2024届高考英语作文复习专项读后续写：自负导致比赛失败任务单素材

自负导致比赛失败（教师版）

一、原文

Havingheldtheinterschoolstorytellingchampionshipforthepasttwoyears,Iwas

theshiningstarofmyschool.Whenitcametochoosingtherightcandidatetoparticipatein

suchcompetitions,Iwasalwaysthefirstchoice.Naturally,Iwasonceagainselectedto

representmyschoolintheapproachingcontestthisyear.

UponhearingthefactthatIwaschosenagain,myclassmatesandfriendsacknowledged

thatIwouldundoubtedlyemergeasthechampionagain.Consequently,Ibecameconceited.I

wassoproudthatIneglectedtheimportanceofpracticingforthecontest.

Aweekbeforethecontest,myteacherMs.Saraasked,“Selena,wouldyouliketostand

infrontoftheclasstorehearseforthecontest?,,Shehadtutoredmeinthepasttwo

competitionsandknewhowimportantpracticewas."Justimagineyouareonthestageinthe

,

presenceoftheaudience9,sheadded.

'Tmsorry,Ms.Sara,“Ireplied.UIhaveabitofasorethroat.^^

ThiswasusuallythelieIwouldtellwhenevermyteacherrequestedmetopracticein

frontoftheclass.IalwaysfoundexcusestoavoiddoingitbecauseIbelievedthatIwasthe

bestandthereforethepracticewasunnecessary.Ononeoccasion,IeventoldMs.Saranotto

worrytoomuchasIwaswellpreparedforthecontest.Infact,Idideverythingbutpractice

myscript.Ionlymanagedtoglancebrieflythroughthestorythedaybeforethecontest.As

thebeststorytelleramongthestudentsofthelocalsecondaryschools,Iwastoovainto

practiceandexpectedeverythingtobefine.

Thecontestwasbeingheldinthelocalcommunityhall.Onthedayofthecontest,the

hallwaspacked.Myschoolteachersandprincipalweretherealongwithmanyofmy

classmatesandschoolmates.Iwastheeighthcontestantoutoftwentyintotal.Thosewho

spokebeforemedidextremelywell.Onseeingtheirfascinatingandoutstandingperformance,

Ibegantoloseconfidenceinmyself.MypalmssweatedheavilyandIstartedtofeelnervous.

Soon,itwasmyturntotalk.

Finally,resultswewannouncedafterthecontest.

二、分句练习

Paragraph1:Soon,itwasmyturntotalk.

(1)我鼓起了一些勇气，走上舞台，试图掩盖我已经失去信心的事实。【前后都是非谓语】

①鼓起勇气pluckupHavingpluckedupsomecourage,Isteppedontothe

somecouragestage,attemptingtoconcealthefactthatconfidencehad

②隐藏、掩盖concealdesertedme.

(2)当我看到观众时，我听到我的声音在颤抖，我的腿也在颤抖。【with结构，so表示

也】

看至one9sglancemeetWithmyglancemeetingtheaudience,Iheardmyvoicewas

sbtremblingandsoweremylegs.

(3)由于不够熟练，我甚至在演讲的过程中出现了几次结巴，当我捕捉到老师、同学和

校长惊讶、困惑和失望的表情时，情况变得更糟了。【非限定性定语从句】

①缺乏lackof...Owingtolackofproficiency,Ievenstammereda

②熟练proficiencyfewtimesinthecourseofspeech,whichworsened

③结巴stammerwhenIcapturedtheastonished,puzzledand

④在…的过程中inthecourseofdisappointedlookofmyteachers,classmatesand

⑤捕捉captureprincipal.

(4)我想不起是怎么结束的，只记得我说完最后一句话后逃离了舞台。当然，没有任何

掌声。【exceptfor]

Icouldn,trecallhowitended,exceptformydesperateescapefromthestagewhenI

finishedmylastword.Ofcourse,withoutanyapplause.

Paragraph2:Finally,resultswereannouncedafterthecontest.

(1)听到我没有被列入获奖名单后，我垂下眼睛，努力躲避周围人的注视。【非谓语】

①将…列入名单list...

