughit.Thesechangesinvolvemovementsofonlyafewbillionthsofametre.bemadeupof34.Whichisclosestinmeaningto“acuity”inparagraph4?A.Consistency. B.Complexity C.Sensitivity. D.Intensity.词义猜测题ThesystemdevelopedbyFaccioandhisteaminvolveshigh-speedcameraswhichcanrecordimagesatspeedsof2,000framespersecond.Alaserbeamisshoneontotheskinofaperson’sthroatandthereflectionsareusedtomeasureexactlyhowmuchtheirskinisrisingandfallingastheirmainartery(动脉)expandsandcontractsasbloodisforcedthroughit.Thesechangesinvolvemovementsofonlyafewbillionthsofametre.Such

acuity

isstriking,thoughonitsownthetrackingofthesetinychangeswouldnotbeenoughtotrackaheartbeat.Other,muchlargermovementsoccuronaperson’schest—fromtheirbreathing,forexample—whichwouldfloodsignalsfromtheirheartbeat.35.WhatroledoesAIplayinthissystem?A.Tomeasureskinmovements. B.Torecognizeheartbeatvibrations.C.Torecordimagesathighspeeds. D.Toshinealaserbeamontheskin.细节理解题第三部分

语言运用--第一节(完型填空)主题语境：“人与自我——做人与做事——优秀品行与正确的人生态度”语篇类型：记叙文语篇内容：本文讲述作者母亲的一次与卖菜小贩讨价还价的往事，母亲采用的价格谈判策略强硬且坚持，但是当小贩身体不适时，母亲又善意地给予帮助。母亲前后在处理问题上不同的方式与态度，给作者传递了不一样的处世哲学。

Structure:Para1---2“toughinbargaining”Para3“kindinofferingfood”Para4“thephilosophyoftradingandkindness”(去)拿来;找来提议，建议;求婚bid:anofferbyapersontopaymoneyfor...（买方的）出价counter-:against;opposite反对;相反counter-bid:还价

price；开价;出价;报价处理;照料,关怀适应getbackthemoney收回钱焦虑;忧虑地贪婪地因绝望而不顾一切地坚持;固守谈及;涉及;查阅理论;原理;原则strategy:aplannedseriesofactionstoachievesth....(为实现某目标的)计谋;策略;行动计划theory:asetofideas;theprinciplesonwhichsth.isbased理论;原则makeadeal达成交易planororganize安排;筹备checkorinspect?check:tolookatsth.closelytomakesureitisingoodconditionoracceptable查看;检查inspect:foraprofessional/officialtochecksth.asajob(官员出于职责)检查;检验审查;重新考虑makingcarefuljudgements审慎判断的;有判断力的,挑剔的withacriticaleye用挑剔的眼光合乎情理的;符合逻辑的assoonas一..就....;一旦...notabletobalance眩晕(应对问题的)方式;态度姿势;表明意图的姿态,表示介入;干涉承诺;献身,奉献while时间状语从句内需使用延续性动词第四部分

写作(共两节，满分40分)第一节(满分15分)你校英文报正在开展以“TheUnderstandingofGoingtoSchool”为题的讨论。请根据图片写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.简要描述图片；2.你的看法。“WhyamIgoingtoschoolifmyphonealreadyknowseverything?”

注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

第四部分写作-第一节

应用文写作体裁：人称：要点及时态：审

题应用文——投稿第一人称

第三人称?TheUnderstandingofGoingtoSchool漫画（图片）作文

注意：1．词数100左右；2．短文的题目和首句已为你写好。描述图表（图片）简单评论个人建议第四部分

写作(共两节，满分40分)第一节(满分15分)你校英文报正在开展以“TheUnderstandingofGoingtoSchool”为题的讨论。请根据图片写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.简要描述图片；2.你的看法。“WhyamIgoingtoschoolifmyphonealreadyknowseverything?”

