专题03 应用文写作：建议信 -【高频 热点】2024年高考英语话题写作通关备攻略含解析

专题03应用文写作：建议信-【高频热点】2024年高考英语话题写作通关必备攻略专题03建议信（应用文写作）【考情分析】年份卷别体裁话题内容2023新高考I&II卷建议信学校生活给外教提建议2023全国甲卷投稿历史文化介绍中国历史人物2023全国乙卷投稿生活学习假期习得新技能2023浙江卷投稿学校生活写一篇报道“认识身边的植物”2023北京卷建议信学校生活社团活动给出建议2022新高考I&II卷邀请信访谈节目访谈2022全国甲卷投稿世界海洋日保护海洋2022全国乙卷投稿调查结果学习英语的状况2022北京卷邀请信社会科技英语写作的线上交流2022浙江卷邀请信校园生活邀朋友体验图书馆学习室2019天津卷建议信学校生活讲座内容和话题【写作指导】把握建议信的写作框架。建议信一般是对他人求助的回复。是向别人提出合理可行的建议，让对方接受自己的想法、解决特定问题的一种回复信件。其写作时一般以第一人称和第二人称为主，主体时态为一般现在时和一般将来时。建议内容要合情合理，具有合理性和说服性。其写作框架如下：第一段：回顾对方的诉求，表明写作目的。第二段：提出具体建议并说明理由。第三段：希望对方接受建议并希望建设对其有帮助。【素材宝库】词汇积累之第一段表达写作目的IamwritingtoofferyousomeadviceonhowtoimproveyourspokenEnglish.我写信是想就如何提高英语口语水平给你一些建议。YouhaveaskedformyadviceandIwilltrytoexpressmyviewson...你向我征求意见，我会尽力表达我对于......的看法。这里有一些建议关于......3.Havinglearntthatourlibraryisplanningtobuynewbooks,I'mwillingtorecommendsomebookstoyou.得知我们图书馆准备买新书，我愿意向您推荐一些书。4.Glad/Pleased/DelightedtoknowthatyouaretravelinginShanghai，IthinkitisagoodchoicetovisitHuangpuRiver.很高兴得知你在上海旅游，我认为参观黄浦江是个不错的选择。5.Ihavelearnedthatyouhavesometroublein...andwouldliketogive/offeryouthefollowingsuggestions.我知道你在……方面有困难，因此我想给你提如下一些建议。6.Whenitcomesto/Asfor...,thefollowingaremysuggestions./Mysuggestionsareasfollows.当涉及/关于……，我的建议如下。7.I'mwritingtogiveyousomesuggestions/giveyouahand.我写这封信的目的是给你一些建议/帮助。8.I'mextremelydelightedtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtofitinthenewschoollife.很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。词汇积累之第二段体具体建议和和及理由1.ThereasonwhyIrecommendthisbookisthatitemphasizestheimportanceofgoodhabits.我推荐这本书的原因是它强调好习惯的重要性。Itisagoodwaytobroadenyourmind,throughwhichyoucanlearndifferentculturesoftheworld.这是一个很好的可以拓宽视野的方式。通过这种方式，你可以了解到世界上的不同文化。Firstofall,youshouldlistentotheteachercarefullyandtakenotesinclasssothatyoucangooveryourlessonsassoonasyoucanafterclass.首先，你应该认真听老师讲课。上课做好笔记，以便下课后可以及时复习。Irecommenditmainlyforthefollowingtworeasons.我推荐它主要有以下两个原因。Inmyopinion/AsfarasI'mconcerned/Personally,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.在我看来，采取如下行动是明智的。Ithinkitwouldbeofbenefit/beneficialifyou...我认为如果……，将会受益。Doing...isagood/great/betterchoice.做……是一个好的/棒的/更好的选择。Itisalsoagoodidea/alsohelpstodo...,whichcan...做……也不错，这能……词汇积累之第三段表达希望望Iwillbealwaysthereforyouifyouneedhelp.如果你需要帮助，我会一直在你身边。2.Ifyouneedfurtherinformation,don'thesitatetocontactme.如果你需要更多信息，请联系我。 3.I'llbemorethanhappyifyoucantakemyrecommendation/ideasintoconsideration.如果你能考虑我的建议/想法，我会非常高兴。4.Ihopethatmysuggestions/advicewillbebeneficial/ofbenefittoyou.我希望我的建议对你有益。 5.Ihopeyouwillfindmysuggestions/advicehelpful/useful/practical/beneficial.我希望你认为我的建议有帮助/有用/实用/有益的。谚语积累Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.

