新高考英语三轮冲刺重难点练习重难点16 应用文写作专练（解析版）

重难点16应用文写作根据新高考三年的考情分析，应用文是每年高考考查频率最高的体裁之一，其中以书信、电子邮件最为常见。从内容上看，近几年高考书信写作主要包括致歉信、致谢信、笔友信、慰问信、投诉信、邀请信、介绍信、求职信、读者请求的解答信及其答复读者的信等。预计2024年高考应用文写作考查形式仍以书信开放性为主。近3年新高考应用文写作数据分析试卷类型年份体裁话题新高考I卷2023建议信分组练习口语新高考II卷2023建议信分组练习口语新高考I卷2022邀请信邀请外教做访谈新高考II卷2022邀请信邀请外教做访谈新高考I卷2021投稿短文读报经历新高考II卷2021投稿短文读报经历01/词汇升级多使用高级词汇，高级词汇指的是大纲中没有列入或没有识记要求，但在实际运用中却出现比较频繁的词汇，比如frustration,awkward,awfully,concern等。这些词汇为作文增添光彩，从而使考生稳拿高分。02/句式升级写作中精彩句式的合理使用会使文章读起来抑扬顿挫。固定句式(如感叹句、复合结构、强调句型等)、定语从句、现在分词短语等都属于较复杂的语法结构。这些结构的正确使用，可以使文章的语言充满层次感，从而较好地反映出考生的语言运用能力。03/逻辑升级衔接过渡词能使语言连贯性得以实现。句与句、段与段之间恰当地使用衔接过渡词不仅可以起到承上启下的作用，也可以使文章脉络走向更为清晰明朗。所以在写作中运用过渡词，对写好文章有着重要意义。典例分析典例分析典例一（2023年新高考I卷）

假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：1.说明问题；2.提出建议。注意：

1.写作词数应为80个左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearRyan,I’mLiHuafromClass3.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearRyan,I’mLiHuafromClass3.Ithinkit’snotagoodideatorandomlypairupstudentsforthespokenEnglishtrainingafterclass.Thereasonsareasfollows.Tobeginwith,randomlypairingupstudentsmayleadtounbalancedlanguageabilitieswithinthegroups.Thiscanhindertheprogressofstudentsasthemoreadvancedonemaydominatetheconversation,leavinglittleroomfortheotherstudentstoimprove.Besides,studentsmayfeeluncomfortableorlessmotivatedifpairedwithsomeonewhotheydon’tgetalongwithorhavedifficultycommunicatingwith.Mysuggestionistogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.Thisway,everyonecanfeelmorecomfortablepracticingandimprovingtheirspokenEnglishtogether.Thankyouforconsideringmysuggestion.Yourssincerely,LiHua【导语】本篇是应用文写作，要求考生给外教写一封邮件，告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。【详解】1.词汇积累首先：tobeginwith→firstofall提高：improve→progress建议：suggestion→advice选择：choose→select2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Mysuggestionistogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.拓展句：Mysuggestionisthatwearesupposedtogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.【点睛】[高分句型1]Thiscanhindertheprogressofstudentsasthemoreadvancedonemaydominatetheconversation,leavinglittleroomfortheotherstudentstoimprove.（运用了现在分词作状语）[高分句型2]Besides,Studentsmayfeeluncomfortableorlessmotivatedifpairedwithsomeonewhotheydon’tgetalongwithorhavedifficultycommunicatingwith.（运用了省略句和who引导定语从句）典例二（2022年新高考I卷）假定你是校广播站英语节目“TalkandTalk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：1.节目介绍；2.访谈的时间和话题。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearCaroline,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearCaroline,ThisismyfirsttimethatIhaveinvitedyoutoattendourprogram—TalkandTalk.ItistenyearssinceTalkandTalkwasestablished.Thisisanamazingprogramwhereyoucanshareyourideaswithstudents.Now,whenhavingtroubleinlearningEnglishwell,plentyofstudentsurgetoknowhowtodealwithit.Asourdistinguishedforeignlanguageteacher,youraidcanhelpusalot.IfyouareavailableonthisSunday,ItogetherwiththewholeTalkandTalkstaffamwaitingforyourcoming.I’dappreciateitifyoutakemyinvitationintoconsideration.Yours,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件邀请你的外教Caroline来你校的广播站英语节目“TalkandTalk”做一次访谈。【详解】1.词汇积累参加：attend→participatein建立：establish→setup帮助：aid→assistance许多：plentyof→alotof2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Asourdistinguishedforeignlanguageteacher,youraidcanhelpusalot.拓展句：Youareourdistinguishedforeignlanguageteacher,whoseaidcanhelpusalot.【点睛】[高分句型1]Thisisanamazingprogramwhereyoucanshareyourideaswithstudents.(运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]Now,whenhavingtroubleinlearningEnglishwell,plentyofstudentsurgetoknowhowtodealwithit.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句的省略结构)（建议用时：20分钟/篇）1．（2023·广东梅州·广东梅县东山中学校考模拟预测）假如你是李华，你校英语报“头脑风暴”版块中提到一个社会现象：ArtificialIntelligenceandrobotscandovariousthingsforhumans,thusmakinganumberofpeoplelosetheirjobs.请你写一篇短文，谈谈你对该现象的看法，内容包括：1.介绍该社会现象；2.谈谈你对该现象的看法；3.应对措施。注意：词数100左右。