2023年高考英语考前信息必刷卷之写作部分与解析

2023年高考英语考前信息必刷卷之写作部分与解析

（云南、安徽、黑龙江、吉林、山西新高考五省专用）

第四部分写作（共两节，满分40分）

第一节应用文写作（共1小题，满分15分）

66.请根据以下内容提示写一篇短文，阐述水在人们生活中的重要性以及如何解决缺水问题。

1.没有水，人与动植物怎么办？

2.缺水问题越来越严重。原因有人口增长、工农业的发展、污染等。

3.应采取措施解决缺水问题；充分利用；避免污染；净化雨水或海水。

参考词汇：净化purify；缺水watershortage；污染pollute/pollution；采取措施takemeasures；

工业industry

注意：1.短文要包括以上要点；

2.不要逐字逐条翻译，可以适当增加细节；

3.词数120左右。

第二节读后续写（共1小题，满分25分）

67.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

67.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

HillaryHarrislivedwithherhusbandanddaughterinEauClaire,Wisconsin.However,she

wasthinkingofmoving.Notbecauseshedidn'tlikethehouseortheneighborhood,butbecause

ofthehousenextdoor.Firstofall,shehatedthatherfamilyhadtosharethedrivewaywiththe

neighbors,whileshealsodislikedthefactthattenants（租户）cameandwenttothathouseallthe

time.Andwhenacoupleintheir50smovednextdoor,itwasn'tanydifferent.Hillaryfeltthatshe

hadhadenough,soshedidn'teventrytobewarmtowardsthem.

“Herewegoagain,9,shethought.tcNowwhat?”Assheadmitted,shewas"turnedoff'bythe

womannextdoorandthattheywerecoldtoeachother.

“Shewouldnotacceptmeanyhow,“DawnJohnson,thenewneighborrecalled."Iwould

cometogetmymail,shutitandwatchherwalkintothehouse.Buteverythingwasaboutto

changeinanunbelievableway.

Hillaryknewshehadbeenadopted（收养）whenshewasababy,aswellassheknewshehad

severalhalfsiblings（兄弟姐妹）.Infact,shehadalreadymanagedtoreunitewiththreeofthem

throughtheInternet.Buttherewasstillonehalf^siblingthatshecouldn'ttrackdown.Allshe

knewwasthathernamewasDawnJohnson.Shehadfoundthreeotherhal「siblingsonthe

Internet,butshewashavingnoluckwithDawn.Shewasbeginningtothinkthatshe'dneverfind

her.

Whensherealizedhernewneighbor'snamewasDawn,shekindofhadafeelingthatshe

justmightbehersister.Shelearnedthatthewoman'sfirstnamewasDawnandthatshewasfrom

Greenwood-thesametownwhereDawnJohnsonhadlivedaccordingtowhatshehadlearned

fromherfather,WayneClouse.Shetoldherhusband,4CHernameisDawn-whatifshe'smysister?”

Theybothlaughedandsaid,"Noway!Nowaycouldthatbe.”

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

However,shecouldn'thelpthinkingaboutit.

So,whenJohnsonwentoutoftown,Hillarytextedher,askingaboutherfather'sname.

答案解析

第四部分写作（共两节，满分40分）

第一节应用文写作（共1小题，满分15分）

66.Itisdifficulttoimaginewhatlifewouldbelikewithoutwater.Waterisveryimportanttoall

livingthings.Therewouldbenolifewithoutwater.

Watershortagehasbecomeaseriousproblem.Thegrowingpopulationandthedevelopment

ofindustryandagricultureneedmuchmorewater.Waterpollutioninsomeareasalsocontributes

towatershortage.

Therefore,measuresmustbetakentosolvetheproblem.Firstofall,wemustmakegooduse

ofwaterandavoidpollutingit.Inaddition,wecangetusefulwaterthroughpurifyingrainorsea

water.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放作文，请考生根据内容提示写一篇短文，阐述水在人们生活

中的重要性以及如何解决缺水问题。

【详解】1.词汇积累

重要的：important一significant

导致：contributeto一leadto

充分利用：makegooduseofftakefulladvantageof

此夕卜：Inaddition=Besides

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：Waterisveryimportanttoalllivingthings.Therewouldbenolifewithoutwater.

拓展句：Waterisveryimportanttoalllivingthings,withoutwhichtherewouldbenolife.

