2025届高考英语作文复习专项 建议信写作评讲 课件

Topic:HowtowriteAletterofadvice

Howtomakeagoodcomposition?Lead-inBasicstructureandcontentofaletterofadvice建议信的基本结构和内容一、“Front”开头(para.1):1.Backgroundinformation（背景信息）2.Writingpurpose写作目的二、“Body”正文(para.2):suggestionsandreasons建议及理由

三、“Ending”结尾(para.3):expectationsandwishes期待和愿望1.communicatewithteachers2.beactive,listenattentivelyandtakedownnotescarefully.3.finishhomeworkontimeandconsolidate(巩固)whatyouhavelearnedPre-writing1.Usingtransitionsentence(过渡句),topicsentence(主题句)andtransitionwordstomakeyourcompositionclear(清晰的),logical(有逻辑的)andcoherent(连贯的).开头：Firstofall,tobeginwith,firstandforemost...另外：Inaddition,besides,moreover,additionally,furthermore

最后：lastbutnotleast...Pre-writingLanguagePoints常见的表达方式：Problem(问题方面的描述):1.havetrouble/difficulty/problemsdoing2.beworried/anxiousabout..3.beconfusedabout...4.beupsetabout...Purpose(表示目的方面的表达方式):1.withtheintention/aimof...2.inanefforttodo...3.withthehopeofPre-writingHavingknownthatyouareworriedaboutyourhighschoollife,I’mwritingto

offeryousomeusefulsuggestions,hopingtheycanbehelpful.2.Iknowyouareworriedaboutyourhighschoollife.I’llgiveyousomesuggestions.Ihopetheycanhelpyou.(用非谓语改写)1.I’mwritingtogiveyousomesuggestions.Theywillhelpyou.(用定语从句改写)I'mwritingtogiveyousomesuggestions,whichwillhelpyou.Rewritethesentences改写句子

Pre-writing表示建议的表达方式1.为什么不...2.如果我是你的话，我会毫不犹豫去做...3.做...对你是有帮助/重要的的。1.Whynotdo...2.IfIwereyou,Iwouldnothesitatetodo...3.Itisofhelp/importance/significanceforyoutodosth

Pre-writing结尾的表达方式:expectationsandwishes期待与愿望1.Idohopemysuggestionswillbeofgreathelp.

2.Hopefully,mysuggestionswouldbehelpfulforyou.Iamlookingforwardtoyourgoodnews.3.It’smysincerehopethatyouwilltakemyadviceintoconsideration/account.4.Ihopethesesuggestionswillgiveyouareliefandhelpyousolveyourproblems.5.Iwillbemorethandelightedifyoufindmysuggestionshelpful.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Commonsentencepatterns常见的句式Pre-writingWhile-writing

假设你是李华，你的好友Tom上学期随父母去了另外一个城市，写信告诉你他很不适应新的校园生活，感到很孤独并希望你给出建议。请你根据以下要点用英语给他回一封电子邮件。1.多交一些朋友;2.积极参加各种活动;注意：80词左右开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇:adaptto适应。

DearTom,I’msorrytohearthatyouhavetroubleadaptingto

yournewschoollife.Iunderstandhowlonelyitcanbetobeinanewplace.

I’mwritingwiththeintentionofofferingsomepracticalsuggestionstoyou.

Firstly,Istronglysuggestthatyoushouldtrytomakemorefriendswhocanalwaysbringyouhappinessandmakeyoufeelmoreathome.Secondly,activelyparticipateinvariousactivities,whichwillnotonlyhelpyoumakefriendsbutalsogiveyouachanceshowcaseyourtalents.Yours,

LiHuaRememberthat

makingachangeisalwaysdifficultatfirst,butitwillbecomebetterfinally.Ibelievethatyoucanadapttothenewlifesoon.Finally,Ihopethatmysuggestionswouldbehelpfulforyou.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.While-writing

Agoodcomposition1.structure结构

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3.Language语言a.从句的使用clauseb.非谓语形式non-pred