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Nowadays,ArtificialIntelligence,shortforAI,hasbeenwidelyappliedtomanyaspectsinourlife.ManypeopleareconcernedthatAIwillreplacehumanlaborinthefutureandcausejobloss.【介绍社会现象】ItcannotbedeniedthatAIwilldefinitelyreplacehumanlaborinsomeindustries,butit’sunlikelytobeusedinallworksoflife.Insomespecialfields,robotscan’tdothehighlydemandingtaskbecausetheyareprogrammed,notcreative.What’smore,AItechnologystillhasalongwaytogotofullmaturity,soit’sunnecessarytoworryaboutthejoblosses.【对社会的看法】Asstudents,weshoulddevelopourcreativity.Afterall,itistheabilitytocreatesomethingnewthatmakesussmarterthanrobots.【应对措施】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华，你校英语报“头脑风暴”版块中提到一个社会现象：ArtificialIntelligenceandrobotscandovariousthingsforhumans,thusmakinganumberofpeoplelosetheirjobs.请考生写一篇短文，谈谈对该现象的看法。【详解】1.词汇积累代替：replace→taketheplaceof不可能的：unlikely→impossible此外：What’smore→Besides担心：worryabout→beanxiousabout2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Nowadays,ArtificialIntelligence,shortforAI,hasbeenwidelyappliedtomanyaspectsinourlife.拓展句：Nowadays,AI,whichisshortforArtificialIntelligence,hasbeenwidelyappliedtomanyaspectsinourlife.【点睛】【高分句型1】ManypeopleareconcernedthatAIwillreplacehumanlaborinthefutureandcausejobloss.（运用了that连接宾语从句）【高分句型2】Afterall,itistheabilitytocreatesomethingnewthatmakesussmarterthanrobots.（运用了it作形式主语，不定式作真正的主语和that引导的定语从句）2．（2023·广东佛山·统考模拟预测）你校英语角将举办英语演讲比赛。请你“DevelopaReadingHabit”为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：1.养成阅读习惯的重要性；2.你的建议。注意：1.词数应为80左右；2.题目和首句已为你写好。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DevelopaReadingHabitAreadinghabitisimportantforus.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:DevelopaReadingHabitAreadinghabitisimportantforus.Undoubtedly,readinghelpstoexpandourknowledgeandunderstandingoftheworld.Byreadingbooksondifferenttopics,wecangaininsightsintodifferentcultures,histories,andperspectives.Thiscanhelpustobecomemoreempatheticandopen-mindedindividuals.Moreover,readingisagreatwaytorelax.Whenweread,wecanescapefromthestressesofeverydaylifeandenterintoadifferentworld,whichcanimproveourmentalhealth.Todevelopareadinghabit,itisimportanttosetasidesometimeeachdayforreading.Startwithshortbooksorarticlesthatinterestyouandgraduallyincreasethereadingtime.Joiningabookcluborfindingareadingbuddycanalsomotivateyoutoreadmore.Itisnevertoolatetostartreading,solet’stakethetimetoenjoythepleasureandbenefitsofreading.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生以“DevelopaReadingHabit”为题写一篇英语演讲比赛的发言稿，需阐述养成阅读习惯的重要性，并分享自己的建议。【详解】1.词汇积累毫无疑问：undoubtedly→doubtlessly,unquestionably思想开明的：open-minded→broad-minded,open,receptive此外：moreover→inaddition,additionally,besides改善：improve→sharpen,enhance重要的：important→essential,crucial,significant,vital从……开始：startwith→beginwith,commencewith使……感兴趣，吸引：interest→attract,intrigue,fascinate激励：motivate→inspire,stimulate2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Byreadingbooksondifferenttopics,wecangaininsightsintodifferentcultures,histories,andperspectives.Thiscanhelpustobecomemoreempatheticandopen-mindedindividuals.拓展句：Byreadingbooksondifferenttopics,wecangaininsightsintodifferentcultures,histories,andperspectives,whichcanhelpustobecomemoreempatheticandopen-mindedindividuals.【点睛】【高分句型1】Whenweread,wecanescapefromthestressesofeverydaylifeandenterintoadifferentworld,whichcanimproveourmentalhealth.（运用了When引导时间状语从句及which引导非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Startwithshortbooksorarticlesthatinterestyouandgraduallyincreasethereadingtime.（运用了that引导限制性定语从句）3．（2023·江苏·统考模拟预测）假定你是高三学生李华，在上周的年级读后续写竞赛中，你的续写得分为16分（满分25分），你觉得此分数偏低不太合理。请你给评委Mr.Davis用英语写一份邮件，内容包括：1.说明问题；2.给出理由。参考词汇：读后续写continuationwritingDearMr.Davis,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearMr.Davis,

IamLihua,aparticipantinyoucontinuationwritingcompetition.Havingscoredonly16formycontinuationwriting,Ifeltitunfair,soIamwritingtoyoutostatemyreasons.

