专题14 读后续写无灵主语仿写训练五大类75例 1（讲义）高考英语读后续写高分宝典 解析版

《2024年高考英语读后续写高分宝典》专题14读后续写无灵主语仿写训练五大类75例1（讲义）解析版第一类公式：主语(情感状态的名词)+有灵动词+sb变式：Awave(flush/surge/burst…)of+(情感状态的名词)+有灵动词+sb(一)常见情绪名词thrill兴奋感anger怒气annoyance恼怒rage暴怒fear害怕scare恐惧terror惊恐panic惊恐sorrow悲伤grief悲伤despair绝望gratitude感激regret惋惜guilt内疚astonishment惊讶amazement惊奇(二)常见有灵动词seize

抓住envelop

裹住blanket

覆盖choke

哽噎

flood充满sweep

席卷wash

涌desert

遗弃deprive剥夺engulf

吞没

takeholdof

抓住givewayto

让步于(三)句型常见含义“某人感到...”或“一阵/一种....向某人袭来”。(四)经典例句呈现1.Allofasudden,panicseizedher.她突然惊慌失措。2.Despair/Horror

choked

hiswords.

绝望或者恐惧使得他说不出话来。3.Fearblanketed/envelopedthewholevillage.恐惧笼罩着整个村庄。4.Agreatsenseofrelieffloodedoverhim.他深感宽慰。5.His

nervousness

gavewayto

calmness.

他不再紧张，变得冷静下来。即时训练一：完成下列各句1.那时他焦虑万分，肝肠寸断。Atthattime,anxietytorehimintopieces．2.突然感到一阵绝望，我倒在门口，啜泣起来。《简爱》(defeat)Asenseofdespairdefeatedme,andIfellsobbingonthedoorstep.3.当我听到写作比赛的临近时，一阵紧张使我不知所措。(overwhelm)WhenIheardtheapproachofthewritingcontest,awaveofnervousnessoverwhelmedme.4.一想到考试的失败，他万念俱灰。Despairseized

himatthethoughtofhisfailureintheexam．(seize)5.一见到他的老朋友，一种幸福的感觉席卷了他。(sweepover)Atthesightofhisoldfriend,

awaveofhappinesssweptoverhim.即时训练二：根据提示翻译下列各句6.简脸色苍白，一股恐怖的浪潮席卷了她。（seize/takeholdof/sweepover）____________________________________________________________________________6.Janeturnedpaleandawaveofhorrorseized/tookholdof/sweptoverher.7.她感到一阵幸福和快乐。(sweepover)____________________________________________________________________________7.Awaveofhappinessandwarmthsweptoverher.

8.一想到自己的努力可能会白费，她就感到悲伤。(seize)____________________________________________________________________________8.Sorrowseizedheratthethoughtthathereffortsmightbeinvain.9.一听到上课铃声响起，艾米莉感到非常焦虑。(washover)____________________________________________________________________________9.Asthebellrang,signalingthestartoftheclass,asenseofanxietywashedoverEmily.10.他先前的紧张立刻被感激和快乐所取代。(givewayto)____________________________________________________________________________10.Hispreviousnervousnessimmediatelygavewaytogratitudeandpleasure.第二类公式：主语（身体部位/音容笑）+有灵动词+sb(一)常见此类名词face/eye/heart/fingers/tears/smile/voice/throat(二)常见有灵动词brighten使开心fill充满stream流淌interrupt打断blur使视线模糊linger继续存留lightup露出喜色wellup涌出spreadacross浮现(三)句型常见含义：某人脸上/眼中……流露出……(四)经典例句呈现1.Whenlrealizedthatmydiligenteffortshadbeenrewarded,tearswelledupinmyeyes.当我意识到我的勤奋努力得到了回报时，泪水夺眶而出。2.Atthesightofthefiercewolf,Mikefeltsoscaredthathisthroattightenedandhiskneesfeltweak.迈克一看到那匹凶猛的狼，就感到非常害怕，喉咙都绷紧了，膝盖都软了。3.HerfacelitupwhenIgaveherthelittlepresent.我给她小礼物时，她的脸上露出了喜色。4.Laughterlingeredaroundtheroom.

