2024年高考英语话题写作通关攻略-读后续写人物外貌、性格描写（高分定律 ）

人物外貌、性格描写（高分定律）

"|【考情分析】

在读后续写过程中，沿用原文语言特点，围绕原文主旨大意，在续写部分中可以利用恰当的词语描述

人物来丰富续写的情节。对人物进行恰到好处的肖像描写能够生动地反映出人物的角色身份、社会地位、

性格特点、情感变化等，将人物栩栩如生地呈现在读者面前，让读者在阅读的过程中如见其人，提升续写

语篇的可读性。

、］【写作指导】

在进行外貌描写时，可以写对一个人的总体印象，也可以抓住人物重要的外貌特征或性格特点进行描

述。可以具体描述人物的五官、着装，外貌、体态、性格等对人物印象最深刻的点来进行描述和评价，可

以使人物形象栩栩如生，跃然纸上。

（2022年浙江卷）Astheycameinmydirection,Iputonmybrightestandhappiestsmile.Iwantedtomake

themknowthatIwasreallyanxioustohelpthem.Tomyrelief,theysmiledpolitelybackatmewhentheysawmy

smile,andIcouldseetheirexhaustionintheireyes.

［、一］【素材宝库】

词汇积累之性格特点

幽默的humorous健谈的talkative坏脾气的bad-tempered

心不在焉的absent-minded热心的warm-hearted有耐心的patient

有魅力的charming独立的independent勤奋的diligent

勤劳的diligent和蔼的kind诚实的honest

有幽默感haveasenseofhumor真诚的sincere受人尊敬的respected

努力工作型hardworkingtype正直的upright保守的conservativepersonalities

务实的bedown-to-earth懒惰goofoff缺乏责任感lackofresponsibility

有抱负的ambitious果断的ofadeterminedcharacter乐观的optimistic

有教养的女子aculturedwoman突出的个性strikingpersonalities心肠冷酷的人ahard-heartedman

词汇积累之外貌描写（五官）

round圆的;thin瘦的;long长的;square方的；puffy浮肿的；憔悴的面容haggard；布

脸型face满皱纹的wrinkled；长满粉刺的pimpled；泪珠布满的tear-stained；长满雀斑freckled；

麻脸pock-markedfhce；眉清目秀的finely-cut；黝黑的swarthy；晒黑的sunburned；秀丽

的sweet；

红润的双颊rosycheeks；丰满的双颊chubbycheeks；苍白的双颊palecheeks；

脸颊粉红的双颊pinkcheeks；红光满面的双颊ruddycheeks；涂脂抹粉的脸颊rougedcheeks；

cheeks深陷的双颊hollow（sunken）cheeks；刮得精光的脸颊clean-shavencheeks；

胡须满面的双颊stubbycheeks；布满皱纹的双颊wrinkledcheeks；

deep-set深陷的；sunken凹陷的；bulging凸出的；eyelashes睫毛；eyebrows眉毛；

眼睛eye睁得圆圆的/鼓起来的/深陷的/凹陷的眼睛/充满血丝的wide-open/bulging

/deep-set/sunken/bloodshoteyes

long长的;straight挺直的;big大的；small小的;flat扁平的;hooked钩状的；

鼻子nose鹰钩鼻anaquiline（hooked）nose；扁鼻子flatnose；翘鼻子snubnose；

笔直的鼻子straightnose

嘴部mouthtooth牙齿;even整齐的;uneven不整齐的；chi下巴；

下巴chin双下巴（形容胖）adoublechin;尖尖的下巴apointedchin;

圆圆的下巴aroundchin;翘起的下巴aprotrudingchin

额头宽大的额头abroadforehead；突起的额头adomedforehead；高高的额头ahigh

foreheadforehead；宽阔的额头anopenforehead；窄小的额头anarrowforehead；

头发hair发型(hairstyle):straight直的;curly卷发的;pigtails辫子;crewcut平头;bald秃头的；

发色jet-black乌黑的；fkii•金色的;blonde淡黄色的；golden金黄色的；dyed染色的；brunette浅

haircolor黑色的；mousey灰褐色的；chestnut栗色的；

词汇积累之外貌描写（身材）

肥胖的fat；瘦的thin；苗条的slim；块头大的big；矮小的short；强壮的strong；

身材高的tall；小巧的small；超重overweight；中等身材的ofmediumbuild；

消瘦的身材askinnyfigure；丰满的身材plumpfigure；瘦小的身材slightfigure；

身材魁梧well-built；矮壮的身材stockyfigure；优美的身段agracefulfigure；

身高中等身高的ofmediumheight；低于平均身高belowaverage;

身高中等的middle-sized;

句式积累

1.Shehadalittlethinfaceandalittlethinbody,thinlighthairandasourexpression.