患难见真情。Tosavetimeistolengthenlife.

节约时间就是延长生命。Timelostcannotbewonagain.

时光一去不复返。.Thechiefaimofmanisnottogetmoney.

人的主要目的并不是赚钱。Themoneythemiserhoardswilldohimnogood.

守财奴积财，对自己毫无好处。Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.

一天一苹果，不用请医生。Preventionisbetterthancure.

预防胜于治疗。AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.

只工作,不玩耍,聪明小伙也变傻。Goodhealthisoverwealth.

健康是最大的财富。Happinessliesfirstofallinhealth.

幸福首先在于健康。Contentisbetterthanriches.

知足者常乐。Agoodbeginningishalfdone.

良好的开端是成功的一半。Dontputofftilltomorrowwhatshouldbedonetoday.

今日事，今日毕。Factspeaklouderthanwords.

事实胜于雄辩。Abirdinthehandisworththantwointhebush.

一鸟在手胜过双鸟在林。Striketheironwhileitishot.

趁热打铁。WheninRome,doastheRomansdo.

入乡随俗。Manproposes,goddisposes.

谋事在人，成事在天。Lookbeforeyouleap.

摸清情况再行动。Experiencemustbebought.

吃一堑，长一智。Makehaywhilethesunshines.

良机勿失。Hewhodoesnotadvancelosesground.

逆水行舟，不进则退。.Everyadvantagehasitsdisadvantage.

有利必有弊Helaughsbestwholaughslast.

谁笑到最后，谁笑得最好。Itisthefirststepthatcoststroublesome.

万事开头难。Thefarthestwayaboutisthenearestwayhome.

抄近路反而绕远路。Takethingsastheycome.

既来之，则安之Theearlybirdcatchestheworm.

早起的鸟儿有虫吃。Don'ttroubletroubleuntiltroubletroublesyou.

不要自找麻烦。30.Don'ttrytoteachyourgrandmothertosuckeggs.

不要班门弄斧子。万能写作模板Dear___________(建议对象)Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceonhowto________________________（对方的寻求建议内容）.I’dliketooffersomesuggestionsforyou.Firstofall,itisofgreatimportanceto____________________________（建议1），asyoucan_________________________________（理由1）.Then,italsohelpsto____________________________（理由2）.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato_____________________________（建议2），becausebydoingsth____________________________________（理由3）.Youcanalso____________________________（建议1）.I’mconvinced___________________________________（预测可能的结果）.Pleasetakemyproposalsintoconsideration.Ihopeyouwillfindthemuseful.Yourssincerely,_________（写信人）【高考真题】1．（2023年北京卷）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：(1)活动形式；(2)活动内容。注意：(1)词数100左右；(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearJim，____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHua2．（2023年新高考I卷）

假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：1.说明问题；2.提出建议。注意：

1.写作词数应为80个左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearRyan,I’mLiHuafromClass3.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua3．（2019年天津·高考真题）假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:

