适用于新高考新教材天津专版2024届高考英语一轮总复习写作专项提升Step4巧衔接-增强行文过渡流畅课件外研版

写作专项提升巧衔接——增强行文过渡流畅英语衔接1起始与顺序1.起始关系:first/firstly(第一),inthefirstplace/firstofall(首先),tobegin/startwith(首先),aseveryoneknows(众所周知),asisknown(正如了解到的那样),asisshownin...(如……所示),accordingto(根据),nowadays/now(现在),atpresent(目前),recently(最近),等等。①(2021·全国乙卷,书面表达)As

everyone

knows,timeisratherlimitedintoday'ssociety.众所周知,在当今社会,时间是相当有限的。②(2020·天津卷,书面表达)First

of

all,wewereshownsomephotosandvideos.首先,我们看了一些照片和视频。③To

begin

with,pleasemakeaworkoutscheduleandsticktoitsothatyoucankeephealthy.首先,请制订一个锻炼计划并坚持下去,以便你保持健康。2.时间顺序:atthebeginning(起初),then(然后),afterawhile(一会儿之后),afterthat(后来),afterwards/lateron(后来),atthesametime(与此同时),inthemeantime(在此期间),beforelong(不久),shortlyafter(立即),eventually(终于),intheend/finally/lastly/atlast(最后),等等。①At

the

beginning,Iwipedoffthedustofallthefurniture.ThenIcollectedallthethingsscatteredintheroomsandputtheminplace.After

that,Imoppedthefloor.首先,我擦去所有家具上的灰尘。接着,我把所有的散落在屋子里的东西收拾起来放好。然后,我拖了地。②Shortly

aftermovingintoherapartment,shefoundajob.搬进公寓后不久,她就找到了一份工作。③Lastly,Iwouldliketothankmyparentsforalltheirsupport.最后,我想感谢父母对我的全力支持。④(2020·浙江1月卷,写作)In

the

end,Iamlookingforwardtoyourinvolvementanddowishyouasuccess!最后,我期待着你的参与,并祝你成功![对点过关训练]补全/翻译句子1.(2020·上海卷,书面表达)首先,没有必要为不可控的事情烦恼,比如天气状况。_____________________________________________________,suchastheweathercondition.

2.最后,我们应该经常参加体育运动和户外活动。_______________________________________________________________3.当今,越来越多的人选择在家上班。_______________________________________________________________Firstly,thereisnoneedtobotherwiththingsuncontrollableFinally,weshouldtakepartinsportsandoutdooractivitiesfrequently.Nowadays,increasingnumbersofpeopleelecttoworkfromhome.衔接2条件与因果1.表示条件:if、unless、incase(of)、as/solongas、onconditionthat、provided(that)等。(2021·全国甲卷,书面表达)IfIwanttodecoratemywebsitewithsomeChineseelements,whatshouldIdo?如果我想用一些中国元素装饰我的网站,我应该怎么做?2.表示原因:because、as、since、for、nowthat、considering(that)、thanksto、dueto、asaresultof、so、inconsequenceof、owingto、onaccountof、forthereasonof等。①Millionswillfacestarvationnextyearas

a

result

ofthedrought.由于旱灾,明年将有数百万人面临饥饿的威胁。②(2020·上海卷,书面表达)Sinceithappened,whynottryhardtogetitsettled?既然事情已经发生,为什么不努力去解决它呢?③Considering

thatyoujuststartedstudyingEnglishamonthago,you'vemadeamazingprogress.考虑到你一个月前才开始学习英语,你的进步已经非常惊人了。3.表示结果:so、thus、therefore、consequently、asaresult、asaconsequence等。①(2019·全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)Therefore,Iamequippedwithawiderangeofknowledgeinthisaspect,whichcanhelppeopleinLondonhaveadeeperunderstandingofChinesepaintings.因此,我在这方面拥有广泛的知识,这可以帮助在伦敦的人对中国画有更深的了解。②Iwasbadlytreatedinyourstore.Consequently,Iamwritingtoyouinthehopeofgettingthingssettled.在你的店里,我受到了不好的对待。因此,我写信给你,希望事情能得到解决。③(2020·全国Ⅲ卷,书面表达)Therefore,weareinurgentneedofyourhelpandguidance.因此,我们迫切需要你的帮助和指导。[对点过关训练]补全句子1.(2020·全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)我之所以尊敬她,是因为她从不发脾气,反而总是鼓励我。__________________________________________isthatsheneverlosestemperbutinsteadalwaysencouragesme.