Formywriting,Ifeltittotallymeetstherequirementputforwardinthecontest.Tobeginwith,thestructureofmycompositionisdefinitelyclearandtheplotdevelopsreasonably,noprolixityatall.Additionally,thewordsandsentencesusedarecolorful,withoutrepeatedlyusingthesamewordagainandagain.Ievenwrotesomecompoundsentencestoupdatemywriting,suchasattributiveclause,theemphaticpattern,invertedsentenceandsoon.Finally,awell-knownsayingisusedtoendmyarticle,whichIthinkisaperfecthighlightofthepassage.

Inaword,withthemeritsmentionedabove,IwonderwhyIgotsuchalowscore.Ifitisconvenientforyou,pleasegivemeanexplanation.Yourssincerely,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达为一篇应用文。要求学生代替李华给续写竞赛的评委老师写一封邮件，陈述自己续写得分为16分，觉得此分数偏低不太合理的理由。【详解】1.词汇积累：陈述：state→makeastatementof而且：additionally→what’smore/inaddition/furthermore完美的：perfect→excellent/outstanding2.句式拓展：同义句转换原句：Tobeginwith,thestructureofmycompositionisdefinitelyclearandtheplotdevelopsreasonably,noprolixityatall.拓展句：Tobeginwith,thestructureofmycompositionisdefinitelyclear,withtheplotdevelopingreasonably,noprolixityatall.【点睛】【高分句型1】Havingscoredonly16formycontinuationwriting,Ifeltitunfair,soIamwritingtoyoutostatemyreasons.(运用了现在分词作状语)【高分句型2】Finally,awell-knownsayingwasusedtoendmyarticle,whichIthinkisaperfecthighlightofthepassage.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)4．（2023·江苏扬州·江苏省高邮中学校考模拟预测）你校上周与新华中学举办了一场篮球比赛，你校以一分的优势险胜对方。请你用英语写一份广播稿，在校广播站英语新闻栏目向全校师生广播。内容包括：1．比赛概况;2．简短评论。注意：1．写作词数应为80左右;2．请按如下格式作答。Hello,everyone!HerecomestheschoolEnglishNews._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sthenewsofthehour.【答案】Hello,everyone!HerecomestheschoolEnglishNews.TheCityStadiumwitnessedabasketballgamebetweenXinhuaMiddleSchoolandourschoollastSaturday,andourteamnarrowlywonbyonescore.Inthefirsthalf,ourteamwasatadisadvantagebutallplayerscooperatedperfectlyandtriedtheirbesttoscoreandblocktheopponentteam.Atthelastmoment,wewonwithaperfectshot.Itwasreallyafantasticclosegame,whichhasnotonlystrengthenedthefriendshipbetweenthetwoschoolsbutencouragedusnottogiveupinfaceofadversity.That’sthenewsofthehour.【导语】本文是一篇应用文。你校上周与新华中学举办了一场篮球比赛，你校以一分的优势险胜对方。请你用英语写一份广播稿，在校广播站英语新闻栏目向全校师生广播。内容包括：1.比赛概况；2.简短评论。【详解】1.词汇积累见证：witness→see比赛：game→competition尽力做：tryone’sbesttodosth→sparenoefforttodosth很棒的：fantastic→fabulous2.句式拓展并列句变复合句原句：TheCityStadiumwitnessedabasketballgamebetweenXinhuaMiddleSchoolandourschoollastSaturday,andourteamnarrowlywonbyonescore.拓展句：TheCityStadiumwitnessedabasketballgamebetweenXinhuaMiddleSchoolandourschoollastSaturday,whenourteamnarrowlywonbyonescore.【点睛】【高分句型1】Inthefirsthalf,ourteamwasatadisadvantagebutallplayerscooperatedperfectlyandtriedtheirbesttoscoreandblocktheopponentteam.(运用了but连接的并列句)【高分句型2】Itwasreallyafantasticclosegame,whichhasnotonlystrengthenedthefriendshipbetweenthetwoschoolsbutencouragedusnottogiveupinfaceofadversity.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)5．（2023·江苏镇江·统考模拟预测）假如你是某国际学校学生李华，在过去的一个月里，你多次参加所在社区的社区服务活动，现向校英文报投稿，内容包括：1．服务经历；2．你的感受。注意：1．