2025年高考英语复习专项突破：读后续写提分之情绪描写篇（解析版）

情绪描写

（高兴、兴奋、伤心、愤怒）

龄备素同

词汇短语能力提升表达

名词：joy快乐；高兴happiness幸福；愉快pleasure高兴；愉快laughter笑声amusement

娱乐；娱乐活动excitement激动；兴奋

动词：delight使高兴；高兴thrill使激动；兴奋brighten使高兴；使明亮excite使激

动；使兴奋

形容词cheerful令人愉快的；快乐的merry愉快的；高兴的

joyful快乐的；愉快的overjoyed欣喜若狂；非常高兴

副词：excitedly激动地happily高兴地；快乐地

cheerfully高高兴兴地

1.dance/jumpfor/withjoy雀跃/高兴地跳起来

2.giveajumpintheair高兴地蹦跳

3.lightup喜形于色

4.brightensb/sheart使某人心情愉快

5.bewildwithjoy/delight/happiness欣喜若狂

6.inagoodmood心情好

7.inhigh/cheerfulspirits兴高采烈

8.onthetopoftheworld非常高兴、兴奋

9.amixtureofexcitementandhappiness既兴奋又开心

10,grinfromeartoear咧嘴大笑

句式能力提升表达

Icouldhardlycontainmydelightanddancedintothehouse.

我抑制不住内心的喜悦，蹦蹦跳跳地进了家门。

Delightedandthrilled,Igaveajumpintheairandthenskippedintothekichenalongwithmy

smilingmother.

又高兴又激动，我蹦跳了一下，然后蹦蹦跳跳地跟着我微笑着的妈妈进了厨房。

Herhandsweretremblingwithexcitementassheopenedthebox.

当她打开盒子时,她的手激动得发抖。

Tearsofjoy/happinesswelledupintheireyesastheyhuggedtightlytogether,他们喜极而

泣，紧紧拥抱在一起。

Shecameuptohim,withasmileshininglikeadiamond,Innotimehiseyeswerefilledwith

warmexcitedtears.她带着钻石般闪耀的笑容走到他面前。他立刻激动得热泪盈眶。

Therainfellrelentlessly,eachdropechoingthedepthofhersorrow,asiftheskyitselfwere

weepingforherbrokenheart.

雨不停地落下，每一滴都回响着她内心深处的悲伤，仿佛连天空都在为她破碎的心而哭

泣。

Withasighthatseemedtocarrytheweightoftheworld,shegazedintotheemptystreet,herheart

avoidfilledwithnothingbutgrief.

她发出一声仿佛承载着整个世界重量的叹息，凝视着空荡荡的街道,她的心是一片空虚，

除了悲伤再无其他。

Thememoryofhissmilelingered,hauntinghereverywakingmoment,aconstantreminderof

whatshehadlostandcouldneverregain.

他的笑容的记忆萦绕不去，在每个清醒的时刻困扰着她，不断提醒着她失去了什么，且

永远无法找回。

Thenightenvelopedherinitsdarkcloak,amplifyingthesilencethatechoedwithherunspoken

sorrow,makingitallthemoreprofound.

夜色将她笼罩在黑暗的外衣下，放大了回响着她未说出口的悲伤的寂静,使其更加深刻。

Ifonlythepastcouldbeundone,shewouldgiveanythingtorelivethosecarefreedaysbeforethe

sorrowtookroot.

如果过去可以重来，她愿意付出一切来重新经历那些悲伤扎根之前的无忧无虑的日子。

Thewindwhisperedthroughthebarrentrees,carryingwhispersoflostloveandunspoken

goodbyes,addingtothemelancholyofthemoment.

风吹过光秃秃的树木，带着失去的爱情和未说出口的告别的低语，增加了这一刻的忧郁。

Hertearsflowedfreely,eachoneasilentscreamofthepainshedarednotutter,stainingthe

pillowcasewithhersorrow.

她的泪水肆意流淌，每一滴都是她不敢言说的痛苦的无声呐喊，将枕套染上了悲伤的颜

色。

Theemptychairatthedinnertablestoodasaconstantreminderofhisabsence,avoidthatcould

neverbefilledwithanythingbutsorrow.

餐桌旁那把空荡荡的椅子，时刻提醒着他的缺席，那是一个除了悲伤什么也填不满的空

虚。

Thephotographsonthewallstaredbackather,capturingmomentsthatnowfeltlikeadistant

dream,filledwithasadnessthatrefusedtofade.