2.(2019·江苏卷,书面表达)如果我们的目的是分享中国文化,那么这些不便利就不是问题。Theinconvenienceisnotaproblem_________________________________.3.由于人类的活动,许多物种已经灭绝了。Manyspecieshavediedout_____________________________________.

ThereasonwhyIshowrespectforherifourpurposeistoshareChinesecultureinconsequenceofhumanactivities衔接3并列与转折1.并列关系:and、or、aswellas、notonly...butalso...、either...or...、neither...nor...等。①Not

onlydoesitsupplymewithaplatformtobroadenmyhorizon,butitsrichcontentcanalsosparkmyburningpassionforEnglish.它不仅为我提供了一个开阔视野的平台,而且它丰富的内容也可以点燃我对英语的热情。②(2019·北京卷,书面表达)Afterpackingmysuitcase,Ias

well

asmyclassmatessetoffforourdestination—afarminthemorning.收拾好行李箱后,我和我的同学们在早晨出发去了我们的目的地——一家农场。2.转折关系:but,yet,however,while,otherwise,nevertheless,otherwise(否则,不然),despite/inspiteof,regardlessof(不管,不顾),ratherthan(而不是),instead(of)(相反,反而,却),ontheotherhand(另一方面),unfortunately(不幸地,令人遗憾地),or(不然),although/though/as/while(虽然),evenif/though(尽管),nomatter...(无论……),等等。①(2021·全国乙卷,书面表达)However,therealsoexistsomedisadvantages.然而,也存在一些缺点。②(2020·全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)Shehasherweakness,yetthatdoesnotmeansheisnotuptothejob.她有缺点,然而那并不意味着她不能胜任这项工作。③Don'tstartgivingmeproblems;otherwise,I'llhavetobeveryunpleasantindeed.不要开始给我找麻烦,否则我就真的不客气了。[对点过关训练]完成语段正如你所知,我对美国文化很感兴趣。生活在美国对我来说会是一个了解更多美国文化以及提高英文水平的良机。然而,我刚得知寄宿家庭的主人生病了,住在他家会很不方便,所以我需要你的帮助。Asyouknow,①____________________________________________.②______________________________________willbeagreatopportunityformetolearnmoreaboutAmericancultureandimprovemyEnglish.③____________________________________________anditwillbeinconvenientformetostayinhishouse.④_____________________.

IhavebeeninterestedinAmericancultureLivinginAmericaHowever,I'vejustlearnedthatmyhostfallsillSoIneedyourhelp衔接4列举与递进1.列举事实:suchas、forexample/instance、take...forexample、thatistosay、asfollows、inotherwords、ontheonehand...ontheother(hand)...、foronething...foranother...等。(2019·北京卷,书面表达)It'sveryconvenientforyoutotravelinthethreecitiesbecausetherearemanymeansoftransportforyoutochoose,such

asbuses,tubes,trains,taxies,andsharedbikes.你在这三个城市旅行非常方便,因为你可以选择多种交通方式,例如公共汽车、地铁、火车、出租车和共享单车。2.递进关系:besides/moreover/furthermore(此外;而且),additionally(另外),also(还),stillless(更不用说),inaddition(而且),apartfrom(此外;除……之外),what'smore(此外),equallyimportant(同样重要的是),moreimportantly(更重要的是),lastbutnotleast(最后但同样重要的是),tomakemattersworse(使情况更糟糕的是),worsestill/what'sworse(更糟糕的是),等等。①(2021·全国乙卷,书面表达)Moreover,theatmosphereoftheclassisnotwarmenough.此外,课堂气氛不够热烈。②Asaresult,Idon'thaveenoughtimetotakeexercise.What's

worse,Idon'tcommunicatealotwithmyparentsandmyfriends.结果,我没有足够的时间锻炼身体。更糟糕的是,我与父母和朋友之间的交流也不多。③Additionally,theyshouldbeallowedtoteach,andberewardedfordoingitwell.此外,他们应该被允许去教书,并因做得好而得到奖励。[对点过关训练]补全句子1.小男孩把鲜花递给了那位保安,而且亲吻了他的脸颊。Thelittleboypassedthefreshflowerstotheguard,________________________________________________________________.

