Unit 2 Travelling-【同步写作课】2023-2024学年八年级英语下册单元写作深度指导（牛津译林版）（学生版）

第1页Unit2Travelling单元写作指导与演练近三年考情分析话题考查热度旅行经历本单元写作要求同学们能用所学的词语和句型简单地介绍一次旅行经历。介绍的内容主要为旅行的时间、地点、和什么人、做了哪些事情和感受等。在具体的写作中，学生应做到以下几点：1.能用正确的时态即一般过去时描述旅行经历；2.能正确使用表示先后顺序的逻辑词组织内容，使文章层次清晰；3.能利用多种句式描述经历，使文章内容丰富；4.能利用一般过去时或者一般现在时表达旅行的感受。【词汇积累】1.__________________名字1.__________________动身去2.__________________去过3.__________________玩得开心4.__________________一整天5.__________________(游乐场的)过山车6.__________________购物7.__________________在末尾8.__________________为某人买某物9.__________________对某事感到激动10.__________________对做某事感到激动11.__________________去野餐12.__________________自然美景13.__________________在湖边14.__________________直飞到【句式积累】※开头句1.___________________________________________________________________________寒假已经过去了。我想和你分享一下我的上海之旅。2.___________________________________________________________________________我去过很多大城市，比如广州和上海。3.___________________________________________________________________________我还去过许多名胜古迹，比如西湖和泰山。4.___________________________________________________________________________昨天我和家人一起去秦皇岛看海。5.___________________________________________________________________________去年夏天，我和家人去了一次难忘的海滩之旅。6.___________________________________________________________________________我们决定参观一个美丽的海滨度假胜地，花几天时间享受阳光、沙滩和冲浪。7.___________________________________________________________________________我在阳光学校已经一个月了。现在我要走了，所以上周五我们参观了无锡的一些名胜古迹。※中间句1.___________________________________________________________________________我们在大年初二到达那里。2.___________________________________________________________________________天气晴朗，我们非常享受这次旅行。3.___________________________________________________________________________我在城皇庙小吃街品尝了一些美味的传统上海菜。4.___________________________________________________________________________最后，我去了王府井大街，在那里我品尝了许多美味的食物。5.___________________________________________________________________________有时我在酒店看书，也看电视。6.___________________________________________________________________________我迫不及待地想跳进清澈凉爽的水中，和我的兄弟姐妹一起玩得开心。7.___________________________________________________________________________它是如此激动人心，让我感到充满活力和冒险精神。※结尾句1.___________________________________________________________________________这次海滩之旅教会了我从繁忙的生活中休息一下，与亲人共度美好时光的重要性。2.___________________________________________________________________________它提醒我，大自然有自己的方式来治愈和并使我们恢复活力。3.___________________________________________________________________________我永远不会忘记这次旅行。4.___________________________________________________________________________虽然我有点累，但我很高兴。5.___________________________________________________________________________那天我们玩得很开心！我希望我能再次来到无锡。6.___________________________________________________________________________总而言之，这是一次有趣而难忘的旅行。7.___________________________________________________________________________我真的很喜欢我的眉山之旅。【谚语积累】1、______________________________________Readingthousandsofbooksisnotequaltotravelingthousandsofmiles.2、______________________________________Walkthreemilesatastopandthreevillagesatarest.3、______________________________________Ajourneyofathousandmilesbeginswithsinglestep.4、______________________________________Manisanimmortalwhoneverwalksathousandtimesaday.5、______________________________________Guilinisthebestplaceintheworld,andYinshuoisthebestplaceinGuilin.6、______________________________________SpringisintenseintheSouthandiceisfrozeninthenorth.【万能写作模板】Iwouldliketosharemytripto__________（引出地点）withyou.Iwentto__________by__________（交通方式）withmy__________.Wearrivedthere__________（具体时间）.Itwas__________（引出天气）andweenjoyedthetripverymuch.Isaw__________（所见）.Thereweretoomanypeopleonthestreets,andthetrafficwas__________.Itriedsomedelicioustraditional__________foodat__________.Thenextday,wewentto__________.We__________（所做事情）in__________andsaw__________.Ihadagoodtimeduringmytripto__________.