写作词数应为80左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】LastmonthItookpartinacommunityserviceprojectorganized,whichprovedtobeatrulyrewardingexperience.Tohelpyoungpeopledevelopabettersenseofsocialresponsibilityandcontributemoretoourcommunity,aseriesofactivitieswereconducted.Forinstance,wepaidregularvisitstothenursinghometokeeptheseniorscompany.Wealsohandedoutleafletstopassers-bytoraisepeople’sawarenessofenvironmentalprotection.Byvolunteeringinthoseactivities,Iclearlyunderstandthateveryonecandotheirparttomakeapositiveimpactonthelivesofothers.【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文。要求考生向校英文报投稿，介绍自己参加所在社区的社区服务活动的经历和感受。【详解】1.词汇积累参加：takepartin→participatein帮助：help→assist例如：forinstance→forexample积极的：positive→active2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Wealsohandedoutleafletstopassers-bytoraisepeople’sawarenessofenvironmentalprotection.拓展句：Wealsohandedoutleafletstopassers-by,whichaimedtoraisepeople’sawarenessofenvironmentalprotection.【点睛】【高分句型1】LastmonthItookpartinacommunityserviceprojectorganized,whichprovedtobeatrulyrewardingexperience.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)【高分句型2】Tohelpyoungpeopledevelopabettersenseofsocialresponsibilityandcontributemoretoourcommunity,aseriesofactivitieswereconducted.(运用了非谓语动词不定式作目的状语)6．（2023·江苏苏州·统考模拟预测）假定你是李华，是校学生会主席，你校将参观苏州古城墙遗址。请你以学生会名义写一篇倡议书号召全校同学保护古城墙遗址。内容包括：1.古城墙遗址的重要性；2.保护古城墙遗址的倡议。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dearfellowstudents,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Students’Union【答案】Onepossibleversion:Dearfellowstudents,Withourvisitto“SuzhouAncientCityWalls”approaching,Icalloneveryonetotakeanactivepartinprotectingthem.Ancientcitywallsareofcriticalimportancebecausetheyarewitnessestooursplendidandprofoundculture.Meanwhile,ancientcitywallsareacrystallizationofwisdomofpastgenerationsandanirreplaceablesourceofinspiration.Thus,itisimperativetoprotectthem.Weshouldbehaveproperlywhensteppingonthesetime-honoredwalls.Litteringandscribblingonwallsarestrictlyprohibited.Let’sworktogethertomakesuretheancientwallsremaintheiroriginallook.Students’Union【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生写一篇倡议书号召同学保护古城墙遗址，需阐明古城墙遗址的重要性，并说明保护古城墙遗址的具体倡议。【详解】1.词汇积累呼吁：callon→appealto,urge参与：takepartin→participatein,engagein关键的：critical→crucial,decisive灿烂的：splendid→glorious,magnificent,spectacular同时：meanwhile→meantime,atthesametime无法取代的：irreplaceable→unique,incomparable因此：thus→asaresult,consequently,therefore必要的：imperative→essential,vital禁止：prohibit→forbid,ban2.句式拓展同义句原句：Withourvisitto“SuzhouAncientCityWalls”approaching,Icalloneveryonetotakeanactivepartinprotectingthem.拓展句：Asourvisitto“SuzhouAncientCityWalls”approaches,Icalloneveryonetotakeanactivepartinprotectingthem.【点睛】【高分句型1】Ancientcitywallsareofcriticalimportancebecausetheyarewitnessestooursplendidandprofoundculture.（运用了从属连词because引导原因状语从句）【高分句型2】Let’sworktogethertomakesuretheancientwallsremaintheiroriginallook.（运用了不定式短语tomake…作目的状语、连接词that引导名词性从句作makesure的宾语并被省略）7．（2023·浙江杭州·校联考模拟预测）你校英语俱乐部拟创办校英文刊物，将召开俱乐部成员会议，商讨刊物栏目(columns)。假如你是成员李华，请你写一份会议发言稿，提议开设一个栏目。内容包括：1.栏目名称；2.开设理由。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Hello,mydearfellows!