新教材2024版高中英语Unit4JourneyAcrossaVastLandSectionⅣWriting-关于旅行经历的电子邮件学生用书新人教版选择性必修第二册

SectionⅣWriting——关于旅行阅历的电子邮件文体感知写一封关于旅行的邮件，也就是对一次出行、巡游、参观等的记录。在介绍巡游阅历时，一般按巡游的先后依次，依次记述巡游过程中所见到的景物；另外，要选取印象最深刻的或最有特色的景物，进行较为具体的描写；最终可以加上游玩的感受，做到既有所见所闻，又有所思所感，深化写作主题。增分佳句一、夺人眼球开头句1．IamgladtohearthatyouaregoingtoChinaforaholiday.听说你要来中国度假，我很兴奋。2．I'dliketoshareoneofthemostfascinatingexperienceswithyou.我想和你共享一次最好玩的阅历。二、亮点出彩篇中句1．TherearemanytouristattractionsinChina.中国有很多旅游胜地。2．Everytouristattractionhasbeautifulsceneryandisveryattractive.每个景点都风景秀丽，特别迷人。3．Jinzhaicounty,inwesternAnhui,isoneoftheplacesI'dliketointroduceyouto.安徽西部的金寨县是我最想给你介绍的地方之一。4．It'sveryconvenienttotraveltothecentreofNewYorkbysubway.乘地铁去纽约市中心特别便利。5．DuringtheChinese“RedCulture”，youcanvisitsomemuseums.在体验中国的“红色文化”期间，你可以参观一些博物馆。6．Standingonthetopofthemountain,thebuildinghaswitnessedmanychangesinthisarea.坐落在山顶的建筑物见证了这个地区的很多变更。三、韵味无穷结尾句1．Iamlookingforwardtoyourcominganditiscertainthatyouwon'tregretforthetrip.我期盼着你的到来，你确定会不虚此行。2．Itisaplaceyouhavetovisitandtheextraordinaryviewwillmakeyouunwillingtoleave.这是一个你必需参观的地方，非凡的景色会让你流连忘返。3．Ithasbeenagreattrip,fillinguswithsomanyhappymemories.这是一次很棒的旅行，给我们留下了很多奇异的回忆。典题演练假设你是李华，你的英国笔友汤姆(Tom)写信询问你的一次难忘的旅游阅历。请你用英语给他回一封电子邮件，要点包括：1．旅游过程；2．你的感受。留意：1.词数80左右；2．开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。参考词汇：大佛(theGiantStoneBuddha)DearTom,I'mgladtoshareafascinatingtravelexperiencewithyou._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua第一步布局谋篇其次步遣词造句1．七月七日，我乘车去了乐山，它以大佛而著名。OnJuly7,ItookabustoLeshan,____________________theGiantStoneBuddha.2．当我抬头看到巨大的佛头，低头看到巨大的佛脚时，我感受到了自己的渺小。________________________________anddownatthelargefeet,IfeltIwassosmall.3．其次天，我登上了峨眉山山顶，山上的美景让我惊羡。Thenextday,IclimbedtothepeakofMountEmei.Thebeautifulsceneryonthemountain______________________．4．在黄昏时刻，我们返程。____________，wemadeourwayback.5．虽然我们都特别累，但是我们去乐山的旅程真的既难忘又使人欢乐。__________________，ourtriptoLeshanwasreallyunforgettableandpleasant.6．假如再给我一次机会，我确定会再来巡游乐山。Givenanotherchance,____________________________Leshanagain.第三步句式升级1．用现在分词短语作状语改写其次步中的句2________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．用关系副词引导的定语从句改写其次步中的句3________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第四步完备成篇用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇英语短文。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________SectionⅣWriting——关于旅行阅历的电子邮件典题演练其次步1．whichisfamousfor2．WhenIlookedupatthelargehead3．tookmybreathaway4．Atdusk5．Thoughtired6．Iamboundtopayavisitto第三步1．Lookingupatthelargeheadanddownatthelargefeet,IfeltIwassosmall.2．Thenextday,IclimbedtothepeakofMountEmei,wherethebeautifulscenerytookmybreathaway.第四步DearTom,I'mgladtoshareafascinatingtravelexperiencewithyou.OnJuly7,ItookabustoLeshan,whichisfamousfortheGiantStoneBuddha.Lookingupatthelargeheadanddownatthelargefeet,IfeltIwassosmall.Thenextday,IclimbedtothepeakofMountEmei,wherethebeautifulscenerytookmybreathaway.Atdusk,we