墙上的照片回望着她，捕捉到的瞬间现在感觉像是遥远的梦，充满了不愿褪去的悲伤。

Themoonshonebrightly,castingasilverlightthatonlyservedtohighlightthelonelinessthat

surroundedher,makingthenightallthemoredesolate.

月亮明亮地照耀着，洒下银色的光芒，却只是凸显了她周围的孤独，让夜晚更加荒凉。

Thesoundofhislaughterechoedinhermind,abittersweetmemorythatbroughttearstohereyes

andaachetoherheartthatrefusedtoheal.

他的笑声在她脑海中回响，这是一段苦乐参半的记忆，让她的泪水盈眶，心中的伤痛久

久无法愈合。

Witheachpassingday,theweightofhersorrowseemedtogrowheavier,aburdenshecarried

withherwherevershewent.

随着日子的流逝，她悲伤的重量似乎越来越重，成为了一个无论走到哪里都背负着的重

担。

Theraindropsdancedonthewindowpane,mirroringthetearsthatsilentlystreameddownherface,

bothinharmonywiththemelodyofhersorrow.

雨滴在窗玻璃上跳舞,映照着她脸上默默流淌的泪水,两者都与她悲伤的旋律和谐共鸣。

Theworldaroundherseemedtohavelostitscolor,thevibranthuesreplacedbyadullgray,

reflectingtheemptinesswithinherheart.

她周围的世界似乎失去了色彩，鲜艳的色调被单调的灰色所取代，反映了她内心的空虚。

Thesilenceofthenightwasdeafening,theabsenceofhisvoiceaconstantache,avoidthatcould

onlybefilledwiththedeepsorrowthatconsumedher.

夜晚的寂静震耳欲聋，他声音的缺席成为了一种持续的疼痛，一个只能用吞噬着她的深

切悲伤来填补的空虚。

Theflamesofangerignitedwithinhim,consuminghisrationalityandleavingonlyasmoldering

emberofresentment.

他心中的怒火熊熊燃烧，吞噬了他的理智，只留下一丝怨恨的余烬。

Withclenchedfistsandeyesblazinglikecoals,hestoodthere,everymuscletautwiththefuryhe

struggledtocontain.

他站在那里，拳头紧握，眼睛像煤炭一样炽热，每一块肌肉都紧绷着，努力压抑着内心

的愤怒。

Thenewsofthebetrayalstruckhimlikeathunderbolt,ignitingastormofangerthatthreatenedto

engulfeverythinginitspath.

背叛的消息如晴天霹雳般击中了他，引发了一场愤怒的风暴,威胁着要吞噬沿途的一切。

Thesilenceintheroomwasdeafening,filledwiththeunspokenfurythatcrackledlikeelectricity

betweenthem.

房间里的沉默震耳欲聋，充满了他们之间像电流般僻啪作响的未说出口的愤怒。

Hadheknownthetruthearlier,hewouldhaveconfrontedherwithafurythatwouldhaveshaken

theveryfoundationsoftheirrelationship.

如果他早点知道真相，他会用足以撼动他们关系根基的愤怒去质问她。

Theinjusticeofitallsimmeredbeneaththesurface,threateningtoboiloverintoaraginginferno

ofangeratanymoment.

这一切的不公在表面下酝酿着，随时可能沸腾成一片愤怒的熊熊烈火。

Hervoicetrembledwithbarelycontainedrageasshespoke,eachwordlikeashardoficecutting

throughtheair.

她说话时声音因难以抑制的愤怒而颤抖，每个字都像锋利的冰片划破空气。

Thesightofthedamagecausedbynegligencefilledhimwithafurythatburnedhotterthanany

flame,fuelinghisdeterminationtoseekjustice.

看到因疏忽造成的损害，他感到无比愤怒，这种愤怒比任何火焰都要炽热，激发了他寻

求正义的决心。

Witheverypassingmoment,theangerwithinhimgrew,likeawildfirespreadingthroughthedry

grass,consumingeverythinginitspath.

随着时间的流逝，他内心的愤怒像野火燎原般蔓延，吞噬着沿途的一切。

Theinsulthungintheairlikeapoisoneddart,piercinghisprideandignitingablazeofangerthat

refusedtobeextinguished.

侮辱如同有毒的飞镖悬在空中，刺穿了他的自尊，引发了一场无法熄灭的愤怒之火。

Theinjusticedonetoherfamilywasaconstantreminder,fuelingthesmolderingangerthatnever

trulyleftherside.