HavingheardthatIwasnotlistedamongthewinners,I

②努力做某事

droopedmyeyesandendeavoredtoavoidthegaze

endeavortodo

aroundme.

③注视n.gaze

(2)突然，我感到一只手放到了我的肩膀上。是萨拉老师。

Suddenly,Ifeltahandonmyshoulder.ItwasMs.Sara.

(3)我回头，看到一双关心的眼睛。“没关系”，她用温柔的声音安慰我。

①回头look

backIlookedbackandapairofconcernedeyescameintomysight.

②安慰“It'sOK”,shecomfortedmeinasoftvoice.

comfort

(4)当几个同学也围过来安慰我时，我再也抑制不住自己的情绪，泪水夺眶而出，羞愧

和悔恨交织在一起。【as从句，with结构】

①聚集在一起gather

Asseveralclassmatesalsogatheredaroundtoconsole

around

②安慰consoleme,Icouldn'tcontainmyemotionsanymoreandmy

③抑制containtearsbrimmedover,withamixtureofshameand

④泪水夺眶而出one'stearsremorseoverwhelmingme.

brimmedover

⑤悔恨remorse

(5)“骄者必败。愿你永远不要再让自负阻碍你的成功。”听到萨拉女士的话，我认真地

点点头，决心明年再战。

①骄兵必败Pridegoes

beforeafall.

②愿may+sb+do（原形）

③自负arrogance,conceit,“Pridegoesbeforeafall.Mayyouneverletarrogance

vanitystandinthewayofyoursuccessagain."hearingwhat

④阻碍standinthewayMs.Sarasaid,Inoddedearnestlywithastrongwillto

of...fightnextyear.

⑤谁的话whatsbsaid

④带着…的决心witha

strongwilltodo...

三、最终自测

Soon,itwasmytamtotalk.叙鼓起了一■些勇气，走上舞台，试图掩盖我已经失去信心

的事实。当我看到观众时，我听到我的声音在颤抖，我的腿也在颤抖。由于不够熟练，

我甚至在演讲的过程中出现了几次结巴，当我捕捉到老师、同学和校长惊讶、困惑和失

望的表情时，情况变得更糟了。我想不起是怎么结束的，只记得我说完最后一句话后逃

离了舞台。当然，没有任何掌声。

Finally,resultswereannouncedafterthecontest.听到我没有被列入获奖名单后，我垂

下眼睛，努力躲避周围人的注视。突然，我感到一只手放到了我的肩膀上。是萨拉老师。

我回头，看到一双关心的眼睛，“没关系”，她用温柔的声音安慰我。当几个同学也围过

来安慰我时，我再也抑制不住自己的情绪，泪水夺眶而出，羞愧和悔恨交织在一起。“骄

者必败。愿你永远不要再让自负阻碍你的成功。”听到萨拉女士的话，我认真地点点头，

决心明年再战。

四、最终范文

Paragraph1:Soon,itwasturntotalk.Havingpluckedupsomecourage,Istepped

ontothestage,attemptingtoconcealthefactthatconfidencehaddesertedme.Withmy

glancemeetingtheaudience,Iheardmyvoicewastremblingandsoweremylegs.Dueto

lackofproficiency,Ievenstammeredafewtimesinthecourseofspeech,whichworsened

whenIcapturedtheastonished,puzzledanddisappointedlookofmyteachers,classmatesand

principal.Icouldn'trecallhowitended,exceptformydesperateescapefromthestagewhen

Ifinishedmylastword.Ofcourse,withoutanyapplause.

Paragraph2;Finally,resultswereannouncedafterthecontest.HavingheardthatIwas

notlistedamongthewinners,Idroppedmyeyesandendeavoredtoavoidthegazearoundme.