【点睛】[高分句型1]Itisdifficulttoimaginewhatlifewouldbelikewithoutwater.（运用了what

引导的宾语从句）

[高分句型2]Inaddition,wecangetusefulwaterthroughpurifyingrainorseawater.（运用了动

名词作宾语）

第二节读后续写（共1小题，满分25分）

67.However,shecouldn'thelpthinkingaboutit.Butshecouldn,tfindthecouragetogooverto

theneighbor'shouseandaskwhatherlastnamewasorwhoherbirthfatherwas.Untiloneday,

Hillaryendedupseeingthewoman'slastnameononeoftheirdeliveries.Amazingly,itwas

Johnson!Hillarygotexcited,andsheimmediatelycalledherhusbandtolethimknowshehadjust

foundhersister.Harrisknewshehadtoaskthewomandirectly,butshewasworriedaboutbeing

refused.

So,whenJohnsonwentoutoftown,Hillarytextedher,askingaboutherfather?sname.Indeed,

itwasWayneClouse.Thetwowomenspentthatnighttalkingonthephoneandcrying.Neitherof

themcouldbelievethataftersomanyyearstheyfoundeachotherjustbychance.Thetwowomen

havebeeninseparablesincetheyfoundouttheyaresisters.Theyadviseanyonewhoislookingfor

theirbirthfamilytojustknockontheneighbors5door-youneverknow.Itgoestoshowthatyou

shouldalwaysbekindandrespectfultoyourneighbors.Whoknows,theycouldendupbeinga

long-lostrelative.

【导语】本文以情感发展为线索展开，讲述了作者与邻居关系不和睦，偶然从邻居的名字发

现他们是分别多年的姐妹。

【详解】1.段落续写：

口由第一段首句内容“然而，她总是禁不住想这件事“可知，第一段可描写作者试图寻找细节

证实邻居是否自己分别多年的妹妹。

1由第二段首句内容“因此，当约翰逊出城的时候，希拉里给她发信息，询问她父亲的名字。”

可知，第二段可描写作者与邻居直接沟通，证实她们确实就是分别多年的姐妹关系。

2.续写线索：禁不住想这件事——没有勇气联系——从包裹上看到邻居的姓——发短信直接

联系——证实姐妹关系——再也不能分离——感悟

3.词汇激活

行为类

□直奔：gostraightto/gooverto/headdirectfor

口打电话：call/phone/ring

□建议：advise/suggest

情绪类

□担心：bewoniedabout/befearfulof

□偶然：bychance/byaccident

【点睛】[高分句型1]Butshecouldn'tfindthecouragetogoovertotheneighbor'shouseandask

whatherlastnamewasorwhoherbirthfatherwas.（使用动词不定式作定语）

[高分句型2]Hillarytextedher,askingaboutherfather'sname.（使用现在分词短语做目的状语）

第四部分写作（共两节，满分40分）

第一节应用文写作（共1小题，满分15分）

66.你校英语网站正在开展以“OnlineSafety”为题的讨论。请你写一篇短文发表在该网站上,

内容包括：

1.你对网络安全的认识；

2.在网上保持安全的建议。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

OnlineSafety

第二节读后续写（共1小题，满分25分）

67.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一个完整的短文。

Aschooltalentshowwouldbeheldthreeweekslater.Itoldmybestfriend,Tina,thenews.

Myolderbrotherhadbeenteachingmejuggling（玩杂耍）,andIknewhe'dhelpmewithmyact

fortheshow.Tinaranovertothenoticeboardandreadtheposter.ButwhenTinaaskedmewhat

ouractwasgoingtobe,Ididn'tknowhowtospeakupformyself.Iheldontomybookstightly.

Tinalaughedandpointedtotheposter.Itsaidactscanbeindividuals,partners,orsmallgroups.

Mygrip（紧握）onmybooksnowbecameuncomfortable.IaskedTinaifshewantedtodoanact

withme.Shenodded.Ihesitatedforasecondbeforecontinuing."Tvegotanideaand...“Tina

interruptedmeimmediately.6CYeah,metoo;lefstalkaboutitoverlunch.9,

Duringmath,ItriedtothinkofhowIwouldtellTinathatIwantedtodomyownact.After

all,wewerebestfriends;weshouldbeabletoseeeyetoeyeaboutthis.TheproblemwasTina

alwaystookcharge.Ineverspokeup,andthenIendedupfeelingangry.Idesperatelywantedto

win,butitwasmorethanthat.Iwantedtowinonmyown-withanactthatwasallmine.