笑声在房间里萦绕。5.Tearsofgratitudeblurredhereyes.感激的泪水模糊了她的视线。即时训练一：完成下列各句1.他一看到熟悉的字迹，便热泪盈眶。Themomenthesawthefamiliarhandwriting,tearswelledup

inhiseyes.2.突然，这对双胞胎的脸亮了起来，他们坚定地点头。Allofasudden,thetwin’sfacelitupwiththeirheadnoddingfirmly.3.当我打开盒子的那一刻，我惊讶地瞪大了眼睛。ThemomentIopenedthebox,myeyeswidenedingreatsurprise.4.当她打开盒子时，她的手激动得发抖。Herhandsweretremblingwithexcitementassheopenedthebox.5.妈妈试图掩饰自己的情绪,但她还是忍不住泪流满面。Momtriedtoconcealheremotion,buttheglitteringtearsfailedher.即时训练二：根据提示翻译下列各句6.当她看到草莓时，她的眼睛闪烁着喜悦和甜蜜。(twinkle/sparkle)____________________________________________________________________________6.Whenshesawthestrawberries,hereyestwinkled/sparkledwithjoyandsweetness.7.看到直升飞机，Jane高兴地笑了起来。(lightup)____________________________________________________________________________7.Themomentshecaughtsightofthehelicopter,abrightsmilelitupJane'sface.8.我的手指气得发抖，所以我不能继续缝纫了。《简爱》(shake)____________________________________________________________________________8.Myfingersshookwithanger,

sothatIcouldnotgoonsewing.9.他的心跳如此剧烈，以至于感觉如坐针毡。(beat)____________________________________________________________________________9.Hisheartbeatsoviolentlythathefeltlikesittingonpinsandneedles.10.当女孩准备发表重要演讲时，她的手因焦虑而颤抖。(tremble)____________________________________________________________________________10.Thegirl'shandstrembledwithanxietyasshepreparedtodeliveranimportantspeech.第三类公式：主语（表示时间和地点的名词）+有灵动词+sb(一)常见此类名词时间类：lastSaturday1997lastweeknightmorning地点类如school;stadium;Zhejiang等；场景类如dawn;dusk;thescene;thecompetition;theargument(二)常见有灵动词witness目击，见证see看见fill充满fall降临tell告知spreadthrough传遍(三)句型常见含义……目击/见证……(四)经典例句呈现1.Thesmellofbreakfastfilledtheairinthekitchen.早餐的香味弥漫在厨房的空气中。2.Nighthasfallenoverthecountry.黄昏时孩子在街上哭。3.Romewitnessedmanygreathistoricevents.罗马发生过许多重大历史事件。4.Thestadiumhasseenmanyexcitingfootballmatches.在这体育场里举办过很多精彩的足球赛。5.Thetownboastsabeautifullake.这个镇引以为荣的是有个美丽的湖。即时训练一：完成下列各句1.十年的辛勤工作使她大为改变。1.Tenyearsofhardworkchangedhergreatly.2.校园里的大树见证了学生们的成长。2.Thetreesoncampushavewitnessedthegrowthofstudents.3.过去几十年间，网络新闻媒体发展迅速。3.Thepastdecadeshavewitnessedtherapiddevelopmentofonlinenewsmedia.4.接下来的一刻见证了他们制作早餐的努力，他们最终做到了4.Thenextmomentsawtheireffortstomakethebreakfastandtheyeventuallymadeit.5.过去的经验告诉我们某些成就是无法获得的。5.Pastexperiencehastaughtusthatcertainaccomplishmentsarebeyondattainment.即时训练二：根据提示翻译下列各句6.春天，乡村阳光灿烂，风景优美。(find)____________________________________________________________________________6.Springfindsabeautifulsunnycountryside.7.1949年中华人民共和国成立了。(witness)____________________________________________________________________________7.Theyear1949witnessed

thefoundingofthePeople’sRepublicofChina.8.黄昏时，男孩在大街上哭着。(find)____________________________________________________________________________8.Duskfoundtheboycryingonthestreet.9.上周日下午，我们在操场上见证了排球赛的决赛。(witness)____________________________________________________________________________9.LastSundayafternoonwitnessedthecompetitivevolleyballfinalontheplayground.10.夜幕降临，黑暗笼罩着整个森林。(rule)____________________________________________________________________________10.Nightapproaching,darknessruledthewholeforest.读后续写“无灵主语”多角度训练一、用“无灵主语”翻译下列句子。1.他焦虑万分，肝肠寸断。(tear)____________________________________________________________________________1.Anxietytorehimintopieces.

