高分习作进阶

二、高分习作进阶一、表示时间顺序的过渡词语二、表示转折关系的过渡词语三、表示因果关系的过渡词语四、表示递进关系的过渡词语五、表示列举事实的过渡性词语六、表示总结的过渡性词语

高分习作不仅要求考生能够使用较为丰富的语法结构和词汇，更要学会准确运用各类衔接词衔接句子以及段落，确保语句连贯，逻辑清晰。写作中常用的过渡词语主要分为以下几类：一、表示时间顺序的过渡词语

firstly,

first

of

all,

then,

later,

in

the

end,

finally,

at

last,

last

but

not

least,

after

that,

since

then,

meanwhile,

at

the

same

time,

soon,

next,

all

of

a

sudden,

at

the

weekend等。例：Last

Sunday,

when

my

parents

went

out

shopping,

I

put

away

all

the

books,

newspapers

and

other

things

in

the

rooms

and

put

them

in

place.

Then/Later

I

wiped

the

dust

off

all

the

furniture.

After

that/At

last/Finally,

I

swept

and

mopped

the

floors.【专项训练】普通习作高分习作

As

a

student,

I

am

able

to

attend

the

activities

on

weekends.

And

it’s

easy

for

me

to

get

to

the

center.

I

also

love

animals

and

I

am

willing

to

help

them.

I

know

a

little

about

medical

knowledge.

1.______________________（时间顺序）,

as

a

student,

I

am

able

to

attend

the

activities

on

weekends.

And

it’s

easy

for

me

to

get

to

the

center.

2.___________（时间顺序）,

I

love

animals

and

I

am

willing

to

help

them.

3._________________________________（时间顺序）,

I

know

a

little

about

medical

knowledge.

Firstly/To

begin

withSecondlyBesides/At

last/In

the

end/Finally二、表示转折关系的过渡词语

but,

yet,

however,

while,

otherwise,

on

the

contrary,

on

the

other

hand,

except

for,

instead等。例：Online

shopping

is

becoming

more

and

more

convenient.

On

the

other

hand/However/On

the

contrary,

it

also

has

many

disadvantages.【专项训练】普通习作高分习作

A

few

months

ago,

my

grandma

went

to

do

square

dancing

after

supper.

She

likes

square

dancing.

Now,

she

is

much

healthier

than

before.

She

also

has

a

lot

of

friends.

But

some

neighbors

have

a

complaint

against

the

people

who

do

square

dancing.

A

few

months

ago,

my

grandma

went

to

do

square

dancing

after

supper.

1.____________（时间顺序）,

she

has

fallen

in

love

with

square

dancing.

Now,

she

is

much

healthier

than

before.

2._______________（递进关系）,

she

has

a

lot

of

friends.

3.__________________________（转折关系）,

some

neighbors

have

a

complaint

against

the

people

who

do

square

dancing.

Since

thenWhat’s

moreHowever/On

the

contrary三、表示因果关系的过渡词语

because,

as,

since,

for,

thanks

to,

due

to,

as

a

result

of,

so,

therefore,

as

a

result等。例：As

a

result

of

his

carelessness,

the

whole

project

had

to

be

put

off

at

least

one

month.【专项训练】普通习作高分习作

I

was

poor

in

English

when

I

was

in

Grade

Seven.

I

didn’t

know

how

to

learn

English

well.

My

English

teacher

helped

me

a

lot

and

I

have

made

much

progress

in

English.

IwaspoorinEnglishwhenIwasinGradeSeven.1.______________（时间衔接词）,Ididn’tknowhowtolearnEnglishwell.2._________________________________________________________________（因果关系）,IhavemademuchprogressinEnglish.At

that

timeThanks

to

my

English

teacher/With

the

help

of

my

English

teacher四、表示递进关系的过渡词语

what’s

more,

furthermore,

moreover,

besides,

what’s

worse,

on

the

one

hand…on

the

other

hand…,

for

one

thing…for

another

thing…等。例：Too

much

blue

light

is

harmful

to

your

eyes.

What’s

more,

it

will

also

lead

to

a

sleepless

night.【专项训练】普通习作高分习作

People

who

like

talent

shows

think

it’s

relaxing

for

them

to

watch

those

shows

after

tiring

study

or

work.

The

shows

not

only

enrich

people’s

life,

but

provide

chances

for

those

who

want

to

achieve

their

dreams.

Some

excellent

performers

can

be

found

in

those

shows.