Atlunch,Tinastartedtalkingassoonaswesatdown.Shehaditallplannedout.Shesaidwe

couldsingalongtoasonganddoadanceroutine,andhermothercouldmakeuscostumes.

However,Igotupthecourageandtoldheraboutmyjugglingact.Tinasaidshedidn,tthinkshe

couldlearntojuggleinthreeweeksandthatshewouldprobablydroptheballs.Shedidn'twantto

beembarrassed.Ididn'tsayanything,butafterschool,Iranaroundthetrackacoupleoftimes

justtoletoffsteam.

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.续写部分分两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。

Paragraph1:Mygrandmotherdroveovertopickmeup.

Paragraph2:Whenwegothome,Itook12deepbreathsbeforeIcalledTina.

答案解析

第四部分写作（共两节，满分40分）

第一节应用文写作（共1小题，满分15分）

66.OnlineSafety

Nowadays,onlinesafetyhascausedextensiveconcern.Somecriminalsusenetwork

technologytocreatescams,wheremanypeoplearecheated.WiththepopularityoftheInternet,

I'velearnedmuchabouthowtostaysafeonline.

Firstly,weshouldprotectourprivacyandshouldn'tgiveoutourownpersonalinformation

liketheaddressandthephonenumber.Secondly,ifsvitaltoinstallsomesecureantivirus

software.Lastbutnotleast,weshouldbepoliteontheInternetbecausebeingrudeonlinemay

makeusbecometargetsforacyberbully.

【导语】本文是开放性作文。要求考生写一篇以“OnlineSafety”为题的讨论稿，内容包括：

1.你对网络安全的认识；2.在网上保持安全的建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

导致：cause一leadto

广泛的：extensive一wide

担忧：concern—>worry

骗局：scam一trick

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：WiththepopularityoftheInternet,Fvelearnedmuchabouthowtostaysafeonline.

拓展句：AstheInternetisbecomingmoreandmorepopularity,Fvelearnedmuchabouthowto

staysafeonline.

【点睛】【高分句型11Somecriminalsusenetworktechnologytocreatescams,wheremany

peoplearecheated.（由where引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】Lastbutnotleast,weshouldbepoliteontheInternetbecausebeingrudeonline

maymakeusbecometargetsforacyberbully.（由because引导的原因状语从句）

第二节读后续写（共1小题，满分25分）

Paragraph1:

Mygrandmotherdroveovertopickmeup.RealizingIwasunusuallyquiet,sheaskedmewhathad

happened.Italkedaboutthetalentshow.Lookingatmyfacefromthemirrorinthefrontofthecar.

Shesaidgently,6（Honey,yourideasdeservetobeconsideredcarefully.ShealsosuggestedItell

thetruth.Hearingwhatshesaid,Ithoughtaboutitoverandoveragain.Ibegantorealizethatit

wouldn'thurttoletTinaknowwhatIreallywantedifshewasatruefriendofmine.Finally,I

madeupmymindtotalktoTina.

Paragraph2:

Whenwegothome,Itook12deepbreathsbeforeIcalledTina.Withbutterfliesinmystomach,I

waitedfbrhertopickupthereceiver.AfterIgotthrough,ItoldherthatIwasgoingtodomy

jugglingactalone.Muchtomyrelief,shesaidOKafterashortsilence.Beforehangingup,she

alsowishedmesuccess.Thenextday,shedescribedheractandItalkedaboutmypractice.We

encouragedeachotherandexchangedideas.Ifounditnotsohardtospeakupformyself.Onthe

dayofthetalentshow,mywonderfulperformancereceivedthunderousapplausefromthe

audience.Itwasthetalentshowthatboostmyconfidenceandmademeintoabetterpersonby

speakingupbravely

【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，文章通过讲述作者和朋友堤娜对于学校即将举办的才艺秀

两个人的想法不同，因为友情，作者抑制了自己的想法，但是在祖母的启发下，作者终于勇

敢地向堤娜表达了自己的想法后独自表演了节目并取得了成功的故事。

【详解】1.段落续写：

口由第一段首句内容“祖母开车来接我。”可知，第一段可描写作者在祖母的启发下决定和堤

娜澄清自己的想法。

口由第二段首句内容“当我们到家的时候，在给线娜打电话之前我做了十二次深呼吸。“可知，

第二段可描写作者和堤娜提出独自表演并取得了成功的经过。

2.续写线索：作者和祖母表明想法——祖母劝作者坚持自己的想法——鼓起勇气和堤娜提出

独自表演——堤娜同意并祝福了作者一一作者的表演取得了成功——感悟

3.词汇激活

行为类

□.谈论:talkedabout/discussed

□.建议：suggested/advised

□.鼓励：encouraged/inspired

情绪类

口.勇敢地：bravely/courageously

口.温和地：gently/mildly

【点睛】[高分句型1].AfterIgotthrough,ItoldherthatIwasgoingtodomyjugglingactalone.