她有着瘦削的脸、瘦弱的身体、单薄浅色的头发还有尖酸的外表。

2.He'stallandhandsomebutwithapairofthickglassed.

他高大又英俊，但是戴着一副厚眼镜。

3.They（代指eyes）werelargeandscaredandliftedimploringlytothefairboyofficer'sface.

那双大眼睛变得惊恐，乞求地盯着那个白肤律师男孩的脸。

4.Davidwasalittleboywithimpudentblueeyesandaturn-upnose,andMaryhatedhim.

大伟是有一双无耻的蓝色眼睛和一只朝天鼻的小男孩，并且玛丽讨厌他。

5.Jamesfrownedandcondescendedtolookather.

詹姆斯皱着眉头，故意表示和蔼可亲的看着她。

6.Herhairwaslikecurlysilkandshehadadelicatelittlenosewhichseemedtobedisdainingthings,andshehad

largelaughingeyes.

她的头发像是微卷的丝绸，她有着精致小巧的鼻子似乎在蔑视着一切，她还有着一双大大的笑眼。

7.Hissun-burntfaceandarmsandhisslim,strongbodyarejustlikethoseofmillionsofChinesefarmers,for

whomhehasstruggledfbrthepastfivedecades.

他那晒黑的脸，手臂和瘦长结实的身体，就像过去50年里他为之奋斗的数百万中国农民一样。

8.Hisfacelookeddreadful,whiteandredandswollen,andhewasgaspingandchoking

他的脸看上去很可怕，又白又红又肿，他喘不过气来。

9.Sheevenlookedratherpale.

她甚至看上去相当苍白。

10.t4Idon?tlikeit,“shesaidtoherself.6"Idon'tlikeit,“andshepinchedherthinlipsmoretightlytogether.n

我不喜欢它，”她捏她瘦弱的嘴唇更紧密地在一起。

11.Shelookedsostonyandstubbornlyuninterestedthattheydidnotknowwhattothinkabouther.

她看起来是如此的无情和顽固地冷淡以至于他们不知道该怎么去考虑她。

12.Shewasastoutwoman,

withveryredcheeksandsharpblackeyes.

她是个矮胖的女人，有着很红的脸颊和锋利的黑色眼睛。

13.Herblackdressmadeherlookyellowerthanever,andherlimplighthairstraggledfromunderherblack

crepehat.

她的黑衣服使她看起来比以前更柔软了，她柔软的浅色头发从她的黑色绐布帽子下散乱的披落下来。

14.hewasawizenedoldmanwithwrinkledfaceandasadexpression.Overhisshoulderwasthrownarough

browncoat,alltornandfullofholes,histhickbootswereoldandpatched.

他是一个干瘪的老人，脸上布满皱纹，表情悲伤。肩上披着一件粗糙的棕色外套，全是破的，满是洞，厚

靴子是旧的，打了补丁。

15.Hiseyesaredeep-setbecausehehasworkedtillmidnightforalongtime.

他的眼睛深陷，因为他这段时间经常工作到深夜。

16.Thisprettygirlhasdimplesonhercheeks.

这美丽的姑娘两颊都有酒窝。

17.Theinn-keeper'swife,herfeetbare,herhairuntidy,herblousedirty,cameherselftomeetherguests.

旅店老板的妻子光着脚，穿着肮脏的罩衣，头发乱蓬蓬的，亲自迎接她的客人。

18.Themiddle-agedmanalreadyhasdoublechinsandrecedinghairline.

这个中年人已有了双下巴，头发也日渐稀少。

19.shewasyoung,withafair,calmfacethatshowedacertainstrength.

