2024届高三英语作文专题复习读后续写动作描写和环境描写素材清单

2024年高考英语读后续写动作描写和环境描写动作描写，三种句式：（独立主格+非谓语+时间状语从句）（1）独立主格眼泪Tearswellingupinher

eyes,

shethankedthepolicewith/inatremblingvoice.眼泪夺眶而出，她用颤抖的声音向警察表示感谢。Myspiritssank,

tearsstreamingdownmycheeks.我的情低落，泪水顺着脸颊流下来眼睛Eyes

filledwith

regretfultears,sb.dosth.眼里充满遗憾的泪水，某人做某事Eyes

glitteringwith

relief/joy,sb.dosth.眼里闪烁着欣慰/喜悦，某人做某事Eyes

wideningin

joy/disbelief/surprise/shock/fear,sb.dosth.眼睛因喜悦/难以置信/吃惊/震惊/害怕而睁大，某人做某事脸/心/肢体Face

blushingscarlet,

heapologizedforwhathehaddone.脸红着，他为自己所做的事道歉Heart

burning/filledwith

frustration,sheloweredherhead.心在燃烧/充满沮丧，她低下了头Heart

pounding/beatingwith

happiness,heleaptintotheair.心因快乐而跳动着，他跳了起来Arms/legs/muscles

aching

andknees

shaking/trembling,Isatdown.胳膊/腿/肌肉疼痛，膝盖颤抖，我坐了下来。（2）非谓语Considering

thethreatofthebear,westayedfarawayfromit.Feeling

extremelyangry,shedashedoutoftheroomlikeawind.Havingknown

whathadhappened,shesetaboutdealingwiththeissue.Relievedandoverjoyed,weyelledatthehelicopter,

trying

tocatchitsattention.Seeing

thehelicopter,we

criedout“Help!”,

waving

ourhandslikemad.Todistractthebear,

wethrewapieceofbreadfaraway.（3）时间状语从句（while/when/as/themoment）普通版：Suddenly,Mary

found

anenvelope.进阶版：WhileMarywasthinking,she

caughtsightof

anitemonthetable.She

walkedtowards

itand

found

anenvelope.普通版：I

saw

afriendofmine.进阶版：AsIwaswalkinginthepark,I

saw

afriendofmine.高分替换词替换“sb.

dosth.”某人做某事managetodosth.

设法做某事succeedindoingsth.

成功做某事achieve/accomplishsth.

实现/完成某事原句：Stevesavedthelittlegirl.改写：Steve

managedtosave

thelittlegirl.Steve

succeededinsaving

thelittlegirl.Steve

achievedtherescueof

thelittlegirl.更多：struggletodosth.

努力/奋斗做某事makeeffortstodosth./makeanefforttodosth.

努力做某事makeeveryefforttodosth./sparenoefforttodosth.

竭尽全力做某事strivetodosth/striveforsth.(过去式strove)

努力、奋斗做某事can’thelpdoingsth./feellikedoingsth.

情不自禁做某事/想要做某事getdowntodoingsth.

开始/着手做某事keepdoingsth.

一直做某事goondoingsth.

继续做某事carryondoingsth.

继续做某事替换“cannotdosth.”无法做某事failtodosth.beunabletodosth.preventsb.fromdoingsth.原句：Atthesightofthesnake,hewassoscaredthathecouldn’tmove.替换句：Extremelyscared,hefailedtomoveatthesightofthesnake.Extremelyscared,hewasunabletomoveatthesightofthesnake.Enormousscarepreventedhimfrommovingatthesightofthesnake.替换“decidetodosth.”决定做某事bedeterminedtodosth.

下定决心做某事makeupone’smindtodosth.

下定决心做某事替换“wanttodosth.”想要做某事intendtodosth.

打算/想要做某事feellikedoingsth.

想要做某事替换“makesb.dosth.”让某人做某事forcesb.todosth.(sb.wasforcedtodosth.)

强迫某人做某事persuadesb.todosth.

说服某人做某事allowsb.todosth.

允许某人做某事enablesb.todosth.

使某人能够做某事encourage/motivatesb.todosth.

鼓励/激励某人做某事remindsb.ofsth/remindsb.todosth.

