高考真题2021年6月浙江卷写作读后续写“我的工资”课件-高考英语作文复习专项

读后续写(2021年6月浙江卷)“我”的工资试题再现阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Thepaydayarrivedatlast._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Iunderstoodimmediatelywhatmyparentswereworriedabout.__________________________________________________________________________________________试题再现Thekeyelements(要素)ofastoryastorywhowhatwhenwherewhyhow一、深度解读语篇Who?What?When?Where?Thekeyelements(要素)ofastoryastorywhowhatwhenwherewhyhowMydad,I,aneighboringfarmerworkinthefarmfieldthesummerbeforemyeighthgradeaneighboringfarmer'sfield,ItwasnotfairthatIhadtocontributemymoney.athomeHe____________________myworldofschoolactivities.Mydadisa_____manandheonlyhadan_______gradeeducation.Hestartedtoworkfromage____andhismoneywasspenttopay______

_________.Hethoughtthatajob’sabigstepto____________.

HewasgladthatIcouldearnmoneyand_________tothehousehold.quieteighth14familydidn’tunderstandexpensesgrowingupcontributeMyDad1.Opening2.Buildup5.EndingMydadandIdidn’t____________eachother.understandIspentmy_________________beforetheeighthgradeworkinginmyneighbor's______andlookedforwardto________.summervacationfieldthepay3.Climax4.ResolutionMyfatherpraisedmesinceIcouldworkforthefamily.Hearingthat,Ifelt_______notbeingabletousemyown_________andlostthe___________inmorework.unfairmoneyinterestThepaydayarrivedatlast.HowwouldIcopewithmydepressioncausedbymydad’swords?Iunderstoodimmediatelywhatmyparentswereworriedabout.WouldIunderstandmydadfinally?二、细读首句，构思框架两段首句定一框Para.1:Thepaydayarrivedatlast.

Para.2:Iunderstoodimmediatelywhatmyparentswereworriedabout.从第一段首句和第二段首句预测：Whichwordsorphrasesshouldbefocusedoninthegivensentence?

HowdidIfeelwhenIgotpaymentfrommywork?

HowdidIplanthemoneyatfirst?Whatdidhisfathersay?happyunhappydidn’tunderstand二框二首正能量Whichwordsorphrasesshouldbefocusedoninthegivensentence?WhatdidIseeandunderstand?WhatdidIrealizeanddecidetodo?What’stheendofthestory?Para.2:Iunderstoodimmediatelywhatmyparentswereworriedabout.从第二段首句和正能量结局预测：understandrealizesupport根据括号中的提示，补出范文缺失的部分，并关注哪些语言回答了“首句精研”的问题。

Thepaydayarrivedatlast._________________________________________

(虽然我口袋里一共有100美元，我还是带着沉重的心情回家了。让步状语从句和with结构).______________________________________________

(我多希望用这些钱买一双自己想要很久的新运动鞋。感叹句和省略that的定语从句).Notmuchwassaidoverdinner.However,beforeIwenttobedthatnight,_______________________(然而，晚上睡觉前，我无意中听到从父母房间传来的谈话。时间状语从句和非谓语动词作后置定语).“Samcandowithoutapersonalfootballcoach.Ourbudgetisreallytightthismonth,”saidmymom.“Don’tworry.Ijustneedtodosomeextradriving.Aprofessionalcanhelphimmakegreatprogressinfootball.Youknowtheboy’sfuturedream,”saidmydad.范文赏析根据括号中的提示，补出范文缺失的部分，并关注哪些语言回答了“首句精研”的问题。

Iunderstoodimmediatelywhatmyparentswereworriedabout._________________(一直误会爸爸的人是我。强调句),nottheotherwayaround.Thenextmorning,IhandedDadmyhard-earnedcash.Itonlyseemedfair.Buthejusttooksomeofit.“That’lldofornowandthanksforhelpingwiththefamilyexpenses,son.Youarereallygrowingup,”hesaid.Afterthetalk,Iwentstraightbacktothefarmerandtooktheextrawork.范文赏析WhatdidIfeelwhenIgotthepay?Whatmademeunderstandmy

parents’worries?

Thepaydayarrivedatlast.

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