她是一个年轻人，满脸的恬静，表现出一种与众不同的力量

20.Sheeatstoomuchthesedays,soherfaceisgettinground.

她最近吃得太多了，所以她的脸变圆了。

谚语积累

1.Appearanceiseasytorecognize,butheartisthehardesttoguess.Judgenotfromappearances.

外貌容易认,内心最难猜。

2.Outsideofthegoldandjade,therearemanyfailures.金玉其外，败絮其中。

3.Waterradishskinredheartnotred.水萝卜皮红心不红。

4.Judgenotfromappearances.人不可貌相，海不可斗量。

5.aneyeforaneye以眼还眼，报复

6.catchsomeone?seye引某人注目，令人瞩目

7.givesomeoneablackeye打得某人鼻青脸肿

8.bealleyes极注意地看着，非常留神

9.seeeyetoeye(with)意见一致，立场相同

10.seewithhalfaneye一看就明白

11.shutone'seyeto置之不理

12.haveaneyefor对..有判断力

13.keepaneyeon照看，密切注意

14.intheeyesof在..的心目中，在看来

15.makeeyesatsb向某人送秋波

16.makesbopenhiseyes使某人瞠目结舌，吃惊

17.goinatoneearandoutattheother左耳进右耳出，当耳旁风

18.pickupone'sears竖起耳朵听

19.uptothe(one's)ears深陷在(债务等中)，债台高筑

20.wetbehindtheears乳臭未干

21.beallears全神贯注地倾听

22.giveearto听，倾听，注意

23.giveone?sears不惜任何代价(要)

24.havean(no)earfor对..听觉灵敏(不灵敏)

25.sleeponbothears酣睡，熟睡

26.turnadeafearto对..置之不理，对...充耳不闻

27.downin(at)themouth垂头丧气

28.frommouthtomouth□□相传，广泛流传

29.putwordsin(to)someone?smouth教人怎么说，诬指某人说过某话

30.stopsomeone?smouth使某人缄默

31.takethewordsoutofsomeone?smouth抢先说某人想说的话

32.fromthehorse?smouth(消息等)第一手的，直接得来的，来源可靠的

33.inthemouthof出于..之口

34.openone'smouthwide狮子大开口（指索高价）；信口开河

35.leadsomeonebythenose控制某人，牵着某

人的鼻子走

36.paythroughthenose花大价钱，被敲竹杠

37.asplainasthenoseonyourface显而易见，一清二楚

38.bitesb/snoseoff气势汹汹地回答某人

39.followone飞nose笔直走；凭本能行事

40.lookdownone'snoseat瞧不起

万能写作模板

根据下列含有写句子。

1.她有着一头棕色而卷曲的头发。

Herhairis.

【答案1Herhairisbrownandcurly.

2.她是一个金发美女。

Sheiswith.

【答案］Sheisabeautifulgirlwithfairhair.

3.她有一双我从未见过的漂亮蓝眼睛。

Hehadeyes.

［答案］HehadthemostbeautifulblueeyesIhadeverseen.

4.她时常灿烂地微笑，闪烁着她的大眼睛。

Shehasasmileandshealwayshasinhereye.

【答案】Shehasaverypleasantsmileandshealwayshasatwinkleinhereye.

5.她总是穿着优雅整洁。

Shealwaysdresses.

【答案］Shealwaysdressesveiyelegantandtidy.

6.由于她皮肤白很善良，我们都很喜欢她。

Becauseofherand,wealllikeherverymuch.

【答案］Becauseofherfairskinandkindness,wealllikeherverymuch.

7.这个年轻的女人很高，体态优美。

Theyoungwomanwastall,.

【答案】Theyoungwomanwastall,withafigureofperfectelegance.

8.她微微一笑，露出了洁白整齐的牙齿。

Whenshesmiled,sheshowed.

【答案】Whenshesmiled,sheshowedherwhiteeventeeth.

9.这个女孩子非常可爱有趣。

Thegirlisvery.

【答案】Thegirlisverylovelyandinteresting.

10.她是一个贪婪的女人。

Sheisa.

【答案】Sheisagreedywoman.

11.她脸上总是挂着心满意足的微笑。

Thereisalways.