家人遭受的不公是她永远的痛，也是她心中永不熄灭的愤怒之火。

Themerethoughtofitsentashiverofangerdownhisspine,asensationthatmadehisbloodboil

andhisfistsclenchinvoluntarily.

仅仅想到这件事，他就感到一股愤怒的寒意顺着脊椎蔓延，这种感觉让他的血液沸腾，

拳头不由自主地紧握。

Thebetrayalwassoprofoundthatitfeltasifaknifehadbeentwistedinhisheart,unleashinga

torrentofangerthatthreatenedtoconsumehim.

背叛如此深刻，仿佛有把刀在他的心上旋转，释放出一股愤怒的洪流，威胁着要吞噬他。

Thediscoveryoftheliesentshockwavesthroughhim,awakeningaslumberingbeastofangerthat

hadlaindormantfortoolong.

谎言的发现在他心中掀起了轩然大波，唤醒了沉睡已久的愤怒野兽。

Inthatmoment,allreasonfled,replacedbyaraginginfernoofangerthatconsumedhimwhole,

leavingnothingbutashesofhisformerself.

在那一刻，所有的理智都消失了，取而代之的是一场吞噬了他全部的愤怒之火，只留下

了他曾经的自我化为灰烬。

写作思路

在读后续写写作中，对人物情感的描写常常能使人物的形象显得生动鲜活。人的情感可以分

很多种，如喜悦、满意、失望、悲伤、憎恨、愤怒、惊讶、恐惧、赞赏等等。在英语中有很

多不同的词和句式来表达这些不同的情感。

一、情绪描写之喜乐

喜乐的情绪通常和动作“笑”结合，这样写出来的句式更灵动活泼。常见的表达方式有：smile

brightly;laugh;beam;light(sth)up;lightupwith;burstintolaughter;burstoutlaughing；weara

bright/broadsmile;givesbasmileo

记一记

beam:smileveryhappily

lightup:ifsomeone'sfaceoreyeslightup,theyshowpleasure,excitementetc.

lightupwith：Hiseyeslitupwithlaughter.Herfacelitupwithpleasure.

lightsthup:tomakesomeone'sfaceoreyesshowpleasureorexcitement.

Suddenlyabrightsmilelitupherface/eyes.

例如：他的父母满意地笑了。

Hisparentsbeamed/smiledwithsatisfaction.

Hisparentsworeasatisfiedsmileonhisface.

尝试一下

1.看到直升飞机，Jane高兴地笑了起来。

Atthesightofthehelicopter,Janebeamedwithwildjoy.

Seeingthehelicopter,Janebeamedwithwildjoy.

Themomentshecaughtsightofthehelicopter,Jane'seyes/facelitupwithdelight.

Themomentshecaughtsightofthehelicopter,abrightsmilelitupJane'sface/eyes.

2.当妈妈亲吻他时，小baby开心极了。

Whenhismotherkissedhimonthecheek,thebabywasfullofjoy.

Whenhismotherkissedhimonthecheek,itseemedasifthebabywereontopoftheworld.（非

常开心）

Whenthemotherkissedthebabyonthecheek,hisfacebeamedandhisbrightsmilelitupthe

room.

二、情绪描写之激动

记一记

动词：whistle（吹口哨）/dance/jump/leapwithjoy;feelasurge（激增）of

happiness/delight/joy/excitement;（one'seyes）twinkle（闪闪发光）;（one'sheart）beat/pound

wildly（心跳加速）；canhardlyconcealone'sexcited（几乎无法掩饰兴奋的心情）

形容词：delighted;oveqoyed;excited;thrilled;bewildwithjoy（欣喜若狂）

句子：Awildgaiety（快乐）tookholdofher.一种疯狂的快乐控制了她。

Iwaspleasedbeyonddescription.我高兴得难以形容。

Herflushedfacewasshiningwithexcitement.（flushv.发红）她激动得满脸通红。

尝试一下

当主持人宣布她获奖时，她兴奋极了。

Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,shefeltexcited/thrilled.

Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,hereyestwinkledwithexcitement.

Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,herheartwaspoundingwithwildjoy.

Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,awildexcitementtookholdofher.

Knowingshewontheprize,shefeltasurgeofexcitement.

Knowingshewontheprize,shewasovercomewithexcitement.

