考研写作市公开课一等奖省赛课微课金奖课件

GEEWritingSeminar

UNCLELEON1/86赵亮老师新浪微博@莱弗赵亮◆国内著名全能英语培训教师；◆博鳌亚洲论坛特邀英语主持;◆上海世博会英语口语培训师;◆曾为澳大利亚总理及多位中国国家领导人提供翻译；◆20岁成为新东方主讲，21岁成为大学特聘英语教师；◆中国电影协会特邀翻译，曾为葛优、唐国强、范冰冰等翻译；◆NBA费城76人队翻译，世界第一无腿激励大师约翰•库提斯个人翻译;◆受邀全国开展个人演讲数百场，受到广大学子热烈追捧，被凤凰卫视、CCTV等多家媒体报道。2/86考研live主要性一定要考研钱途爱情机会一定要考研3/86干掉”偏难怪”，成功备考考研英语

迟：Betterlatethannever早：Theearlybirdcatchestheworm

高分：资金投入，生活质量，各种机会4/86成功考研三部曲1.UNDERGRADUATE-----SCHOLAR

（大一二三四）5/86成功考研三部曲2.SCHOLAR-----RASCAL6/86成功考研三部曲3.RASCAL-----LLM、GRADUATEMASTERDEGREETEACHER+~~~7/86

WritingPart写作高分技巧/重点单词积累/长难句反向高阶练习/阅读、翻译强化8/869/86分值分配英语一：30分小作文10分大作文20分英语二：25分小作文10分大作文15分10/86考神马？年

温室花朵经不起风雨-------永恒性话题年

终点又是新起点-----大事件（年神五上天）年

养老足球赛-------永恒性话题年

偶像崇敬-------大事件（年超女火爆）年

自信心缺乏-----永恒性话题年

合作精神--永恒性话题/大事件（08年北京奥运会）年

互联网-------大事件（互联网普及速度到达高峰）年

文化学习------永恒性话题年

环境污染------大事件（环境污染问题越来越严重）年

乐观与消极-------永恒性话题年

毕业前途选择-----大事件（就业最难年）年

？11/86So熟悉宏观话题贴近生活常识个性服从共性远离敏感话题共创友好社会12/86

熟悉宏观话题

六类宏观话题1，健康1996,19972，两代关系1992,,3，爱心1995,，4，环境1999，,,5，青年面对社会,,,6，文化1993,,,,健康文化、爱心环境、友好两代关系有利于青年更加好面对社会！挖掘图像本质---学会升华13/86

贴近生活常识

个人生活体验为主对常识分析、判断和点评切勿用“专业”角度去分析及写作！14/86

个性服从共性

申题过程要抓出题人思想主旨一定是主动感情，需在图画寓意中发觉真理或是思索问题主动处理方案。国内考试需要“顺”，需要“正”，不需要“奇”，不需要“非主流”，因为这在这帮头脑腐朽出题大爷大娘眼里是不被接收和认可！15/86

远离敏感话题

日常生活话题、轻易判断是非话题才是常考方向；而像时事政治类敏感话题，是非曲直难以断定，不方便作为考题方向。而更年期老年男女精神愈加敏感，所以他们就是为了本身健康也一定会原理敏感话题。16/86共创友好社会个体友好发展

