建议信写作评讲课件高一下学期英语作文复习专项

Aletterofadvice

—evaluateandpolishPracticalwritingWhatmakesagoodcomposition?EvaluateanddiscussReadandevaluatethecomposition.Doyouthinkit’sagoodcomposition?Giveyourreasons.假定你是李华，你的朋友Jim即将升人高中，担心高中生活节奏太快，怕赶不上别的同学，感到很困惑。请你给他写一封电子邮件,提一些学习建议。内容包括:1.与老师交流;2.上课积极，专心听讲，做好笔记;3.课后准时完成作业,

巩固知识。注意:1.词数80左右，开头和结尾已经给出,不计人总词数;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯Basicstructureandcontentofaletterofadvice“Head”(para.1):1.Backgroundinformation2.Writingpurpose“Body”(para.2):suggestionsandreasons

“Tail”(para.3):expectationsandwishes1.communicatewithteachers2.beactive,listenattentivelyandtakedownnotescarefully.3.finishhomeworkontimeandconsolidate(巩固)wahtyouhavelearned1.Usingtransitionsentence(过渡句),topicsentence(主题句)andtransitionwordstomakeyourcompositionclear(清晰的),logical(有逻辑的)andcoherent(连贯的).Firstofall,firstly,tobeginwith,firstandforemost...Inaddition,besides,moreover,additionally,furthermore,moreimportantly...Lastly,lastbutnotleast...LanguagePara.1:Backgroundinformation(problem)+writingpurposecommonexpressionsinparagraph1.Problem:1.havetrouble/difficulty/problemsdoing2.beworried/anxiousabout..3.beconfusedabout...4.beupsetabout...你的朋友Jim即将升人高中，担心高中生活节奏太快，怕赶不上别的同学，感到很困惑。

提一些建议Purpose:withtheintention/aimof...inanefforttodo...withthehopeofPara.1:Backgroundinformation+writingpurposeHavingknownthatyouareworriedaboutyourhighschoollife,I’mwritingto

offeryousomeusefulsuggestions,

hopingtheycanbehelpful.2.Iknowyouareworriedaboutyourhighschoollife.I’llgiveyousomesuggestions.Ihopetheycanhelpyou.(用非谓语改写)1.I’mwritingtogiveyousomesuggestions.Theywillhelpyou.(用定从改写)句式升级：I'mwritingwiththeintentionofgivingyousomepractical/constructivesuggestions,whichwillbeofgreathelp.I'mwritingtogiveyousomesuggestions,whichwillhelpyou.RewritethesentencesPara.2(Body):suggestionsWhatexpressionswillyouusewhenyougiveadvice?Youshould...Youmust...notpolite,improper为什么不...如果我是你的话，我会毫不犹豫去做...做...对你是有帮助/重要的的。你最好...做...是一个明智的选择最重要的事情是你...强烈建议你做...我强烈建议你做...Whynotdo...

IfIwereyou,Iwouldnothesitatetodo...Itisofhelp/importance/significanceforyoutodosthYou’dbetterdosthItwouldbeawisechoiceifyoudo/it’sadvisabletodo.Themostimportantthingisthatyou...It’shighly/stronglysuggested/recommendedthatyoudosth...Ihighly/stronglyrecommendthatyoudosth...Keywordsandphrasesinparagraph2交流：参与：认真地，专心地：communicatewith,interactwithtakeanactivepartin,participatein,get/beinvolvedin,involveoneselfin,engageinattentively,intently,earnestly,withallone’smind,withdedicationPara.2(Body):suggestionsTranslatethesesentencesintoEnglish.(6mins)1.首先，你最好经常与老师交流，他们可能给你提供一些对于你学习和生活有价值的建议。（定语从句)首先，经常与老师交流是一个很好的缓解压力的方法，因为他们可以给你提供你需要的帮助。(动名词作主语）2.除此之外，积极参与课堂、认真听讲，做好笔记也很重要。(it作形式主语)

只有这样有才能提高课堂上的效率(efficiency)。(倒装句)Firstofall,you’dbettercommunicatewithyourteachersregularly,whomayoffersomevaluableadviceonbothyourstudyandlifetoyou.Besides,it’salsoimportantto

involveyourselfineachclass,listentotheteachersattentivelyandtakedownnotescarefully.Onlyinthiswaycanyouimproveyourefficiencyinclass.Firstly,interactingwithyourteachersisagoodwaytorelievestress,becausetheycangivethehelpyouneed.Para.2(Body):suggestionsTranslatethesesentencesintoEnglish.(6mins)3.最后，我强烈建议你课后准时完成作业，这可以帮助你练习并巩固(consolidate)你学到的知识。（宾语从句+定语从句）Lastbutnotleast,Ihighlyrecommendthatyoufinishyourhomeworkontimeafterschool,whichcanhelpyoupracticeandconsolidatewhatyouhavelearned.LanguagePara.3(“tail”):expectationsandwishes1.Idohopemysuggestionswillbeofgreathelp.

2.Hopefully,mysuggestionswouldbehelpfulforyou.Iamlookingforwardtoyourgoodnews.3.It’smysincerehopethatyouwilltakemyadviceintoconsideration/account.4.Ihopethesesuggestionswillgiveyouareliefandhelpyousolveyourproblems.5.Iwillbemorethandelightedifyoufindmysuggestionshelpful.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Commonsentencepatterns

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Tobevaried..goodhandwriting.tidyandneat.appropriatenumberofwords1.从句的使用clause2.非谓语形式non-predicate3.it作形式主语4.倒装句invertedsentence5.副词adverbs,短语phrases3paragraphstopicsentencetransitionsentencetransitionwordsArethereproblemsofyourcomposition?Polishyourcompositionusingyourredpen.self-evaluationandpolishPractice假设你是李华，你的好友Tom上学期随父母去了另外一个城市，写信告诉你他很不适应新的校园生活，感到很孤独并希望你给出建议。请你根据以下要点用英语给他回一封电子邮件。1.多交一些朋友;2.积极参加各种活动;注意：80词左右开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇:adaptto适应。Usewhatyouhavelearnedandwritethisletterofadvice.DearTom,

I’msorrytohearthatyouhavetroubleadaptingtoyournewschoollife.Iunderstandhowlonelyitcanbetobeinanewplace.I’mwritingwiththeintentionofofferingsomepracticalsuggestionstoyou.

Firstly,Istronglysuggestthatyoushouldtrytomakemorefriends,whocanalwaysbringyouhappiness