读后续写人与动物-海豚的鼓励讲义2023届高考英语专题复习

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Palmtreesseemedto

speedbythecarwindow.Eight-year-oldKatrinabegantogetnervous,theway

shealwaysdidinnewsurroundings.Shefeltathinshineofsweataboveherlip

inspiteofthecar'scoolair."Theaquariumwon'tbecrowded,Ibet,and

peoplearegonnanoticeme.Ihatewearingthisprosthesisleg（假肢）."She

felttearspinprickbehindhereyes.“Notbeingnormalistheworst.”EnteringtheClearwater

MarineAquarium,aroundacomerofatank,shenoticedananimalthatlooked

unusual.“Isthatadolphinwithstump（假肢）insteadofatail？"sheaskedanaquariumstaff.Henodded.“Yes,that’’saveryspecial

dolphin.”“Whathappenedtoher?”"Thisgirldolphinwasfoundoffthecoast

ofFlorida,caughtinacrabtrap.Theropesfromthetrapcutofftheblood

circulationtohertail.Soshelosthertail,”Katrinacaughtherbreath.“She’s

justlikeme.She'sjustlikeme.""Butshestruggledtosurvive.Nowshewearsaprosthetictailpartofthedaytohelpherswimlikeadolphin'ssupposedtoswim,"thestaffcontinued,"Everyday,Wintershowsusanythingispossibleifwebelieve.”Katrinafeltherheart-string

wastouched.ShewavedatWinter.LookingatKatrina,Winterraisedherflipper（鳍），came

toherandliftedherhead."She'sswimmingrightintomyarms，"Katrina

saidtearfully.Theymadeeyecontact.SheseemedtobespeakingtoKatrina:We're

thesame.Backhome,allKatrinatalkedaboutwasWinter.Fortwoweeks,she

criedandbeggedhermothertotakeherbacktoClearwater.Unfortunately,another

blowhitKatrina.Shefellonthehardwoodfloorathomeandbrokeherother

leg.Katrinawasinconstantlegnervepain.Afterathroughexamination,the

doctorexplainedbadnewsthatshewouldneedanothersurgeryonherleg.Yearsofalivinghellcamebacktoher.Shestartedfearingsurgeryagainand

refusedtotakeany.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1：Katrina’smomdecidedtotakeherbacktoClearwater.

Paragraph2：FinallycamethedaywhenKatrinawasinthehospitalagain.题型分析:这是--篇记叙文。文章讲述了--个身体残疾的小女孩Katrina接连遭遇人生的挫折和打击，因为与水族馆中与自己身体遭遇类似的海豚Winter的偶遇，重获自信，并对自己有了全新的认识。体现了自信与勇气的力量，符合新时代社会主义价值观，适合高中生写作。记叙文.(2)人称:第三人称首先要审题:(1)体裁:(3)主体时态:一般过去时主题语境:人与自然之和谐共存五要素When---KatrinawaseightyearoldWhere---intheClearwaterMarineAquarium;inthehospitalWho---主要人物:Katrina;Winter;次要人物:Katrina'smom;anaquariumstaffWhat---Katrinadecidedtoreturntothehospitalforanothersurgery.Why---tosaveherselfoutofthelivinghellandregainherselfconfidence3.需要回答的问题：由第一段首句内容KatrinasmomdecidedtotakeherbacktoClearwater(卡特丽娜的妈妈决定带她回到克利尔沃特海洋水族馆》可设问如下:HowdidKatrina'smomdealwithherworry?WhatdidKatrinadoandsaytothedolphinWinter?WhatwasWinter'sreaction?HowdidKatrinafeel?HowdidKatrinamakethedecisiontobeadmittedintothehospitalagain?(这个问题是为了街接第二段首包而设计）根据第二段首句FinallycamethedaywhenKatrinawasinthehospitalagain(最终长特丽娜再次入院的日子来了)可设问如下:HowdidKatrinagetherselffullypreparedforthesurgery?Wastheoperationsuccessful?WhatdidKatrinadosubsequentlyafterthesuccessfuloperation?Whatwasherreflectionontheblowoflife?伏笔1文本首段第-句话Shefeltathinshineofsweataboveherlipinspiteofthecar'scoolair为续写第二段Katrina发现自己手心问题埋下伏笔。文本第二段Katrina与--位海洋水族馆职员的对话“She'sjustlikeme.She'sjustlikeme.”“Butshestruggledtosurvive.Nowshewearsaprosthetictailpartofthedaytohelpherswimlikeadolphin'ssupposedtoswim铺垫和伏笔2thestaffcontinued,“Everyday,Wintershowsusanythingispossibleifwebelieve.”及第段SheseemedtobespeakingtoKatrina:We'rethesame为续写第二段自信从容埋下了伏笔。而第四段Backhome,allKatrinatalkedaboutwasWinterFortwoweeks,shecriedandbeggedhermothertotakeherbacktoClearwater.为续写第--段和第二段重返海洋水族馆做好了铺垫。情节走向：Paragraph1:开端1Katrina妈妈决定带她回到海洋水族馆故事发展1妈妈用轮格推着她进入海洋水族馆一卡特丽娜与海豚温特互动一海豚Winter自信优雅地回应Katrina-Katrina鼓足勇气答应妈妈再努力-一次。Paragraph2:高潮1决定重回医院去做手术一早早起床，平静地等待妈妈推进手术室-Katrina手心没有因为紧张而冒汗结局1手术与预想的-一样成功。感悟1自己与其他正常女孩样。范文：Katrina’smomdecided

totakeherbacktoClearwater.MomwheeledKatrinainto

Clearwater.Bendingovertothedolphin,Katrinatouchedherbackgently.

“Winter,”shehalf-whispered,“Didithurtwhentheydidtheoperation?”The

dolphinswunghertail,makingabeautifulcurveinthewater,asiftosay,“It

wasnotthatbad.”Inaflash,sheglidedaroundthe

poolgracefully,justlikeanyotherdolphin.WatchingWinterweavingthrough

thewater,Katrinatookholdofhermother’shand,saying,“Mom,I’dliketo

try.”Finallycametheday

whenKatrinawasinthehospitalagain.Shewokeupearlyinthemorning

anddressedupherself,waitingcalmlyforherturntobepushedintothe

surgeryroom.Shelookedatherpalms—theyweren’tsweaty.Gone

werethedayswhenshewasafraidtotryanythingchallenging.Thesurgery