【答案】Thereisalwaysasmileofcontentmentonherface.

12.她属于那种极难讨好的人。

Shebelongstothosewho.

【答案］Shebelongstothosewhoareverydifficulttosatisfy.

13.她的美貌令我神魂颠倒。

Herappearancefairly.

【答案】Herappearancefairlytookmybreathaway.

14.Lily望着他那可怜的、疲倦的小脸和红肿的眼睛，心都软了下来。

Lilylookedathisfaceandeyesandherheartrelented.

【答案】Lilylookedathispoorlittletiredfaceandswolleneyesandherheartrelented.

15.他是一位枯瘦、驼背的老人，一个无牙的微笑和一缕长到肚脐的白胡子。

Hewasaoldmanwithbeardthatdroppedtohisnavel.

【答案】Hewasagaunt,stoopingoldmanwithatoothlesssmileandawhitebeardthatdroppedtohisnavel.

16.他的容颜饱经风霜，而雪白浓眉下那双乌黑的眼睛，就像可以瞬间燃起烈火的煤炭。

Inhisfacebrowshisdarkeyesweresetlikecoalsthatcouldleapsuddenlyinto

fire.

【答案】Inhisagedfaceundergreatsnowybrowshisdarkeyesweresetlikecoalsthatcouldleapsuddenlyinto

fire.

17.我看着他走上舞台。中等身材、健壮结实、浅黄色的头发垂在前额。

Iwatchhimashemakeshiswaytowardthestage.hairthatfallinwavesoverhisforehead.

【答案】Iwatchhimashemakeshiswaytowardthestage.Mediumheight,stockybuild,ashyblondhairthatfall

inwavesoverhisforehead.

18.她们的指甲很长，抛光成粉红色或橙色，她们的嘴唇像郁金香一样红。

Theirnailswere,theirlips.

【答案】Theirnailswerelong,polishedpinkororange,theirlipsredastulips.

19.亨利有一张消瘦的面孔、膝盖骨突出的膝盖、乌黑的头发和一对翠绿的眼睛。

Henryhadaface,knees,hair,andeyes.

【答案】Henryhadathinface,knobblyknees,blackhair,andbrightgreeneyes.

20.米莉安是一位长着灰色大眼睛和满头金发的姑娘。

Miriamisagirleyesandhair.

【答案】Miriamisagirlwithbiggrayeyesandgoldenhair.

21.她面色白皙，体态轻盈，有一双大而圣洁的蓝眼睛和一头浓密的金发。

Shewasacreature,witheyesandhair.

【答案】Shewasapale,etherealcreature,withwide,spiritualblueeyesandawealthofgoldenhair.

22.那个生硬、结巴的粗汉子消失了。但那不合身的衣服，布满伤疤的双手和晒黑的脸膛却依然如故。

Thewasgone.Theclothes,hands,andface

remained.

【答案】Theraw,stumblingloutwasgone.Theill-fittingclothes,batteredhands,andsunburnedfaceremained.

23.马丽身材修长，满头金发，苗条美丽，雍容华贵。

Maryisawoman,.

【答案】Maryisatall,blondewoman,slender,andstatelyandbeautiful.

24.她长着奶油般的皮肤，修长的肩和一头黑色的卷发。

Shehasskinand.

【答案】Shehascreamyskinandshoulder-length,darkringlets.

25.他长得又怪又粗糙，一脸的雀斑，一个蓬乱的红胡子。

Hewasa,withbear.

【答案JHewasastrange,roughfellow,withafreckledfaceandred,roughbear

、］r高考真题】

（2022年全国高考新高考I卷）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的

短文。

Itwasthedayofthebigcross-countryrun.Studentsfromsevendifferentprimaryschoolsinandaroundthe

smalltownwerewarmingupandwalkingtheroute（路线）throughthickevergreenforest.

IlookedaroundandfinallyspottedDavid,whowasstandingbyhimselfofftothesidebyafence.Hewas

smallfortenyearsold.Hisusualbigtoothysmilewasabsenttoday.Iwalkedoverandaskedhimwhyhewasn*t

withtheotherchildren.Hehesitatedandthensaidhehaddecidednottorun.

Whatwaswrong?Hehadworkedsohardforthisevent!

