写作讲评课件（完整版）2

WritingAssignmentsforDecember6thWritingAssignmentsforDecember6thPracticalWriting(15points)你校正在开展阳光体育活动，校学生会拟以“体育精神”为主题举办摄影展。请你代表学生会，在校英文报上发布一则通知，征集摄影作品，内容包括:1.活动目的;2.作品内容和要求;3.投稿方式和截止日期。ContinuationWriting(15points)报纸第12期B版读后续写NoticeStudents’UnionPracticalWriting(15points)你校正在开展阳光体育活动，校学生会拟以“体育精神”为主题举办摄影展。请你代表学生会，在校英文报上发布一则通知，征集摄影作品，内容包括:1.活动目的;2.作品内容和要求;3.投稿方式和截止日期。

NoticeStudents’Union1.Texttype?Anotice.PracticalWriting(15points)你校正在开展阳光体育活动，校学生会拟以“体育精神”为主题举办摄影展。请你代表学生会，在校英文报上发布一则通知，征集摄影作品，内容包括:1.活动目的;2.作品内容和要求;3.投稿方式和截止日期。

NoticeStudents’Union2.Thelayout?Threeparagraphs.Para.1:Para.2:Para.3:Requirement1（活动目的）Requirement2+3（通知的详细内容）欢迎参加“作品的内容和要求；投稿方式和截止日期。”MajorMistakes1.abstractinformationspecific/concreteinformationMajorMistakes2.Thetranslationofcertainphrases体育精神作品要求sportsspiritthedemandsofworkssportsmanshiptherequirementsofworks××NoticeAimedatpromotingsunsportsandshowcasingtypicalexamples,ourschoolwilllaunchaphotographyexhibitiononthethemeofsportsmanship.Students’UnionApossibleversion:Keenlyanticipateyourparticipation.活动目的通知的具体内容期待参加读后续写：Majorquestions:Q1:WasMowglitrappedinthetreeandsavedby“me”withablackplasticbag?Para1:Shelookedatmewithpanicinhereyes,andthendirectedherattentionbackoutside.Sothisdoesn’tmakesenseverywell.Majorquestions:Q2:Whatwasinblackplasticbag?WasMowgliseverelyinjured?Para2:AsIquicklyyetcarefullyopenedtheblackplasticbag,Mowglijumpedout.ItwasMowgliintheblackplasticbag.Itwassafeactuallybecauseitjumpedoutofthebagthemoment“I”openedit.Majorquestions:Q3:Whatcouldbetheproperending/theme?Theirresponsiblepetownerstartedtolookafterthetwocatsverycarefullyfromthenon.Thetwocatswerelikepeasandcarrotsfromthenon,becausetheirbondsandtieswasstrengthenedfromtheexperience.×√Shelookedatmewithpanicinhereyes,andthendirectedherattentionbackoutside.WhenIpeered(vi.仔细看)outofthewindow,thepiecescametogetherinaflash（一切瞬间变得清晰起来）.

Lyingonthegrounddirectlyunderthewindow

was

ablackplasticyard-wastebag,filledupandtightlytied.AndwherewasMowgli?Iracedoutthebackdoortowherethebaglay.Abbyfollowedmecloselytotheblackplasticbagandcircledaroundit,screaminganxiously.AsIquicklyyetcarefullyopenedtheblackplasticbag,Mowglijumpedout.Hedidn'tseemtobeinjured,justhappyandgratefulfortherescue,enthusiasticallyrubbingup

against(贴贴)

Abby.Abbykeptgrooming(vt.梳毛)Mowgliaftercirclingmyleg(围着我的腿转)forawhile.IwasnotsureexactlyhowlongMowgliwastrapped.AndIwasnotsurehowAbbyknewwherehewas.ButIdidknowthatthekittywhoseemedreadytokillMowgliatfirstmeeting(相遇)hadnowsavedhislife.Apossibleversion:倒装句Furtherstudy小猫小狗小兔bunny-bunniespuppy-puppieskitten-kittens狗叫moew/miˈaʊ/vi.barkvi.猫叫猫发出呼噜声purr/pɜːr/vi.他的猫咪轻声喵喵叫，显然对主人的回归感到高兴。Hiscatmeowedsoftly,obviouslyglad

athisowner'sreturn.1.被一声巨响吓到，狗发出防御性的叫声，准备保卫自己的领地。Furtherstudy2.大狗摇摆着尾巴，发出深沉的“汪汪”声迎接主人在门口。3.每当门铃响起，我们的狗立刻开始吠叫，提醒我们有人来了。4.走过篱笆旁，我能听到邻居的狗发出大声的“汪汪”声，警告闯入者离开。5.狗狂吠不止，摇着尾巴，表现出对见到主人回家的兴奋。Scaredbyaloudnoise,thedogbarked

defensively,readytodefenditsterritory.Thebigdogwaggeditstailandletouta

deep“woof”togreetitsowneratthedoor.Wheneverthedoorbellrings,ourdog

immediatelystartsbarkingtoalert

us.Walkingbythefence,Icouldhearthe

neighbor’sdoggivealoud