（由连词after引导的时间状语从句和连接词that引导的宾语从句作told的宾语）

[高分句型2],Itwasthetalentshowthatboostmyconfidenceandmademeintoabetterperson

byspeakingupbravely.（Itwas...that引导的强调句结构强调主语thetalentshow）

第四部分写作（共两节，满分40分）

第一节应用文写作（共1小题，满分15分）

假定你是李华。你的外国朋友Mike即将到你的家乡旅游，请你给他写一封邮件，向他

推荐家乡的民俗文化馆（FolkCultureMuseum）。邮件内容包括：

1.阐明写信事由；

2.介绍文化馆特色；

3.表示欢迎。

注意：

1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

第二节读后续写（共1小题，满分25分）

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

MyhusbandandIenjoyseeinglifethroughtheeyesofourchildren.It'samazingtowatchas

theydiscovertheirworld.

Whilewewereoutdoorslastsummerenjoyingthesunshine,ouroldestdaughter,Kaytlin,

calledmetothedoorway.Beneaththestepswasababyredsquirrel.

Wewatcheditfromadistance,notwantingtodisturbitorscareoffitsmother.Butaftera

longwait-andlookingallaroundourhouseforsignsofanestoramotherwerealizedthetiny

squirrelwaslost.

Shakingterribly,hewasweak,thin,andhungry.Wetriedtofindanexperttohelp,butthe

InlandFisheriesandWildlifewebsiteshowedthattherewerenowildlifeexpertsinourarea.After

somequickresearch,weconcludedthatthebestwaytogivethesquirrelafightingchancewasto

careforhimourselves.Soatriptothelocalstoreformilkandsupplieswasinorder.More

researchtaughtushowmuchtofeedhim,howtoestimatehisage,howandwhentowean（断奶）

him,andthatweshouldlethimgoassoonashecouldsurviveonhisown.

OurdaughtersandItookturnsinfeeding“Squirt."Kaytlintookonthemostresponsibility.

Shetaughthimtoeatfromabottle,andshewokeinthenightforhisfeeds.

Toourrelief,Squirtsoonbecamehealthyandstrong.Withinafewweekshebecamemore

active.Hewouldchatter（吱吱叫）fbrhisnextmeal,playfullygoaroundthegirls,andliedownon

themforsleep.Itwasn'tlongbeforehewasweanedontosolidfoodandreintroducedtothewild.

Hisfirstfewvisitstothegreatoutdoorswerefunny.Justlikeachild,hewouldplayinthe

grasssomeandthenrunbacktoKaytlinforsafety.Soonshehadhimclimbingtreesandfinding

nestmaterial.

注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Onedayinthetrees,Squirtmetupwithafamilyofgraysquirrels.

Onenight,Squirtdidn'tcomebacktoourhouseanditrainedhard.

答案解析

第四部分写作（共两节，满分40分）

第一节应用文写作（共1小题，满分15分）

DearMike,

Howiseverythinggoing?Knowingthatyouaregoingtotravelinmyhometown,Iam

writingtorecommendthelocalFolkCultureMuseum.

Thereisalottodointhemuseum.First,whatwillimpressyoumostisthatavarietyof

culturalhandicraftssuchasmusicalinstruments,farmingtoolsandsoonareexhibitedindifferent

halls.Here,youcanbeinvolvedinmakingcraftslikepaperumbrellasandChineseknots.Whafs

more,withthehelpoftheguideswhoisprofessional,youwillhaveabetterunderstandingofthe

historyanddevelopmentofourfolkculture.

You'rewarmlywelcometovisitthemuseum.I'msureyou'llimmerseyourselfinthefolk

cultureandfallinlovewithit.