___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文Hello,mydearfellows.I’mreallyexcitedtobeinformedthatwearegoingtostartanEnglishjournaltogether,whichisdefinitelyawonderfulidea.It’ssuchagoldenopportunitytoenhancestudents’EnglishcapabilityandappreciatethecharmoftheEnglishlanguage.Asforproposals,I’dliketorecommend“Students’Voice”asadistinctivecolumn.Asstudyingisalwaysstudents’toppriority,westudentsareundergreatpressureandlackopportunitiestobelistenedto.Whynothelpstudentsvoiceinnerfeelingsandhaveagoodmoodtoembracethetoughyetbrightfuture?Thiscolumn,Ipromise,isboundtobeapreciousoutletandasteppingstonetocommunicatingfluentlyinEnglish.That’sallformyadvice!Thankyou!【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你校英语俱乐部拟创办校英文刊物，将召开俱乐部成员会议，商讨刊物栏目(columns)。假如你是成员李华，请你写一份会议发言稿，提议开设一个栏目。【详解】1.词汇积累压力：pressure→stress拥抱：embrace→hug绝对：definitely→absolutely机会：opportunity→chance2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：Whynothelpstudentsvoiceinnerfeelingsandhaveagoodmoodtoembracethetoughyetbrightfuture?拓展句：Itwillbehelpfulforstudentstovoiceinnerfeelingsandhaveagoodmoodtoembracethetoughyetbrightfuture.【点睛】[高分句型1]I’mreallyexcitedtobeinformedthatwearegoingtostartanEnglishjournaltogether,whichisdefinitelyawonderfulidea.(运用了that引导宾语从句和关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]Asstudyingisalwaysstudents’toppriority,westudentsareundergreatpressureandlackopportunitiestobelistenedto.(运用了as引导原因状语从句)8．（2023·江苏扬州·统考模拟预测）假定你所在的城市正在创建全国文明城市，请写一篇演讲稿，呼吁全体同学行动起来，为创建文明城市作出自己的贡献。内容包括：1.创建文明城市的内容与意义；2.呼吁同学们从身边小事做起(不少于两点)。词汇：文明城市civilizedcity注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Boysandgirls,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyou.【答案】Boysandgirls,Ashasbeenpromotedbyourschool,wearetobuildacivilizedcity,inwhichcaseourcitycanbecleanerandmorecompetitive,andalltheresidentswillbebetteroff.Oncampus,weshouldpickuplitterwhilewewalkaround,orhelpotherswhennecessary.Athome,wecanpersuadeourparentstoquitsmokingandgetalongwellwithneighbors.Besides,thecoresocialistvaluesoughttobeputintopractice.Thankyou.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生演讲稿，呼吁全体同学行动起来，为创建文明城市作出自己的贡献。【详解】1.词汇积累建设：build→setup应该：should→besupposedto放弃：quit→giveup此外：besides→what’smore2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Besides,thecoresocialistvaluesoughttobeputintopractice拓展句：Besides,thecoresocialistvaluesoughttobeputintopractice,whichIthinkisessentialforustobuildacivilizedcity.【点睛】【高分句型1】Ashasbeenpromotedbyourschool,wearetobuildacivilizedcity,inwhichcaseourcitycanbecleanerandmorecompetitive,andalltheresidentswillbebetteroff.（运用as和“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Oncampus,weshouldpickuplitterwhilewewalkaround,orhelpotherswhennecessary.（运用了while引导的时间状语从句以及状语从句的省略）9．（2023·江苏·统考二模）假如你是李华，你刚刚参观了你市博物馆举办的一次“遇见艺术家”的展览，请为你校英文报写一则评论，内容包括：1.展览概况；2.观展感受；3.意见建议。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.为使行文连贯，可以适当增加细节。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

LastSaturday,Ijustvisitedanexhibitiontitled“MeetingArtists”heldbyourcity’smuseum.Theexhibitionattractedmanymastersandamateursathomeandabroad.ManyartworksincludingChinesehandwritingandlandscapepaintingsfromancientandmoderntimeswereonshow.Thehostexplainedeveryworkindetailsonthespot.Theexhibitionleftadeepimpressiononme.Inmyview,itnotonlypromotedtheinheritanceofChinesetraditionalculturebutstrengthenedournationalprideaswell.Ihopetherewillbemoreactivitieslikethisinthefuture.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一则关于刚刚参观的市博物馆举办的一次“遇见艺术家”展览的评论。