Iquicklysearchedthecrowdfortheschoofscoachandaskedhimwhathadhappened.HIwasafraidthatkids

fromotherschoolswouldlaughathim,"heexplaineduncomfortably.nIgavehimthechoicetorunornot,andlet

himdecide.n

Ibitbackmyfrustration（懊恼）.Iknewthecoachmeantwell-hethoughthewasdoingtherightthing.

AftermakingsurethatDavidcouldrunifhewanted,Iturnedtofindhimcomingtowardsme,hissmallbody

rockingfromsidetosideasheswunghisfeetforward.

Davidhadabraindiseasewhichpreventedhimfromwalkingorrunninglikeotherchildren,butatschoolhis

classmatesthoughtofhimasaregularkid.Healwaysparticipatedtothebestofhisabilityinwhatevertheywere

doing.ThatwaswhynoneofthechildrenthoughtitunusualthatDavidhaddecidedtojointhecross-countryteam.

Itjusttookhimlonger-thafsall.Davidhadnotmissedasinglepractice,andalthoughhealwaysfinishedhisrun

longaftertheotherchildren,hedidalwaysfinish.Asaspecialeducationteacherattheschool,Iwasfamiliarwith

thechallengesDavidfacedandwasproudofhisstrongdetermination.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答.

Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn'tlookatme.

IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.

笳

【范文赏析】

Wesatdowntogetheronsomesteps,butDavidwouldn'tlookatme.Iturnedhimaroundandlookedhimin

theeyesincerely.Iquietlysaid,"David,ifyou'renotrunningbecauseyou'reafraidsomeoneisgoingtolaugh,

thafsnotagoodenoughreason.Areyougoingtoletthemgetinyourway?Ifyoureallywanttorun,David,run!^^

IheldmybreathasDavidtookthisin.Thenhelookedatthefieldandsaidwithafiercebutquietdetermination,

'Tmgonnarun.^^

IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartingline.Thestarter'sgunsounded.Buthehadonlygoneafewmetres

beforehetrippedandfellflatontheground.Myheartsank.AsIstartedtoshoutencouragement,othervoices

aroundmetookupthecall."ComeonDavid,youcandoit!”Davidpickedhimselfupandstartedagainuntilhe

crossedthefinishlinetowildcheersandapplause.

最后几句结尾有三种：

第一种：（首选结尾）

Thatday,Davidgotaspecialawardforhiscourage.Healsogotrespectofallstudents.Tohim,thatwaswortha

wholelotmorethananaward.（169words）

第二种：（原文结尾）

Then,whenDavid'scoachslappedhimonthebackandsaidproudly,“Goodjob,David!”hecaughtmyeye,

flashedmeatoothygrinandsaid,"Thatwaseasy!^^（169words）

第三种：

Thatday,Davidgotaspecialawardfbrhiscourage.Hewasshiningonthewinner'spodium.David,withsomany

birthproblems,wasaherotoallofusandmostimportantly,tohimself!（175words）

r名校模拟题提升练】

1.（2023秋・湖北•高三校联考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成

一篇完整的短文。

WhenIwasfour,myseven-year-oldbrotherreceivedabaseballmitt（手套）forhisbirth-day,whichwasalso

whatIdesperatelywanted.But,backthen,girlsdidn'tplaysports;theyplayedwithdolls.

26yearslater,Ihappenedtoseeanoticeinmylocalpaper:"Women'sSlow-PitchSoft-ballLeagueopens

soon.Anyoneinterested,signupattherecreationcenter.^^Icutitoutandsetitonthekitchencounter.Wasiteven

possibletoplaybaseball,agameI'dneveractuallyplayedbuthaddreamedofplayinginmyentirelife?

Lookingatthatnoticeonmycounter,IthoughtofathousandreasonsIcouldn'tplay.Buttheideaofplaying

baseballstuckinmyheadandwouldn,tgoaway.Finally,Iscrewedupmycourageandsignedup.Dayslater,word

camethatIcouldbeginpracticeinJamesParkonMondaynight.