2.现在，乐观变成了怀疑。(givewayto)____________________________________________________________________________2.Bynowoptimismhadgivenwaytodoubt.

3.我气的说不出话。(choke)____________________________________________________________________________3.Angerchokedmywords.

4.一阵恐惧传遍他的全身。(sweep)____________________________________________________________________________4.A

wave

of

fear

swept

overhim.5.他突然感到一阵如释重负。(flood)____________________________________________________________________________5.Agreatsenseofrelieffloodedoverhim.6.他的脸上掠过惊恐的神色。(flash)____________________________________________________________________________6.A

look

of

terror

flashed

acrosshisface.7.我惊讶得说不出话来。(deprive)____________________________________________________________________________7.Astonishmentdeprivedmeofmypowerofspeech.

8.他走上台时突然失去了自信。(desert)____________________________________________________________________________8.Hisconfidencedeserted

himwhenhewalkedonstage.9.过去的30年见证了中国巨大的变化。(witness)____________________________________________________________________________9.Thepast30yearshavewitnessedgreatchangesinChina.10.东方破晓的时候，他早已经上路了。(find)____________________________________________________________________________10.Dawnfoundhimwellalongtheroad.

二、划出下列短文中的“无灵主语”。Inaquainttown,

atallclocktower

stoodwithgoldenhands

that

tickedthroughtheday.Everymorning,

itschimes(铃声)

wokeupthevillagers.Closebywasaworn-outcottage,

filledwith

forgottenstories.Peoplehurriedpastit,unawareofitshiddentreasures.Inside,

time

seemedtostop,

witholdbooksandpictureswhisperingtalesofhappinessandheartbreak.

Oneday,awandererstumbleduponthecottageandfeltitsmagic.Theybroughtlifebacktothetownandrevivedthespiritofthecommunity.

Theclocktowerandcottage

becamesymbolsoftimeandtimelessstories,

weaving

togetherthetown'senchantment.Inaquainttown,

atallclocktower

stoodwithgoldenhands

that

tickedthroughtheday.Everymorning,

itschimes(铃声)

wokeupthevillagers.Closebywasaworn-outcottage,

filledwith

forgottenstories.Peoplehurriedpastit,unawareofitshiddentreasures.Inside,

time

seemedtostop,

witholdbooksandpictureswhisperingtalesofhappinessandheartbreak.

Oneday,awandererstumbleduponthecottageandfeltitsmagic.Theybroughtlifebacktothetownandrevivedthespiritofthecommunity.

Theclocktowerandcottage

becamesymbolsoftimeandtimelessstories,

weaving

togetherthetown'senchantment.三、片段训练—把划线句子改成无灵主语句式FinallycamethedayofmyfirstpublicappearanceonliveTVwithmyparentsathomewatching.(1)Seeingsomanyaudiencesittinginneatrows,Iwasfearful.(2)Althoughhavingwellprepared,Isuddenlylostmycourage.(3)Iforgotallthelinesabsolutely.(4)“Youcandoanythingyouwanttodo.”Iheardavoicecoming.....(5)Atthesewords,Ibecameconfidentinsteadofnervousness.(6)Iwouldremembertheexperienceforever.1.___________________________________________________________________________2.___________________________________________________________________________3.___________________________________________________________________________4.___________________________________________________________________________5.___________________________________________________________________________1.Thesightofsomanyaudiencesittinginneatrowsfilledmewithfear.2.Despitefullpreparations,mycouragedeserted\left\abandonedmesuddenly.3.Allthewordsslippedmymindabsolutely.4.“Youcandoanythingyouwanttodo”,avoicerang/echoedinmymind.5.Atthesewords,mypreviousnervousnessgavewaytoconfidence.6.Theexperiencewouldstick/takerootinmymindforever.四、最新模拟试题演练Test1（2023上·河南·南阳一中校考期中）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。AlightrainwasfallingasmysisterJillandIranoutoftheshop，eagertogethomeandplaywiththepresentsthatourparentshadpreparedforusandourbabysister,Sharon.AcrossthestreetfromtheshopwasagasstationwheretheGreyhoundbusstopped，whichwasclosedforNewYear，butIsawafamilystandingoutsidethelockeddoor，gatheringcloselytogetherunderthenarrowoverhanginanattempttokeepdry.IwonderedbrieflywhytheyweretherebutthenforgotaboutthemasIracedtokeepupwithJill.Oncewegothome，therewasbarelytimetoenjoyourpresents.Wehadtogoofftoourgrandparents’