Peoplewholiketalentshowsthinkit’srelaxingforthemtowatchthoseshowsaftertiringstudyorwork.1.___________________（递进关系）,theshowsnotonlyenrichpeople’slife,butprovidechancesforthosewhowanttoachievetheirdreams.2.____________________（递进关系）,someexcellentperformerscanbefoundinthoseshows.On

the

one

handOn

the

other

hand五、表示列举事实的过渡性词语

such

as,

for

example/instance,

take…for

example,

that

is

to

say,

as

follows,

in

other

words等。例1：

First,

you

can

take

an

active

part

in

sports.

For

example,

you

can

go

swimming

and

skating.例2：When

the

vacation

is

coming,

you

can

join

in

all

kinds

of

activities,

such

as

dancing,

singing

and

the

summer

camp

or

winter

camp.普通习作高分习作

Try

to

eat

more

fruit

and

vegetables

every

day.

Don’t

eat

junk

food

too

often.

Also,

you

should

take

exercise

regularly.

You

can

take

up

a

ball

game

as

a

hobby.

In

order

to

make

your

school

life

colorful,

I

suggest

you

take

part

in

all

kinds

of

activities.

You

can

join

some

clubs

and

do

some

volunteer

work.

1._________（时间顺序）,

try

to

eat

more

fruit

and

vegetables

every

day.

Don’t

eat

junk

food

too

often.

Also,

you

should

take

exercise

regularly,

2.__________（列举）

taking

up

a

ball

game

as

a

hobby.

3.___________（时间顺序）,

in

order

to

make

your

school

life

colorful,

I

suggest

you

take

part

in

all

kinds

of

activities,

4.__________（列举）

joining

some

clubs

and

doing

some

volunteer

work.Firstlysuch

asSecondlysuch

as六、表示总结的过渡性词语

in

short,

in

brief,

in

conclusion,

in

a/one

word,

all

in

all,

on

the

whole,

in

general等。例：In

a

word,

sharing

is

not

only

interesting

but

also

helpful

and

it

makes

us

grow

up.

We

can

learn

a

lot

from

sharing

and

enjoy

our

lives

more.【专项训练】普通习作高分习作

Most

students

go

to

school

by

bike

or

on

foot.

We

could

make

less

pollution

in

this

way.

We

can

take

some

exercises

on

the

way

to

school.

It

is

also

good

for

our

health.

I

think

it

is

a

good

way

to

go

to

school

by

bike

or

on

foot.

Most

students

go

to

school

by

bike

or

on

foot.

1._____________（时间顺序）,

we

could

make

less

pollution

in

this

way.

2._________（时间顺序）,

we

can

take

some

exercises

on

the

way

to

school.

It

is

also

good

for

our

health.

3.____________（总结）,

I

think

it

is

a

good

way

to

go

to

school

by

bike

or

on

foot.First

of

allSecondIn

a

word【综合训练】一、

阅读短文，选择恰当的过渡词语填空。第1篇what’s

more,

however,

in

short,

first

of

all,

besides

With

the

development

of

the

Internet,

smart

phones

are

widely

used

among

people.

Phubbers（低头族）

can

be

seen

here

and

there.

1.___________,

it

is

bad

for

their

daily

life.

2._____________,

smart

phones

have

effects

on

the

relationship

with

family

and

friends.

3._________,

if

phubbers

concentrate

on

playing

with

smart

phones,

traffic

accidents

will

happen

easily.

4._______________,

if

phubbers

play

with

phones

too

much,

it

will

do

harm

to

health

and

it

is

also

bad

for

study

or

work.

5.__________,

phubbers

should

make

good

use

of

smartphones

to

open

their

eyes

and

enrich

their

know-ledge.

They

should

communicate

more

often

through

face-to-face

conversations

rather

than

chatting

online.In

shortHoweverFirst

of

allBesidesWhat’s

more第2篇besides,

first

of

all,

at

last,

in

a

wordHello

Lisa,

How

is

it

going?

It’s

time

for

me

to

leave

school.

You

ask

me

what

I

can

do

for

my

school.

Here

are

my

plans

I’d

like

to

share

with

you.

1._____________,

I

plan

to

write

a

letter

to

the

younger

schoolmates,

telling

them

to

value

the

people

around

and

get

along

well

with

them.

2._________,

I

will

share

my

success

and

failure

in

study,

too.

3._________,

I

will

give

some

suggestions

on

how

to

make

our

school

better.

More

trees

and

flowers

must

be

planted.

More

after-class

activities

should

be

organized

so

that

our

schoolmates

can

join

in

them

to

relax.