注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

第四部分写作-第一节

应用文写作体裁：人称：要点及时态：审

题应用文——投稿第一人称

第三人称描述图片——一般现在时（简单评论）——一般现在时个人看法——一般现在时

一般将来时TheUnderstandingofGoingtoSchool漫画（图片）作文描述图片1.Fromthecartoon/picturewecanseethat…2.Asisvividlyshown/indicatedinthepicture,…3.Thisisafunnyandinstructivepicture,fromwhichwecansee…4.Lookatthepicture.Itis(apicture)about…简单评论个人看法Inmyopinion/view,/AsfarasI’mconcerned,/Frommypointofview,/Frommyperspective,...列

纲Reference：英语学习｜新高考英语漫画作文写作技巧讲解+范文模板

Milly的知识加油站amotherissendinghersontogotoschool.However,theyoungsterresponds,"WhyamIgoingtoschoolifmyphonealreadyknowseverything?”apupilaskshismotherwhyheisgoingtoschoolsincehisphonealreadyknowseverything．个人看法√上学的意义√

与使用手机相比上学的优势

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单纯列举使用手机的弊端Apossibleversion:TheUnderstandingofGoingtoSchoolAsisvividlyshown

inthepicture,amotherissendinghersontogotoschool.However,theyoungsterresponds,"WhyamIgoingtoschoolifmyphonealreadyknowseverything?"Apparently，thepictureillustratesthatsomestudentshighlydependontheirphones，overlookingtheimportanceofschoolstudy.AsfarasIamconcerned,despitegreatconveniencebroughtbyphones,weneedcopewithvarioussituationswithoutphonesathand.Besides,It’stherealface-to-faceinteractionthatmatters,aswellasknowledge.Therefore,goingtoschoolisofgreatbenefittous.(96words)描述图表（图片）简单评论个人看法英语试题读后续写讲评太原市2023～2024学年第二学期山西省一模阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。

IrecentlywentSKYDIVING!It'ssomethingI'vebeentalkingaboutdoingsincelastyear,

buttobehonest,itwasplannedsuperlastminute...likewithinamatterofafewweeks.ItallstartedwhenIranintoafriendofminewalkinghomefromalocalfestivalearlierthis

summer.Westartedchattingaboutwhatwe'dbothbeenuptothissummerandsomehowgoton

thesubjectofbothbeinginterestedingoingskydivingsomeday.

Myfriend,

Denny,

saidhe'dbe

onboardifIreallywantedtoscheduleajumpandIwassoexcitedtofinallyhavesomeonetogo

with!

Laterthatnight,

wetextedbackandforthanddecidedonourjumpdateafewweeksinthefuture.

WhentheverySundaycame,

wewerebothFULLofexcitementforourfirstskydiving

experience.

HehadbeenbungeejumpingbeforeandI'ddonemyfairshareofzip-lining,but

neitherofusfiguredthateitherofthoseofexperienceswouldprepareusforwhatwehadinstore.

Thedrivetheredidn'thappenwithoutaslightdelay.

Assoonaswegotoffthethrough-way

ontotheexittowardsthesmalltownwheretheskydivingfacilitywas，Denny'scarstartedto

makeastrangenoise,forcingustopulloveronabusyinterstatc(州际公路).Only20minutesawayfromWNYSkydiving(theplacewhereweweregoing),wediscovered

wehadaflattyre(轮胎).

Atthatpoint,Ifeltprellydelealed.

