2024中考英语试题研究《中考书面表达-学校和学校生活》课件

中考书面表达——学校和学校生活Whatdoyouthinkofwhenyouseethesepictures?FreetalkWhatdoyouthinkofourschool?Whatcanyouthinkofwhenwetalkaboutourschool?ThinkandsayWehavenotonly…butalso…inourschool.Weoften…there.Ourteachersarevery…Theyalways/usually/often…kind,friendly,helpful,strict,hard-working,knowledgeable,…Ourschoollifeis…Iprefer…to…Howdoweintroduceourschoolandschoollife?Readandfind

Hello,I’mMary.Nowletmeintroducemyschoolandschoollifetoyou.Myschoolisapublicschool.It’scleanandbeautiful.Youcanseemanykindsofflowershereandthere.Therearemanymodernteachingfacilitiesinmyschool,suchasthelab,theplaygroundandsoon.What’smore,althoughmyteachersarestrictwithus,theyalsocareforus.Theyarenotonlymyteachersbutalsomyfriends.Myclassmatesareveryhelpful.TheyalwayshelpmewithmyChinese.Lastbutnotleast,theactivitiesinmyschoolareverycolourful.Therearemanydifferentskindsofclubs.Ipreferreadingtotakingpartinotheractivities.SoIlikegoingtothelibrarywhenIamfree.Ilovemyschoolandschoollifeverymuch.Readandfind1.Howmanypartsarethereinthepassage?Three.BeginningMaincontentConclusion2.Whatdoesthewritertalkaboutinthemaincontent?

Thewritertalksaboutherschool,herteachers,herclassmateandtheactivitiesinherschool.3.Underlinetheconnectingwordsinthepassage.4.Whichsentencedoyoulikebetter?Chooseoneanddiscussitwithyourpartner.E.g.Ilike“Ipreferreadingtotakingpartinotheractivities.”,becausethewriteruses“prefer…to…’’inthissentences.Youwillgraduatefromourschoolinafewweeks.Whatdoyouhopeyournewschoolwillbelike?WrittenexpressionHowtowrite审列连查誊五步写作法审确定内容确定人称确定时态选择喜欢的学校，介绍学校信息和喜欢的原因第一人称事实性信息一般现在时确定结构叙述三段式首段:点明主题——点明想去的学校中间段:围绕主题，展开叙述——叙述喜欢的原因尾段:回应主题，总结升华——重申想去的愿望审确定内容:选择喜欢的学校，介绍学校信息和喜欢的原因确定人称:第一人称确定时态:一般现在时确定结构:叙述三段式首段:点明想去的学校（Beginning)中间段:叙述想去的原因(Maincontent)尾段:重申想去的愿望(Conclusion)列结合三段式，列出写作提纲BeginningIwouldliketogoto…MaincontentTheschoolis…Theteachers…Thestudents…ConclusionIhope…连1.连词成句BeginningIwouldliketogotoOrangeSchool.MaincontentTheschoolisprivate.It’swell-known.Theteachersareyoungandactive.Thestudentshavecolourfulactivities.ConclusionIhopeIcangotoOrangeSchool.——添加动词和关键信息连2.扩句成段MaincontentsTheschoolisprivate.It’swell-known.ThePurpleSchoolispublic.Ithasalonghistory.IlikeOrangeSchoolbetter.Theschoolisprivate.It’swell-knowninourcity.——添加补充信息连2.扩句成段Maincontents——添加补充信息Theteachersareyoungandactive.TheteachersinPurpleSchoolishard-working.Theteachersthereareyoungandactive.Icangetalongwellwiththem.连2.扩句成段Maincontent——添加补充信息Thestudentshavecolourfulactivities.ThestudentsinPurpleSchoolhavelesshomework.ThestudentsinOrangeSchoolhavecolorfulactivities.Ilikehavingmorecoloufulactivities.连3.修改润色——添加连接词、高阶词汇或句型

ThePurpleSchoolispublic.Ithasalonghistory.IlikeOrangeSchoolbetter.Theschoolisprivate.It’swell-knowninourcity.

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thePurpleSchoolispublicandhasalonghistory.IlikeOrangeSchoolbetter.Becauseit’sawell-knownprivateschoolinourcity.连3.修改润色——添加连接词、高阶词汇或句型TheteachersinPurpleSchoolishard-working.Theteachersthereareyoungandactive.Icangetalongwellwiththem.

IknowtheteachersinPurpleSchoolishard-working.Butmostofthemarestrictwithstudents.Instead,theteachersherearenotonlyyoungbutalsoactive.Theyarepatientwithstudents.So

Icangetalongwellwiththem.连3.修改润色——添加连接词、高阶词汇或句型ThestudentsinPurpleSchoolhavelesshomework.ThestudentsinOrangeSchoolhavecolorfulactivities.Ilikehavingmorecoloufulactivities.

What’smore,OrangeSchooloffersmanycolourfulactivitiestostudents.It’sgoodtohavelesshomeworkinPurpleSchool.ButIpreferhavingmorecolourfulactivitiestohavinglesshomework.查对照中考英语作文评分标准逐项自查查要点是否齐全查语言结构是否丰富，行文是否流畅，表达是否清楚查是否有错误表达查是否有达到写作目的注意：句式运用的多样性IlikeOrangeSchoolbetter.IpreferOrangeSchool.ThefirstreasonIchoosethisschoolis…Thestudentshavecolourfulactivities.Theactivitiesofthestudentsthereareverycolourful.Thestudentsintheschoolcanenjoymanykindsofcolourfulactivities.工整誊写，注意词间距、行间距和段间距IwouldliketogotoOrangeSchool.

AlthoughthePurpleSchoolispublicandhasalonghistory.IlikeOrangeSchoolbetter.Becauseit’sawell-knownprivateschoolinourcity.IknowtheteachersinPurpleSchoolishard-working.Butmostofthemarestrictwithstudents.Instead,theteachersherearenotonlyyoungbutalsoactive.Theyarepatientwithstudents.SoIcangetalongwellwiththem.What’smore,OrangeSchooloffersmanycolourfulactivitiestostudents.It’sgoodtohavelesshomeworkinPurpleSchool.ButIpreferhavingmorecolourfulactivitiestohavinglesshomework.Inmyopinion,OrangeSchoolismoresuitableforme.IhopeIcangotoOrangeSchoolandenjoymylifethere.誊Trytowrite假如你是华文中学的一名学生，即将中学毕业，马上就要进入高中学习，你对未来的高中生活充满了憧憬。请你以“MyLifeinHighSchool”为题，根据表格信息，写一篇80词左右的英语短文(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。内容要点学校宁静而美丽，有悠久历史老师

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丰富多彩，可自由选择要求：1．短文的标题和开头部分已给出，不计入总词数；2．语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。MyLifeinHighSchoolMymiddleschoollifewillbeover.AndIwillentermyhighschool.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Checklist时态是否运用了正确的时态结构是否使用了三段式的结构内容是否涵盖了所有要点语言是否使用了丰富的语言，行文是否流畅，表达是否清楚写作目的是否达到了写作目的ExampleMyLifeinHighSchoolMymiddleschoollifewillbeover.AndIwillentermyhighschool.Iexpectmylifeinhighschoolwillbeverywonderful.

Inmyopinion,

myhighschoolwillbenotonlypeacefulbutalsobeautiful.Itwillbeaschoolwithalonghist