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读后续写

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Iwasdoingabigclean-uprecentlyandmykidswerehelpingwhenmy

son,Freddo,cameacrossaknottedhandkerchiefwithanolddarkbrown

coin

inside."Mum,canIhavethis?CanIplaywiththiscoin"heasked.Itookonelookandwasimmediatelytransportedtoanothertime.In1991,therewasatimewhenmyfriendandIworkedinabackwardAfricancountry,Niger,hitbysandstormsandburningheat.ThereweremanythingsIfounddifficultaboutthisplace--theclimateand

beggars

weremybiggestheadaches.Soafterfinishingfivemonthsofnursingworkthere,wemovedontoworkatahealthclinicinneighbouringcountry,BurkinaFaso."It'smuchgreenerin

Burkina.EventheCoketastesbetter"thelocalsassuredus.Yetthefactwasquitetheopposite.ArrivingbytaxiatourdestinationinBurkina,webegantounload.Iwasreachingformylargerpieceofluggagewhen,outofthedarkness,amotorbikewithtwomenapproachedslowly.Withoutwarning,oneofthemengrabbedmydaypackasthemotorbikesweptcloseby.Withinseconds,thepairwereoutofsight,swallowedupbythenight.Withmypassport,money,traveller'schequesallinthebag,Iwasindeeptrouble.Howfrustrating!AllIwantedwastoleavethishellhole!Then,walkingthroughBurkina'sstreetsoneday,Iwasstoppedbyanold

woman

whothrustherhandinmyface."Cadeau

('gift'inFrench)!Cadeau!”shecried.I'dhadenough!Iwasextremely

tired

ofthecountry:its

poverty,itsthieves,theheat,thedustand...everything!ItoldherangrilyandfirmlyinFrench,“Ihaveno'Cadeau'.Ihavenomoney.AthiefstoleallmymoneytwoweeksagoandnowIcan'tgetoutofyourcountry.Icannotgiveyouanything.NOTHING!’Thebeggarwomanlistenedattentively.Tomygreat

surprise,afterhearingmywords,shegaveabroad

smile.注意：

1．所续写的短文的词数应为150词左右；2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Shereachedintothepocketofherdress.Therewasaslighttouchonmyhand;lookingdown,Isawmysonlookingatme,curious.

【参考答案】Shereachedintothepocketsofherdress.

“ThenIwillgiveyoua

cadeau,”sheannounced.Kindly,sheplacedan

old

darkbrowncoininmyhand.Insurprise,Ilookedat

thecoin,thenatthe

woman.Atthatmoment,Ifeltratherashamed,ashamedofmyterribleattitudetowardstheoldwoman.Inspiteofher

poverty,shewasabletogivemesomethingpriceless.Ihadtakenitforgrantedthat

beggars

wouldonlyreceivesomethingfromothers,yetthecoinfromthebeggarwomanin

Burkina

trulychangedmyview

towardsthem,andher

smile

hitthedeepestofmyheart.Therewasaslighttouchonmyhand;lookingdown,Isawmysonlookingatme,curious.

“Mum,canIhave

this?CanIplaywiththis

coin?”herepeated.“Youcan't

playwithit,honey.”Itouchedmy

son

ontheheadandsaid

slowly,“Thisone'sspecial.Itisanunforgettablepreciousmemorytome.Comeandletmetellyouastory."Version1Shereachedintothepocketofherdress.

Shetookabunchofmoney,countingitcarefully,andthentomysurprise,shehandeditalltomewithouthesitation.Thatisobviouslyallshehad!Ithoughttomyself.ItwasnotuntilthendidIrealizetherewerenotonlypovertyandthieves,butalsokindnessandloveinthiscountry.IwasrootedtothespotandthenIhugthewomantightly,withmytearsburstingout.“Thanks!”Isobbed.

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Therewasaslighttouchonmyhand;lookingdown,Isawmysonlookingatme,curious.

Iwasimmediatelypulledbackintothereality.ItoldthisStorytomyson.“Withoutthesemoney,Momcan’tgohome.”Iendedmstorywiththesewords.“Sheisreallyakindwoman!”saidmyson.Staringatthecoin,hiseyessuddenlylitup.“Iwanttobeakindpersonlikeher!”Itriedtofightbacktears,onlytofindmyselfburyingmyfacetomyson’ssshoulder.“Momisproudofyou,honey.”Actually,whenyouaredown,itisloveandkindnessthatwillserveasabunchoflight,drivingawaythedarkness.

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Version2Shereachedintothepocketofherdress.

Smilestillhangingonherface,shetookoutsomecoinsfromherdress.Curioustoknowwhatshewoulddo,Istaredatherface.Then,thewomangraspedmyhands,puttingthecoinsonmyhandsfirmly.Awarmglowcrossingmyheart,itwaslikeagentlebreezesweepingmyinnerheart.Howkindshewas!Thoughshewasasslenderasanoldbranch,shewaswillingtogiveherownmoneytohelpme.ItwasatthatmomentthatIrealizedthekindnessinthiscountry.

Iwasoverwhelmedwiththewarmmemory.

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Therewasaslighttouchonmyhand;lookingdown,Isawmysonlookingatme,curious.Hiseyeswereshiningwithdelight.Ikneltdownsaying“ofcourseyoucanhaveit.”Withhappiness,Itoldhimthestoryaboutthecoin,sayinghowmeaningfulthecoinwasforme.Theboyjumpedwithexcitement,promisinghewouldcherishit.Sincethewomangaveittome,theoldfigurealwayscrowdedinonme,remindingmetospreadthekindnesstoothers.Ihopemysoncouldunderstandit,whichenablesustofindhappinesssurroundingus.(80words)

Version3Shereachedintothepocketofherdress.

Curiousandangry,Istoodthere,wantingtoknowwhatshewasdoing.Sheheldmyhand,putsomethinginit.Tomysurprise,itwasacoin.Ilookedatherconfusedly.”ItisallthatIhave.”Shesaid,withasmileonherface.”Takeitandbuysomethingwithit.”Whatshesaidwasjustlikepinshittingmyheart.Anoldpoorwomangaveoutallshehavejusttohelpastrangerintrouble.ItwasthefirsttimethatIfeltwarmthinthiscountry.”Thankyou.”Iexpressedmygratitudetoher,tearsrollingdownmycheeks.

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Thesewasaslighttouchonmyhand;lookingdown,Isawmysonlookingatme,curious.

Itookthecoin,andthekindnessthatnightstruckmeagain.“No,youcan’tplaywithit.It’sveryimportanttome.”“Why?Itisjustacoin!”Hesaidcuriously.“Right,itisjustacommoncoin,butitmeansalottome.Thekindnessandwarmthithaschangedmylife.”Itoldthestorytomyson,givinghimanothercointohim.Thirtyyearsago,theoldwomanplantedkindnessinmyheart.Andnow,Iplantthekindnessinmyson’sheartwiththesamecoin.Finally,Iputthecoinintoametalbox,placingitonmydesktoremindmyselfalwaysbekindtoothersnomatterhowrichorhowpooryouare.

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Version4Shereachedintothepocketofherdress.

Ididn’thearthesoundwhenonecoinhittheother.Itseemedthatshewashavingahardtimeherself.Finally,shetookherhandoutandcaughtmyhand,puttingabrowncoininmyhand.Icouldn’tbelievemyeyes.Shewasold,poor,maybealsoill.Andthiscoinmightbeherlastmoney.Iturnedmyheaduptolookintohereyes.Shewatchedmewarmlylikeamother