三、情绪描写之生气

记一记

feel/getangry/furious;seizedbyanger;feelasurgeofanger(rage/fury);eyesblaze;stormout

of/into/off(气冲冲地…)；storm(怒吼)；

①Iwasseizedbyanger.我被愤怒覆盖。

②Hewasfumingwithrage.他大发雷霆。

③Hisangerboiledover.他的愤怒情绪突然爆发起来了。

④Hecouldhardly/scarcelycontainhisrage.他几乎控制不住自己的愤怒。

⑤Hewasbreathingfireandfury.他怒火冲天。

@Hisvoicetrembledwithanger.他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。

@Hegavemealookofburninganger.他看了我一眼，怒不可遏。

尝试一下

Sam感到非常生气。

Samfeltveryangry.

Samstoodrootedtothespot,hiseyesblazingwithanger.

Samfeltsoangrythathestormedoutoftheroom,slammingthedoorfuriouslybehindhim.

Boilingwithrage,Samshookhisfistatme.

Filledwithfury,Samwasunabletoutterasingleword.

四、情绪描写之伤心痛苦

记一记

sad;bitter;sorrowful;feelasurgeofsadness;(sadness)surgewithinsb;one'sheartache;be

overcomewithsadness

句子：

Hestoodsilently,tearsrollingdownhischeeks.他静静地站着，眼泪顺着脸颊滚了下来

IfeellikeIamfloatinginanoceanofsadness.我觉得我在悲伤的海洋中漂浮。

Herhandswereshaking.Shewasonthevergeoftears.她的手在颤抖。她快要哭了。

Shesobbed,hidingherfaceinherhands.她抽泣着，双手掩面。

Itriedtofightbacktears./Myeyeswerefilledwithtears.我努力忍住眼泪。我的眼睛充满了

泪水。

Afrown(皱眉)nowstoodonhisface.他开始皱眉。

Theysattherewithglumlooksontheirfaces.他们坐在那里，脸上带着忧郁的表情。

Thenewscastacloudofgloomoverhisface.这个消息使他脸上蒙一片阴影。

尝试一下

1.她伤心不已。

Shefeltextremelysad.

Asadnesscameoverher.

Herheartached,tearsstreamingdownhercheeks.

Numbwithgrief,shebecamespeechless.

Feelingasurgeofsadness,shecouldn'thelpcryingbitterly.

Sadnesssurgingwithinher,sheburstintotears.

2.他哽咽欲哭。

Alumpcametohisthroat.

3.她的双眼哭得通红

Hereyeswereredfromcrying.

4.她的眼里满含泪水。

Hereyesbrimmedwithtears.

5.眼泪沿着她的面颊流下来.

Tearscoursed/trickled/streamed/randownhercheeks.

6.Oliver独自一人在房间里流下了孤独伤心的泪水

Aloneintheroom,Olivercriedbitter,lonelytears.

7.Wilbur哭着直到睡着。

Wilburcriedhimselftosleep.

五、情绪描写之恐惧

记一记

frightened;panicked;scared;speechless;in(a)panic;inacoldsweat;befulloffear;befilledwith

terror;berootedtothespot;freeze;runaway;flee;one*skneesfeelweak;(hands)sweat;

句子：

Heturnedtome,withhiseyesfullofhorror.他转向我，眼睛里充满了恐惧。

Fearslowlycreepsuponher.恐惧慢慢地涌在她身上。

Shewasstruckwithhorrorwhen...当...时，她被吓坏了

Herfaceturnedpaleandstoodtheretongue-tied.她的脸变得苍白，站在那里结结巴巴。

Afloodoffearwelledupinhim./Fearfloodedoverhim.他心里涌起一股恐惧。

Herheartbeatsoviolentlythatshefeltnearlysuffocated（窒息）.她的心跳太剧烈，几乎要窒

息了

尝试一下

我感到很害怕。

Ifeltveryfrightened/scared/panicked.

Iwasin（a）panic/wasfulloffear.

Istoodrootedtothespot,brimmingwithfear/filledwithfear.

Ifeltsoscaredthatmythroattightenedandmykneesfeltweak.

Ifrozewithterror,tooscaredtomove.

Iwasseizedbyastrongsenseofhorror;mypalmssweating.

六、情绪描写之其他

感动

①Toucheddeeply/immensely,we…被深深感动，我们...

②Tearsfillinghereyes,sheofferedherheartfeltgratitude.她热泪盈眶，表示衷心的感谢。

③Withtearsstreamingdownherface,she...泪水顺着她的脸颊流了下来,...