【详解】1.词汇积累参观：visit→payavisitto举办：hold→throw展览：onshow→ondisplay详细地：indetails→detailedly2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：LastSaturday,Ijustvisitedanexhibitiontitled“MeetingArtists”heldbyourcity’smuseum.拓展句：LastSaturday,Ijustvisitedanexhibitionwhichwastitled“MeetingArtists”heldbyourcity’smuseum.【点睛】【高分句型1】Inmyview,itnotonlypromotedtheinheritanceofChinesetraditionalculturebutstrengthenedournationalprideaswell.（由notonly…but引导的并列句结构）【高分句型2】Ihopetherewillbemoreactivitieslikethisinthefuture.（由省略连词that引导的宾语从句）10．（2023·江苏南京·统考二模）假定你是校学生会主席李华，外教Mike被评为本学期“最受欢迎教师”。请写一份颁奖词，内容包括：1.回顾Mike的工作；2.简述他获奖的理由。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.结束语已为你写好，不计字数；3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dearall,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Nowlet’swelcomeourprincipaltopresentthisawardtoMike!【答案】Dearall,I’mhonoredtoannouncethatthissemester’s“Mostpopularteacher”goestoMike!HegivesourgradeoralEnglish,encouragingustospeakmore.Besides,heisresponsibleforourDramaClub,wherewerehearsetogetherandpresentmarvelousplaysunderhisprofessionalguidance.Mikeisworthyofthisaward.Hisexceptionalteachingabilityhasgreatlyboostedourconfidenceinexpressingourselves.What’smore,hispassionforteachingandfriendlinesstostudentsmakelearningwithhimareallyenjoyableexperience.Nowlet’swelcomeourprincipaltopresentthisawardtoMike!【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。外教Mike被评为本学期“最受欢迎教师”，要求考生写一份颁奖词。【详解】1.词汇积累此外：besides→what’smore精彩的：marvelous→wonderful增强：boost→improve愉快的：enjoyable→pleasant2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Mikeisworthyofthisaward.Hisexceptionalteachingabilityhasgreatlyboostedourconfidenceinexpressingourselves.拓展句：Mikeisworthyofthisawardbecausehisexceptionalteachingabilityhasgreatlyboostedourconfidenceinexpressingourselves.【点睛】【高分句型1】I’mhonoredtoannouncethatthissemester’s“Mostpopularteacher”goestoMike!（运用了that引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】Besides,heisresponsibleforourDramaClub,wherewerehearsetogetherandpresentmarvelousplaysunderhisprofessionalguidance.（运用了where引导的非限定性定语从句）11．（2023·江苏·统考二模）每年的3月22日是“世界水日”(WorldWaterDay)，上周日上午你校学生会组织部分青年志愿者走上街头开展公益宣传活动。假定你是李华，请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：1.活动目的；2.活动内容；3.活动反响。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。AYouthVolunteerActivityCelebratingWorldWaterDay________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】AYouthVolunteerActivityCelebratingWorldWaterDayWorldWaterDayfallsonMarch22everyyear.LastSunday,someyoungstudentvolunteers,organizedbythestudentunion,tooktothestreetstocelebrateandadvertiseWorldWaterDay.Firstly,theyhandedoutleafletstothecitizenstolectureaboutWorldWaterDay.Later,publicspeechesabouttheimportanceofprotectingwaterresourcesweregivenbysomevolunteers.Notonlydidtheseactivitiesarousedpeople’sgreatinterestinWorldWaterDay,butalsoraisedtheirawarenessofwaterresourcesprotection.Thisactivityturnedouttobeahugesuccess.【导语】本篇书面表达属于新闻报道。要求考生为校英文报写一篇报道，报道上周日上午校学生会组织青年志愿者走上街头开展的“世界水日”公益宣传活动。【详解】1.词汇积累分发：handout→distribute传单：leaflet→flyer重要性：importance→significance保护：protect→preserve2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Firstly,theyhandedoutleafletstothe