2024届高考英语作文复习专项读后续写：雀斑烦恼任务单素材

读后续写：雀斑烦恼（教师版）

一,＞原文

WhenIwasakidabouttwelveyearsold,Ihadalotoffreckles（雀斑）.Ihadreachedthe

agewhenIhadbeguntoreallylookatmyselfinthemirror,andIwasdisappointed.

Apparentlymymotherwastoo,becausesometimesshe'dlookatmeandshakeherhead.

1hadacousinwhosenamewasJanetteElizabeth.Shelookedexactlylikehername

sounds.Shehadaflawlesspeaches-and-creamcomplexion（肤色）.Icouldn'thelp

comparingmyselfwithherandthinkingthatmylifewouldbealotdifferentifIhadbeautiful

skintoo.

Andthen,inthebackpagesofJanetteElizabeth'smagazine,Ifoundtheanswer:an

advertisementforfreckle-removercream.IknewthatIcouldafforditifIsavedmymoney,

andIdid.Theadassuredmethattheproductwouldworkwell.ForthreeweeksIwenttothe

mailboxeverydaypreciselyatthetimethemailwasdelivered.Iknewthatifsomeoneelsein

myfamilygotthemail,Iwouldneverheartheendofit.Therewasnowaythattheywould

letmeopentheboxinprivate.

Threeweekslater,mypackagefinallycame.Iwenttomyroomwithit,satontheedge

ofmybed,andopenedit.IwassurethatIwaslookingatamiracle.WhenIgotupthenext

morning,Iappliedthecreamallovermybody.ThenItookmyhoeandwentwithmy

brotherandcousinstohoethefield,whereIgotridofsometigerlilies（虎尾百合），seemingly

uglywithblackandsmallspots.

Thesunwassostrongthatevenmyfacesstartedtoburn.Bytheendoftheday,whenI

camebacktothehouse,myfamily,knowingnothingaboutthefreckle-removercream,began

tosaythingslike,'Tveneverseenyouwiththatmanyfrecklesbefore.nWhenIsawmyselfin

themirror,Idissolvedintotearsandhidinthebathroom.

Paragraph1:Mymothercalledmetothedinnertable,butIignoredher.

Paragraph2;A-erwhatseemedacemury,/heardagentleknockonmybedroom.

二、分句练习

Paral:Mymothercalledmetothedinnertable,butIignoredher.

(1)她没有得到我的任何回应，就焦急地加快脚步向浴室走去，检查我的情况。【非谓

语】

①收到某人的回应receive

responsefromsbNotreceivinganyresponsefromme,she

②加快步伐去…quickenone'squickenedherpaceanxiouslytothebathroom,

paceto...checkingonme.

③检查…checkon...

(2)看到我安然无恙，她松了一口气，问我发生了什么事。

①安然无恙inawholeskinSeeingmeinawholeskin,shebreathedasighof

②松了一口气breathasighofreliefandaskedmewhatwasgoingon.

relief

(3)她的话像一记重击，把我抛进更深的悲伤中。

①一记重锤ahammerblowHerwordsseemedlikeahammerblow,

②把…扔进…tosssbinto...tossingmeintodeepersorrow.

(4)我受伤地说，我用了和伊丽莎白一样的祛斑霜，但脸上的雀斑却越来越多。

①受伤地说utterininjuredIutteredininjuredtonesthatIappliedthesame

tonesfreckle-removercreamasElizabeth's,butfreckles

②涂applysthappearedonmyfacemoreandmore.

(5)知道我的情况后，她安慰我说:“十几岁的女孩脸上的雀斑比平时多是正常的。我在

你这么大的时候也是这样，亲爱的！”

Knowingmysituation,shecomfortedme,“Itisnormalthat

①也so+...+sbteengirlshavemorefrecklesontheirfacesthanusual.SodoI

atyourtime,honey!n

(6)我情绪低落，对妈妈的话充耳不闻，情绪激动地冲进卧室。

①情绪低落bedownin

spirits

Downinspirits,Iturnedadeafeartowhatmy

②对…充耳不闻turnadeafearto

momsaid,trottingtowardsmybedroom

sth

hysterically.

③冲向trot

towards...