OnMonday,heartpounding,Iwalkedthroughtheparkfilledwithwomenofallhigh-schoolgirlspracticingat

differentdiamonds.Iwaitedacoupleofminutesbeforeapproachingthecoach,whoseemedunhappytoseeme.He

hadjustputtogethertopathletesforhisteam,anddidn'twantsomeoldladymessingthingsup.Helookedme

over,whohadnomittbutworeanoldT-shirtandgymshoes.However,Ididn'tcare.

Thatveryfirstdaywasquitebitter.Hehadmerunbasesallnightandnevergavemeachancetobatorplay

thefield,withtheattempttomakemeshrinkfromdifficulty.ButhehadnoideahowdeterminedIwas.Istill

showeduptoplayinthefollowingMondays,whichclearlysurprisedhim.

Finally,hegavein.Duringthelastinningofthelastgameoftheseason,thecoachtoldmetogotocenter

field.Ihadtoborrowamittfromamemberofourteamandusedittocatchanimpossiblyhighball,winningthe

gameforus.Again,thecoachlookedsurprised.ItneverhithimthatImightbeabletoplay.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Afterthegame,Ireceivedanunexpectedinvitationfromanothercoach.

ItturnedoutIdidn'tletmycoachdown.

【答案】

Afterthegame,Ireceivedanunexpectedinvitationfromanothercoach.ThemomentheapproachedmeI

recognizedhim,theveryprestigiouscoachinAmerica.Hehadbeensearchingtheotherteamsforpotentialplayers

toplayforhisteam.He'dseenthecatchI'dmadeandthewayI"movedlikeanathlete^^onthefieldandthoughtI

mightmakeagoodpitcher.Whatasurprise!NoonecouldimaginehowthrilledIwasatsuchexcitingmoment.

Tooastonishedtosaytheword"yes”,Ijustnoddedmyheadvigorouslywithoutasecondthought.Tocelebratemy

newbaseballlife,thenextday,IwenttothesportinggoodsstoretobuyamittwhichIhadbeenlongingfor.

Excitedasakid,Itookmynewmitttojointhenewteam,wheretheteammateslovedthegamethewayIdid.

ItturnedoutIdidn,tletmycoachdown.Myparticipationinjectedtremendousvigorintothoseyounggirls,who

werealwaystouchedbymyendurance,persistenceandenthusiasmforbaseballandlife.ItwasnotuntilIwas

retiredat40thatIplayedwiththem.Andwewentundefeatedsixofthoseyears,andIwasnamedMVPfivetimes.

Playingthegamewiththesewomenenrichedmylifeandthelivesofmyfamilyincountlessways.Tothisday,

memoriesofthoseyearsgladdenallourhearts.AndnoneofitwouldhavehappenedifIhadn'tcutoutthatlittle

article,nervouslysigneduptoplayball,anddaredtotakeachanceonfulfillingmychildhooddream.

【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在三十岁时，偶然看到了当地报纸的一则关于女子棒球团开

团报名的通知，她儿时因"女子不能从事体育运动”的旧观念而被遏制的对棒球运动的渴望重新被点燃，她勇

敢地报了名，和年轻的女孩们一起练习。一开始她因年龄大，被教练嫌弃，慢慢地，她用自己的坚持改变

了教练的看法，在赛场上表现出了优异的技术，最终被知名教练邀请，正式加入了一家棒球队，并和队友

们一起创造了六年不败的佳绩，改变了自己的生活，实现了儿时梦想的故事。

【详解】1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“比赛结束后，我意外地收到了另一位教练的邀请。”可知，第一段可描写这位教练对

作者的赞赏，和作者收到邀请后的激动表现。

②由第二段首句内容“事实证明，我没有让教练失望。”可知，第二段可描写作者加入棒球队后的优秀表现

和成绩，实现了儿时的梦想。

2.续写线索：收到邀请——教练的评价——接受邀请——激动的表现和行为——没有让教练失望——对棒

球队的影响一棒球队的战绩一对自己的影响和改变一实现了梦想

3.词汇激活：

行为类：

①寻找：searchfor/lookfor

②购买：buy/purchase

③发生：happen/takeplace

④注册、登记：signup/register

情绪类：

①激动的：thrilled/excited

②吃惊的：astonished/shocked

【点睛】【高分句型1】He,dseenthecatchI'dmadeandthewayI"movedlikeanathlete^^onthefieldand

thoughtImightmakeagoodpitcher.（运用了catch后省略了关系词that/which的定语从句、theway后省略

T关系词that的定语从句和thought后省略了连接词that的宾语从句）

[高分句型2]AndnoneofitwouldhavehappenedifIhadn'tcutoutthatlittlearticle,nervouslysignedupto

