2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：人生哲理类-鞋匠与富人的故事 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习人生哲理类鞋匠与富人的故事1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文InoldParis,acobblerusedtoliveandmakeandmendshoesandsingsongs.Hewasaveryhappycobbler,singingalldaylongandkeepingtimewithhishammerorhisneedle.Uponestair,therelivedaveryrichman,sorichthathecouldnotsleepatnightfortryingtocounthismoney,andkeepitsafe.Sothisrichmanlayawakeallnightandalwaysfellasleepinthemorning.Butnosoonerhadhefallenasleepthanhewasawakenedagain.Itwasnothismoneythatwakenedhimthistime;itwasthecobbler,whowassittingathisdoorsewingaway,andsingingashappilyasabird.4续写原文Therichmanwenttoafriendandsaid,"Ican'tsleepatnightforthinkingofmymoney,andIcan'tsleepinthemorningforlisteningtothatcobbler'ssinging.WhatamItodo?”Thisfriendwasawiseman,andgavehimaplan.Thenextevening,whilethecobblerwassingingawayasusual,therichmancamedownwithabagfilledwithsomethingthatjingled（叮当作响）.“Here,cobbler,"saidtherichman,“Ihavebroughtyouapresentofahundredcrowns（克朗，旧时货币名称）,becauseyou'realwayssohappy.”5续写原文Thecobblerwassurprisedthough,hetookthemoneyandthankedtherichman.Hehadneverseensomuchmoneyinhislifebefore,butsomehowhefeltworriedifthecrownsmightbestolenbysomeone.Sohewentintothedarkestpartofhishousetocountthecrowns,andhidthebaginthebottomofthebed.Twoorthreetimeseveryhourhewentintoseewhetherthebagwasallright,forhewasafraidofsomebodytakinghismoney.Whenhiswifeaskedhimwhatwasthematterwithhim,hebecameangryandshoutedather,athinghehadneverdonebefore.6段首句Paragraph1:Achangehadcomeoverthecobbler.Paragraph2:Thecobblermissedtheoldhappydays.Sohemadeupmindwhattodo.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一个快乐的鞋匠每天早起坐在门口一边干活一边唱歌，这吵醒了晚上睡不着数钱而早上才刚刚入睡的楼下的富人。为了解决这个问题，富人听了朋友的计划送给皮匠了一百克朗作为礼物，从此他总是小心翼翼地守护这这些钱，而且开始对着妻子大喊大叫。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Achangehadcomeoverthecobbler.由第一段首句内容“鞋匠有了变化。”可知，第一段可描写这个鞋匠的生活和工作完全被这一百克朗改变后的样子。11续写思路分析Thecobblermissedtheoldhappydays.Sohemadeupmindwhattodo.由第二段首句内容“鞋匠很怀念过去快乐的日子。所以他决定了要做什么。”可知，第二段可描写鞋匠把钱还给了富人，又恢复了往日的快乐。12续写思路分析续写线索鞋匠工作的时候想着钱——频繁给钱换地方——为钱的安全彻夜不眠——很不开心——来到富人家放下钱——又开始快乐唱歌13续写素材可用词汇：行为类①.想着：thinkof/have...inmind②.睡不着：stayawake/bewakeful③.放下：laydown/putdown情绪类①.难过：beunhappy/sad/upset②.快乐：behappy/excited/amazed/delighted14续写素材[高分句型1].Whenhewasworking,hecouldn’thelpthinkingofthemoney,soheraninandouttoseeifhismoneywasallright.(运用了when引导时间状语从句；so连接并列句；if引导宾语从句)[高分句型2].Sir,hereareyourhundredcrowns.(运用全部倒装结构)[高分句型3].HehadtomovetoanotherpartofPariswherehecouldfallasleepinthedaytime.(运用了where引导的定语从句)15Part3范文呈现16范文呈现Achangehadcomeoverthecobbler.Whenhewasworking,hecouldn’thelpthinkingofthemoney,soheraninandouttoseeifhismoneywasallright.Hekeptchangingthebagofcrownsfromplacetoplacewheneverhegotachance.Hestayedawakeatnightbecausehealwaystriedtocounthiscrownsandkeepthemsafe.Sohebecametiredinthedayanddidlittlework.Henolongersang,andhewasveryunhappy.17范文译文Oneday,thecobblermadeuphismindwhattodo.Hewentuptotherichman’sroom.Whenhehadentered,hewentuptothetableandlaiddownthebag.Hesaid,“Sir,hereareyourhundredcrowns.ThenIshallbehappyagain.”Nextmorningthingswereasbadaseverforthepoorrichmanasthecobblerstartedhishappysingingagain.HehadtomovetoanotherpartofPariswherehecouldfallasleepinthedaytime.18范文译文鞋匠身上发生了变化。当他工作的时候，他忍不住想到钱，所以他跑进跑出，看看他的钱是否没问题。只要有机会，他就不停地把那袋皇冠从一个地方换到另一个地方。他晚上一直醒着，因为他总是试图数着他的皇冠并保证它们的安全。所以他白天累了，几乎不干活。他不再唱歌了，他很不开心。一天，鞋匠下定决心要做什么。他走进富人的房间。他进去后，走