2024届武汉高三年级下册四调英语读后续写“拖延症患者的觉醒”+讲义

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短

文。

Mostpeoplethinkthatprocrastination（拖延症）isanegativehabit.Butpeople

likemewhoroutinelyputoffdoingassignments,arelikelytodefendour“slower”

approachtogettingtasksdone.

Fmtheonlyprocrastinatorinmyfamily.Myparentsandsisterwereallbomwith

the"doitrightnow"gift.Theyarealwaysinarush,asifcloselyrushedbyan

invisibledeadline.Personally,Ipreferamorerelaxedpace.Whenmyparentsvoiced

theirconcernaboutmytendencies,saying"Don'tputoffuntiltomorrowwhatyou

candotodayJ“Noway!”Iresponded,confidentlypresentingmyresearchasa

defense.Itsaidpeopleprocrastinatedwhentheyneedtosolveaproblemorcommitto

atopicorproject.Inthesecases,delayingadecisioncanbebeneficial.Thiswas

becauseourmindscontinuetoreflectonproblemsevenwhenwewerenotactively

thinkingaboutthem,whichcouldleadtomorecreativesolutionsji.Myfindingsfilled

mewithsatisfactionandpride.Mymethodofgettingthingsdonewasjustasgoodas

mysister9s...orsoIthought.

Atschoolwe'dbeentalkingaboutarchitectureanddesign.Aspartofthefinal

assessmentmyteacherMr.Smithannouncedanexcitingprojectthateachstudent

wouldhaveamonthtocomplete.Wewereexpectedtochooseourmaterials,

constructasmallbuildingandmakeuseofthingswehadlearnedinclass.Notonly

wouldthewinnersreceiveextracredit,butthewinningconstructionswouldbe

proudlydisplayedinthecafeteria."IhavenocluehowIcouldgetitdone,“myfriend

Natesighedindespair.Ididn'tsayanything.NotbecauseIsharedhisanxiety-but

becauseIwasnotnervousatall.Ilovedhands-onprojects!Picturingmy

brilliant!workexhibitedinthecafeteria,IwasfullyconvincedthatIwoulddefinitely

producesomethingthatcouldimpresseveryone.SorelaxedwasIthatIdidn'tgiveit

asecondthoughtforweeks

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故事大意：

Thetextmainlydescribesastoryaboutaprocrastinator（拖延症患者）,whohasa

differentattitudetowardstaskcompletionfromtheperspectiveof"me"andhisfamily.

Thearticlefirstdescribesthatfamilymembers（parentsandsisters）areall"immediate

action"typepeople,while"I"amapersonwhoisaccustomedtoprocrastination.

Then,Iusedresearchonprocrastinationasadefenseformyprocrastinationhabits,

andfeltsatisfiedandproudofit.Thearticlealsomentionedanarchitecturaland

designprojectattheschool,inwhich"I"hadarelaxedandconfidentattitudetowards

theprojectanddidnotimmediatelystart.

文章结构：

thearticlefirstshowcases"my"procrastinationhabitsthroughfamilycomparison,

thendescribes"my"rationalizationexplanationforprocrastination,andfinally

introducestheschoolprojectasaclueforthedevelopmentofthestory.

伏笔：

"My"confidentattitude:Whenmentioningtheschoolproject,"1°didnotshowany

anxiety,butinsteadwasfullofconfidenceinbeingabletocompleteanimpressive

project.Thisconfidencemaystemfrommyprocrastinationhabit,believingthateven

ifIdon'tstartimmediately,Icanstillcompletetasksatthelastminute.Theurgency

oftheproject:Thearticlementionsthattheprojecthasaonemonthcompletiontime

andtherewillbeapresentationofthewinner.However,"I"didnotgiveenough

attentiontothis,andeven"didnotthinkaboutitagainforseveralweeks.".Thislays

thegroundworkforthesubsequentplotdevelopment,as"I"mayfacetimeconstraints

atthefinalmomentsoftheproject.

Para2过于开放+议论了，但是浙江卷其实也考到过类似开放的段落（如22.6月

给穷人放饭）所以，是想通过这篇文章告诉学生，那篇再开放的文章，也可以顺

出一个自己的逻辑，把段落内容写充实，这篇的第二段就用经常讲到的“负一转

正”，请消化吸收。

【确定人称】第一人称

【梳理原文情节】我；父母/Nate/老师…

【文章走向/主旨】走向：按照价值观哈哈这篇文章一定是属于打脸型，作者一

定是从这次经历中吸取教训，所以作者一定在这次任务中得到不好的结果引发思

考；主旨：拖延症的不好.…

【构思情节】

P1：BeforeIknewit,Ihadonlyonedayleftfortheproject.

①【衔接1］我的反应：吓死了紧张

②【开做】匆匆开始制作我的building

③【完成】可想而知，一天时间根本不够。直到凌草草完成

④第二天，发现同学们都做的很棒，【回应原文】尤其Nate

⑤【衔接2】可想而知，我finalassessment结果很差，更不用说作品展示了

P2：Thattaughtmeagreatlesson.

①[衔接3]lesson内容：拖延症不好

②【回应原文】拖延症虽然有时候有creativesituation但是…

③【回应原文】父母的建议回响在脑海里

④我心里的改变

⑤【结尾】从那以后，我.…

【下水作文】

BeforeIknewit,Ihadonlyonedayleftfortheproject.Awaveofoverwhelming

dreadwashedovermeastherealityofthesituationsankin.Ihastilybeganto

gathermaterialsandconstructmybuilding,tryingtoputintopracticethe

architecturalconceptsIhadlearned.Asexpected,onedaywasfarfrom

enoughtocompletetheprojecttomysatisfaction.Bydawn,Ihadonly

managedtofinisharoughandunpolishedmodel.Thenextday,Isawthatmy

classmateshaddoneanexcellentjob,especiallyNate,whosemodelwas

detailedandwell-crafted.Itwasclearthatmyfinalassessmentresultwaspoor,

nottomentionanychanceofhavingmyworkdisplayed.

P2：Thattaughtmeagreatlesson.Itwasclear:Procrastinationisindeeda

detrimentalhabitthatcanleadtopoorresults.Althoughitmightsometimes

resultincreativesolutions,therisksfaroutweighedthebenefits.Meanwhile,

thewordsfrommyparents,"Don'tputoffuntiltomorrowwhatyoucando

today,"echoedinmymind,remindingmeoftheimportanceofprompt

action.Thisexperienceledtoasignificantchangeinmyattitudetowardstime

managementandthecommitmenttotasks.Fromthattimeforward,Imadea

consciousefforttoplanandprioritize,ensuringthatIwouldneveragainfall

intothetrapoflast-minutescrambling.

【参考范文】

BeforeIknewit,Ihadonlyonedayleftfortheproject.InapanicI

hastilyandquicklygluingtogetherwhatIpulledoutfromourrecycle

bin,myhandsshakingwiththeweightofeachhastydecision.The

finishedresultlookedmiserable.Severalofmyclassmates,including

Nate,hadcreatedamazinglydetailedconstructions.Theyused

materialslikeclay,woodandsoonandwerehighlypraisedbyMr.