houseforourannualfamilydinner.Aswedrovedownthehighwaythroughtown，Inoticedthatthefamilywasstillthere，standingoutsidetheclosedgasstation.Myfatherwasdrivingveryslowlydownthehighway.Thecloserwegottotheturnoff(岔道)formygrandparents’house，theslowerthecarwent.Suddenly，myfathermadeaU­turninthemiddleoftheroadandsaidthathecouldn’tstandit.“What？”askedmymother.“It’sthosepeoplebackthereatthestation，standingintherain.They’vegotchildren.It’sNewYear.Ican’tstandit.”Whenmyfatherpulledintotheservicestation，Isawthattherewerefiveofthem:theparentsandthreechildren—twogirlsandasmallboy，whoweregettingwetstandingthere.Myfatherrolleddownhiswindow.“HappyNewYear，”hesaid.“Thanks.You,too，”themanreplied.Hewasverytallandhadtobendslightlytolookintothecar.Jill,Sharon,andIlookedatthechildren，andtheylookedbackatus.“Youwaitingonthebus？”myfatherasked.Themansaidthattheywere.TheyweregoingtoBirmingham,wherehehadabrotherandchancesofajob.Knowingthebuswouldn’tcomealongforseveralhours,myfatherinvitedthemtoourhometoshelterfromtherain.Paragraph1：Themanthoughtaboutitforamoment,butthenrefused.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2：Whenwegotoutofthecaratourhouse,thethreechildrenranthroughthefrontdoorhappily.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】参考范文Themanthoughtaboutitforamoment,butthenrefused.Hesaidhedidn’twanttoputustoanybother.Exhaustedandhelpless,hischildrenstoodstill,aburstofdisappointmentwellingupintheireyes.Aftermyparents’strongpersuasion,hefinallyagreedandthankedusallthetime.Onhearingthat,JillandIbothclappedourhands,withoureyessparklinglikeshiningstars.Theyclimbedintothecar.Atfirst,thechildrenappearedalittleembarrassed,twistingandrubbingtheirhandsoverandoveragainseeminglytogetwarm.Momofferedblanketstothemtodryandengagedtheminlittlechildishconversations.Asenseofrelaxationandjoygraduallysweptoverthecar.Thecoldandbitterrainoutsideseemedtohavebecomelighter.Whenwegotoutofthecaratourhouse,thethreechildrenranthroughthefrontdoorhappily.HardlyhadwesteppedintoourhousewhenMomfoundsomeofourclothesforthemtochange.Inspiredbyher,JillandIdecidedtoshareourNewYearpresentswiththechildren.Momnoddedandcastusanapprovinglook.Everythingsettleddown,myparentspreparedhotdrinksandfoodforthem.Inaflash,awaveofbeingmovedtakingholdofthecouple,theyhuggedustightly,sayingtearfully,“ThisisthebestNewYearwehaveeverenjoyed.”Outsidethehouse,thewinddieddownandtherainstopped.Daddrovethemtothestation.Aswedroveaway,theairwasfilledwiththesweetnessoftheNewYear.Happinesswasflowingineveryone'sheart.Sometimes,lifeisnotabedofroses,butloveandkindnessmakestheworldgoaround.【详解】通过阅读所给文章可知，天下着雨，长途汽车因为新年而关闭了，门外站着一家人在等长途汽车，长途汽车要几小时才来，我们一家人本已经在去祖父母家参加家庭聚会的高速路上，但父亲想到这一家人还在那里等待，就掉头回去邀请他们到我们家避雨。……续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：这个人想了一会儿，然后拒绝了。……，所以接下应该写这个人拒绝的原因以及父亲再次真诚的邀请。第二段开头是：当我们在我们家下车时，三个孩子高兴地从前门跑了进来。……，所以接下来应该写我们与孩子在家里发生的事情，比如为孩子换上干净的衣服（因为外面一直下雨，孩子的衣服有可能淋湿了），再比如分享新年礼物等。雨停了，爸爸开车送他们去车站。当他们开车离开时，我久久地望着窗外，回望着他们幸福的脸。就是在那一天，吉尔和我学会了如何让别人快乐。续写时要求短文的词数应为150左右，故应提前构思，详略得当，避免长篇大论。【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了较多的主从复合句。