Yours,

LiHua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外国朋友Mike写一封邮件，向他推荐家乡

的民俗文化馆

【详解】1.词汇积累

介绍：recommend—introduce

各种各样的：avarietyof^-allkindsof

展示：exhibit-show

涉及：beinvolvedin一relateto

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：Knowingthatyouaregoingtotravelinmyhometown,Iamwritingtorecommendthelocal

FolkCultureMuseum.

拓展句：BecauseIknowyouaregoingtotravelinmyhometown,Iamwritingtorecommendthe

localFolkCultureMuseum.

【点睛】【高分句型1】First,whatwillimpressyoumostisthatavarietyofculturalhandicrafts

suchasmusicalinstruments,farmingtoolsandsoonareexhibitedindifferenthalls.（运用了what

引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句）

【高分句型2】What'smore,withthehelpoftheguideswhoisprofessional,youwillhavea

betterunderstandingofthehistoryanddevelopmentofourfolkculture.（运用了who弓|导的定语

从句）

第二节读后续写（共1小题，满分25分）

Onedayinthetrees,Squirtmetupwithafamilyofgraysquirrels.Butthefamilywasnonetoo

happyabouthisvisit.Theyscoldedandswattedathim.AtfirstSquirtwassounhappythathe

avoidedthem.Andthenhequicklylearnedsomesocialskills.Hewouldtakesomesnackstomeet

them.Forseveraldaysheplayedalldayinthetreessurroundingourhousebutcamedownat

bedtime.

Onenight,Squirtdidn'tcomebacktoourhouseanditrainedhard.Ourgirlsfretted.They

wantedtoseekSquirt.Wepreventedthembecauseitwastoodangerous.Butwhenthesunrose

thenextday,therewasSquirt,beggingforfood.Andthatremainedthepatternforweeks.The

experiencewasentertainingandheartwarmingforourfamily.Inthewildandsomewhatsilly

momentsofraisinganorphanedbabysquirrel,ourchildrenlearnedtovalueandappreciatelife.

【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者一家一天看到一只幼小的迷路的松鼠，他们决

定收养它，看着这只小松鼠从瘦弱幼小，慢慢变的健康活泼，让作者一家感觉既有趣又温暖。

【详解】1.段落续写：

口由第一段首句内容“一天，在树林里，Squirt遇到了一个灰色松鼠家庭。”可知，第一段可

描写Squirt遇到这一家灰松鼠的情况，Squirt如何与灰松鼠一家交往。

口由第二段首句内容“一天晚上，Squirt没有回到我们家，下起了大雨。可知，第二段可描

写作者一家的担心，和最后的结果，以及作者的感悟。

2.续写线索：遇到灰松鼠——与灰松鼠一家交往——没有回家，担心它——感悟

3.词汇激活

行为类

□责骂：scold/blame/rebuke

□拍打：swat/slap/hit

□寻找：seek/find/lookfor/searchfor

□阻止：prevent/putastopto/headoff

情绪类

口高兴的：happy/delighted

□有趣的：entertaining/delightful/engrossing

【点睛】[高分句型l]AtfirstSquirtwassounhappythatheavoidedthem.（so...that引导的结果

状语从句）

[高分句型2]Butwhenthesunrosethenextday,therewasSquirt,beggingforfbod.（when弓|导的

时间状语从句和现在分词作状语）

第四部分写作（共两节，满分40分）

第一节应用文写作（共1小题，满分15分）

66.新学期伊始，学校英语俱乐部举行主题为“我家的年夜饭''的征文活动。请你写一篇短文

参赛，内容包括：

1.年夜坂的意义；2.年夜坂前后的活动。

注意：

1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

MyFamily'sReunionDinner

第二节读后续写（共1小题，满分25分）

67.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Bobwasashortchildwhopreferredindoortooutdooractivities.Hewasmild-manneredand

mostlykepttohimself.Sittinginthecomeroftheclass,hewasverymuchaloner.

Atthebeginningofthesemester,Bobhadanewclassmate,Alex,whohadjustreturnedto

England.AlexwasassignedaseatnexttoBob.Tohissurprise,withinweeks,hebecamegood

friendswithAlexeventhoughtheywerepolesapartinpersonality.Alexwaspopular,outspoken

andartistic.4tAlexisallthatIwanttobe,“BobthoughttohimselfHebeganlisteningtothemusic

Alexlistenedtoandhavingsimilarhaircut.Heevenquithisdramaclubandstartedplayingthe

onlinegamesthatAlexplayed.Heseemedtohavebeenoutofhisloneliness.