（总结感受）I’mlookingforwardtovisiting__________again.（表达期待）去年暑假，你去参观了眉山三苏祠，在那里你也认识了你的好友Tina。请以“ATriptoSanSuTemple”为题，写篇90词左右的短文。内容要点如下：要求：1.文中不得出现真实的姓名。2.90词左右（可适当发挥，语言精炼，不超过120词)；卷面整洁。ATriptoSanSuTemple________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、翻译短语1．前天2．后天3．照料；照顾4．拒绝5．盼望；期待6．接到（某人的）信、电话等7．以便8．回复；回信9．去听音乐会10．去旅行11．在……结尾12．举行聚会13．去购物二、选词填空clear,be,they,one,family,improve,speak,tradition,photo,duringLastsummerholiday,IhadashortvisittoBritain.Itwasanexcellenttrip.Ilearnedalotfromit.Thiswasmy14timetotravelinaforeigncountry.Iwenttherebyplane.Igotalittleafraidontheplane.BecauseIamnotgoodat15English.IwasafraidthatIcouldn’tunderstandothersandcouldn’ttalkwithothers16.AhostfamilymetmeonceIreachedBritain.Ilivedwiththehostfamilyfortwoweeks.However,myworriesdidn’tappearbecausemyhostfamily17solovelyandkind.Theyalwayscaredaboutmewarmly.Theyalwaysaskedmetoeatwith18.AndIalsocookedsomeofour19food.Myhost20kindness（善良）taughtmethatculturaldiffereneescouldn’tstopfriendship.21myvisittoLondon,wewenttothecentralpartofthecity.WewalkedovertheMillenniumBridge(千禧桥),enjoyedthewaterwaysandtookmany22.Wespentsometimehappily.Thetripwashelpfulto23myEnglish.Itwasalsoawaytolearnthecultureofanothercountryandspread(传播)ourculturetoothers.Thetravelwaswonderfulforme.Ihopetogothereagain.三、完成句子24．会议结束时，汤姆给我们讲了一个有趣的故事。(end)Tomtoldusafunnystorythemeeting.25．他去过广州很多次。HetoGuangzhoumanytimes.26．这辆车整个行程中都在高速移动。Thecarwas.27．惠山古镇向来以其美景和古建筑而为人所知。HuishanTownhasalwaysandoldbuildings.28．西游乐园的过山车高速移动，整个乘坐过程中学生们都在尖叫。TherollercoasterinXiyouWorldofAdventuremovedandthestudentswerescreamingthrough.29．在云南，你可以终年欣赏到美丽的景色。YoucanenjoythebeautifulviewsinYunnan.四、翻译句子30．这些山如此之大以至于走到另一边需要花费很长时间。.31．北京烤鸭尝起来很好吃。32．我和朋友们在山上搭建起了一个帐篷，在外面做起了饭。(putup)1．寒假已经过去，相信大家都去了不少有意义的地方吧！在旅行中，我们会遇见不同的人，欣赏不同的风景。这些旅行都会给我们留下深刻的回忆。请以“MyTripto________”为题，描述自己在寒假的一次旅行。参考要点：1.旅行的时间、地点、出行方式、同行的人……；2.旅行中的所见所闻（天气、活动、食物……）；3.你的感受。要求：1.书写工整，卷面整洁；2.80词左右，可适当发挥；3.文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。MyTripto________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．使用下列关键词，以LiHua’sTour为题，写一篇至少五句话的小短文，描述李华去青海湖的经历，可适当发挥，注意标点符号和大小写。QinghaiLake,parents,went,with,thissummer,LiHua;saw,beautiful,alongtheway,flowers,many;beautiful,was,lake,happy;took,photos,some,gifts,bought,friends,and,for;hopes,nextsummer,again,QinghaiLake,go.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．假设学校英语角举办题为“Mytravel”的征文比赛。请根据提示，写一篇英语短文投稿。要求：1.包括所有要点，可适当发挥；2.不少于80词；题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。MytravelIliketraveling.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．你曾经去过什么地方游玩？吃了什么食物？做了什么事情？游玩的整体印象怎么样？请写一篇游玩日记，字数70字左右。注意：1、使用正确的格式2、使用正确的时态____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．旅行，或远或近，总能让我们收获成长、放松身心。与家人一起探寻城市的繁华、乡村的静谧；与老师一起感受文化的多彩、历史的厚重；与朋友一起体会挑战的刺激、拍照的满足、品尝美食的快乐。一切都是最美好的体验。英语报社现面向全区初中生征集记忆最深的旅行体验，请你以“ATripto______”为题记录你去某地的一次旅行，谈谈你旅行中的所见、所行、所思。要求：1.参考以上导图，撰写80-120词；2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。参考信息：1.旅行中见过的风景。2.旅行中做过的事。3.旅行中的感受。ATripto____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．一次旅游，一次经历，一次成长，一段美好的回忆。把点滴记录，把所感留存！请以“AWonderfulTrip”为话题写一篇旅游日记，包括以下内容：内容提示：1.去了哪里，和谁一起；2.去了多久，每天都有些什么活动；3.天气怎样，最喜欢的美食；4.你的感受。写作要求：1.日记的格式要正确；2.语意连贯、语言流畅、语法正确，适当发挥；3.文中不得使用真实姓名及学校名称；4.不少于80词。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．假如今天是1月30，星期六。你和你的父母参观了一个以旧居而闻名的小镇。请你根据以下提示写一篇英语日记，记录你这次的旅游经历。提示：1.Howwastheweathertoday?2.Howdidyougotothetown?3.Whatdidyoudothere?要求：1.短文应包含以上要点，可适当发挥。2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。3.词数70左右（日记格式已给出，不计入总词数）。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________