Ourscheduledtimewas4pm—thelastappointmenttimeoftheday—solfiguredtheywouldn'tbeabletowaitforordelaythe

operationsforussincewewereracingagainstthelight.WecalledAmericanAutomobileAssociation(AAA)andhopedforthebest.Wewereinformedwewerethefinaljumpofthenight...the“sunsetjump”.第四部分写作-第二节

读后续写主题语境：人与自我--生活与学习

--丰富自我，积极的生活态度体裁：记叙文时态：一般过去时、过去完成时关键能力：读写能力评价标准：·续写内容：创造内容的质量，续写的完整性以及与原文情境的融洽度。·语言表达：使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。·篇章结构：上下文的衔接性和全文的连贯性。1：落点：浏览所给信息，确定大意与主题2：重点：梳理已知段落，确定故事线和情感线3：突破点：借助段落开头，确定续写内容4：亮点：刻画细节冲突，使语言表达连贯5：基本点：做到前后呼应，使文章衔接自然，逻辑合理顺畅1：落点：浏览所给信息，确定大意与主题

IrecentlywentSKYDIVING!It'ssomethingI'vebeentalkingaboutdoingsincelastyear,

buttobehonest,itwasplannedsuperlastminute...likewithinamatterofafewweeks.ItallstartedwhenIranintoafriendofminewalkinghomefromalocalfestivalearlierthis

summer.Westartedchattingaboutwhatwe'dbothbeenuptothissummerandsomehowgoton

thesubjectofbothbeinginterestedingoingskydivingsomeday.

Myfriend,

Denny,

saidhe'dbe

onboardifIreallywantedtoscheduleajumpandIwassoexcitedtofinallyhavesomeonetogo

with!

Laterthatnight,

wetextedbackandforthanddecidedonourjumpdateafewweeksinthefuture.

WhentheverySundaycame,

wewerebothFULLofexcitementforourfirstskydiving

experience.

HehadbeenbungeejumpingbeforeandI'ddonemyfairshareofzip-lining,but

neitherofusfiguredthateitherofthoseofexperienceswouldprepareusforwhatwehadinstore.

Thedrivetheredidn'thappenwithoutaslightdelay.

Assoonaswegotoffthethrough-way

ontotheexittowardsthesmalltownwheretheskydivingfacilitywas，Denny'scarstartedto

makeastrangenoise,forcingustopulloveronabusyinterstate(州际公路).Only20minutesawayfromWNYSkydiving(theplacewhereweweregoing),wediscovered

wehadaflattyre(轮胎).

Atthatpoint,Ifeltprettydefeated.

Ourscheduledtimewas4pm—thelastappointmenttimeoftheday—solfiguredtheywouldn'tbeabletowaitforordelaythe

operationsforussincewewereracingagainstthelight.who

what

when

where

why

how文章大意：IwentSKYDIVINGwithmyfriend.ButourcarwasbrokenonthewaytoWNYSkydivingandwewouldbelate.表达主题：Wefinallymadeitandhadanunforgettableexperienceaftertwistsandturns.onthewaytoWNYSkydivingOurcarwasbrokenandwewouldbelate.2：重点：梳理已知段落，确定故事线和情感线BeginningRisingClimaxEndingFallingIplannedtogoSKYDRIVING.Andmyfriend,Denny,decidedtobeonboard.Wedecidedonourjumpdateandsefoff.Wepulledoveronabusyinterstateandwehadaflattyre.WecalledAAAandhopedforthebest.Wewereinformedwewerethefinaljumpofthenight...the“sunsetjump”.excitedandfullofexpectationexpectedandplanneddefeated??conflictsolutionnegativepositiveOurcarwasbroken.Wewouldbelate.Ourcarwaswell-repaired.WewenttoWNYSkydivingintime.WefinishedSkydivingsuccessfully.Iwasdefeated.Iwasexcitedandjoyful.Imadeit.Iwasabitafraidandnervous.ActionResponseWecalledAAA.AAAcametousandhelpedusrepairourcar.Wewereinformedwewerethefinaljump...WecalledWNYSkydivingandtoldthemoursituations.伏笔：IrecentlywentSKYDIVING!（para1）butneitherofusfiguredthateitherofthoseofexperiencewouldprepareusforwhatwehadinstore...（para3）Thedrivetheredidn’thappenwithoutaslightdelay.i（para4）3：突破点：借助段落开头，确定续写内容

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