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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Thepowerofbelief“Youwillneverwalkagain.Youwillhavetouseawheelchair.”Unpreparedforthedoctor’sjudgment,Iheardhiswordsfallheavilyonmyears,numbingmysoul.Myseriouscaraccidenthadleftmeunconsciousandincriticalcondition.Iawakenedtofindbothleg:wrappedincasts(石膏).Lyinginmybedmotionlessandrelyingonprayer,IwonderedhowIcouldgivemyten-year-oldsonhopethatMomwouldheal.He’dbeencheerfuloneveryvisit,butIsawthefearinhiseyes.Thethoughtofhavingatotallyhandicapped(残疾的)motherwasweighingheavilyonhislittleshoulder.HeneededtherayofhopethatIwouldnotbeinawheelchairforever.Justmaybe,Ithought,Icouldusethisexperiencetoteachwhattodowhendisastersstrike.IneededsomethingbesidesmyphysicalhealingtosinkmyIrishstubbornnessinto—it’sthatpersonalitythatkeptmegoingthroughthetoughestchallengeofmylifeItdidn’ttakemelongtobecomeimpatientwiththepacethedoctorswerewillingtogowithme.Ideterminedtolearneverythingtheyshowedme.Ineededtomakethingshappenmyway.Andbeingconfined(限制)toawheelchairtherestofmylifedidn’tfitintomyplans.Atfirst,Itaughtmyselftomovefromthebedtothewheelchair.Imadetinymovementsforweeks,afraidoffalling,butmoreafraidtojustlieinbed.Ireachedapointwheremyarmswerestrongenoughtocarrymeintothechair.Gettingoutofthechairandbackintobedprovedmoredifficult,butIsoondevelopedamethodofgrabbingthesheets.Ioftenwonderedwhatthenursesanddoctorswouldhavedoneifthey’dseenmestrugglingonmyown.OncesureIcouldreturnmyselftothebedfromthewheelchair,Ibegantouseawalkerthathadbeenleftinmyroombyaformerhospitalroommate.注意:1.
续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Everynight,whenIknewIwouldn’tbeinterrupted(打扰),Iwouldstarttotrain.
Itcametimetosharemyachievementswiththepersonmostimportanttome._______________________________________________________________故事大意:这篇文章讲述了一个人在夜深人静时开始训练,努力克服行走的困难。借助拐杖,他逐渐掌握了站立和行走的技能。尽管起初非常艰难,但他从未想过放弃。坚持不懈的练习最终取得了成果。当这个人向最重要的人——他的儿子展示自己的进步时,孩子的惊喜和兴奋的眼神,以及他激动的呼喊,标志着个人努力的胜利,展现了坚持和信念的力量。伏笔:1.医生的判断:文章开头提到的医生的话"Youwillneverwalkagain.Youwillhavetouseawheelchair."这是第一个伏笔,暗示了主角将面临一个看似不可逾越的挑战。2.儿子的恐惧:作者提到儿子虽然每次探望时都表现得很快乐,但作者看到了他眼中的恐惧。这个细节为后文作者想要给予儿子希望的决心和行动埋下伏笔。3.爱尔兰的固执:作者提到自己的爱尔兰固执性格,这暗示了即使面对巨大的困难,作者也会坚持到底,这是对主角性格的伏笔。4.自我训练的决心:作者表达了对医生训练节奏的不耐烦,并决定以自己的方式推动康复。这表明了作者将采取行动,为后文的训练和成功做铺垫。5.夜间训练:文章最后提到的夜间训练,暗示了作者在无人打扰时独自进行的秘密练习,为最终能够走路的高潮埋下伏笔。6.使用助行器:作者开始使用助行器,这是她康复过程中的一个重要步骤,也是她最终能够走路的关键伏笔。这些伏笔贯穿全文,逐步揭示了主角的内心世界和她克服困难的旅程,为读者呈现了一个充满希望和决心的故事。Possibleversion:Everynight,whenIknewIwouldn’tbeinterrupted(打扰),Iwouldstarttotrain.Witheachpassingday,Ibecamemoreskilledatmovingmyselfintothechairandsoughtgreaterprogress.Holdingawalkingstick,Islowlyputmyweightonmyfeetandrosetomyfeet.Difficultasitwasattheverybeginning,thephrase“giveup”neverpoppedintomymind.Fueledbyunwaveringself-belief,Ipersistedinmypractice,nightafternight.Andeverymidnightwitnessedmystruggletomoveanotherinchfarther.Fortunately,allmyeffortspaidoff—Imadeit!Itcamethetimetosharemyachievementswiththepersonmostimportanttome.Onenight,whenhearingmyson’sfootstepsoutside,Ipulledmyselfintothechairanddraggedmyselfup.Asheopenedthedoor,Imusteredthestrengthandstaggeredafewsteps.Shocked,thislittleten-year-oldboystoodrootedtothespot.Thistime,insteadoffear,alightofexcitementtwinkledinmylovelyboy’seyes.“Mommy,youcanwalk!”heexclaimed,sprintingintomyopenarms.ThemomentIheardthesewords,allofthepainfaded,andthepowerofbeliefsurgedinmyheart.下水文:Everynight,whenIknewIwouldn’tbeinterrupted,Iwouldstarttotrain.Withquietdetermination,Ipracticedwiththewalker,pushingmyselftotakesmallsteps,eachoneavictoryovermylimitations.Thehospitalroomwasmysanctuary,themoonlightmywitnesstothesweatandtearsthatmarkedmyprogress.Igrittedmyteethwitheveryattempt,mybodyachingbutmyspiritunyielding.Eachnight,Iinchedclosertowalkingagain,fueledbythebeliefthatIcoulddefytheodds.Itcametimetosharemyachievementswiththepersonmostimportanttome.Oneevening,asmysonapproached,Ihidmywalkerandstoodbythewindow,supportedbythefurnitureandsheerwill.Whenheentered,hiseyeswidenedindisbeliefasItookadeepbreathand,withatremblingvoice,calledouttohim.Heturned,andasoureyesmet,Iletgoofthesupportandtookasteptowardshim.HisfacelitupwithamixtureofshockandjoyasherealizedIwaswalking."Mom,you'rewalking!"hecried,runningtoembraceme.Inthatembrace,allthepainandstruggleseemedtovanish,replacedbythewarmthofourloveandthetriumphofoursharedhope.语言积累:1."Unpreparedforthedoctor’sjudgment,Iheardhiswordsfallheavilyonmyears,numbingmysoul."这句话通过使用"fallheavily"和"numbingmysoul"形象地表达了医生的判决对作者产生的沉重打击。2."Lyinginmybedmotionlessandrelyingonprayer,IwonderedhowIcouldgivemyten-year-oldsonhopethatMomwouldheal."这里的"lyingmotionless"和"relyingonprayer"传达了作者无助的状态,同时"givemysonhope"体现了作者对儿子的关心和愿望。3."Thethoughtofhavingatotallyhandicappedmotherwasweighingheavilyonhislittleshoulder.""weighingheavilyonhislittleshoulder"通过将担忧比喻为重物压在肩上,突出了儿子的负担。4."IneededsomethingbesidesmyphysicalhealingtosinkmyIrishstubbornnessinto.""sinkmyIrishstubbornnessinto"使用了"sink"这个词的非传统意义,形象地表达了作者将自己的固执投入到某事中的决心。5."Imadetinymovementsforweeks,afraidoffalling,butmoreafraidtojustlieinbed."这句话通过对比"afraid
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