短文故事续写的作文讲义高三英语二轮复习

2024年高考英语写作短文故事续写的作文阅谈下面材料.根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Istillrememberthedaywhenwe(decoratedthehouse.IwastenanditwastwoweeksbeforeNewYear.lookingforwardtomypresents.SinceI'mthewasyoungestinthefamily,allofthefamilymemberswouldgivemeagiftonewayoranother.Sometimesitwasacookieorahugbutitwasalwaysthere.Iwastheonlycenterofattentionanitwasfeelinggood.MyunclesusuallywouldaskmewhatIwantedbeforeNewYearandthatyearIknewwhatIwanted.IwasthespaceshipIsawintheads.Iwasdreamingofopeningabiggiftbox,anditwasthere.ButthatyearitcameinawaythatIwasn'texpecting.ItwastwoweeksbeforeNewYear.JusttwoweeksShecouldn'twait.Mydearmothertoldmyfatherthatitwastimeandthenwewenttothehospital.Afteranhour,theytoldmethatIhadasister:ButIdidn'twantasister.Iwantedaspaceship.Thenextfewdayswentsofast.Noonewascaringaboutme.EveryonewastalkingaboutherandIknewthatmylifewasnevergoingtobethesameeveragain.Iwasn'treadytogrowup,tobeabigbrother.Buitjusthappenedinaninstant.OnthedaybeforeNewYear,everyonewasinourhome,talkingonlyaboutmynewbornsister.Myfamilywasbeinghers.Evenmyunclesdidn'taskmeanythingaboutthegift.ShestoleeverythingI’deverhad,mylifeandmypresents.Thinkingaboutthis,lcriedmyselftosleep.Ihadanightmare(警梦)andwokeupinthemiddleofthenight.Shadowswereallaroundme,andIwasdefenselessandsoweak.Iranintomyparents’bedroombutcouldn'twakeupmypoorparentswhowerejusttoowornout.[wasstandingneartheirbed,tryingnottocrywhen[sawher.Shewasawakeandlookingatmewithherbigeyesinhersmallbed注意:l.续写词数应为150左右:2.请按如下格式作答。Suddenlyalongshadowcameintothebedroomandshestartedcrying.Afterhavingfortedher,somethingslowlychangedinsideme.范文一ItwassoabruptthatIdidn'tknowwhattodo.Hopelessly,theywereallinadeepsleep.Iwalkedtomysister."Don'tcry,don'tcry,"Isaidtoher,butinvain.Shewasstillcryingandbeinglouderandlouder.Iwrappedmyarmsaroundmylittlesister.Sheseemedtonoticeme.Sheopenedherbigandlovelyeyestolookatme,andhersmallhandsseizedmetightly.Thenshesmiledinsteadofcried.ItwastheloveliestsmileIhaveeverseen.Ihuggedher,andminuteslater,shewasinadeepsleep.Thinkingaboutmysister'slovelysmile,Iwasreadytogrowup,tobeabigbrother.Timepassed,andmyparentsfinallywokeupatnoon."It's12:00,"theysaid.Theybothrantothediningroomandweresurprisedtoseemefeedingmysister."Goodafternoon,MomandDad,"Isaidwithasmile.Mymomwastouched."Ohdear,youlooklikeanadult.""Yes,I'vegrownup.I'mabigbrother,andit'smydutytocareformysister."Ilookedatmysisterwithabrightsmileshiningonourfaces.范文二：进一步优化润色成拔高款作文，蓝色是好词好句好素材，尖子生可以选用Thesuddennoise

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突如其来的噪音让我惊愕，周围依然沉浸在睡梦中，我一时不知所措。我走向正在哭泣的妹妹，试图安慰她，轻声说：“别哭了。”然而，我的努力徒劳无功，她的啜泣声越来越大。我拥抱着她，她似乎感觉到了我的存在。她那双大而富有表情的眼睛睁得大大的，凝视着我，她的小手紧紧地抓着我。令人惊讶的是，她的眼泪止住了，取而代之的是灿烂的笑容，这是我有生以来见过的最迷人的笑容。我把她紧紧抱在怀里，很快她就进入了平静的睡眠。回想起她天使般的笑容，一种深刻的成熟感涌上心头，促使我扮演起一个保护性的哥哥的角色。几个小时过去了，我的父母终于醒了。“中午了，”他们惊叫道，惊讶地看到我正在专心地喂我妹妹。我热情地迎接他们。我母亲看起来很感动，说：“你长大了，亲爱的。”“确实如此，”我肯定地说。“照顾妹妹是我的责任，我打算勤勉地完成它。”我看着妹妹，我们的脸上洋溢着灿烂的笑容。范文一与范文二：优化改写理由供参考“Thesuddennoisestartledme,andIfoundmyselfatalossasmysurroundingswerestillimmersedinslumber.”使用“startled”和“ataloss”等更生动的词汇，增强了文本的紧张感和情感深度，同时描述了周围环境的状态，更具画面感。“Iapproachedmyweepingsisterandattemptedtoforther...”更具体地描述了“我”的动作，如“approached”和“attemptedtofort”，使场景更加生动。3.“Herbig,expressiveeyesopenedwide,gazingatme...”增加了对妹妹眼神的描述