⑴你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；⑵选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；⑶希望从中有何收获。注意：⑴词数不少于100；⑵可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；⑶开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。DearChris,I'mLiJim,astudentatChenguangHighSchool.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyouforyourtime.Yours,LiJin【名校模拟题提升练】1．（2023·河北沧州·沧州市第二中学校联考三模）假定你是某英文杂志心理咨询栏目的编辑李华。最近收到了读者Ellen的电子邮件，请你给她写一封回信。DearLiHua,Idon’tlikewatchingshortvideos,butallofmyclassmatesdo.SometimesIcan’tcatchupwiththeirconversationsandjokes.Idon’twanttobeleftout,butIalsodon’twanttowastetimeonmeaninglesscontent.WhatshouldIdo?Yours,Ellen注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearEllen,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua2．（2023·辽宁铁岭·高三校联考期中）假定你是李华，你的朋友Mary来信就如何有效地阅读一本书向你征求意见。请你给她回一封邮件，内容包括1.写信目的；2.给出建议；3.表达期望。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearMary,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua3．（2023·江苏徐州·高三统考期中）你校学生会号召全体学生为了身体健康，杜绝一切电子产品。请针对学生会这项行动给校英文报写一篇投稿，内容包括：1.指出问题；2.说明理由；3.提出建议。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯Electronicproducts:friendlyorfrightening?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．（2023·福建福州·高三闽侯县第一中学校联考期中）假定你是高中生李华。为了帮助来自英国的交换生们了解中国的四大名著，学校安排你和他们进行交流。请你用英语写一篇发言稿，内容包括：1.简要介绍四大名著;2.给出阅读建议;3.表达祝愿。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Goodafternoon,dearfriends!I’dliketobrieflyintroducetheFourGreatClassicalNovelsofChinatoyouandgiveyousomeadvice.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanksforlistening.5．（2023·浙江金华·校联考一模）假定你是李华，近日，你发现同学们参与外教Peter组织的“英语角”活动的兴趣不高，请你给他写一封邮件。内容包括：1.说明问题;2.提出建议。注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。DearPeter,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua6．（2023·北京朝阳·高三统考期中）假如你是红星中学高三学生李华，你校国际部交换生Jim正在策划一次“中西文化交流”活动，作为好友，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：1.活动形式；2.活动内容。注意：1.词数100左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearJim,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua7．（2023·上海·高三上海市回民中学校考期中）期中考试过后，学校准备利用半天时间开展课余活动。目前有两个备选方案：（1）开展体育、艺术方面的活动（2）去重点大学参观考察。近期学校正在征询学生意见，请比较两个方案，给学校写一封信，谈谈你的看法。信中必须包括:1.你建议采用的方案；2.你如此建议的理由；3.你对于执行该方案的建议。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．（2022·安徽芜湖·高三校联考期中）假定你是李华，你的加拿大笔友August在今年该校举办的“汉语桥”大赛中失利。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1.表示安慰；2.提出建议。注意：1.词数80左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数DearAugust,IamsorrytohearthatyoufailedtopasstheChineseBridgeCompetitioninyourschool.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua9．（2023·江苏镇江·高三统考期中）假如你是学生会主席李华，学校英语网站邀请你写一篇博文，就国货兴起发表你的看法。请根据提示用英语写一篇短文。1.国货兴起的原因；2.国货面临的挑战；3.你的建议和期望。注意：1.词数80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。RecentyearshavewitnessedaremarkableboominthepopularityofChineseproducts,whichcanbeattributedtothefollowingfactors.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．（2022·四川南充·四川省南充高级中学校考二模）假定你是李华，你的留学生朋友Jack要在暑假期间回国，打算为他妈妈准备几件富有中国特色的礼物，特来向你咨询。请你给他回复一封邮件，内容包括：1.建议礼物旗袍和中国结；2.说明礼物原因；3.表达祝福。参考词汇：旗袍cheongsam注意：1.写作词数为100词左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

专题03建议信（应用文写作）【考情分析】年份卷别体裁话题内容2023新高考I&II卷建议信学校生活给外教提建议2023全国甲卷投稿历史文化介绍中国历史人物2023全国乙卷投稿生活学习假期习得新技能2023浙江卷投稿学校生活写一篇报道“认识身边的植物”2023北京卷建议信学校生活社团活动给出建议2022新高考I&II卷邀请信访谈节目访谈2022全国甲卷投稿世界海洋日保护海洋2022全国乙卷投稿调查结果学习英语的状况2022北京卷邀请信社会科技英语写作的线上交流2022浙江卷邀请信校园生活邀朋友体验图书馆学习室2019天津卷建议信学校生活讲座内容和话题【写作指导】把握建议信的写作框架。建议信一般是对他人求助的回复。是向别人提出合理可行的建议，让对方接受自己的想法、解决特定问题的一种回复信件。其写作时一般以第一人称和第二人称为主，主体时态为一般现在时和一般将来时。建议内容要合情合理，具有合理性和说服性。其写作框架如下：第一段：回顾对方的诉求，表明写作目的。第二段：提出具体建议并说明理由。第三段：希望对方接受建议并希望建设对其有帮助。【素材宝库】词汇积累之第一段表达写作目的IamwritingtoofferyousomeadviceonhowtoimproveyourspokenEnglish.我写信是想就如何提高英语口语水平给你一些建议。YouhaveaskedformyadviceandIwilltrytoexpressmyviewson...你向我征求意见，我会尽力表达我对于......的看法。这里有一些建议关于......3.Havinglearntthatourlibraryisplanningtobuynewbooks,I'mwillingtorecommendsomebookstoyou.得知我们图书馆准备买新书，我愿意向您推荐一些书。4.Glad/Pleased/DelightedtoknowthatyouaretravelinginShanghai，IthinkitisagoodchoicetovisitHuangpuRiver.很高兴得知你在上海旅游，我认为参观黄浦江是个不错的选择。5.Ihavelearnedthatyouhavesometroublein...andwouldliketogive/offeryouthefollowingsuggestions.我知道你在……方面有困难，因此我想给你提如下一些建议。6.Whenitcomesto/Asfor...,thefollowingaremysuggestions./Mysuggestionsareasfollows.当涉及/关于……，我的建议如下。7.I'mwritingtogiveyousomesuggestions/giveyouahand.我写这封信的目的是给你一些建议/帮助。8.I'mextremelydelightedtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtofitinthenewschoollife.很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。词汇积累之第二段体具体建议和和及理由1.ThereasonwhyIrecommendthisbookisthatitemphasizestheimportanceofgoodhabits.我推荐这本书的原因是它强调好习惯的重要性。Itisagoodwaytobroadenyourmind,throughwhichyoucanlearndifferentculturesoftheworld.这是一个很好的可以拓宽视野的方式。通过这种方式，你可以了解到世界上的不同文化。Firstofall,youshouldlistentotheteachercarefullyandtakenotesinclasssothatyoucangooveryourlessonsassoonasyoucanafterclass.首先，你应该认真听老师讲课。上课做好笔记，以便下课后可以及时复习。Irecommenditmainlyforthefollowingtworeasons.我推荐它主要有以下两个原因。Inmyopinion/AsfarasI'mconcerned/Personally,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.在我看来，采取如下行动是明智的。Ithinkitwouldbeofbenefit/beneficialifyou...我认为如果……，将会受益。Doing...isagood/great/betterchoice.做……是一个好的/棒的/更好的选择。Itisalsoagoodidea/alsohelpstodo...,whichcan...做……也不错，这能……词汇积累之第三段表达希望望Iwillbealwaysthereforyouifyouneedhelp.如果你需要帮助，我会一直在你身边。2.Ifyouneedfurtherinformation,don'thesitatetocontactme.如果你需要更多信息，请联系我。 3.I'llbemorethanhappyifyoucantakemyrecommendation/ideasintoconsideration.如果你能考虑我的建议/想法，我会非常高兴。4.Ihopethatmysuggestions/advicewillbebeneficial/ofbenefittoyou.我希望我的建议对你有益。 5.Ihopeyouwillfindmysuggestions/advicehelpful/useful/practical/beneficial.我希望你认为我的建议有帮助/有用/实用/有益的。谚语积累Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.

