读后续写+心灵的蜕变：在歌声与掌声中寻找自我 讲义 高三上学期10月调研英语试题

高三上学期10月调研英语读后续写题目:阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

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Myparentsworkedveryhardatensuringthateverythingseemedpleasantforme.IhavetoadmitthatIhadaverypeacefulchildhoodandImostlyignoredthefactthatmyeldersisterwasdifferent.Thechildpsychologisthadtermeditas“AspergerSyndrome."Thisdiagnosis(诊断)turnedmyparentsworldupsidedown--buttheyneverletitaffectme.ItwasonlyattheageoftenthatIstartedtonoticethedifferences,andbecomeconsciousofmysociallifeandself-imagethatIhadcarefullybuilt.Mysister,ontheotherhand,wassociallyawkward.Shecouldnotlookatpeopleintheeye.Shewouldwhispertoherselfandrepeatthewordsshehadjustsaidunderherbreath.She,however,wasacademically

capable,andhenceweattendedthesameprimaryschool.Despitethis,Inever,everacknowledgedinpublicthatshewasmysister.Therewasoneincident,however,justtwo

yearsago,thatremainsimpressedinmyconsciousness.ItwastheincidentthatchangedhowIviewedmysister.Itwastheincidentthatchangedme.Mysisterwastheninprimarysix,abouttograduate.Sheandherclassmateshadtoputupaperformance,whetherinagroup,orindividually.Duetoherinabilitytocommunicate,mysisterwastheonlyoneleftwithoutagroup.Theschoolhadmadeitamustforeveryonetoputupanitem,somysisterhadtoperformindividually.“I'llsing,”mysistertoldmyparents,somewhatconfidently.Hearingthat,Iwascompletelyshocked.Shewouldembarrassme,onewayoranother.“No!”Irememberprotesting.MyparentsshotmealookandthatwaswhenIknewmysisterwasgoingtoperform,nomatterwhat;andIwasgoingtobepartoftheaudiencewatchingher.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Sooncamethedayoftheperformance,andmysisterdidtheonlysolo.______________________________________________________________Wrappedinbothguiltandjoy,Iwenttothebackstagetofindmysister.___________________________________________________________________文章大意：这篇文章讲述了一个关于家庭、接纳和成长的故事。主人公在十岁之前并未意识到自己姐姐患有阿斯伯格综合症，父母也尽力保护他不受这个诊断的影响。然而，随着年龄的增长，主人公开始意识到姐姐的不同之处，感到尴尬，并在公共场合避免承认她是自己的姐姐。直到姐姐在学校的毕业典礼上独自表演，用她的歌声和勇气打动了在场的每一个人，包括主人公。这次事件改变了主人公对姐姐的看法，也改变了他自己，让他学会了欣赏和支持姐姐的独特之处，从而加深了他们之间的情感联系。伏笔以及回应：伏笔:主人公之前在学校从未公开承认姐姐是他家人，感到尴尬。回应:在续写中，主人公在姐姐表演后感到自豪，公开向她表示支持和爱，克服了之前的尴尬和羞耻。伏笔:姐姐的社交障碍，如不与人对视，自言自语。回应:在续写中，姐姐在舞台上的表现打破了这些障碍，她用歌声与观众沟通，赢得了他们的尊重和掌声。伏笔:主人公对姐姐即将在学校表演的担忧和反对。回应:在续写中，姐姐的表演证明了她的能力，主人公的担忧转变为惊讶和钦佩，他意识到自己对姐姐的误解。伏笔:主人公对姐姐表演的预期是尴尬和羞耻。回应:在续写中，姐姐的表演不仅没有带来尴尬，反而赢得了观众的喝彩，这让主人公感到内疚和喜悦，意识到自己对姐姐的判断是错误的。伏笔:父母对姐姐的支持，即使主人公反对。回应:在续写中，父母的坚持被证明是正确的，他们的支持帮助姐姐克服了困难，完成了一次成功的表演。伏笔:主人公内心的冲突和对姐姐的复杂情感。回应:在续写中，主人公的内心冲突得到解决，他的情感转变为对姐姐的理解和支持，这种转变是他个人成长的重要部分。续写要点：第一段：姐姐的表演和主人公的转变描述姐姐的表演：姐姐在舞台上的表现，包括她选择的歌曲、她的声音的变化以及她如何逐渐克服紧张。观众的反应：观众如何被姐姐的表演所打动，以及他们给予的积极反馈，如掌声和站立鼓掌。主人公的初步转变：主人公目睹姐姐的成功表演，开始感受到内心的冲突和变化，从担忧和反对转为惊讶和钦佩。第二段：主人公的内疚和对姐姐的新认识主人公的内疚：主人公意识到自己之前对姐姐的误解和冷漠，感到内疚，并认识到自己需要改变。主人公的新认识：主人公对姐姐的看法发生根本变化，从仅仅看到姐姐的障碍和不同，到欣赏她的勇气和才华。主人公的行动：主人公决定公开支持姐姐，向她表达自己的骄傲和爱，以及他愿意成为她坚强后盾的决心。范文:Sooncamethedayoftheperformance,andmysisterdidtheonlysolo.Asshestoodonthatstage,Icouldn’thelpbutfeelanxietyandembarrassment.Hervoicequiveredasshestarted,andIburiedmyheadinmyhands;butsurprisingly,witheachnotefollowing,somethingmagical