2.(2019·天津卷,书面表达)就个人而言,我不仅喜欢听音乐,还喜欢唱国内外的歌曲。Personally,Ilove___________________________________________________________________________________________.

3.最后期限还有两天就要到了,更糟糕的是,我的电脑突然瘫痪了。Thedeadlineistwodaysaway,and______________________,mycomputerbrokedownsuddenly.

what'smoreshekissedhimonhischeeks.notonlylisteningtomusic,butalsosingingsongsfromhomeandabroadwhat'sworse衔接5对比与对照1.相似比较:similarly(相似地,类似地),equally(同样地),justas(正如),inthesameway(以相同的方式,同样地),foronething...foranother...(一方面……另一方面……),等等。For

one

thing,thisracegivesusagoodopportunitytohaveadeeperunderstandingofpatience.For

another,itcanbuildupourbodiesintermsoflong-distancerace.一方面,这次比赛给我们提供了一个很好的机会,让我们对耐心有了更深的理解。另一方面,它也能通过长跑锻炼我们的身体。2.相反比较:instead(相反),while(而;然而),unlike(不像),however(然而;仍然),whereas(然而;反之),yet(然而),ontheotherhand(另一方面),comparedwith/to(与……比较),incomparisonwith(与……比较),incontrast(to)(和……对比),onthecontrary(相反),等等。①(2021·全国乙卷,书面表达)On

the

other

hand,thatwillleadtoalackofcommunicationbetweenteachersandstudents.另一方面,那样会导致师生之间缺乏沟通。②(2020·上海卷,书面表达)Maybeitistherecentghastlyweatherortheterribletrafficthathindersyoufrommakingupyourmind.However,asfarasI'mconcerned,it'sstillworthourefforts.也许是最近的恶劣天气或可怕的交通阻碍了你作决定。然而,就我而言,这仍然值得我们的努力。③On

the

contrary,IlikesolvingdifficultproblemsbecauseIalwaystakethemasexcitingchallenges.相反,我喜欢解决难题,因为我通常会把这些难题看作令人激动的挑战。[对点过关训练]补全/翻译句子1.首先,和传统的购物相比,网购很方便。_____________________________________________,onlineshoppingisveryconvenient.

2.恰恰相反,我对这个提议很感兴趣。_______________________________________________________________3.我们原以为这些数据正确。不过,我们现在发现了一些错误。Wethoughtthefigureswerecorrect.___________________________________________________.Tobeginwith,comparedwithtraditionalshoppingOnthecontrary,Iamquiteinterestedin/showgreatinterestintheproposal.

However,wehavenowdiscoveredsomeerrors.4.我们的生活也是如此,在不和他人合作的情况下,一个人仅靠自己是不可能轻易完成一项有挑战性的任务的。_______________________________________________________________________onhisownwithoutcooperatingwithothers.

Similarlyinourlife,anindividualpersoncannoteasilycarryoutachallengingtask衔接6观点与总结1.表达观点:inmyopinion、inmyview、inmypointofview、asfarasIamconcerned、asforme、personally等。①(2020·天津卷,书面表达)As

far

as

I

am

concerned,Iwillworkhardforthepeaceandprogressoftheworld.就我而言,我会为世界的和平与进步而努力。②Personally,IpreferthetouralongtheYangtzeRiver,thelongestriverinChinaandoneofthebirthplacesofChinesecivilization.就个人而言,我更喜欢沿着长江游览,长江是中国最长的河流,也是中华文明的发源地之一。2.归纳总结:inshort、inbrief、inconclusion、inaword、tosumup、toconclude、allinall、onthewhole、ingeneral、generallyspeaking等。①On