playball,anddaredtotakeachanceonfulfillingmychildhooddream.（运用了if弓I导的条件状语从句和虚拟语

气）

2.（2023秋•贵州•高三统考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一

篇完整的短文。

Momsatdownatthekitchentableandlookedattheawardsdinnerinvitationasthoughshehadreceivedbad

newsfromfaraway.44Baby,itmightbeamistake.Sometimestheyaccidentallysendthesethingsouttothewrong

people.9,Shespokeslowlyandwithsympathyinhervoice.Iwasonlyinthefirstgrade;Ididn'tunderstandthebig

dealanddidn'treallycareaboutamistake.

Iwasembarrassedbytheprocessoflearning.Onthefirstdayofschoolmymomtalkedtomyteacherfora

longtimewhile1satatoneofthelittletablesandmetpeoplewhowouldbemyfriendsforyears,includingKatie.I

wassoabsorbedinmyfriend-makingthatIdidnotcarewhatmymomwassayingtomynewteacher,andI

certainlycouldnothaveknownthatshewasexpressingherconcernaboutmepossiblyhavingalearningdisability.

Myacademicprogresswasneveratopicofconversation.Ididnotknowanythingaboutgradesorscholarly

competition.Ididn'tcare.Ijustlikedmybeautifulteachers.Ilovedmyfriends.Ienjoyeddoingalltheworksheets

andactivities.Mygradesdidnotmeananythingtome.

Attheawardsdinner,wesatbymybestfriendKatieandherfamily.SheandItalkedandlaughedallthrough

themeal.ButMomlookedlikeshewasstillexpectingbadnews.Shereachedacrossthetableandheldmyhand

rightbeforetheprincipalstartedhandingoutawards."Remember,sweetie,we'rejustheretoenjoythedinner.^^

Theawardsweregivenoutbysubject.Withineachsubject,thegradewinnerswereannouncedandreceiveda

certificate,Math.NoRebecca,Science.NoRebecca.Reading.Katiegotthatone.Shesmiledbroadly.Icaughtmy

mom'sface.Shewasneartears.ShelookedatmeasifIwerehurt.ButIwasfine.Shewastheonewhowashurt,

watchingalltheotherchildrengetawardswhileherownwaspassedoveragainandagain.

注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Allthesubjectawardsweregivenout,andmynamewasnotcalled.

Afewsecondslater,tcOkay,theoverallachievementmedalforthefirstgrade-RebeccaYoungblood.^^

【答案】

Allthesubjectawardsweregivenout,andmynamewasnotcalled.Mom'sfacefell,andhereyeswerefilled

withtears.Shesqueezedmyhandtightly,herknuckleswhite.Ilookedather,feelingasenseofhelplessness.It

seemedthattheprincipalwasabouttofinishhisannouncement.However,Istillprayedforamiracle.Suddenly,the

principallookedatmydirectionwithasmile.

Afewsecondslater,46Okay,theoverallachievementmedalforthefirstgrade-RebeccaYoungblood.^^.The

principal'svoiceboomedthroughtheroom.Icouldn'tbelieveit.Ihadbeenawardedtheoverallachievement

medalformygrade.Mom'sfacelitupinasmileasshewipedawaytearsandhuggedmetightly.Itwasamoment

thatwebothcherished,onethatletmeknowthatmyhardworkhadpaidoff.Itwasalessoninresilienceand

perseverancethatIwouldcarrywithmealways.