4.____________,

I

hope

all

of

our

younger

schoolmates

can

live

and

study

happily

in

our

school.Li

MingIn

a

wordFirst

of

allBesidesAt

last第3篇what’s

more,

as

far

as

I

am

concerned,

first,

meanwhile,

second,

in

a

wordSay

No

to

Junk

Food

Nowadays,

more

and

more

attention

has

been

paid

to

food

safety

and

health.

1.___________________________,

we

should

say

no

to

junk

food.

There

is

no

doubt

that

junk

food

is

delicious

and

attractive,

but

it

surely

does

harm

to

our

bodies.

2._____________,

the

over-packaging

leads

to

more

rubbish.As

far

as

I

am

concernedMeanwhile

Togetawayfromjunkfood,weshouldfocusonhowtokeepahealthylifestyle.Therearemanytipstofollow.3._______,eatregularly.Eatthreemealsadayontime.Eatasfewsnacksorlessfastfoodaspossible.4._________,takemorefruitandvegetableswhichcanprovidethenutritionweneed.5._______________,domoreoutdooractivities.Aslongasyouarebusywithsomethinginteresting,youwillmoreprobablygetawayfromjunkfood.6.____________,ahealthydietwithlessjunkfoodcanhelpmakeusstrongerandstronger.What’s

moreIn

a

wordFirstSecond二、运用高分句型和恰当的衔接词，将下列普通习作改写成高分习作Group

1普通习作高分习作Dear

Mr.

Li,

My

favorite

class

is

an

open

and

free

class

where

I

can

learn

by

myself

and

discuss

in

groups,

which

is

good

for

my

development,

I

think.

I

still

remember

an

unforgettable

experience

in

my

maths

class.

Dear

Mr.

Li,

My

favorite

class

is

an

open

and

free

class

where

I

can

learn

by

myself

and

discuss

in

groups,

which

is

good

for

my

development,

I

think.

I

still

remember

an

unforgettable

experience

in

my

maths

class.

续表普通习作高分习作Several

days

ago

I

worked

on

three

maths

problems

for

a

long

time

in

class,

but

I

couldn’t

work

them

out.

I

had

to

ask

my

classmates

for

help.

After

a

considerable

discussion,

we

solved

the

problems

in

our

group.

Several

days

ago

I

1.

_____________________________________________________（巧用句型）

them

in

class,

but

2.________________________________________（巧用句型）.

3._____________（因果关系）

I

had

to

ask

my

classmates

for

help.

After

a

considerable

discussion,

we

solved

the

problems

in

our

group.

spent

a

long

time

working

on

three

maths

problemsthey

were

too

hard

for

me

to

work

outAs

a

result续表普通习作高分习作I

was

very

excited.

Having

such

a

great

experience,

I

want

to

give

two

suggestions.

Please

don’t

teach

us

too

much

in

class.

We

need

about

30

minutes

to

learn

by

ourselves

and

work

in

groups

in

every

class.

4.______________________（巧用感叹句）

Having

such

a

great

experience,

I

want

to

give

two

suggestions.

5._________（时间顺序）,

please

don’t

teach

us

too

much

in

class.

We

need

about

30

minutes

to

learn

by

ourselves

and

work

in

groups

in

every

class.

How

excited

I

was!Firstly续表普通习作高分习作Please

provide

us

with

some

laptops

if

possible,

so

we

can

surf

the

Internet

easily.

Without

doubt,

we

need

an

open

and

free

class,

you

see.

That’s

all.

Thank

you.

Best

wishes,

Zhang

Hua6.__________________（时间顺序/递进关系）,

please

provide

us

with

some

laptops

if

possible,

so

we

can

surf

the

Internet

easily.

Without

doubt,

we

need

an

open

and

free

class,

you

see.

That’s

all.

Thank

you.

Best

wishes,

Zhang

HuaSecondly/BesidesGroup

2普通习作高分习作

All

kids

want

to

be

good

at

learning.

It’s

not

easy.

In

my

opinion,

those

kids

who

are

good

at

learning

are

able

to

manage

their

time

very

well.

They

work

hard

at

their

subjects

and

enjoy

playing

games.

Playing

also

helps

them

learn

better.

All

kids

want

to

be

good

at

learning.

1.___________（转折关系）,

it’s

not

easy.

In

my

opinion,

those

kids

who

are

good

at

learning

are

able

to

manage

their

time

very

well.

2.______________________________________________________________________（巧用连词短语）.

Playing

also

helps

them

learn

better.

HoweverThey

not

only

work

hard

at

their

subjects

but

also

enjoy

playing

games普通习作高分习作As

to

how

kids

balance

learning

and

playing,

the

most

important

thing

is

to

follow

the

rule—work

while

you

work

and

play

while

you

play.