紧张

Herfaceturnedpal,feelinglikesittingonpinsandneedles.她的脸刷白，感觉如坐针毡。

Hispalmsweresweatyandkneesweresoft.他手心出汗，膝盖发软。

尴尬/羞愧

Hewasembarrassed/ashamed.

Hisfaceflushed（通红）/burned（燃烧）withembarrassment/shame.他因尴尬而满脸通红。他窘得脸

都红了。

Hehung/dropped/loweredhisheadinshame.他羞愧地低下了头。

Shefeltsoashamedthatshecouldfeelherfaceburning,她感到羞愧难当，脸上滚烫。

Soashamedwasshethatshecouldfeelthebloodrushtoherface.她感到羞愧极了，血液涌

上脸颊。

绝望

Hefelthopeless/desperate.

Uponhearingthebadnew,shewassuddenlythrownintoaworldofdarknessandsankinto

hopelessness.听到这个坏消息，他突然被投入黑暗世界，陷入绝望。

Hisbeliefsinlookingforwardandseeingthepositiveineverythingdesertedhim.他那种向前看、

看到一切事物积极一面的信念抛弃了他。

感谢

Iranovertomyfather,reachedoutmyhandsandhugged/embracedhimtightly/firmly.

我跑向父亲，伸出手，紧紧抱住他。

Withgratefultearshanginginhiseye,shekeptextending（表达）hisgratitude（感激），"Thankyou

somuch!”

他眼中满是感激的泪水，不停地说:“非常感谢!”

鼓励

Takingadeepbreath,Imanagedtocalmmyselfdownandwalkeduptotheplatformconfidently.

深吸一口气，我成功地让自己镇定，然后自信地走上了讲台。

Iwalkedovertohim,andpattedhimontheshoulderencouraging:"Comeon!”

我走向他，拍拍他的肩膀，鼓励道:“加油!”

震惊

Hewassurprised/shocked.

Hiseyesgrewwide/widenedwithsurprise/astonishment（震'原）whenheheardthenews.

听到这个消息后，他惊讶地睁大了眼睛。

It'shardtobelieve.Hedidn'tacceptthejobthathewaslongfor.

真难以置信，他竟然没有接受那份期待己久的工作。

Grandfathersdeathwasreallyaboltfromtheblueforme.

祖父去世的消息对我来说简直是晴天霹雷。

疑惑/迷茫

Hefeltconfused.

Withaconfusedlookonhisface,hehadnoideawhattodo.

他露出困惑的表情，不知道该做什么。

Hescratchedhishead,havingonideawhattodo.

他挠了挠头，不知道该做什么。

写作训练

（一）

（2024.辽宁大连.模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之

构成一篇完整的短文。

OnwarmSeptembernight,ontheOuterBanksofNorthCarolina,softseawindsfilledthe

air.Themoonwasfull.Miracouldfeeltheenergyintheair.Shelovedeverythingabouttheocean,

andthiseveningshehadcomedowntothebeachtoenjoythesaltynightairandhearthewaves

washingoverthesandgently.

Miraclosedhereyesandlistenedtothewaves.Thegentlerollingsoundwascalming.

Suddenly,Miracouldhearanothersound,too.Shelistenedcarefully.Thesoundwassosoftthat

shecouldbarelyhearit.Sheopenedhereyesandlookeddownatthesand.Itwasmoving!Allofa

sudden,shecouldseeatinyheadcomingout.Then,shesawfourtinyfeetandashell.Aturtlehad

emerged!

Miralookedinamazementatthebabyturtle.Inthemoonlightshecouldjustmakeoutthe

greenandbrownpatternonitsshell.Itwassosmall!Shewatchedwithwonderasotherbaby

turtlesbegantoemerge.Onebyonetheystruggledoutoftheirundergroundnests.Soonthebeach

waslikeamovingcarpetoftinyturtles.

Miraknewtheturtlesshouldheadtowardsthewavesandswimaway,soshewaspuzzled

whentheybegantopullthemselvesintheoppositedirection.Whywouldtheturtlesbegoing

awayfromtheocean?

Suddenly,sherememberedsomethingshehadheardfromsomepeoplelivinghere.

“LoggerheadseaturtlescomebackhereeveryyearinApril.Theyburytheireggsonthebeach

andinthefirstweekofSeptemberthosebabyturtleshatchandheadbackdowntothesea.But

someofthemnevermakeit.Sometimestheydiegoingacrossthebeach,tryingtofindthose

brightlightsinthehouses.Thelightsconfusetheseaturtles.^^

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Miralookedacrossthebeachatherhouse.

