高考英语三轮冲刺读后续写个人成长类 田径少女重拾信心坚持比赛收获成长 讲义

读后续写原文—田径少女

"WhatamIdoingwrong?”JasmineWilsonthoughttoherselfassheheavilybreathed.Herbreathingcouldbeheardfromnearbybutwasdrownedoutbythefirmstepsofseveralpairsoffeethittingtheground,eachdesperatelypushingforwardtogettothefinishinglinebeforetheother.Itwasherfirsttrackmeeting,andshehadalmostgivenupmidwaythroughtherace.

Shedidn'tknowwhyshehaddecidedtochoosetrackandfieldasanafter-schoolactivity.Asshetriedtothinkofareasonwhyshehadchosentodoasportthatrequiresalotofhardtraininginsteadofsomethingeasier,sheassumedthatshehadsimplywantedtotryitout.

Trackpracticewasmuchharderthanshehadanticipatedandveryexhausting.Atleast,that'swhatitfeltliketoher.Whensheobservedherteammates，theyseemedtoruneffortlessly.Shewantedtobelikethem,butitwasdifficult.

"Ms.Wilson,doyouhaveagoalinmind？"BettyJones，thecoachofthetrackteamaskedJasmineonedayafterpractice."Ijustwantyoutothinkaboutthat.Whatareyourunningfor？Whoareyourunningfor？Whatwillyougetoutofthisexperience，andhowwillthathelpyouroverallgoal？Thesearequestionsthatyoureallyneedtoconsider，Ms.Wilson."TheolderwomanplacedahandonJasmine'sshoulderwithafirmlook."Youdon'thavetoanswermerightnow，butIlookforwardtohearingyouranswers."

Attherace，smallbeadsofsweatrandownthesidesofJasmine’sflushedfaceanddrippedontothefadedlettersofthehighschooltrackteam'suniform，whichwasclosetoherskin.Jasminecouldbarelyfocusonthepresentmomentbecauseherheartwaspoundingtooloudinherears.

Thensheheardsomeoneask,"Wilson!Ms.Wilson，areyouallright？"Thefamiliarvoicebroughthercomebacktohersenses.要求：1.续写词数应为150左右；

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energy.中文意思“我做错了什么？”JasmineWilson深呼吸着，心想。她的呼吸声可以从附近听到，但被几双脚落地的坚实步伐淹没了，每双脚都拼命向前推，赶在另一双脚之前到达终点线。这是她第一次参加田径比赛，她几乎在比赛中途放弃了。她不知道自己为什么决定选择田径作为课后活动。当她试图思考自己选择做一项需要大量艰苦训练而不是更容易的运动的原因时，她认为自己只是想尝试一下。田径练习比她预想的要困难得多，而且非常累人。至少，这就是她的感觉。当她观察她的队友时，他们似乎毫不费力地跑了起来。她想和他们一样，但这很难。练习结束后的一天，田径队教练贝蒂·琼斯问贾斯敏：“威尔逊女士，你心中有目标吗？”。“我只是想让你想想。你在为什么竞选？你在为谁竞选？你会从这次经历中得到什么，这对你的总体目标有什么帮助？威尔逊女士，这些都是你真正需要考虑的问题。”年长的女士把手放在贾斯敏的肩膀上，神情坚定。“你现在不必回答我，但我期待着听到你的回答。”在比赛中，小汗珠顺着Jasmine脸红的脸两侧流下，滴在高中田径队制服上褪色的字母上，这些字母紧贴着她的皮肤。Jasmine几乎无法专注于当下，因为她的心跳在她的耳朵里太大了。然后她听到有人问：“威尔逊！威尔逊女士，你还好吗？”熟悉的声音让她回过神来。续写点拨故事简介：

JasmineWilson报名了课后田径练习，而日常练习却没有想象中容易，教练BettyJones试图进行目标引导。在第一次比赛中，Jasmine不堪疲惫，想要放弃，陷入迷茫。续写重点Para.1:①见到教练Betty，Jasmine会说什么？②教练Betty会说什么、做什么，使Jasmine充满力量？Para.2:①重新振作后，Jasmine会做出怎样的决定？②跑步结束后，Jasmine有了什么新的感悟？参考思路Para.1:Jasmine情绪低落，向教练倾诉→教练安抚并鼓励Jasmine→Jasmine重拾信心Para.2:Jasmine调整状态坚持比赛→教练陪伴鼓励Jasmine→Jasmine顺利完成比赛，收到祝贺，明白了田径的意义参考范文：Whenshelookedup,itwasthecoachoftheirteam,BerryJones.ItwasthenthatJasminetwitchedhermouthwithtearsandsweatonherfaceandtoldherthat,shecouldn’tmoveaninch.NosoonerhadsheutteredthelastsyllablethanBettygentlystrokedherhead."DoyoustillrememberthequestionsthatIaskedyoutheotherday?"Bettyencouragedher,adding.“Confrontedwithtiredness,youaresupposedtobeatyourselfwithdeterminationaswellaspersistence,whichshouldbeyourultimategoalofrunning."Withherwordsechoinginherears,Jasminepluckedupcouragetogiveitatry,determinedandmotivated!Jasminetookadeepbreathandsuddenlyfeltfullofenergy.Puffingandpanting,shedraggedherlegswithallherstrength,movingtowardsthefinishline.Withherheartthumpingfuriouslyandpulseracing,shedashedasswiftlyasshecouldinthelast50meters.Instantlyshereachedthefinishline,,thunderousapplauseerupted.Bettyembracedherinabighug.ItwasthenthatJasmineshedtearsofjoymingledwithappreciation.Haditnotbeenforthecase,shewouldn’thaverealizedthegoalthatshewasrunningfor--Itwasbeatingherselfwithsteelywillanddetermination.点评：这篇续写文章情节完整合理，描写生动到位，语言恰当高级，充分把所学运用到实际写作中，书写认真、整洁、工整。默写版：Whenshelookedup,itwasthecoachoftheirteam,BerryJones.__________________________________________________________________________________________就在那时，Jasmine流着眼泪和汗水抽搐着嘴，告诉她，她一寸都不能动.NosoonerhadsheutteredthelastsyllablethanBettygentlystrokedherhead."DoyoustillrememberthequestionsthatIaskedyoutheotherday?"Bettyencouragedher,adding.________________________________________________________________________“面对疲劳，你应该用决心和毅力打败自己，这应该是你跑步的最终目标。”Withherwordsechoinginherears,_________________________________________________________________Jasmine鼓起勇气尝试了一下，决心坚定，充满动力!Jasminetookadeepbreathandsuddenlyfeltfullofenergy.______________________________________________________________她大口大口地喘着粗气，用尽全力拖着腿向终点线走去.Withherheartthumpingfuriouslyandpulseracing,shedashedasswiftlyasshecouldinthelast50meters.____________________________________________