And

kids

should

learn

to

work

happily

and

relax

totally.

I’m

sure

a

good

balance

between

learning

and

playing

can

help

children

grow

up.

As

to

how

kids

balance

learning

and

playing,

the

most

important

thing

is

to

follow

the

rule—work

while

you

work

and

play

while

you

play.

3.________________________（递进关系）,

kids

should

learn

to

work

happily

and

relax

totally.

I’m

sure

a

good

balance

between

learning

and

playing

can

4.__________________________________________（巧用短语）.Moreover/What’s

moremake

a

great

contribution

to

kids’

growth续表Group

3普通习作高分习作

Have

you

ever

heard

about

study

trips,which

are

becoming

more

and

more

popular

in

junior

schools?

As

for

them,

different

students

have

different

thoughts.

Some

students

stand

by

them,

while

others

are

against

them.

I

think

study

trips

are

good

for

students,

and

here

are

my

reasons.

Have

you

ever

heard

about

study

trips,

which

are

becoming

more

and

more

popular

in

junior

schools?

As

for

them,

different

students

have

different

thoughts.

Some

students

stand

by

them,

while

others

are

against

them.

1.__________________________（表达观点）,

I

think

study

trips

are

good

for

students,

and

here

are

my

reasons.

As

far

as

I’m

concerned普通习作高分习作Study

trips

can

open

our

mind

to

the

outside

world

because

we

can

learn

something

important

during

the

trips.

Study

trips

help

us

have

a

good

mood.

We

can

have

fun

and

feel

happy

when

we

are

going

on

a

trip.

We

can

learn

how

to

get

along

well

with

teachers

and

students.

2._________（时间顺序）,

study

trips

can

open

our

mind

to

the

outside

world

because

we

can

learn

something

important

during

the

trips.

3.___________（时间顺序）,

study

trips

help

us

have

a

good

mood.

We

can

have

fun

and

feel

happy

when

we

are

going

on

a

trip.

4.___________________（时间顺序）,

we

can

learn

how

to

get

along

well

with

teachers

and

students.

FirstlySecondlyLast

but

not

least续表普通习作高分习作We

must

remember

these

things

when

going

on

a

study

trip.

Teachers

should

be

responsible

for

students’

safety

during

the

trip.

And

students

should

obey

the

rules

in

order

to

keep

away

from

dangers.5.___________________（时间顺序）,

we

must

6._______________________________（巧用短语）

when

going

on

a

study

trip.

Teachers

should

be

responsible

for

students’

safety

during

the

trip.

And

students

7._________________（巧用短语）

obey

the

rules

in

order

to

keep

away

from

dangers.At

the

same

timekeep

these

things

in

our

mindare

supposed

to续表Group

4普通习作高分习作

Nowadays,

many

children

are

treated

as

“little

emperors”

at

home.

They

seldom

help

parents

do

chores.

When

they

have

problems,

they

don’t

know

what

to

do.

The

problem

catches

people’s

attention.

In

my

opinion,

parents

should

believe

in

their

children

and

shouldn’t

do

everything

for

them.

Nowadays,

many

children

are

treated

as

“little

emperors”

at

home.

They

seldom

help

parents

do

chores.

When

they

have

problems,

they

don’t

know

what

to

do.

The

problem

catches

people’s

attention.

In

my

opinion,

1.____________（时间顺序）,

parents

should

believe

in

their

children

2.____________（巧用短语）doing

everything

for

them.

first

of

allinstead

of普通习作高分习作Parents

should

give

them

proper

suggestions,

and

give

them

more

chances

to

make

their

own

decisions.

Children

shouldn’t

depend

on

their

parents

too

much.

They

should

learn

to

do

housework,

and

look

after

themselves

well.

On

the

one

hand,

parents

should

give

them

proper

suggestions,

and

give

them

more

chances

to

make

their

own

decisions.

3.____________________（转折关系）,

children

shouldn’t

depend

on

their

parents

too

much.

They

should

learn

to

do

housework,

and

look

after

themselves

well.

On

the

other

hand续表普通习作高分习作Besides,

teenagers

should

learn

to

face

challenges

bravely.

No

matter

what

difficulties

they

meet,

they

should

never

give

up.

It’s

very

important

for

children

to

learn

to

be

independent.

4._________（递进关系）,

teenagers

should

learn

to

face

challenges

bravely.

No

matter

what

difficulties

they

5.______________（巧用短语）,

they

should

never

give