读后续写情节框架构思2清单-高考英语作文复习专项

读后续写(二）好故事来源于好结构亮点刻画细节环境、语言、心理、动作丰富句式：非谓语，从句，倒装，独立主格，虚拟，强调，感叹修辞丰富：比喻，夸张，拟人情绪描写原则：Don’ttell!Showme.Aflushof(表情绪的名词)=Awaveof...=Afeeling/senseof...joy/excitement/pride/anger/rage/panic/terror/sorrow/sadness/grief/embarrassment/disappointment/guilt/shame...floodedoversb=sweptoversb=seizedsb=tookcontrolofsbAsenseof______welledupwithin/insidesb(涌上心头）withtearsrollingdownsb’scheeks.（with复合结构）Lookingupandseeingahelicopter,Janefeltagreatsenseofexcitementwellingupinherheartandsurgingthroughher（涌遍全身）.3.因...颤抖：...tremble/shiver/shake(withfear,panicexcitement,rage...)流泪：Tearsblurredone'seyes.One'seyesgotmisty.One'seyesmisted/dimmedwithtears.泪眼模糊...beclosetotears几乎要哭了tears(rolldownone'seyes/cheeks/face)泪水落下心跳，手掌：One’sheartpounded/thumped(最后用独立主格)环境描写Immediately/Suddenly,anabsolutedarknessruledtheforestandawaveofterrorsweptoverher.Seeingthemoonshininginthedarksky,shecouldn’thelpthinkingofthedaysthatshespentwithTomandherfamily.（分词）Arayofsunlightshinesthroughthedarkclouds,bringingwarmthandhopetotheworld.（分词）Withthecoldwindblowing,Janehadtoquickenherpacetocatchupwiththem.（With结构）Thesoundofthestreamsoundedrelaxing,whichrelievedJane’sanxiety.（which定从）Thewaterwasdeepblueandsunlightglittered（闪光）onitslookingglassclearsurface.动作+心理描写：Herheartpounding（怦怦跳）fiercelyandherpalm（手心）sweating（独立主格）,aninnervoicetoldherthatshehadtofindasafeplace.Tiredandterrifiedasshewas（as,虽然，倒装）,Janestruggledtoherfeet,tryingnottohaveabreakdownbothphysicallyandmentally.（分词作伴随状语）Eagerandexcited(形容词作状语）,sheflaggedheryellowblouseandsparednoefforttoyellsoastoattractothersattention（动作描写）Hewhisperedintomyears.Hebreathedasighofrelief.Hestruggledoutofthebed.万能尝试之我命由我不由天人定胜天SbcouldhardlywaittodosthSbdidsthwithouthesitation/delay/asecondthought/eventhinking......Sbpluck/gatherupone’scouragetodosth天助我也Toone’srelief/surprise/delight...Strangelyenough,itturnedoutthat...Luckily,itdidn’ttakelongbeforeshefoundacave.Sighingwithrelief（分词作状语）,shesensedaglimmerofhopeandfeltasif（虚拟/拟人）thecavehadbeenfortingherandsaying,”ein,youmustbeexhausted.尝试失败不幸的是:...butbadluckforsb/,butinvain/butwithoutsuccess/butnouse不知道做什么Sbdidsth,wonderingwhattodonext./notknowingwhattodonext./unsureofwhattodonext.Sbwasatalosswhattodo.Sbwasinadilemma（进退两难的窘境）aboutwhethertodoornot.感到难以决定...Judgingfromthequietsurrounding,itwasevidentthatJanewasstilltrappedintheforestwithoutanyoneingtotherescue.Janewasatalosswhattodo.万能转折之灵机一动It作主语Itsuddenlyoccurredto/hit/strucksbthat...Itdawnedonsbthat...(使..开始明白/理解）物作主语（A/Anidea,thought...）occurred/cametosbthat......came/flashedintoone’smind....crowdedinone’smind.解决问题1.Toone'ssurprise(delight)/Strangelyenough,itturnedoutthat从句2.Luckily/Fortunately/Eventually,shewasnoticedandbroughtintothehelicopter.Here,shesawherhusband,amanstartingather,wearinganexpressionofrelief.读后续写万能结尾之升华点睛我悟了（倒装/强调）Notuntilthendidsbrealize/noticethat...Itwasnotuntilthenthatsbrealizedthat...Thisspecialexperiencein...mademerealizethat...Itwasatthemomentthattheydecidednottoquarrelanymorebutlearnedtopromise.妙啊（感叹）Whata/anvaluable/useful/great/painfullessonsbtaughtme!Whata/anthrilling/plea