全国卷作文分析课件-高三英语一轮复习

IntroductiontoAPerson

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TeachingProceduresLead-in1CurriculumStandands234Assignment6KeySentences5ReappearanceoftheOriginalItemThinkingAnalysisLead-inSheisaladyofthirtysevenyearsold.Shehasanovalfaceandwearscurlyhair.ShegraduatedfromZhengZhouUniversity.Sheiskeenonstudyingstudentsandfoods.ShehasbeenteachingEnglishformorethantenyearsinourschool.Sheisconsideredtobearespectedteacherandthebestheadteacherwhoaccompaniesstudentslongest.sexageappearanceeducationhobbiesworkevaluationWhoisshe?人物人品指本人、家人、邻居、同学、老师、朋友和其他人的情况介绍。包括姓名、年龄、生日、出生地、地址、电话号码、QQ号、电子邮箱、职业、品格、性格、习惯、毅力、责任、个性心理、意志品质、业绩或成就；所在学校、年级、班级，等等。球星影星、同时代的出现在各领域的名人(contemporaryfamouspeople)、科学家、领袖人物、历史人物(historicalpersons)及其趣闻轶事。课标解读基础写作:自我介绍；名人简历；名人轶事；写竞选演讲稿；写求职书或应聘信；推荐信等。读写任务：请就性格、习惯、毅力、责任、态度等发表看法；你认为什么品质或态度等能带来成功及其理由；你认为怎样才能受人欢迎?从某人的失败或成功中，你学到了什么?命题预测LearningObjectives1.Learnsomeaspectsofintroducingapersonand

somerelatedexpressions.2.Learnthegeneralskillsofwritingandthewritingstructureofintroducingaperson.3.Writeanarticlebasedonwhathasbeentaught.HowtoIntroduceAPersonaspectsofintroductionsexageappearanceeducationhobbiesworkevaluation...1.afive-year-oldboy/aboyagedfive2.inmyteens/twenties3.attheageoffive4.Asachild,Ilikedto...5.wasbornin...6.be/comefromawealthyfamily7.wasbornintoapeasantfamilyBasicExpressions---AgeandBirth

1.一个五岁的男孩2.在我十/二十多岁时3.在五岁时4.我小时候喜欢……5.出生在……6.出生于富裕人家7.出生于一个农民家庭BasicExpressions---Appearance

strongthingood-looking/welldressedslim

overweight

BasicExpressions---Educationeducationmajoringainscholarshipbegiventhetitleof...gain/winthefirstprize/placegetamaster'sdegreegraduatefrom

BasicExpressions---Evaluationevaluationbehonoredasoneofthebest...speak/thinkhighlyofberegardedasberespectedby...bringsbgreatsuccess(2020全国Ⅰ)你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:1.人物简介;2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。注意:词数100左右。真题再现考点突破审题提纲体裁/格式时态人称短文一般现在时第三人称首段中间段尾段1）背景句2）目的句

原因（优势）---1）2）3）1.每个要点前加过渡词2.拓展句式总结（首尾呼应）思路点拨Mr.Chen'sComments孙艳——一个风风火火、业务精湛、各个年级都争着聘用、最终被留到2022届的好英语老师，好班主任。她凡事说到做到，要学生做的她一定先趟一遍。班里的“风吹草动”都逃不过她的眼睛，因为她是“外高最美陪伴教师”。她丈夫张黔工作性质特殊，去年疫情期间，一个多月才能回一次家，女儿暖暖刚上幼儿园，我们开玩笑说，“张黔回来，暖暖都快不认识爸爸了吧？”孙艳同志把女儿带得好，把课教得好，把班带得好。她积极探究班级管理案例，在班里讨论，引起强烈反响；春节前她潜心学习剪纸，栩栩如生的窗花让二班暖融融，羡煞旁人；她以一个女性特有的细致关爱学生，记不清有多少次陪学生舒缓情绪、陪学生去医院看病。学生爱她，她带的班荣誉感强，战斗力强，样样争第一。

1.她受学生尊敬的原因主要有三个。2.她精通英语，鉴于她已经在某高中工作了10年有余。3.她以对学生的好心和考虑周到的一举一动赢得了尊敬。4.在她的帮助下，我们班级的英语成绩取得了惊人的进步。5.无可否认，孙老师是一个既坦诚谦虚又有耐心的人。DiscussandTranslate.KeySentences

1.她受学生尊敬的原因主要有三个。2.她精通英语，鉴于她已经在某高中工作了10年有余。Herearethreemainreasonswhysheisrespectedbyallthestudents.高级表达：（高级短语，非谓语）ShehasagoodcommandofEnglish/sheisproficientinEnglish,considering/inviewofthefactthatshehasbeenteachingEnglishformorethantenyearsinaseniorhighschool.

基本表达：（简单的短语，简单的从句）SheisgoodatEnglish/doeswellinEnglish,becauseshehasbeenteachingEnglishformorethantenyearsinaseniorhighschool.KeySentences3.她对学生的好心和体贴赢得了尊敬。4.在她的帮助下，我们班级的英语成绩取得了惊人的进步。基本表达：（动名词做主语）Herbeingkindandconsideratetostudentswinsrespecet

forher.Withhersupport/help,ourclassmakeamazing/remarkableprogressinEnglish.高级表达：（定语从句或强调句型）Sheiskindandconsideratetostudents,whichwinsrespecet

forher.Itisherkindnessandconsiderationtostudentsthat

winrespecet

forher.惊人的：surprising/amazing/dramatic/remarkableKeySentences5.无可否认，孙老师是一个既坦诚谦虚又有耐心的人。高级表达：（介词短语或副词）Withoutdoubt,/Undoubtedly,/Unarguably,Mrs.Sunisanoutspoken,modestandpatientwoman.基本表达：（Therebe句型）Thereisnodoubt/denyingthatMrs.Sunisanhonest,modestandpatientwoman.KeySentencesQuestions

evaluationDoesthearticlehaveclearideas?YesSo-soNoDoesthearticlehavegoodlayout?YesNoHowisthelanguage?ExcellentGoodAcceptableHowisthehandwriting?ExcellentGoodAcceptableUnderlineanywords,expressionsorphrasesyoulike.

Evaluation(评价）√√√√Wehavealotofrespectableteacheraroundus.Theymaybeourteachers,parents,ordoctors.However,myfavoriteEnglishteacher,Mrs.Sun,isthepersonIrespectmost.Herearethreemainreasonswhysheisrespectedbyallthestudents.

FirstandForemost,itisclear/obvious/apparent/evidentthat

hehasagoodcommandofEnglish,consideringthatshehasbeenteachingEnglishformorethantenyearsinaseniorhighschool.

Additionally,needlesstosay,herbeingkindandconsideratetostudentswinsrespecet

forher.Therefore,withhersupport,ourclassmakeamazingprogressinEnglish.Lastbutnotleast,thereisnodenyingthatMrs.Sunisanoutspoken,modestandpatientwoman,whoofteninstructsusindoingsomethinginteresting/significant,suchashelpingclassmateswithEnglishandcaringforstudentsinneed.

Inconclusion,Itaketheviewthatnot