Unit 3 Sports and Fitness 应用文写作：运动改变生活我的健身之旅 课件高一上学期英语人教版（2019）必修第一册

运动改变生活——————我的健身之旅

01引言与背景1.1写作任务与主题语境对比类文章假定你是李华，在“全民健身日”到来之际，你校英语报面向全体学生开展征文比赛，要求参赛者通过写一篇关于自己运动前后变化的文章来宣传运动的重要性。请你写一篇英语短文参赛。注意:词数120左右。对比类文章概述02审题与提纲制定2.1文章结构规划人称以第一人称为主，时态以一般过去时、一般现在时和现在完成时为主。主题确立与人称时态2.2拟定写作提纲我们可以从以下三部分进行写作:Para1运动前:身体素质差肥胖不自信Para2运动后：身体健康匀称非常自信Para3总结

变化要点概览03收集与组织素材3.1核心词汇与短语※单词:confident,overweight,tired,kilograms...※短语:comealong,fallinlovewith...,becomefit...

关键表述选取3.2核心句子构建※句子:★Ididn'twanttocomealong.★Iwasnotconfidentenough.★Iwasabitoverweight.★Iwaseasilytired.★Ifellinlovewithit.Igrewconfident.Ilost10kilograms.★Ibecamefit.代表性句子展示04初稿撰写4.1运动前的状态Ididn'twanttoexercise.IwasoverweightsoIwasnotconfident.Iwasn'tgoodatmakingfriends.Iwaseasilytiredduetomypoorphysicalcondition.个人挑战与困境4.2运动后的转变Ifellinlovewithit.Ilost10kilogramsandbecamefit.Igrewconfidentandmademanyfriends.正面影响与成果4.3总结反思Ireallyenjoybeachvolleyball.Ithasmademehealthier.综合体会与呼吁05修改润色5.1提升文本连贯性初稿完成后，为了使文章表达准确、逻辑清楚，需对初稿进行修改润色。如：1.增加衔接词使上下文更加连贯，如atfirst、moreover、evenif、lateron、aswell等；使用句型（如notonly...butalso...）或复合句，使句式丰富多样；衔接词与复杂句运用建议5.2添加细节强化说服力2.适当添加细节，充实内容，使文章更有说服力，如Iwasabitoverweight、IwaseasilytiredevenifIexercisedforonlyawhile、Ithasmademebothphysicallyandmentallyhealthier等。具体事例与感受增强06定稿检查6.1最终审查与修正...发现并改正拼写、标点符号和语法上的错误...错误排查与完善07范文欣赏7.1成品展示

Lastsummervacation,mycousininvitedmetoplaybeachvolleyball.Atfirst,Ididn'twanttocomealongbecauseIwasabitoverweight,whichmakesmenotconfident.Besides,Iwasn'tgoodatmakingfriends.Moreover,duetomypoorphysicalcondition,IwaseasilytiredevenifIexercisedforonlyawhile.

Lateron,withencouragementfrommycousin,Igaveitatryandfellinlovewithit.Afterthesummervacationended,Inotonlylost10kilogramsbutalsobecamefit.Igrewconfidentandmademanyfriendsaswell.

Ireallyenjoybeachvolleyball,which