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读后续写原文

中文BeforeIturnedten,Ihadlostbothmyparents.Ilivedaloneinaroomthatarelativehadallowedmetouserentfree.Andtosupportmyselfandmyeducation,Ihadtakentodeliveringnewspapers.在我十岁之前，我就失去了父母。亲戚免费让我住在他们的一处房子里。为了养活我自己和付学费，我开始去送报纸。Iwouldgetupeverymorningby5amandwalkfivekilometresfromKachiguda,whereIlived,tothenewspaperofficeinTroop’sBazaar.我每天早上五点就起床，从我住的地方Kachiguda走10里路到Troop'sBazaar领取报纸。By6am,Iwould

collect

领50copiesofManzil(UrduDaily)thebundlemusthaveweighedoverfivekilograms.六点钟前，我要领50份“Manzil”（乌尔都语日报）——这一捆报纸超过了10斤。My

beat路线

spannedthreekilometres,fromMoazzamJahiMarkettoBasheerBagh.我的送报区域跨越6里路，从MoazzamJahi市场到BasheerBagh。Afterdistributingthecopies,Iwouldrushhomeanotherthreekilometresaway,cookmymeaslybreakfast,andbeofftotheKachigudaHighSchool.分发完报纸后，我会赶回家——又是6里路，去煮我简单(寒酸)的早餐，然后赶到Kachiguda高中。OnewintryFridaymorningin1945,Igothomeaftermydeliveries,onlytofindaboyofmyageatmydoorstep.1945年的一个寒冷的星期五早晨，我送完报纸回到家，却发现一个和我同龄的男孩在我家门口。HeintroducedhimselfasAfzalandsaidhisfatherwantedtoseeme.他自我介绍说他叫Afzal，他的父亲想见我。Afzal’smother,NaseemBano,openedthedoor.Sheaskedmetosit,pattedmybackandwentinside.Shereappearedcarryingalargetrayfullofteaandsnacks.Afzal的母亲NaseemBano开了门。她让我坐下，拍了拍我的后背，然后走进屋里。她重新出现时，手里托着一个装满茶和小吃的大托盘。ThencameMrKader,Afzal’sfather,tellingmeAfzalwastheironlysonandastudentinmyschool.然后，Afzal的父亲Kader先生进来了，他告诉我Afzal是他们独生子，和我同校。Naseempulledupherchairnexttomineandgentlyasked,“Tellmeaboutyourroutine,rightfromthetimeyouwakeupinthemorning.”Iwasn'tquitesurewhyshewantedtoknowthat,butItoldheraboutmymorningjobinafewwords.Naseem将她的椅子拉到我旁边，轻轻地问我：“和我说说你每天都做什么吧，从早晨你醒来的时候开始。”我不太确定她为什么要知道这些,但我还是简要地告诉了她我早晨工作的情况。Later,asIwasabouttoleaveafterthankingthem，MrKaderaskedmetowaitandsteppedinsidethehouse.Meanwhile，Naseemaskedme,“Howmanymilesdoyouwalkeveryday?”Ireplied,“Alittlemorethan11km.”Myreplyshockedher.后来，当我准备感谢他们然后离开的时候，Kader先生让我等一等，他走进了屋子。与此同时，Naseem问我：“你每天走多少公路？”我回答说：“22里多一点。”听到我的回答，她震惊了。续写第一段：Atthesametime,IsawMrKaderemergeagain,wheelinganewbicycle.续写第二段：Mr.Kaderbegantoexplainwhyhegavemethebicycle.与此同时，我看到Kader先生再次出现，推着一辆新自行车。Kader先生开始解释为什么给了我这辆自行车。文本分析：故事大意；10岁时我失去了父母，投靠在亲戚家。为了养活自己，我每天早早起床去送报纸，赚取微薄的工资。一天，我同校的校友Afzal说他的父母向见我。他们询问了我的情况，知道我每天要走22里路，慷慨地送给了我一辆自行车。故事情节续写：Para1;这辆车属于了我，我露出吃惊的表情，提出想付钱，但是这对好心的夫妻拒绝了，并安慰鼓励我。Para2:他们解释了原因。因为认识父母的一个朋友，了解到很多关于我的情况。他们的热心善良让我湿了眼眶。这辆自行车改变了我的人生方向。好句积累翻译：（答案在原文和范文中）1.1945年的一个寒冷的星期五早晨，我送完报纸回到家，却发现一个和我同龄的男孩在我家门口。她让我坐下，拍了拍我的后背，然后走进屋里。后来，当我准备感谢他们然后离开的时候，Kader先生让我等一等，他走进了屋子。我感到了家一般的温暖，正如母亲就在那里。我没有意识到，眼泪已经涌上眼眶，沿着脸颊滚落。官方参考范文Atthesametime,IsawMrKaderemergeagain,wheelinganewbicycle.

Itwasaquiteexpensivenewbike.IwasfixingmyeyesonitwhenIheardMrKader'swords.“Thisisforyou!”hesaid.“ButIhavenomoneytopayforit,”Imurmured.Afzal’smotherputherarmaroundmyshoulders,gaveagentlesqueezeandsaid,“Whoisaskingyoutopayforit,myson?”Ittookafewsecondsfortheendearmenttosinkin.Itfeltwarm,likehome,asifmymotherwerethereforme.MrKaderbegantoexplainwhyhegavemethebicycle.

Hesaid,“Yournewspapereditorisafriendofmine.Hegavemeyouraddress,soIknewyoulivedcloseby.ThenAfzaltoldusmoreaboutyou.”Ibowedgratefully.Ididn’tevenrealizethatmyeyeshadwelledup,andtearswererollingdownmyface.Afzal’smotherwipedmytearsandheldmecloser.Thebicyclechangedmylifeformanyyearsthereafter.Irealizedthattimelyandneedsbasedhelpisinparablyprecious.下水文Atthatmoment,IsawMrKaderemergeagain,wheelinganewbicycle.Itwasanimportedbrand,quiteexpensivebicycleinpreIndependenceIndia.“Thisisforyou!”hesaid.“ButIhavenomoneytopayforit,”Icried.Afzal’smotherputherarmaroundmyshoulders,gaveagentlesqueezeandsaid,“Whoisaskingyoutopayforit,myson?”Ittookafewsecondsforthe

endearment

tosinkin.Itfeltwarm,likehome,asifmymotherwasthere

forme.

Ididn’tevenrealisethatmyeyeshadwelledup,andtearswererollingdownmyface.

Shewipedmytearsandheldmecloser.MrKaderbegantoexplainwhyhegavemethebicycle.MrKadersaid,“Yournewspapereditorisafriendofmine.Hegavemeyouraddress,soIknewyoulivedcloseby.ThenAfzaltoldusmoreaboutyou.”Soitwaspossibleforpeopletobecuriousaboutsomeone’splight(困境),yetremainindifferent:thiswasa

revelation

tomeatthatage.ButthentherewerepeoplelikeAfzal’sparents,too.Ibowedgratefully,shookhandswithAfzalandleft.ThistimeIdidnothavetowalk–