患难见真情。Tosavetimeistolengthenlife.

节约时间就是延长生命。Timelostcannotbewonagain.

时光一去不复返。.Thechiefaimofmanisnottogetmoney.

人的主要目的并不是赚钱。Themoneythemiserhoardswilldohimnogood.

守财奴积财，对自己毫无好处。Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.

一天一苹果，不用请医生。Preventionisbetterthancure.

预防胜于治疗。AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.

只工作,不玩耍,聪明小伙也变傻。Goodhealthisoverwealth.

健康是最大的财富。Happinessliesfirstofallinhealth.

幸福首先在于健康。Contentisbetterthanriches.

知足者常乐。Agoodbeginningishalfdone.

良好的开端是成功的一半。Dontputofftilltomorrowwhatshouldbedonetoday.

今日事，今日毕。Factspeaklouderthanwords.

事实胜于雄辩。Abirdinthehandisworththantwointhebush.

一鸟在手胜过双鸟在林。Striketheironwhileitishot.

趁热打铁。WheninRome,doastheRomansdo.

入乡随俗。Manproposes,goddisposes.

谋事在人，成事在天。Lookbeforeyouleap.

摸清情况再行动。Experiencemustbebought.

吃一堑，长一智。Makehaywhilethesunshines.

良机勿失。Hewhodoesnotadvancelosesground.

逆水行舟，不进则退。.Everyadvantagehasitsdisadvantage.

有利必有弊Helaughsbestwholaughslast.

谁笑到最后，谁笑得最好。Itisthefirststepthatcoststroublesome.

万事开头难。Thefarthestwayaboutisthenearestwayhome.

抄近路反而绕远路。Takethingsastheycome.

既来之，则安之Theearlybirdcatchestheworm.

早起的鸟儿有虫吃。Don'ttroubletroubleuntiltroubletroublesyou.

不要自找麻烦。30.Don'ttrytoteachyourgrandmothertosuckeggs.