Para2:Afterwhatseemedacentury,Iheardagentleknockonmybedroom.

(1)当我打开门时，我看到美丽的伊丽莎白手里拿着一束虎百合。

①看到sthcomeintoone'sWhenIopenedthedoor,beautifulElizabethcame

sightintomysightwithabunchoftigerliliesinherhand.

(2)她发现我对她的到来无动于衷，就把百合花递给我，并为我的“意外”道歉。

①对…冷漠beindifferentto/beFindingmeindifferenttohercoming,she

unconcernedabouthandedtheliliestomeandapologizedfor

②把某物递给某人handsthtosbmyHaccidentn.

(3)伊丽莎白接下来说的话使我吃惊。用她的话来说，我第一次知道她羡慕我在锄地

上的努力，而她却过分注重自己的外表。

①羡慕某人某事admiresbforAndwhatElizabethsaidnextsurprisedme.In

sthherwords,Ifirstknewthatsheadmiredmefor

②专心致志的努力dedicatedmydedicatedendeavorsinhoeingwhileshepaid

endeavorsexcessiveattentiontoherappearance.

③过度的excessive

/ik'sesiv/

(4)这时，我终于发现自己身上有一些闪光点，就像那些虎百合一样。

①闪光点starryAtthismoment,Ifinallyfoundthereexistedsomestarrypoints

pointsinme,justlikethosetigerlilies.

(5)它们虽然有难看的“雀斑”，但却有着不逊于其他花的香气。

①点缀着…bedottedwith

Thoughdottedwithugly''freckles'',they

②香气aroma/o'roumo/

hadanaromawhichwasnotinferiorto

③不如…beinferior

otherflowers.

/in'flari9（r）/to

三、最终自测

Jordannodded,(iIletheroutlastnight.

我几乎用颤抖的声音吼了起来。“她会冻死的。出去找她！"Mymothercalledmetothe

dinnertable,butIignoredher.她没有得到我的任何回应，就焦急地加快脚步向浴室走去,

检查我的情况。看到我安然无恙，她松了一口气，问我发生了什么事。她的话像一记重

击，把我抛进更深的悲伤中。我受伤地说，我用了和伊丽莎白一样的祛斑霜，但脸上的

雀斑却越来越多。知道我的情况后，她安慰我说:“十几岁的女孩脸上的雀斑比平时多是

正常的。我在你这么大的时候也是这样，亲爱的！我情绪低落，对妈妈的话充耳不闻，

情绪激动地冲进卧室。

Afterwhatseemedacentury,Iheardagentleknockonmybedroom.

当我打开门时，我看到美丽的伊丽莎白手里拿着一束虎百合。她发现我对她的到来

无动于衷，就把百合花递给我，并为我的“意外”道歉。伊丽莎白接下来说的话使我吃惊。

用她的话来说，我第一次知道她羡慕我在锄地上的努力，而她却过分注重自己的外表。

这时，我终于发现自己身上有一些闪光点，就像那些虎百合一样。它们虽然有难看的“雀

斑”，但却有着不逊于其他花的香气。

四、最终范文

Paral:Mymothercalledmetothedinnertable,but/ignoredher.

Notreceivinganyresponsefromme,shequickenedherpaceanxiouslytothebathroom,

checkingonme.Seeingmeinawholeskin,shebreathedasighofreliefandaskedmewhat

wasgoingon.Herwordsseemedlikeahammerblow,tossingmeintodeepersorrow.I

utteredininjuredtonesthatIappliedthesamefreckle-removercreamasElizabeth's,but

frecklesappearedonmyfacemoreandmore.Knowingmysituation,shecomfortedme,"Itis

normalthatteengirlshavemorefrecklesontheirfacesthanusual.SodoIatyourtime,

honey!"Downinspirits,Iturnedadeafeartowhatmymomsaid,trottingtowardsmy

bedroomhysterically.

Pcmi2:whatseemedacentury,Iheardagentleknockonmybedroom.