Uponarrival,sheshouted,“Theturtlesarehatching!Wehavetohelpthem!”

【答案］Apossibleversion

Miralookedacrossthebeachatherhouse.Whatcameintohersightwashermother,

sittingontheporchrockingherbabysister.Accompanyingherwashisfatherdrinkinglemonade.

Miracouldseethemclearlybecauseherhousehadtwobrightlightsthatlitupthefrontyardof

thehouse.Suddenlyitclicked.Mirashoutedtothematthetopofhervoice,t6Tumoffthelights

please!?,Buttheyfailedtohear,soshebegantorun.Sheracedtoherhousewithonlyonethought

“Turnoffthelights^^.Shetrippedandfell,butwithoutdelayshepickedherselfupandcontinued

runninguntilshereachedthehouse.

Uponarrival,sheshouted,“Theturtlesarehatching!Wehavetohelpthem!”Withthat,

Miradashedintothehouseandturnedoffthebrightporchlights.Herparentswerealittlebit

confused.However,afterMiraexplainedwhathadhappened,theyjumpedintoactionaswell.

Theyhurriedlyrushedtotheirneighborsandaskedthemtoturnofftheirlights.Meanwhile,Mira

wasoffrunningtowardstheseaagain.Shereachedthebeachjustintimetoseethetinyturtles

slippingsilentlyintothewaves.Asthelastturtleswamaway,itseemedtohavelookedbackat

Mira.Inthemoonlight,Mirathoughtshesawitsmile.NowMiracouldpictureallthesmallturtles

swimminghappilyintheocean.

【导语】本文以人物为线索展开。米拉热爱海洋的一切，这晚她来到海滩。闭目倾听中，她

突然察觉到另一细微声响，竟是沙子在动！一只小海龟破土而出，随后更多小海龟挣扎着离

开地下巢穴，海滩瞬间变得生机勃勃。米拉惊讶又困惑，因小海龟竟朝远离海洋的方向爬去。

她随即想起当地居民的话:每年四月，红海龟会来此产卵，九月初小海龟孵化后应回归大海，

但一些海龟会被沿岸房屋的灯光迷惑，误入歧途，甚至因此丧生。

【详解】1.段落续写

①由第一段句首内容“米拉望着海滩对面她的房子。”可知，第一段可以描写米拉看到的景象

和她的行动。

②由第二段句首内容“一到那里，她就喊道：‘海龟正在孵化！我们必须帮助他们！’”可知，

第二段可以描写米拉劝解人们关灯后海龟的行动变化和最终的结果。

2.续写线索：望着房子一跑向灯光一劝解一关掉灯一海龟回大海

3.词汇激活

行为类

①陪伴某人：accompanysb./keepsb.company

②关掉：turnoff/switchoff

③开始：begin/start

情绪类

①困惑的：confused/puzzled

②高兴地：happily/gladly

【点睛】[高分句型1】Whatcameintohersightwashermother,sittingontheporchrockingher

babysister.（运用了What引导的主语从句、现在分词sitting作状语）

【高分句型2]Miracouldseethemclearlybecauseherhousehadtwobrightlightsthatlitupthe

frontyardofthehouse.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句、that引导的定语从句）

【高分句型31However,afterMiraexplainedwhathadhappened,theyjumpedintoactionaswell.

（运用了what引导的宾语从句）

（二）

（2024・广西・一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇

完整的短文。

Iwasanxious,sittingoutsideanoperatingtheatre,worriedaboutthefateofmysonwho

hadhadaveryseriousaccident.Welivedintheremotearea,andtherewasonlysmallhospital

nearby.Mysonwaslyingunconsciousinsideandwaitingfortheonlysurgeoninthehospitalto

treathim.Forme,everymomentseemedlongerthanayear.Suddenly,adoctorrushedtowards

theoperationroomwhilehisassistanthandedhimawhiteapron（白大荏卜）.Ijustcouldnotcontrol

myanger,startingshoutingatthedoctor."Iamshockedtoseehowcasualyoucanbe!Mysonis

lyingintheoperatingtheatreforsolongandyoucanonlymanagetocomeandseehimnow?”

Thedoctorstaredatme,and,holdinghisshouldergently,said,“ThisistheearliestIcouldget

here.Iwasnotinthehospital.Now,pleaseletmedomyworkandyoutakeaseatthere."