不要班门弄斧子。万能写作模板Dear___________(建议对象)Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceonhowto________________________（对方的寻求建议内容）.I’dliketooffersomesuggestionsforyou.Firstofall,itisofgreatimportanceto____________________________（建议1），asyoucan_________________________________（理由1）.Then,italsohelpsto____________________________（理由2）.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato_____________________________（建议2），becausebydoingsth____________________________________（理由3）.Youcanalso____________________________（建议1）.I’mconvinced___________________________________（预测可能的结果）.Pleasetakemyproposalsintoconsideration.Ihopeyouwillfindthemuseful.Yourssincerely,_________（写信人）【高考真题】1．（2023年北京卷）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：(1)活动形式；(2)活动内容。注意：(1)词数100左右；(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearJim，____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHua【答案】DearJim,Hearingthatyouareplanningaclubactivitywiththethemeof“GreenBeijing”andneedmyhelp,Iamwritingtoofferyoumysuggestions.Ithinkyoucancarryoutthisactivityinaninteractiveandexperientialmanner,whichmeansstudentscanparticipateandhaveabetterunderstandingof“GreenBeijing”throughgettinginvolvedindifferentactivitiesbythemselves.Youcanshowcasegarbageclassificationonsite,planttreesandpublicizesharingeconomy,whichwillallfitintothethemeof“GreenBeijing”.Hopefully,youwillgetsomeinspirationfrommysuggestions.Wishyousuccess.Yours,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友Jim策划的“绿色北京”社团活动给出一些建议。【详解】1.词汇积累建议：suggestion→tip提供：offer→provide开展：carryout→conduct主题：theme→topic2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：Hearingthatyouareplanningaclubactivitywiththethemeof“GreenBeijing”andneedmydhelp,Iamwritingtoofferyoumysuggestions.拓展句：Sinceyouareplanningaclubactivitywiththethemeof“GreenBeijing”andneedmyhelp,Iamwritingtoofferyoumysuggestions.【点睛】[高分句型1]Hearingthatyouareplanningaclubactivitywiththethemeof“GreenBeijing”andneedmyhelp,Iamwritingtoofferyoumysuggestions.(运用了that引导宾语从句)[高分句型2]Ithinkyoucancarryoutthisactivityinaninteractiveandexperientialmanner,whichmeansstudentscanparticipateandhaveabetterunderstandingof“GreenBeijing”throughgettinginvolvedindifferentactivitiesbythemselves.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)2．（2023年新高考I卷）

假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：1.说明问题；2.提出建议。注意：

1.写作词数应为80个左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearRyan,I’mLiHuafromClass3.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua3．（2019年天津·高考真题）假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:

⑴你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；⑵选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；⑶希望从中有何收获。注意：⑴词数不少于100；⑵可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；⑶开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。DearChris,I'mLiJim,astudentatChenguangHighSchool.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyouforyourtime.Yours,LiJin【答案】DearChris,

I'mLiJim,astudentatChenguangHighSchool.It’sourgreatpleasuretohaveyouvisitourschoolandgivealectureonwesternartduringthecomingsummervacation.Whenitcomestomysuggestions,Iamquiteinterestedinwesternmusic,andexpectthatyoucoulddeliverthelectureonthistopic.Servedasabridge,westernmusicprovidesusteenagerswiththeopportunitytobroadenourhorizonsandhaveabetterunderstandingonculturediversities.Italsogivesusstrengthandhopewhenweareovercomingdifficulties.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyadvice,andIhopethatIcangainmoreknowledgethroughthelecture.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Thankyouforyourtime.Yours,LiJin【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英方教师Chris写信，就一个有关西方艺术的讲座内容给出意见。【详解】1.词汇积累做演讲：givealecture→makeaspeech提供：providesb.withsth.→refersb.sth.机会：opportunity→chance采纳建议：takeone’sadvice→followone’sadvice2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Servedasabridge,westernmusicprovidesusteenagerswiththeopportunitytobroadenourhorizonsandhaveabetterunderstandingonculturediversities.拓展句：Westernmusic，whichisservedasabridge，providesusteenagerswiththeopportunitytobroadenourhorizonsandhaveabetterunderstandingonculturediversities.【点睛】【高分句型1】Whenitcomestomysuggestions,Iamquiteinterestedinwesternmusic,andexpectthatyoucoulddeliverthelectureonthistopic.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】Italsogivesusstrengthandhopewhenweareovercomingdifficulties.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）【名校模拟题提升练】1．（2023·河北沧州·沧州市第二中学校联考三模）假定你是某英文杂志心理咨询栏目的编辑李华。最近收到了读者Ellen的电子邮件，请你给她写一封回信。DearLiHua,Idon’tlikewatchingshortvideos,butallofmyclassmatesdo.SometimesIcan’tcatchupwiththeirconversationsandjokes.Idon’twanttobeleftout,butIalsodon’twanttowastetimeonmeaninglesscontent.WhatshouldIdo?Yours,Ellen注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearEllen,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearEllen,Iknowh