新高考英语一轮复习练习考向48 应用文写作之道歉信和感谢信(原卷版)

考向48应用文写作之道歉信和感谢信道歉信【写作示例】假定你是李华,与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店,因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:1.表示歉意;2.说明原因;3.另约时间。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。【考场审题】Step1:精准审题谋篇布局人称I(LiHua),You(Bob)时态一般现在时,一般将来时段落布局开头点题:点明写作目的,并表达歉意主体段落:说明致歉的原因结尾:再次致歉,并另约时间Step2:头脑风暴字字珠玉(1)美词:expressmyheartfeltapology;representourschooltodo;available;asaresult(2)佳句:①Ican’tgowithyouasplanned.②I’mwritingtoexpressmyheartfeltapologytoyou.③HowaboutgoingtothebookstorethisSunday.Step3:斟酌词句妙笔生花要点1:我很抱歉无法跟你一起去书店。一般表达:I’msorrythatIcan’tgowithyoutothebookstore.

句式升级(高级词汇,名词性从句,分词作状语)我诚挚地向你道歉,这周五不能按计划和你去书店了。IhavetoexpressmyheartfeltapologytoyouthatIcan’tgowithyoutothebookstorethisFridayasplanned.

要点2:我入选代表我校参加英语辩论赛。一般表达:I’mchosentorepresentourschooltotakepartintheEnglishdebatecompetition.

句式升级(定语从句,for引导的并列句)我入选代表我校参加英语辩论赛,这对我非常重要,因为我一直梦想有这样的机会代表我校参赛,展示我们的实力。I’mchosentorepresentourschooltotakepartintheEnglishdebatecompetition,whichisofgreatimportancetome,forIhavebeendreamingofhavingsuchachancetoshowourstrengthonbehalfofmyschool.

要点3:这个周日去书店如何?那时你是否有时间呢?一般表达:HowaboutgoingtothebookstorethisSunday?Willyoubeavailablethen?

句式升级(高级词汇,意趣盎然)WoulditbeconvenientforyouifwegotothebookstorethisSunday?

Step4:衔接过渡斐然成篇【参考范文】DearBob,Howareyoudoing?I’mindeedverysorrythatIcan’tgotothebookstorewithyouthisFridayasplanned.HowIwishIcouldgowithyou!However,I’mchosentorepresentourschooltotakepartintheEnglishdebatecompetition,whichisofgreatimportancetome,forIhavebeendreamingofhavingsuchachancetoshowourstrengthonbehalfofmyschool.Asaresult,Ihavetomissourappointment.Pleaseacceptmysincereapologyfromthebottomofmyheart.WoulditbeconvenientforyouifwegotothebookstorethisSunday?Yours,LiHua感谢信【写作示例】假定你是李华,经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请你写一封邮件,内容包括:1.表示感谢;2.回顾Alex对你的帮助;3.临别祝愿。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。【考场审题】Step1:精准审题谋篇布局人称I(LiHua),You(Alex)时态一般过去时,一般现在时段落布局开头点题:点明写作目的,感谢对方帮助主体段落:具体指出曾经的帮助结尾:再次表达感谢,给出临别祝愿Step2:头脑风暴字字珠玉(1)美词:havedifficultyin,underyourpatientguidance,notonly...butalso...,generous(2)佳句:①IcanwellremembertherewasatimewhenIhaddifficultyinlearningEnglish.②ItisyouwhotaughtmehowtolearnEnglishwell.③NotonlydidyouhelpimprovemyEnglish,butalsogavememoreconfidenceinlearning.Step3:斟酌词句妙笔生花要点1:你教给我如何学英语。一般表达:YoutaughtmehowtolearnEnglish.

句式升级(强调句)是你教给我如何学英语。ItisyouwhotaughtmehowtolearnEnglish.

要点2:你帮助我提高了英语并且给了我更多学习的自信。一般表达:YouhelpedimprovemyEnglishandgavememoreconfidenceinlearning.

句式升级(倒装句)你不但帮助我提高了英语,并且给了我更多学习的自信。NotonlydidyouhelpimprovemyEnglish,butalsogavememoreconfidenceinlearning.

Step4:衔接过渡斐然成篇【参考范文】DearAlex,I’veheardthatyou’releavingChinasoon,soI’mwritingtoexpressmysincereblessingandthanks.IcanwellremembertherewasatimewhenIhaddifficultyinlearningEnglish.ItisyouwhotaughtmehowtolearnEnglish.Underyourpatientguidance,IgraduallymadeprogressandbeganinterestedinEnglish.NotonlydidyouhelpimprovemyEnglish,butalsogavememoreconfidenceinlearning.Thanksagainforyourgeneroushelp.Wishyouapleasantjourneyhome.Yours,LiHua【检测训练】1．假设你是李明，你因生病没能按时上交李老师安排的作业。请你用英语给他写一封道歉信，内容包括：1.向他道歉2.解释原因3.保证尽快补交作业。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯3.信的开头和结尾已经给出，但是不计入总词数DearMr.Li________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YourstudentLiMing2．假设你是李华，是一名在Eric家里的交换生(exchangestudent)。昨晚，你和几位同学在房间里大声讨论周末班级出游事宜，影响了Eric一家休息。请给Eric写一封道歉信，内容包括：1.表示道歉;2.说明原因;3.提出解决办法。注意：1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearEric,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua3．假如你是李华，你约好昨天去公交车站接你的朋友Dylan，但你却迟到了10分钟，令他很失望。请用英语给他写一封道歉信，要点如下:1.向他表示道歉;2.表达你对此事的认识;3.请求他的原谅。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。DearDylan，______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua4．毕业季也是感恩季，来自澳大利亚的Feinstein在她的网站上发起感谢信接力的活动。假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请写一封感谢信参加接力，内容包括：1.感谢的人或事物；2.感谢的原因；3.你的美好愿望。注意：1.词数100左右字。2.不得透露个人信息及感谢人信息Dear___________,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua5．你是李华，父亲节即将来临，在父亲节这天，需要说哪些话语来感谢自己的父亲呢？请根据以下要点用英文给父亲写一封感谢信。内容包括：1.感谢养育之恩；2.感谢父亲在你遇到挫折时给你鼓励和安慰；3.感谢父亲在你成功时以你为荣；4.爱父亲。注意：1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。DearFather,WithFather’sDayapproaching,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________