如：.Myfatherexplainedthattherainwouldlastlongandourhousewasnearthestation.这句话运用了that引导的宾语从句；如：Astheydroveaway,IwatchedoutthewindowaslongasIcould,lookingbackattheirhappyfaces.这个句子中有as引导的时间状语从句Test2（2023上·湖北·高三校联考期中）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。“Please,mother,dositdownandletmetrymyhand,”saidFredLiscom,abright,activeboyseventeenyearsold.Mrs.Liscom,lookingpaleandworn,smiledandsaid,“You,Fred,youwashdishes?”“Yes,indeed,mother,”repliedFred,“IshouldbeapoorscholarifIcouldn’t,whenI’veseenyoudoitsomanytimes.Justtryme.”Alookofreliefcameoverhismother’sfaceassheseatedherselfinherlowrockingchair.Fredwashedthedishes,andputtheminthecloset.Hethensweptthekitchen,broughtupthepotatoesfromthecellar(地下室)forthedinnerandwashedthem,andthensetoutforschool.Freddidsobecausethedoctorsaidoneday,“Well,madam,it’smyopinionthatyouwouldhavebeenverysickifyouhadkeptbusy.”Fredhadgivenupagreatdealofwhatboyslike,forthepurposeofhelpinghismother.Theschoolboys’curiositywasexcitedwhenhewouldgivenootherreasonfornotcomingtoschoolearlier,orstayingafterschool.“I’lltellyou,”saidTomBarton,“I’llfindhimoutandboysseeifIdon’t!”SohecalledforFredtogotoschool,andwhenhelookedintothekitchenwindow,hesawFredstandingatthetablewithadishclothinhishand.Ofcoursehereportedthisatschool,andvariouswerethegreetingspoorFredreceived.“Well,you’reabraveonetostayathomewashingdishes.”Afterschool,Fredwascryingsecretlyatnightafterhermotherfellasleepwhensomeoneshouted“Fire!fire!”ItwasMr.Barton’shouse.Mr.andMrs.Bartonwerenotathome,leavingTomBartonandhissisterKatyalone.Withouttheslightesthesitation,FredrushedouttowardsTom’shouse.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。FredfoundTomtremblingwithterroroutsidetheirhouse,withoutKaty._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Theyhadnarrowlyescapedfromthehousebeforeitcollapsed._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】FredfoundTomtremblingwithterroroutsidetheirhouse,withoutKaty.“WhereisKaty?”heasked.Tomseemedtohavehadnothoughtbutofhisownescape.Hesaid,“Katyisinthehouse!“Itwasnotimeforwords,butforinstantaction.Thestaircasewasalreadyonfire.TherewasbutonewaytoreachKaty,whichwasfullofdanger.Aladderwasquicklybrought,andFredmountedit,pushinghiswayintotheroomwherethepoorchildlaynearlychokedtodeathwithsmoke.Herousedherwithsomedifficulty,carriedhertothewindowandthenbroughtherdowntheladder.Theyhadnarrowlyescapedfromthehousebeforeitcollapsed.FredandKatyhadbarelyescapedwiththeirlives.TherewereseveralscratchesonFred’sfaceandneck,buthemadenothingofthem.HehandedKatytoTom,anditwasthenthatTomfinallyburstoutcryingandhuggedhissistertightly.MakingsureKatywasunhurt,TomturnedtoFredandsaid“I’msosorry”“Thankyou”againandagain.Fredsmiledandfeltasenseofpride,becausehecametorealizethattruemanlinessisinharmonywithgentleness,kindnessandbravery.【导语】文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了Fred的妈妈病了，于是他决定帮助妈妈做家务，他也因此失去了许多与男孩们玩耍的时间。有一天，Tom决定去Fred家一探究竟。当他向厨房的窗户望去时，他看到弗雷德站在桌子旁，手里拿着一块抹布，他把这件事报告到了学校，Fred收到了同学们的问候。后来Tom家着火了，Fred毫不犹豫冲到Tom家救出了Katy。