广东高考新人教版应用文写作指导求助信课件

求助信假如你是李华，你的一张照片被人发布到网上，你因此受到同学的取笑。对此你感到烦恼，所以决定写一封信给你的老师，寻求她的帮助。要点如下：1. 具体的烦恼；2. 希望得到的帮助。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearMissLi,IamLiHua,oneofyourstudentsinClass1.Ihavesometroubleinanonlineexperience,whichbothersmealot.Therefore,I’mwritingtoseekhelpfromyou.Infact,itisreallyabadexperience.Lastweek,aphotoofminewaspostedonlinebyaccident.Asaresult,Ihavebeenmadefunofbymyclassmates.Ican'thelpfeelingupset.HowcanIstopthem?Ihopeyoucangivemesomeadvice.Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldhelpme.Yourssincerely,LiHuaDearMissLi,IamLiHua,oneofyourstudentsinClass1.Ihavesometroubleinanonlineexperience,whichbothersmealot.Therefore,I’mwritingtoseekhelpfromyou.Infact,itisreallyabadexperience.Lastweek,aphotoofminewaspostedonlinebyaccident.Asaresult,Ihavebeenmadefunofbymyclassmates.Ican'thelpfeelingupset.HowcanIstopthem?Ihopeyoucangivemesomeadvice.Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldhelpme.Yourssincerely,LiHua第一段：开头：（1）自我介绍（如果是向朋友求助就不用自我介绍，而是改为问候,如:Howareyou?或者Howiseverythinggoing?）；（2）背景和目的。相关句型开头：Ihavesomedifficulties/troublein….Therefore,I’mwritingtoseekhelpfromyou.Iamwritingtoaskyoutodomeafavour.

DearMissLi,IamLiHua,oneofyourstudentsinClass1.Ihavesometroubleinanonlineexperience,whichbothersmealot.Therefore,I’mwritingtoseekhelpfromyou.Infact,itisreallyabadexperience.Lastweek,aphotoofminewaspostedonlinebyaccident.Asaresult,Ihavebeenmadefunofbymyclassmates.Ican'thelpfeelingupset.HowcanIstopthem?Ihopeyoucangivemesomeadvice.Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldhelpme.Yourssincerely,LiHua第二段：主体部分：困难/麻烦的具体内容和希望得到的帮助。DearMissLi,IamLiHua,oneofyourstudentsinClass1.Ihavesometroubleinanonlineexperience,whichbothersmealot.Therefore,I’mwritingtoseekhelpfromyou.Infact,itisreallyabadexperience.Lastweek,aphotoofminewaspostedonlinebyaccident.Asaresult,Ihavebeenmadefunofbymyclassmates.Ican'thelpfeelingupset.

HowcanIstopthem?Ihopeyoucangivemesomeadvice.Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldhelpme.Yourssincerely,LiHua第二段：主体部分：困难/麻烦的具体内容：（应说明因果，不能写过多无助于主题的内容。）可采取总分式或列举式。DearMissLi,IamLiHua,oneofyourstudentsinClass1.Ihavesometroubleinanonlineexperience,whichbothersmealot.Therefore,I’mwritingtoseekhelpfromyou.Infact,itisreallyabadexperience.Lastweek,aphotoofminewaspostedonlinebyaccident.Asaresult,Ihavebeenmadefunofbymyclassmates.Ican'thelpfeelingupset.HowcanIstopthem?Ihopeyoucangivemesomeadvice.Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldhelpme.Yourssincerely,LiHua第二段：主体部分：希望得到的帮助：（可以有针对性地提出求助）可参考句子：I'dliketoknowwhattodo.Iwonderhowtodealwiththeproblem.Ihopeyoucangivemesomeadvice.Couldyoubesokindtogivemesomeusefulsuggestions?DearMissLi,IamLiHua,oneofyourstudentsinClass1.Ihavesometroubleinanonlineexperience,whichbothersmealot.Therefore,I’mwritingtoseekhelpfromyou.Infact,itisreallyabadexperience.Lastweek,aphotoofminewaspostedonlinebyaccident.Asaresult,Ihavebeenmadefunofbymyclassmates.Ican'thelpfeelingupset.HowcanIstopthem?Ihopeyoucangivemesomeadvice.Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldhelpme.Yourssincerely,LiHua第三段：结尾：表达期盼之情。相关句型

结尾：Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldhelpme.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldlendmeahelpinghand.二、牛刀小试假定你是李华，是一名刚到美国学校的交换生，你在生活上和学习上遇到了一些困难，请你给你的好友John写一封求助信，要点如下：1.不适应西方饮食；2.感到孤独；3.上课听不懂。注意：1.词数80词左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearJohn,Howiseverythinggoing?IhavesomedifficultiesinlifeandstudyinAmerica.Therefore,I’mwritingtoaskyouforhelp.Tobeginwith,Ican’tadapttothewesterndiet.Meanwhile,Ioftenfeelhomesickandlonely.What’sworse,Istillfindithardtofollowthenativeteachersinclass,whichresultsinmypoorgrades.Iwonderhowtodealwith