Ibecamemorefurious.Althoughthedoctorwentinsidethetheatre,Icontinuedexpressing

mydissatisfaction.Anhourpassed.Stilltheredlightoutsidetheoperatingtheatrewason.Three

morehourswentby;IthenbegantothinkofallthefrighteningthingsthatImighthavetohear

oncethedoctorgavehimtheconclusion.

Ilookedupandsuddenlyrealizedthatthelighthadgoneoff.Thedoctorcameoutofthe

room,rushingashehandedoverhisaprontothenurse.BeforeIcouldaskhimanything,the

doctorsaid,"Yoursonissafenow.Pleasetalktothenurseifyouneedtoknowanythingmore.

Excuseme.^^BeforeIcouldaskhimanythingmore,thedoctorrushedaway.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Ilostmytemperagain.

Iwasfrozenonthespot,notutteringaword.

【答案】Onepossibleversion:

Ilostmytemperagain.Butthenurserequestedmetocalmdownandsaid,'Tmsorry,Sir,

foralltheinconvenienceyouhavehad.^^ThenIwastoldthewholetruth.Thesurgeonwasinthe

funeralwhenhewascalledaftermysonwasbroughthere.Hissonpassedawaylastnight.Hehas

alwaysbeenamanofstrongprinciplesandethics.Beforehecouldsayfarewelltohisson,he

rushedheresothatIdon'thavetofacewhatheisgoingthroughrightnow.

Iwasfrozenonthespot,notutteringaword.Isincerelytakealessonfromthisstory.Even

attheageof42,1madethiscostlymistakeofjumpingtoaconclusionevenbeforeIknewthe

wholetruth.Todaymysonissafeanddoingwellbecauseofthefatherwholefthisson'sfuneral

tosavemine.NotuntilthedidIrealizethatneverjumptoanyconclusionbeforeyouknowthe

wholetruth.

【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者的孩子生命垂危需要做手术，但是医生却迟到

了。作者非常生气，最后才知道医生为了给自己的孩子做手术却错过了医生自己孩子的葬礼

的故事。

【详解】1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“我又发脾气了。”可知，第一段可描写护士让作者冷静下来并告诉了作

者真相的经过。

②由第二段首句内容“我僵在那里，一句话也说不出来。”可知，第二段可描写作者对自己之

前的行为感到内疚以及作者的内心感受。

2.续写线索：作者又发脾气了一护士让作者冷静下来一告诉真相一作者愣住了一作

者对之前的行为感到内疚——感悟

3.词汇激活

行为类

①要求：request/require

②拯救：save/rescue

③意识到：realizethat/beawarethat

情绪类

①冷静：calmdown/collectoneself

②遗憾的：sorry/regretful

【点睛】[高分句型1].Beforehecouldsayfarewelltohisson,herushedheresothatIdon'thave

tofacewhatheisgoingthroughrightnow.（运用了连词Before引导的时间状语从句，so...that

引导的结果状语从句以及连接代词what引导的宾语从句）

[高分句型2].Todaymysonissafeanddoingwellbecauseofthefatherwholefthisson'sfuneral

tosavemine.（运用了关系代词who引导的限制性定语从句）

（三）

（2024.江西.二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇

完整的短文。

Marcuswasreallyexcitedtowatchasolareclipse（日食）inBloomfieldonasunny

Saturdayafternoon.Hesetupthetelescopehe'dborrowedfromhisteacheronanopenareanear

thebaseballfield,wheretheschoolbaseballteamwaspracticing.Marcusdidn'tlikebaseball;he

wasmoreinterestedinthestars.Asolareclipsewasaspecialevent,andhedidn'twanttomissit.

Whilethebaseballteampracticed,Marcuspaidnoattentiontothem.Ashelookedthrough

histelescopeatthesun,themoonstartedcoveringit,creatingacoolcrescentshape（月牙形）.

Marcuswasamazedbyit.Hewishedhecouldsharethismomentwithsomeonewholoveditas

muchashedid.

Then,thebaseballcoach,Bernardi,announcedovertheloudspeakerthatthebaseballgame

wasputofffor30minutesbecauseofthesolareclipse.CoachBernardi'sannouncementbrought

Mareusback,toreality.Herealizedhewasalonenearthebaseballfield,holdinghistelescope.He

hadbeensointotheeclipsethathedidn'tnoticeabaseballflyingtowardhim.Ithitthetelescope

andbrokethelens（镜片）.