Tom向他道歉了，Fred感到一种自豪，因为他逐渐认识到，真正的男子气概是与温柔、善良和勇敢相协调的。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“Fred发现Tom在屋外吓得发抖，Katy却不在。”可知，第一段可描写营救Katy的过程。②由第二段首句内容“他们在房子倒塌前侥幸逃出。”可知，第二段可描写Fred成功救出Katy后，Tom为之前的行为道歉以及Fred的感受。2.续写线索：询问Katy在哪里——营救Katy——唤醒Katy——把Katy送给Tom——Tom拥抱Katy——Tom道歉并表示感谢——Fred的感悟3.词汇激活①行为类到达：reach/getto拥抱：hug/holdinone’sarms意识到：realize/beawareof②情绪类突然大哭：burstoutcrying/burstintotears感谢：thank/begrateful【点睛】[高分句型1]Aladderwasquicklybrought,andFredmountedit,pushinghiswayintotheroomwherethepoorchildlaynearlychokedtodeathwithsmoke.（运用了where引导定语从句）[高分句型2]Fredsmiledandfeltasenseofpride,becausehecametorealizethattruemanlinessisinharmonywithgentleness,kindnessandbravery.（运用了because引导原因状语从句，that引导宾语从句）Test3（2023上·河南开封·高二开封市祥符高级中学校联考期中）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Duringmytimeinprimaryschool,Iwasanactiveparticipantinsportsandgames.Iwasgoodatathleticsandparticularlyexcelledinlongjumpandsprinting(短跑).MyabilitiesledmetowintheBDivisionlongjumpcompetition,andIwaschosentorepresentmyschoolintheDistrictSportsMeetforboththelongjumpandrelayevents.TheSportsMeetspannedacrosstwodays.Onthefirstday,Ididn’thaveanyscheduledevents,soIeagerlywatchedotherathletescompeting.Tentsweresetupfortheparticipants.Myschoolteamwasassignedthelasttent,whichhappenedtobethefurthestonefromthetrack.Despitethelessthan-ideallocation,wemadethemostoutofit.Theseconddayarrived,anditwasfinallytimeformyevents.Thelongjumptookplaceintheearlyafternoon,followedbythehighlyanticipated8×50mrelaylaterintheday.Asthelongjumpcompetitionbegan,Irealizedthecompetitionwasfierce.ThoughImanagedarespectablejumpof3.65meters,Iwasamazedbyanotherparticipant,aten-year-old,whoeffortlesslyclearedover4meters.Addingtothechallenge,thisremarkableyoungathletealsoworespikes(钉子鞋),whichgavehimanadvantageovertherestofus.Despitefinishinginfourthplace,narrowlymissingoutonamedal,Istayedpositive.However,Istillhadhopeforthe8×50mrelay,whereIwasassignedtorunthefifthlegandpassthebaton(接力棒).Finally,theracedayarrived.Withanticipationbuilding,wetookourpositionsonthetrack.Asthestarter’sgunrang,awaveofexcitementsweptoverme.Iclosely.followedtheprogressofmyteammatesintheearlierlegs,andtomythrill,wewereamongthetopcompetitors,firmlysecuringatleastsecondplace.注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Asmyturnarrived,Igraspedthebatonandbegantorun.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Althoughmyaccidenthadindeedcostusprecioustime,ourteam’sspiritremainedunshaken.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Asmyturnarrived,Igraspedthebatonandbegantorun.Thewindrushedpastme,propellingmeforwardtowardstheteammatewhoawaitedmyarrival.However,justasIwasgainingspeed,anunexpectedaccidenthappened.Isuddenlystumbledandfelltotheground,interruptingthewholeprogress.Theaudienceletoutacollectivegaspofsurprise.Butwithouthesitation,Iquicklyrosetomyfeet,brushingoffthedirt,andcontinuedtoruntowardsmygoal.Cheersandshoutsofsupportfrommyclassmatesgavemestrength.Iregainedmyfocusandpushedforward.Althoughmyaccidenthadindeedcostusprecioustime,ourteam’sspiritremainedunshaken.AsIhandedoffthebatontothenextrunner,Iobservedtheunwaveringresolveinhisface.Althoughourchancesforamedalseemedslim,werefusedtoletdisappointmentoccupyourminds.Instead,wechosetoviewtheincidentasatestofourstrengthandperseverance.Successdoesn’talwaysdependontheendresult,butratheronhowwefaceadversityandgrowfromit.Wedidn’tclaimamedalthatday,butweleftthemeetwithnoregretsbecausewehadgivenitourall.