WhenIopenedthedoor,beautifulElizabethcameintomysightwithabunchoftiger

liliesinherhand.Findingmeindifferenttohercoming,shehandedtheliliestomeand

apologizedformy"accident".AndwhatElizabethsaidnextsurprisedme.Inherwords,Ifirst

knewthatsheadmiredmeformydedicatedendeavorsinhoeingwhileshepaidexcessive

attentiontoherappearance.Atthismoment,Ifinallyfoundthereexistedsomestarrypointsin

me,justlikethosetigerlilies.Thoughdottedwithugly"freckles",theyhadanaromawhich

wasnotinferiortootherflowers.

雀斑烦恼（学生版）

一,＞原文

WhenIwasakidabouttwelveyearsold,Ihadalotoffreckles（雀斑）.Ihadreachedthe

agewhenIhadbeguntoreallylookatmyselfinthemirror,andIwasdisappointed.

Apparentlymymotherwastoo,becausesometimesshe'dlookatmeandshakeherhead.

1hadacousinwhosenamewasJanetteElizabeth.Shelookedexactlylikehername

sounds.Shehadaflawlesspeaches-and-creamcomplexion（肤色）.Icouldn'thelp

comparingmyselfwithherandthinkingthatmylifewouldbealotdifferentifIhadbeautiful

skintoo.

Andthen,inthebackpagesofJanetteElizabeth'smagazine,Ifoundtheanswer:an

advertisementforfreckle-removercream.IknewthatIcouldafforditifIsavedmymoney,

andIdid.Theadassuredmethattheproductwouldworkwell.ForthreeweeksIwenttothe

mailboxeverydaypreciselyatthetimethemailwasdelivered.Iknewthatifsomeoneelsein

myfamilygotthemail,Iwouldneverheartheendofit.Therewasnowaythattheywould

letmeopentheboxinprivate.

Threeweekslater,mypackagefinallycame.Iwenttomyroomwithit,satontheedge

ofmybed,andopenedit.IwassurethatIwaslookingatamiracle.WhenIgotupthenext

morning,Iappliedthecreamallovermybody.ThenItookmyhoeandwentwithmy

brotherandcousinstohoethefield,whereIgotridofsometigerlilies（虎尾百合），seemingly

uglywithblackandsmallspots.

Thesunwassostrongthatevenmyfacesstartedtoburn.Bytheendoftheday,whenI

camebacktothehouse,myfamily,knowingnothingaboutthefreckle-removercream,began

tosaythingslike,'Tveneverseenyouwiththatmanyfrecklesbefore."WhenIsawmyselfin

themirror,Idissolvedintotearsandhidinthebathroom.

Paragraph1:Mymothercalledmetothedinnertable,butIignoredher.

Paragraph2;Afterwhatseemedacentury,Iheardagentleknockonmybedroom.

二、分句练习

Paral:Mymothercalledmetothedinnertable,butIignoredher.

(1)她没有得到我的任何回应，就焦急地加快脚步向浴室走去，检查我的情况。【非谓

语】

①收到某人的回应receiveresponse

fromsb

②加快步伐去…quickenone'space

to...

③检查…checkon...

(2)看到我安然无恙，她松了一口气，问我发生了什么事。

①安然无恙inawholeskin

②松了一口气breathasighof

relief

(3)她的话像一记重击，把我抛进更深的悲伤中。

①一记重锤ahammerblow

②把…扔进…tosssbinto...

(4)我受伤地说，我用了和伊丽莎白一样的祛斑霜，但脸上的雀斑却越来越多。

①受伤地说utterininjuredtones

②涂applysth

(5)知道我的情况后，她安慰我说:“十几岁的女孩脸上的雀斑比平时多是正常的。我在

你这么大的时候也是这样，亲爱的！”

①也so+...+sb

(6)我情绪低落，对妈妈的话充耳不闻，情绪激动地冲进卧室。

①情绪低落bedownin

spirits

②对…充耳不闻turnadeafearto

sth

③冲向trottowards...

Para2:Afterwhatseemedacentury,Iheardagentleknockonniybedroom.

(1)当我打开门时，我看到美丽的伊丽莎白手里拿着一束虎百合。

①看至〔Jsthcomeintoone'ssight

(2)她发现我对她的到来无动于衷，就把百合花递给我，并为我的“意外”道歉。

①对…冷漠

beindifferentto/beunconcernedabou