节俭与浪费、怎样对待成功（幸福）、剽窃、职业选择和规划个人、他人与社会友好共处

个性与团体合作、怎样对待竞争、网络利弊、伪劣商品问题、乱收费现象、怎样对待中国传统节日和西洋节日、沟通、再难与爱心问题人类与自然环境友好

私家车利弊、环境污染话题、食品安全问题、乱砍滥伐问题、人类对历史古迹破坏及保护。17/86写作高分秘笈范文？词汇句子段落Flexible！！！18/86写作词汇三大标准19/86词汇第一大标准复杂标准第一潜意识表示?“我认为……”怎么表示Ithink？？？复杂表示：assume,argue,emphasize,insist,whenitcomestome,formypart,asforme,inmypointofview,formyownperspective,harbortheideathat,taketheattitudethat,holdtheviewthat,itiswidelysharedthat,itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat!!!20/86“…...很主要”怎么表示？Important？Veryimportant？Veryveryimportant？复杂表示：vital,significant,critical,crucial,playadecisiverole,beofutmostimportance,indispensable21/86“……好”怎么表示？Good？复杂表示：positive,favorable,rosy,promising,perfect,pleasurable,excellent,outstanding,superior,awesome,wholesome思索：“好人”呢？22/86“坏”？Bad？复杂表示：dreadful,unfavorable,poor,adverse,ill,frightful,discouraging,depressing,harmful23/86“人”呢？People？复杂表示PersonindividualPeopleindividuals,characters,folksFamouspeoplecelebrity24/86“许多”？Many？复杂表示：Anarmyof,anoceanof,aseaof,amultitudeof,ahostof“一些”？Some？复杂表示：Asliceof,quiteafew25/86“事情”？Thing？复杂表示：affair,business,matter“越来越”？Moreandmore？复杂表示：Increasing(ly),growing26/86“用户”？Customer？复杂表示：shopper,client,consumer,purchaser“非常”？Very？overwhelmingly,exceedingly,extremely,intensely27/86“必要”？Necessary？Indispensable“感兴趣”？Beinterestedin?Sth.appealstosb.,sth.exertsatremendousfascinationonsb.28/86“切记”？Remember？复杂表示：Bearinmind“为了”？For？Inorderto?复杂表示：forthesakeof29/86“不论，不论”？Nomatter？复杂表示：regardlessof“就……而言”？For？复杂表示：Intermsof30/86“仅仅只”？Only？复杂表示：merely“有些”？Alittle?复杂表示：somehow31/86词汇第二大标准转换标准做人底线：能够胡编但千万不能乱造胡编两种方法1）复杂汉语---简单汉语---简单英语2）上下义词32/861）复杂汉语---简单汉语---简单英语酵母Iwanttobuysomethingtomakethebreadbiggerandbigger.照料老人老人？照料？崇敬偶像偶像？崇敬？33/86

2）上下义词

下义词：对一个事物详细表示；上义词：对一个事物类别表示。饺子上义词：食物特征：中国特有、传统、春节常吃atraditionalChinesefoodfortheSpringFestival上义词+特征34/86另外：上下义词还能够增强表示丰富性Internetnet,technology,invention,miracle,toolComputerMachine,technology,tool,invention,PC,laptop,mybaby35/86词汇第三大标准温暖标准阅读其实就是脱衣服写作其实就是穿衣服Leon英语很好。Leon是一个好人。Leonisagoodman.Leon,afamousteacherinChina,isahandsome,warm-heartedandresponsiblemanwhoiscrazyaboutbeer.名词化装：形容词、同位语和定语从句36/86Leon唱“youaremysunshine”Leonsings“youaremysunshine”Withaviewtomakehisbabehappy,Leonsings“youaremysunshine”loudly