【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了小女孩丽贝卡和妈妈受邀参加学校的颁奖晚宴。因为女孩有学习

障碍，所以妈妈觉得可能是晚宴邀请函发错了，但她们还是如约参加了颁奖晚宴。在晚宴上，校长一个一

个念着获奖学生的名字，但丽贝卡的名字一直未出现。妈妈看到其他孩子获奖而自己的孩子被忽略，感到

非常伤心。

【详解】1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“所有的学科奖项都颁发了，我的名字没有被点名。”可知，第一段可描写妈妈的失望

和丽贝卡的希望。

②由第二段首句内容“几秒钟后，’好了，一年级的总成就奖章——丽贝卡・扬布拉德。R可知，第二段可描

写丽贝卡获奖后母女俩的喜悦。

2.续写线索：妈妈感到无助——祈祷奇迹出现——获奖后的喜悦——永远铭记这一刻

3.词汇激活

行为类

①充¥黄：befilledwith/befullof

②紧握：squeeze/grasp

③结束：finish/conclude/end

情绪类

①紧紧地抱着我：hugmetightly/embracemetightly/holdmetight

②珍视：cherish/treasure

【点睛】[高分句型1]Itseemedthattheprincipalwasabouttofinishhisannouncement.（运用了that弓|导表语从

句）

[高分句型2]Mom'sfacelitupinasmileasshewipedawaytearsandhuggedmetightly.（运用了as弓|导时间状

语从句）

[高分句型3]ItwasalessoninresilienceandperseverancethatIwouldcarrywithmealways.（运用了关系代词

that引导限制性定语从句）

3.Q023秋・山西•高三太原十二中校联考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，

使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Attheendofthefifthgrade,therewasaburstofexcitementintheclassroom.Theschoolyearwasalmost

over,andwewouldbemovingontoanewschoolforthesixthgrade.Allthegirlsmadeautographbooks（签名册）

andcollectedsignatures.

AsIsignedmyclassmates5books,Inoticedtheirmomshadwritteninthem,too.Suchsweetthoughtswere

expressed,“Icouldn'tbeprouderofyou.Can'twaittoseehowyoulikejuniorhigh!”"You'regraduating.

Congratulations!WeloveyouandknowyouhaveabrightfUture!”...

Iaskedmymothertosignmine,too.Shewasbusy,butshesaidshe'dsignit.Severaldayslater,whenIasked

aboutit,shetoldmeshejustforgot.Anyway,shehandeditbacktomelater.Iwasanxioustoseewhatencouraging

wordsshehadwritten.AndthisiswhatIfoundonthepage:

Whenathingisfirstbegun,

Neverleaveittillit'sdone.

Bethelaborgreatorsmall,

Doitwellornotatall.

Mom

Myheartsank.Thatwasit?Iwasdisappointedthattherewerenowordsofprideorencouragement.Itwasjust

astupidpoem-anotherindicationtomethatifIcouldn'tbeperfect,Iwasn'tgoodenough.

Iheldbackmytears,notexpressingmydisappointment.

Thatpageinthathandmadebookbotheredmeforyears,

Ibattledperfectionismandlowself-respectandneverfeltgoodenoughformostofmylife.Manytimes,I

gaveuponthingsafterIbarelygotstarted.AllIcouldhearwas"You'renotgoodenough/*

Whenmymotherwasinhereightiesandinanursinghome,Igaveherabooktofilloutsowecouldknow

moreabouther.Ithadhints（暗示）atthetopofeachpageandthenblankspacetorespond.Iwantedhertowrite

downhermemoriesandalifetimeofexperiences,soI.alongwithhergrandchildren,wouldhavesomeprecious

sectionsofherlife.

注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Inthebeginning,shewasveryexcited.

OnedayIwenttothenursinghometoseeher,onlytofindhersleeping,withthebooklyingbesideher.

【答案】

Inthebeginning,shewasveryexcited.She'dcallmetotellmethatshewasworkingonit.Afterseveral

weeks,though,shestoppedmentioningthebook,soIaskedaboutit.Thenshesaid,“Oh,Iwasbusychattingwith

myfriendsinthenursinghome,forgettingaboutit.ButIwillworkonitagain.^^Iguesseditgotboringforherand

thatshejustdidn'tlikewritinganythingtome,especiallysomethingencouragingorwhatshehadexperienced.

OnedayIwenttothenursinghometoseeher,onlytofindhersleeping,withthebooklyingbesideher.Ipicked

itupandsatdowntoreadthroughit.Onceagain,Ifeltdisappointment-she'donlyfilledouttenpages.