Suddenly,Ifeltahandonmyshoulder.ItwasMs.Sara.Ilookedbackandapairofconcerned

eyescameintomysight."It'sOK”,shecomfortedmeinasoftvoice.Asseveralclassmates

alsogatheredaroundtoconsoleme,Icouldn'tcontainmyemotionsanymoreandmytears

brimmedover,withamixtureofshameandremorseoverwhelmingme."Pridegoesbeforea

fall.Mayyouneverletarrogancestandinthewayofyoursuccessagain.^^hearingwhatMs.

Sarasaid,Inoddedearnestlywithastrongwilltofightnextyear.

自负导致比赛失败(学生版)

一、原文

Havingheldtheinterschoolstorytellingchampionshipforthepasttwoyears,Iwas

theshiningstarofmyschool.Whenitcametochoosingtherightcandidatetoparticipatein

suchcompetitions,Iwasalwaysthefirstchoice.Naturally,Iwasonceagainselectedto

representmyschoolintheapproachingcontestthisyear.

UponhearingthefactthatIwaschosenagain,myclassmatesandfriendsacknowledged

thatIwouldundoubtedlyemergeasthechampionagain.Consequently,Ibecameconceited.I

wassoproudthatIneglectedtheimportanceofpracticingforthecontest.

Aweekbeforethecontest,myteacherMs.Saraasked,“Selena,wouldyouliketostand

infrontoftheclasstorehearseforthecontest?,,Shehadtutoredmeinthepasttwo

competitionsandknewhowimportantpracticewas."Justimagineyouareonthestageinthe

,

presenceoftheaudience9,sheadded.

'Tmsorry,Ms.Sara,“Ireplied.UIhaveabitofasorethroat.^^

ThiswasusuallythelieIwouldtellwhenevermyteacherrequestedmetopracticein

frontoftheclass.IalwaysfoundexcusestoavoiddoingitbecauseIbelievedthatIwasthe

bestandthereforethepracticewasunnecessary.Ononeoccasion,IeventoldMs.Saranotto

worrytoomuchasIwaswellpreparedforthecontest.Infact,Idideverythingbutpractice

myscript.Ionlymanagedtoglancebrieflythroughthestorythedaybeforethecontest.As

thebeststorytelleramongthestudentsofthelocalsecondaryschools,Iwastoovainto

practiceandexpectedeverythingtobefine.

Thecontestwasbeingheldinthelocalcommunityhall.Onthedayofthecontest,the

hallwaspacked.Myschoolteachersandprincipalweretherealongwithmanyofmy

classmatesandschoolmates.Iwastheeighthcontestantoutoftwentyintotal.Thosewho

spokebeforemedidextremelywell.Onseeingtheirfascinatingandoutstandingperformance,

Ibegantoloseconfidenceinmyself.MypalmssweatedheavilyandIstartedtofeelnervous.

Soon,itwasmyturntotalk.

Finally,resultsvve-eannouncedafterthecontest.

二、分句练习

Paragraph1:Soon,itwasmyturntotalk.

(1)我鼓起了一些勇气，走上舞台，试图掩盖我已经失去信心的事实。【前后都是非谓语】

①鼓起勇气pluckupsomecourage

②隐藏、掩盖conceal

(2)当我看到观众时，我听到我的声音在颤抖，我的腿也在颤抖。【with结构，so表示

也】

看至Uone'sglancemeetsb

(3)由于不够熟练，我甚至在演讲的过程中出现了几次结巴，当我捕捉到老师、同学和

校长惊讶、困惑和失望的表情时，情况变得更糟了。【非限定性定语从句】

①缺乏lackof...

②熟练proficiency

③结巴stammer

④在…的过程中inthecourseof

⑤捕捉capture

(4)我想不起是怎么结束的，只记得我说完最后一句话后逃离了舞台。当然，没有任何

掌声。【exceptfor】

Paragraph2:Finally,resultswereannouncedafterthecontest.

(1)听到我没有被列入获奖名单后，我垂下眼睛，努力躲避周围人的注视。【非谓语】

①将…列入名单list...

②努力做某事endeavor

todo

③注视n.gaze

(2)突然，我感到一只手放到了我的肩膀上。是萨拉老师。

(4)我回头，看到一双关心的眼睛。“没关系”，她用温柔的声音安慰我。

①回头