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山西省一模读后续写题目I
recently
went
SKYDIVING!
It's
something
I've
been
talking
about
doing
since
last
year,
but
to
be
honest,
it
was
planned
super
last
minute…
like
within
a
matter
of
a
few
weeks.It
all
started
when
I
ran
into
a
friend
of
mine
walking
home
from
a
local
festival
earlier
this
summer.
We
started
chatting
about
what
we'd
both
been
up
to
this
summer
and
somehow
got
on
the
subject
of
both
being
interested
in
going
skydiving
someday.
My
friend,
Denny,
said
he'd
be
on
board
if
I
really
wanted
to
schedule
a
jump
and
I
was
so
excited
to
finally
have
someone
to
go
with!Later
that
night,
we
texted
back
and
forth
and
decided
on
our
jump
date
a
few
weeks
in
the
future.
When
the
very
Sunday
came,
we
were
both
FULL
of
excitement
for
our
first
skydiving
experience.
He
had
been
bungee
jumping
before
and
I'd
done
my
fair
share
of
zip-lining,
but
neither
of
us
figured
that
either
of
those
of
experiences
would
prepare
us
for
what
we
had
in
store.The
drive
there
didn't
happen
without
a
slight
delay.
As
soon
as
we
got
off
the
through-way
on
to
the
exit
towards
the
small
town
where
the
skydiving
facility
was,
Denny's
car
started
tomake
a
strange
noise,
forcing
us
to
pull
over
on
a
busy
interstate(州际公路).Only
20
minutes
away
from
WNY
Skydiving
(the
place
where
we
were
going),
we
discovered
we
had
a
flat
tyre
(轮胎).
At
that
point,
I
felt
pretty
defeated.
Our
scheduled
time
was
4
pm
—
the
last
appointment
time
of
the
day
—
so
I
figured
they
wouldn't
be
able
to
wait
for
or
delay
the
operations
for
us
since
we
were
racing
against
the
light.Para
1:
We
called
American
Automobile
Association
(AAA)
and
hoped
for
the
best.
Para
2:
We
were
informed
we
were
the
final
hump
of
the
night…the
"sunset
jump".文本分析:讲述了两个孩子第一次跳伞的经历,跳伞前的谋划,前往目的地路途中所发生的波折,求助AAA帮忙修车,最终赶上了所谓的“落日”跳伞的机会。本篇读后续写对学生而言较难的原因在于,在叙述故事背景时铺垫了太长的文本,导致主体事件在一番费力后才浮出水面。此外,陌生词汇陌生的经历尤其是跳伞这种极限运动,让很多孩子望而却步。有所见有所为才会有所写,因此难度还是有的。续写情节发展:Para
1:
We
called
American
Automobile
Association
(AAA)
and
hoped
forthe
best.等待
AAA的焦急心理/AAA的援助(修车的过程)修好车,直奔目的地。Para
2:We
were
informed
we
were
the
final
hump
of
the
night…thesunset
jump".第一次跳伞的紧张,兴奋/跳伞过程中欣赏到的美景/难忘的经历续写下水Paragraph
1:
We
called
American
Automobile
Association
(AAA)
and
hoped
for
the
best.
With
every
passing,
excruciating
minute,
disappointment
threatened
to
drown
the
day's
bubbling
excitement.
The
possibility
of
us
missing
the
jump
after
coming
so
close
was
almost
unbearable.
Then,
suddenly,
the
rumble
a
tow
truck
sliced
through
the
tension.
With
practiced
efficiency,
the
driver
swiftly
changed
our
tyre,
reigniting
a
silver
of
hope.
After
paying
for
his
service,
we
dashed
into
the
ablaze
sunset.
The
moment
we
parked
the
car
at
the
WNY,
Denny
and
I
exchanged
a
look.
I
saw,
in
his
eyes,
our
initial
disappointment
had
morphed
into
wild
anticipation.
(91
words)Paragraph
2:
We
were
informed
we
were
the
final
jump
of
the
night…the
“sunset
jump”.As
we
soared
skyward
in
the
small
plane,
the
anticipation
only
grew
higher
and
higher
until
finally,
taking
a
deep
breath,
we
leapt
out
and
plunged
towards
the
earth.
The
adrenaline
rush
was
unlike
anything
I
had
ever
experienced.
After
the
initial
free
fall,
we
were
suspended,
weightless,
in
an
impossible
sky,
the
world
a
breathtaking
panorama
of
pinks,
oranges,
and
purples
bleeding
into
the
approaching
night.
We
were
hurtling
towards
the
ground,
yes,
but
we
were
also
flying.
And
for
a
brief,
glorious
moment,
everything
felt
possible.
(87
words)One
Possible
Version:We
called
American
Automobile
Association(AAA)and
hoped
for
the
best.
The
operator
informed
us
that
they
would
arrange
for
a
car
mechanic
to
arrive
at
the
scene
as
soon
as
possible
to
assist
us.
As
I
watched
the
hands
of
the
clock
ticking
away,
I
was
as
anxious
as
an
ant
on
a
hot
pan.
Suddenly,
a
vehicle
with
the
AAA
logo
appeared
in
our
view,
At
that
moment,
a
spark
of
hope
ignited
in
my
eyes.
After
a
quick
repair,
we
continued
on
our
way
to
our
desired
destination.
Finally,
with
the
help
of
the
car's
acceleration,
we
arrived
at
the
skydiving
facility
waiting
area
on
time.We
were
informed
we
were
the
final
hump
of
the
night…the
"sunset
jump".Grasping
at
our
last
chance,
we
were
overjoyed,
but
the
thought
of
the
extreme
sport
of
skydiving
-
something
we
had
never
experienced
before
-
had
our
hearts
in
our
throats.
After
a
round
of
equipment
adjustments
and
safety
checks,
we
finally
set
off
on
our
adventure.
The
view
before
us
completely
took
our
breath
away.
The
afterglow
of
the
setting
sun,
the
vast
horizon,
and
the
liberating
air
instantly
offset
the
trials
and
hardships
we
had
experienced
along
the
way.
If
I
could,
I
would
still
do
it
again,
and
even
more.
After
all,
life
is
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