ItwasnotlongbeforeBobwasintroducedtoAlex's"cool"friends.Hetoldhimselfthathe

wouldtryallmeanstobepartofthegroup.Hewouldfollowthemtothefootballgamesandjoin

theartclubafterschoolsohecouldspendmoretimehangingoutwiththem.Bobfollowedthem

aroundlaughingwhentheytoldjokes,agreeingwhentheyhadopinions-mostenthusiasticallyat

theoneshedisagreedwith.Hedidnotdaretodifferinopinionsashewouldnotwantthemto

thinkbadlyofhim.Thiscontinuedforseveralmonths.Atlast,Bobfeltrelievedthathehadfinally

fittedin.

Oneday,BoboverheardAlexandhiscoolfriendstalking.ctBobissuchaloser,oneboy

commentedinaplayfultone.46Hejustfollowsyouaroundtryingtobeyou.Hecopiesyou;he

doesnothaveapersonalityofhisown!^^anotherboyexclaimed.Alexlaughed,tomakematters

worse,headded,t4Thatfellowwearsmeout.Iwishhewouldleavemealone.Hethinksweare

bestfriends.Athoroughfbol!”

注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph1:

Bobstoodstilltothegroundandcouldnotbelievehisears.

Paragraph2:

Bobdecidedtochangehimselfafterhearinghismotherswords.

答案解析

第四部分写作（共两节，满分40分）

第一节应用文写作（共1小题，满分15分）

66.Myfamily'sreuniondinner

HavingreuniondinnerisoneofthemostsignificantcustomsduringtheSpringFestival,

whichsymbolizesthereuniontimeforpeopletosaygoodbyetotheoldandwelcometheNew

Yearwithfullexpectation.Myfamily'sreuniondinneralwaysbringsbackbeautifulmemoriesto

me.

Unlikeinpreviousyears,myfamiliesfinallygatheredtogetheronLunarNewYear'sEvethis

year!Onthatday,whileeagerlywaitingforthereturnofmycousins,Ihelpedmyparentsto

preparethedinner.Iwenttothesupermarkettobuytheingredientsandmadesomedumplings.

Afterthedinner,weexcitedlysetoffthefireworks,watchedtheSpringFestivalGalaandhappily

welcomedtheNewYeartogether.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇主题为“我家的年夜饭''的短文，参加学

校英语俱乐部的征文活动。

【详解】1.词汇积累

有重大意义的：significant一important/meaningful

代表，象征：symbolize一represent

期待：expectation—>anticipation

最终：finally—>eventually

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Unlikeinpreviousyears,myfamiliesfinallygatheredtogetheronLunarNewYear'sEve

thisyear!

拓展句：Whatmadeitdifferentfrompreviousyearswasthatmyfamiliesfinallygatheredtogether

onLunarNewYear'sEvethisyear!

【点睛】[高分句型1]Havingreuniondinnerisoneofthemostsignificantcustomsduringthe

SpringFestival,whichsymbolizesthereuniontimeforpeopletosaygoodbyetotheoldand

welcometheNewYearwithfullexpectation.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2]Onthatday,whileeagerlywaitingforthereturnofmycousins,Ihelpedmyparents

topreparethedinner.（运用了省略的时间状语从句）

第二节读后续写（共1小题，满分25分）

67.参考范文：

Paragraph1:

Bobstoodstilltothegroundandcouldnotbelievehisears.Tremblingandsobbing,he

collapsedontheground,feelingaloneandbetrayed.Hehadnochoicebuttocryallthewayback

home.Seeinghismother,hecouldn'tconcealhissorrow,pouringtheincidentouttoher,who

wouldalwaysbethereforhimwheneverhefeltdown.Strokinghertremblingboy,themothersaid

gently,"Justbeyourself,Son!Peoplewilllikeyouforwhoyouare."Bobhadheardtheremarksa

milliontimesbefore,yethenevertrulygotthepoint.Suddenly,itallclicked.

Paragraph2:

Bobdecidedtochangehimselfafterhearinghismotherswords.Heboughtanewschoolbag

andchoseahaircuthefancied.Hedroppedhisartclassandjoinedthedramaclub.Hemadenew

friendswholikedhimfbrwhohewas.Herediscoveredhimself.Ifhehadnotbeengiventhe

chance,hemighthavebeentooconcernedwith“fittingin“desperatelytoexperiencesomeofthe

"best"timesofhislife.Itdawnedonhimthatdespitethepainhefeltthatday,itwasagiftthey

hadgivenhim,whichtaughthimtobehimself.