Marcuswasangry,andheshouted,wonderingwhohadthrownthebaseballathim.He

pickeduptheballandheadedtowardthebaseballfield.Hewasworriedabouttellinghisteacher,

Mr.Baker,aboutthebrokentelescope.Sure,itwasn'thisfault,buthehadpositionedthetelescope

nearthebaseballfield,andhestillfeltheshouldtakeresponsibility.

AsMarcussteppedontothebaseballfield,herealizedsomefansandplayerswerewatching

theeclipse.Eachpersonwastryingtogetachancetolookthroughthetelescopesthatsomefans

hadbroughttowatchtheeclipse.Marcusnoticedaboyrunningtowardhim."I'mreallysorry

aboutwhathappenedwithyourtelescope.Ididn'tmeantobreakit.Ishouldhavebeenmore

careful,"saidtheboy,withasincereexpression.

注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。

Marcusunderstoodthatitwasjustanaccident.

Afterawhile,itwasMarcus'sturntolookthroughthetelescope.

【答案】Marcusunderstoodthatitwasjustanaccident.Heappreciatedtheboy*shonestyand

forgavehimimmediately.SensingMarcus'sdisappointment,theboyofferedtosharehisown

telescopewithMarcus,whichhehadbroughttowatchtheeclipseaswell.Gratefulfortheboy's

kindness,Marcusacceptedtheoffer,andtogethertheymarveledatthecelestialwonderunfolding

abovethem.Theeclipsewasasharedexperiencenow,turningamomentoffrustrationintoa

bondingopportunity.

Afterawhile,itwasMarcus*sturntolookthroughthetelescope.Ashepeeredthroughthe

lens,thedamagedlensofhisowntelescopewasmomentarilyforgotten.Thecrescentsunwasa

breathtakingsight.Marcusfeltarushofexcitement,realizingthatthebeautyoftheuniversecould

bringpeopletogetherinunexpectedways.Heturnedtotheboyandthankedhimagain.Together,

theycontinuedtoobservetheeclipse.Asthemoonmovedpastthesunanddaylightreturned,

Marcusleftthebaseballfieldwithanewfoundappreciationfortheunexpectedconnectionslife

couldoffer,andalessonlearnedabouttakingresponsibilityandturninganegativesituationintoa

positiveone.

【导语】本文以Marcus观看日食的经历为线索展开，讲述了他在看日食时望远镜被棒球意

外砸坏，最后与造成意外的男孩化干戈为玉帛，并一起分享观看日食的故事。

【详解】段落续写：由第一段首句“Marcus明白这只是一场意外。”可知，第一段可描写Marcus

原谅男孩，男孩与他分享望远镜，他们一起观看日食。

由第二段首句“过了一会儿，轮到Marcus通过望远镜观看了。”可知，第二段可描写Marcus

观看日食时的感受以及这次经历给他带来的感悟。

续写线索：理解——原谅一分享——观看——激动——感悟一收获

词汇激活

行为类

忘记：forget/leavebehind

提供：offer/provide

离开：leave/depart

情绪类

感激的：grateful/thankful

兴奋的：excited/thrilled

【点睛】[高分句型1].SensingMarcus'sdisappointment,theboyofferedtosharehisown

telescopewithMarcus,whichhehadbroughttowatchtheeclipseaswell.（使用了现在分词短语

作状语和which引导的非限制性定语从句，先行词为telescope）

[高分句型2].Marcusfeltarushofexcitement,realizingthatthebeautyoftheuniversecould

bringpeopletogetherinunexpectedways.（使用了现在分词短语作状语）

（四）

（2024.贵州毕节•三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成

一篇完整的短文。

OneSundaymorning,ahighschoolstudentnamedLilywaswanderingintheschool.The

sunshonebrightlythroughtheleafytreesthatlinedintheschoolcourtyard.Agentlebreeze

wafted（吹送，飘送）throughtheair,carryingthedistantsoundsoflaughterandchatterfromother

students.ItwasatthispeacefulandjoyfulmomentthatLilysawawalletlyingontheground.

“Whoseisit?”Lilysaidtoherself.Shepickeditupandopenedit,seeingalargeamountofcash

accompaniedbyimportantdocumentsandIDcards.

DoubtandconfusionbegantoconsumeLily."WhatshouldIdo?ShouldIkeepthemoney

formyself?IcanbuymanythingsI'vewantedforalongshethought.Thetreesaroundher

seemedtoswingtogether,asifmirroringthechaoswithinherthoughts