inthebaronherbirthday.动词化装：状语—时间、地点、方式、目标状语。37/86例句：Weshouldtakemeasurestocounterfishing.长句：Forthepurposeofpreservingthemarineresources,weshouldtakedrasticandeffectivemeasurestocounterexcessivecommercialfishing.38/86总结和期待词汇三大标准：复杂标准转换标准温暖标准美好期待：更多三大标准范围下词汇列表请关注新浪微博@莱弗赵亮我会定时发到上面给我学生学习记忆。39/86写作12大关键句子40/861，简单简单句1）掌握简单句基本结构，确保结构正确2）谓语动词是关键3）搞清楚时态4）主谓一致41/862，不简单简单句1）添加介词短语A）简单句+介词短语B）介词短语，简单句2）用简单句写意群42/861-A简单句+介词短语介词短语：1)时间:infuture,inthefuture2)地点:inthemodernsociety3)范围:amongtheyoungsters,fortheagedparents4)总结:inconclusion,allinall43/86Treesprovidethreevitalfunctionsintheecosystem.树木为生态系统提供了三种主要功效。Frommypointofview,newbuildingsisasignofmodernization.我认为，新建筑是当代化一个标志。44/861-B用简单句写意群请各位写一句话大学生刚才毕业就想找到高薪工作是不可能。Itisimpossiblefor刚才毕业大学生to找到高薪工作45/86拆分1）每年，都有很多大学生毕业。2）他们都想找到工作。3）这些工作能够给他们很多钱。4）这是不可能。5）我了个去，该怎么办？46/861）Everyyear,manycollegestudentsgraduate.2)Theywanttofindjobs.3)Thesejobscangivethemalotofmoney.4)Thisisimpossible.组合：Everyyear,heapsandheapsofstudentsgraduatefromuniversitiesandinstitutes.Theyallwanttofindjobswhichcanofferthemhandsomesalaries,butthisishardlypossible.47/863，四种关系并列句联合关系and/notonly…butalso…选择关系or/otherwise/either…or…转折关系but/yet因果关系so48/86真题好并列句句举例这幅图发人深省，而且它描绘了当今社会一个普遍现象。Thedrawingisthought-provoking,anditillustratesacommonphenomenonintoday’ssociety.49/86政府应该对私家车主征税，或者尽快发展公共交通系统。Thegovernmentshouldlevytaxontheprivatecarowners,oritwilldevelopthepublictransportsystemassoonaspossible.50/86文化融合已经给我们带来了益处，不过我们应该正确对待这种特殊现象。Cultureintegrationhasbroughtbenefitstous,butweoughttotakearightattitudetowardsthisspecialphenomenon.51/86远程教育在现在教育中起到日益主要作用，所以，我们要对它足够重视。Distanceeducationhasbeenplayinganincreasinglysignificantroleinthemoderneducation,soweshouldpayenoughattentiontoit.52/864,名词性从句【宾语从句】经济学家认为，世界经济与原油价格亲密相关。Theeconomistsbelievethattheworldeconomyisconnectedcloselywiththepriceofcrudeoil.拓展：与……相关Beconnectedwith,beassociated,belinkedwith,berelatedto53/86