提醒某人做某事常用动作She

buriedherfaceinherhands.她以手掩面Sherubbedherhandstogether.她搓着双手Shescratchedherhead/nose.她挠了挠头/鼻子Shefakedasmile.她假装微笑Hermouthfellopeninhorror.她惊恐地张大了嘴巴Sheraised/lifted

herhead/chin/hands.抬头/抬起下巴/举手Shelowered/hung/bowedherheadinshame.她惭愧地低下了头shetookadeepbreath/heldherbreath.她深吸一口气/她屏住呼吸Shefoldedherarmsacrossherchest.她双臂交叉在胸前Shethrewherselfintohermother’sarms.她扑到母亲怀里Shedashedintothebedroom/darkness.她冲进卧室/黑暗Shedashedoutoftheroomlikeawind.

她像一阵风一样冲出房间Shegrabbedacakefromtheplate.

她从盘子里抓出一块面包Sherosefromherseat.她从座位上站起来Sheleanedagainstthewall.她靠在墙上Shewasfightingbacktearsasshespoke.她一边说话，一边强忍住眼泪Shepacednervouslybackandforthacrosstheroom.她紧张地在房间里来回踱步Sheshruggedandspreadherhandshelplessly.她耸了耸肩,无助地摊开手排比：意象1+动词1，意象2+动词2，and意象3+动词3.(优先使用原文出现过的意象，再按需补充）示例：Thesunshone,thewindblew,andthetreewaved.Toosimpleright?And,then...

扩写：形容词+意象+动词+介词短语·位置+副词示例：Theglaringmorningsunlightshoneonthegroundbrightly.耀眼的晨光明亮地照在大地上Thebitingnightwindhowledruthlesslythroughtheforest刺骨的夜风在森林间无情地呼啸

实战：（2022年全国Ⅰ卷读后续写）（借景抒情：前两个意象写景，第三个意象写事情，抒发感情）The

sunlight

shonewarmlyonthetreeleaves,thecrisp

air

surroundedDavidandhisclassmates,andthe

forest

wasfilledwithlaughterofexcitement.阳光温暖地洒在树叶上，清新的空气环绕着大卫和他的同学，森林中洋溢着兴奋的笑声。Thewarm

sun

shoneonDavid’sface,the

trees

swayedwiththewind,andthewhole

forest

applaudedDavid’scourage.暖阳洒在大卫的脸上，树木随风摇曳，整座森林都为大卫的勇气喝彩The

leaves

weretremblinginthebreeze,thepleasant

air

wasenvelopingtheentireforest,and

everythingaround

wascelebratingDavid’sbravery.树叶在微风中颤动，愉悦的空气笼罩着整个森林，周围的一切都在庆祝着大卫的勇敢。9种常见意象的用法：形容词意象动词副词blazing

炽热的glaring

耀眼的lingering

逗留不走的weak微弱的sunsunlightsunshineshine(shone)发光，照耀burn(burnt)燃烧brightly

明亮地dazzlingly耀眼地lively

充满活力地mildly

温和地gentle/soft/mildweak

微弱的white白色的silvery银色的moonmoonlightshine（shone）发光glow（glowed）发微光weakly

微弱地lightly

轻轻地gently/softly

柔和地

glittering

闪闪发亮的starstwinklesparkle

闪烁，闪耀glimmer隐约地闪烁vividly

生动地quietly

安静地peacefully

平静地strong

劲(风）high/light

大/小（风）chill/cold

冷（风）biting

刺骨的，凛冽的windbreeze

微风blow（blew）吹howl/roar呼啸drop(dropped)

减弱

fiercely

猛烈地ruthlessly

无情地gradually

逐渐地crisp

凉爽的，清新的fresh

新鲜的refreshing

使人凉爽的chill/cold

冷的airflow(flowed)

流动envelop

笼罩surround

环绕totally/completely

完全地，彻底地light

小（雨）heavy

大（雨）raindrizzle毛毛雨fall（fell）

落下pourdown倾泻而下heavily

大地

thick/heavy浓（云）thin

薄（云）black

乌（云）cloudspread（spread）扩散move

移动gatheredinthesky

聚集coveredthesky

遮盖envelopedthefo