happened.

Theaudience,abitnoisyatfirst,begantolistenattentively.Mysistersangwitha

passionandsinceritythatIhadneverwitnessedbefore.Hervoicewaspureandhauntingly

beautiful,fillingtheauditoriumwithanemotionalresonancethattouchedeveryone’shearts.I

liftedmyheadwithmymouthwideopen.Whenshefinished,sincerecheersburstoutfromtheaudience.Wrappedinbothguiltandjoy,Iwenttothebackstagetofindmysister.There,amidstthe

bustlingofstudents,parents,andteacherscongratulatingher,Ihuggedhertightly,myeyesstill

wetwithtears.“Youwereamazing,”Iwhispered,myvoicefilledwithgenuineadmiration.She

beamedwithpride,hereyesfinallymeetingminewithouthesitation.Inthatmoment,asweshared

aprofoundconnection,Irealizedthatherperformancehaddonemuchmorethanchangemy

perceptionofher;ithadtransformedourrelationshipforever.Itwasthebeginningofanew

chapter,onewhereIwouldproudlystandbyherside,celebratinghertalents,andcherishingthe

beautifulpersonshewas,AspergerSyndromeandall.下水文1Sooncamethedayoftheperformance,andmysisterdidtheonlysolo.Theauditoriumwasfilledwithparents,teachers,andstudents,alleagerlyanticipatingtheshow.MyheartpoundedinmychestasIwatchedfromtheaudience,amixofanxietyandapprehension.Whenmysistersteppedontothestage,hereyesscannedthecrowdnervously.Butasshebegantosing,hervoicewassurprisinglystrongandclear.Itwasasongaboutthebeautyofbeingdifferent,andasshesang,herconfidencegrew.Theaudiencewascaptivated,andIcouldseetheprideinmyparents'eyes.ItwasinthatmomentthatIrealizedmysister'suniquenesswasnotsomethingtobeashamedof,butsomethingtobecelebrated.Wrappedinbothguiltandjoy,Iwenttothebackstagetofindmysister.Shewasbeamingwithpride,havingreceivedastandingovationfromtheaudience.IfeltarushofemotionsasIhuggedhertightly."Youwereamazing,"Iwhispered,myvoicechokedwithtears.Shelookedatme,hereyesshining,andforthefirsttime,sheseemedtotrulyseeme."Thankyou,"shesaid,hervoicefilledwithgratitude.Fromthatdayforward,Ivowedtobeherbiggestsupporter,tostandbyhersidenomatterwhatchallengeslifemightbring.Ourbondgrewstronger,andIlearnedtoappreciatethebeautyinourdifferences.ItwasalessonthatwouldforeverchangethewayIsawmysisterandmyself.下水文2Sooncamethedayoftheperformance,andmysisterdidtheonlysolo.Thestagewassetwithasinglespotlight,castingawarmglowonherasshestoodalone,clutchinghermusicsheet.Theaudiencehushed,andIcouldfeelthetensionintheair.Hervoicetrembledslightlyatfirst,butasshecontinued,itgrewsteadierandmoremelodious.Shesangasongaboutthestars,hervoiceechoingthroughtheauditorium,reachingeverycorner.Itwasasifshewasspeakingtotheuniverse,andtheuniversewaslistening.Thelyricsweresimple,yettheycarriedaprofoundmessageofhopeandacceptance.Iwatched,mesmerized,asshepouredherheartintoeverynote.Wrappedinbothguiltandjoy,Iwenttothebackstagetofindmysister.Shewasstandingthere,herfaceflushedwiththeexhilarationofherperformance.Icouldseethereliefinhereyes,butalsoanewfoundc