【导语】本篇书面表达是读后续写。本文以人物为线索展开。作者擅长跳远和短跑，并被选为代表学校参加区运动会的跳远和接力赛。尽管作者跳远只获得了第四名，但仍然保持乐观。接力赛中，作者牢牢地锁定了至少第二名的位置。【详解】1.段落续写①由第一段句首内容“轮到我时，我抓住接力棒开始奔跑”可知，第一段可以描写作者接力跑比赛中的动作和心理活动。②由第二段句首内容“虽然我的事故确实让我们损失了宝贵的时间，但我们团队的精神是坚定不移的”可知，第二段可以描写作者对整个比赛的感悟。2.续写线索：开始跑—摔倒—迅速站起—继续跑—递给下一个—没有遗憾—感悟3.词汇激活行为类①推动：propel/push②等待：await/waitfor③增加：gain/raise/scaleup情绪类①出乎意料的：unexpected/outoftheblue②惊讶：surprise/amazement【点睛】【高分句型1】Thewindrushedpastme,propellingmeforwardtowardstheteammatewhoawaitedmyarrival.(运用了现在分词propelling作伴随状语和who引导的定语从句)【高分句型2】AsIhandedoffthebatontothenextrunner,Iobservedtheunwaveringresolveinhisface.(运用了As引导的时间状语从句)【高分句型3】Althoughourchancesforamedalseemedslim,werefusedtoletdisappointmentoccupyourminds.(运用了Although引导的让步状语从句)Test4（2023上·云南·高三昆明一中校联考阶段练习）阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成--篇完整的短文。Onceuponatime,therewasasmallvillageintheheartofabigjungleonalandfaraway.Surroundedbymountainsandintheshadeofgreentrees,thevillagerslivedahappylife.Allofthemwereusedtotheirroboticdailytasksandnoneofthemhadtheimaginationorthewilltotrysomethingnew,exceptforonegirlnamedHannah,Hannahwasanadventurousspiritwithanimaginationfarbeyondhertime.Shelovedtoexploreandwouldspendhoursinthewoodslookingfornewthings.Shelovedtocreatestoriesinherheadandusedtoimagineherselfasoneofhercharacters.Oneafternoon,whenHannahwasononeofheradventures,shecameuponanabandonedcottage.Thecottagelookedveryoldinitscondition.Thedoorwasbarelyhangingandthewoodwaschippingaway.EventhoughHannah’smotherhadstrictlywarnedhernottogowanderinginabandonedplaces,hercuriositygotthebestofher.Shetip-toed(蹑手蹑脚)slowlytothedoorandslowlyopeneditandshewasleftshocked.InfrontofHannahwasaroomfullofbooks!Booksshininginthedust,baskinginthewarmsunlightjustwaitingtobeexplored.Hannah’sexcitementwasvisibleonherfaceasshejumpedupanddownwithjoy!Hannahbecameexcitedassherealizedthatshehadfoundahiddentreasure.Sheknewinherheartthatshehadtoreadallofthemsoshequicklygottowork.Shedustedthebooks,theshelves,andwhatwasleftofthefurniture.Hannahsweptanddustedalldaylonguntilsherealizedthatitwasdarkandshehadtogobacktoherhome.Butshecouldn’tgetherselftoleavewithoutatleastreadingone.SoHannahpickedtwobooksanddecidedtoreadthematherhome.ShemetherfriendsonthewayhomewhowerecuriousaboutwhatHannahwascarrying.Inherexcitement,Hannahsharedeverythingwithherfriends.Shewasthinkingthatherfriendswillshareherexcitementbutinstead,sheheardroarsoflaughter!注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式作答。Hannahwasconfusedbythisreactionandalittlehurttoo,butshedidnotgiveupherbooks.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________