【主语从句】有些人不愿意赡养年迈父母，这是一件令人遗憾事情。Itisapitythatsomeyoungstersareunwillingtosupporttheiragedparents.【表语从句】所以，这幅图画寓意是民族文化变成国际文化。Therefore,theimpliedmeaningofthepictureisthatacultureofonenationmaybecomeinternational.54/86【同位语从句】只要浏览一下报纸，你就会轻易地发觉这方面报道：一些人抛弃了年迈、无劳动能力父母，使他们生活在痛苦和贫穷之中。Simplybyglancingatthenewspaper,youcaneasilyfindreportsthatsomepeopleabandontheirparentswhoareoldandincapableofworking,leavingtheminmiseryandpoverty.55/865定语从句有意识、三要素、人物事！那些收溺爱孩子轻易被生活困难击倒。Thosechildrenwhoarespoiltbytheirparentsareeasilydefeatedbydifficultiesinlife.56/866状语从句（9种，详细见长难句部分）因为电脑被广泛应用于日常生活方方面面，电脑知识成了当代人必备知识。Ascomputersarewidelyusedinallaspectsofourdailylives,computerliteracyhasbecomeamusttoamodernman.57/867句头状语追求曲线美！Unfortunately,alargenumberofadultsareunwillingtotaketheresponsibilityofsupportingtheiragedfathersandmothers.Undoubtedly,thegovernmentshouldleadcitizenstostandbythenewlawonpublictransportation.58/86★经典句头状语总结Mostimportantly,ironically,justlike,inspiteof,amazinglyenough,apartfrom,inadditionto,interestingly,notsurprisingly,similarly,likewise,obviously,overall,without.59/868含插入语句子素颜也能够很美位置：主谓之间形式：插入语前后两个逗号类别：词、短语、句子60/86Job-hopping,infact,canofferanopportunitytobringone’spotentialintofullplay.Circumstance,whatisimportant,hasafar-reachingimpactonone’spersonality.全部考场上牛逼神句都不是临场灵感迸发，而是考前练习厚积薄发！61/869并列修词句气势磅礴威慑无边Icame,Isaw,Iconqurered!(凯撒大帝)Thegovernmentofthepeople,forthepeopleandbythepeople.(林肯)62/86TheAmericangirl,dressedintraditionalcostume,indicatesthemultinationalcommunicationofcultures.TheAmericangirl,dressedintraditionalChinesecostumeandornaments,indicatesandsymbolizethemultinationalcommunicationofculturesandcustoms.名词/动词/形容词-----同义词近义词----and/or连接63/8610双重否定句一切皆有可能Anythingispossible.Nothingisimpossible.Impossibleisnothing.EverybodybelievesinLeon.NobodydoesnotbelieveinLeon.64/86双重否定经典积累：NeverfailtoItisnotunrealistictodoItisnotuncommonthat65/8611倒装句【A】否定词+助动词+主+谓+宾Neverhasthenaturesufferedfromsuchaseverepollution.66/86【B】only+状语+助动词+主+谓+宾Onlybydoingsocanwehavegreatconfidenceandpowertoovercomevariousdifficulties.67/8612强调句DoItis/was+被强调部分+that/who+其它部分ItwasLeonwhohelpedmegetsuchahighscore!68/86万能三段段落模块69/86第一段：图画描述，3句总体描述：人物/动物/事物＋动作/服装＋环境/表情，1句挖掘细节词、串连成句：1－2句文字说明/象征寓意：1句70/86第二段：意义阐释，5句主题句：象征寓意，1句论证：3句基础普通同学：讲原因：讲故事：联络现实：图画作文创作标准（以小见大，把握象征寓意，个体想为群体，详细想为抽象）基础很好同学：五大角度：背景、事实、反方观点、原因、后果六种伎俩：因果、分类、定义解释、统计事实、举例、正反论证小结：1句71/86第三段：提议办法，4句结论句：1句针对双方提提议：2句包装结尾、展望未来：1句Onlyinthiswaycanwe…Itis…that…Itishightimethatwe…72/86启承转合：启：开启观点、开篇点题承：观点承接、正面论证First(ly),Inthefirstplace,Firstandforemost,Aboveall,Ontheonehand,Foronething,Second(ly),Inthesecondplace,Besides,Inaddition,Whatismore,Furthermore,Moreover,Ontheotherhand,ForanotherThird(ly),(The)Lastbutnot(the)least,Moreimportantly,Evenworse73/86转：观点转折、反面论证Conversely,Nevertheless,Unfortunately,Whereas,Yet,Instead,In/Bycomparison/contrast,Onthecontrary合：文章结尾、合并归纳Asaresult/consequence,Consequently,Accordingly,Thus,Hence,Generally/Brieflyspeaking,74/8616：：Directions:Studythefollowingphotoscarefullyandwriteanessayinwhichyoushoulddescribethephotosbriefly;interpretthesocialphenomenonreflectedbythem,giveyourpointofview.Youshouldwrite160-200wordsneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.(20points)

图一：把崇敬写在脸上。图二：花300元做个"小贝"头。75/86Thephotosvividlydepictthatnowadaysmanypeople,especially,youngfellowsaretracingsuchfashion.//ThefirstonesignedthenameofBeckhamonhisleftface,whilethesecondoneaskedthehairdressertocopythehairstyleofBeckhamwithabout300yuan.//Bothofthemaretypicalfansofthewell-knownBritishfootballplayer－Beckham.76/86Thiskindofsocialphenomenonisnotentirelyacoincidence.Therearereasonsaccountingforthisfashion.

Firstly,withtherapiddevelopmentofsociety,somepeoplefeeldullanddesperateaboutthereality,sotheydesiretofindsomefamouspeopleastheiridols.Intheway,theyfeelsatisfiedwiththeirlifeandhaveagoaltoachieve.Secondly,justoppositetotheabove,othersarejustfashiontracers.Theybarelywanttoshowthattheyarekeepingstepwiththefashion.Thirdly,somepeopleevendon’thaveanyspecialpurposebuttodoitasothers.Intheirdeepheart,theydon’ttreatitasfashionbutasfun.77/86Franklyspeaking,thissocialphenomenonisverydangeroustothewholesociety.Someyoungmenspendmostoftheirtimedecoratingthemselvesastheiridols.Asaresult,theydon’thaveenoughtimetostudyorwork,thentheyarealwaysleftbehind.Moreover,itisharmfultotheestablishmentofaharmonioussociety.Todrawaconclusion,wedon’tdenythatpeopleshouldhavetheiridolstoadmire,butinasensibleway.Theycanlearnfromwhattheyhaveachievedandtrytobehavethatway.Andalsoparents