【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了性格不合群的Bob和新来的同学Alex成为了朋友，

Bob努力模仿和迎合Alex,本以为用自己的主动赢得了Alex的友谊，结果有一天，Bob无

意中听到Alex和他的朋友们在谈论“Bob真是个失败者'“'是个十足的傻瓜

【详解】1.段落续写：

口由第一段首句内容“Bob一动不动地站在那里，简直不敢相信自己的耳朵''可知，第一段可

描写Bob的反应并将此事告诉了妈妈，妈妈鼓励他做自己。

口由第二段首句内容“Bob听了妈妈的话后决定改变自己''可知，第二段可描写Bob的改变过

程和感悟。

2.续写线索：

哭泣一妈妈鼓励一恍然大悟一做出改变一感悟

3.词汇激活

行为类

口哭泣：cry/weep

□选择：choose/select

□关心：beconcernedwith/careabout

情绪类

□悲伤：sorrow/sadness

□沮丧：down/depressed

【点睛】[高分句型1]Seeinghismother,hecouldn'tconcealhissorrow,pouringtheincidentout

toher,whowouldalwaysbethereforhimwheneverhefeltdown.（由关系代词who弓|导非限制

性定语从句）

[高分句型2]Itdawnedonhimthatdespitethepainhefeltthatday,itwasagifttheyhadgiven

him,whichtaughthimtobehimself,（that引导主语从句和which引导非限制性定语从句）

第四部分写作（共两节，满分40分）

第一节应用文写作（共1小题，满分15分）

66.新华中学近期组织了校园劳动周（CampusLaborWeek）活动。假定你是学校英语报记者。

请写一篇简短的英文报道。内容包括：

1.活动的时间与地点；

2.活动的过程；

3.你的感想。

注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

第二节读后续写（共1小题，满分25分）

67.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Imustadmit,Ihaven'talwayslikedanimals.Infact,Idistrustedthemgreatlywhilegrowing

up,andIstillfeartheonesIdon'tknowpersonally.Whatsetmybeliefsinstonewasbeing

attacked-notoncebutmanytimes,includingthesummeraftersecondgradewhenIwasbittenby

arabbit.Then,whenIwasnineandridingmydirtbikedowntheroad,alargedogchargedmeand

triedtobitemyankle.Afterallthosenegativeexperiences,therewasonethingIknewforsure:

Allcreatures,greatandsmall,werenofriendsofmine.

AftercollegeinCalifornia,IreturnedtolivethesinglelifeinLasVega.ThenImetLisa.In

notimeatall,wefellinlove,marriedandmovedintoanewhouse.Despitemyavoidanceof

animals,LisahadadogcalledBailey.Baileydidn'tlikeme,buthetoleratedmyexistenceoncehe

realizedIwasn'tgoinganywhere.

Thingschangedasspringcame.Wewelcomedanewmemberofourfamily:oursonEvan.

OneeveningEvangrabbedholdofthedog'stail.Theirritateddogpausedandturnedtolookat

hisstucktailbutwaitedpatientlyuntilbeingreleased.StillthestoriesI'dheardofanimals

attackingbabiesworriesme.

Thenmyworstfearoccurred.Isatonthecouch（沙发）readingafteralongdaywhilemy

wifeworkedatthedining-roomtablepayingthebills.IsawEvancrawlacrossthefamily-room

carpetashemadehiswaybehindthecouch.Oneminute,allwasquietandthenBaileyenteredthe

roomandheadedtowhereEvanhadcrawled.InearlyjumpedoutofmyskinwhenIheardthe

dogstartafearfulbarkingbehindme.

注意：

L续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Throwingthebookaway,Irushedaroundthecouchwithgreatfear.

Havingwitnessedourdogkillingascorpion（蝎子）andsavingmyson,Iwasspeechless.

第四部分写作（共两节，满分40分）

第一节应用文写作（共1小题，满分15分）

66.Onepossibleversion:

Aimingtoimprovestudents?physicalquality,ourschoollaunchedanactivitythemed

“CampusLaborWeek”.ItwasheldfromMay7thto11thinourschool.Somelecturesconcerning

laborskillsweregivenonthefirstday,whichbenefitedusalot.Cuttingtreesandwatering

flowerswereattractionstoSenioron